I wrote a Warriors lake-side story. It's unfinished, so this is just the prologue. I'm also new to this community, but I'm a huge Warriors fan! I would love any feedback about my story!
The ground shook as a large group of cats raced past, sending a mouse scuttling into its hole. Starlight shone from above, making the gold and amber leaf-covered ground light enough to see easily. A group of cats all sizes and colours burst out of a bush. At the head of the group was a tall calico she-cat. The group of cats raced through the forest, narrowly avoiding trees, rocks and bushes. The group of cats slowed to a stop once they were about a tail length from a big, glistening lake with a little island in the middle, with a tree that had fallen over, making a bridge to the island. The she-cat angled her ears towards the island. She could hear the chattering of many cats. Mixed cat scents wafted towards her as she parted her mouth. The she turned to the fallen tree and started sprinting across the tree. It was slippery, but the she-cat managed to race across it with the large group of cats right behind her. The she-cat leapt off the bridge, barely touching the ground with her paws, then springing over the bushes that surrounded the island. She landed on the ground with a thump, making dust fly up around her. There were more cats on the island. They turned to look at her as her warriors started appearing from the bushes. “Show-off.” Purred a muscular Tom as he strode towards her. By now the rest of the cats had gone back to talking to each other. “Hardly the best I can do in Owlflight.” She replied as she strutted towards an old, moss-covered tree, sitting in the middle of the clearing. The leaves were swirling down, caught on a frosty leaf-fall breeze. Four cats were sitting on it. “You’re late Wrenstar,” grumbled a grey tom with yellow eyes. “As always.” He finished. “You’re late too sometimes, Stonestar,” Wrenstar replied, staring at him with her crystal blue eyes. Stonestar muttered something under his breath that Wrenstar couldn’t catch. Wrenstar nodded greetings to the three other cats on the tree, Birchstar, leader of Windclan, a slender tortie tom, Fallingstar, leader of Riverclan, a sleek grey she-cat, and Eaglestar, leader of Thunderclan, a muscular Brown and white tom, as she leapt onto a branch, slightly lower than the rest. The full moon shone down on the clearing, their warrior ancestors watching them. “Shall we begin?” Stonestar impatiently asked. “Very well,” Birchstar replied. Wrenstar let out a loud caterwaul, gathering the cat's attention. Wrenstar stood up, digging her claws into the branch she had been sitting on to balance herself. “Cats of the clans,” She began, “I am sad to inform you that Mistystar is dead, and as her deputy, I have taken her place as clan leader. My deputy is Owlflight. I have been to the Moonpool and received my nine lives and name from Starclan.” There were a few gasps of shock and murmurs as cats talked to each other in the clearing below. Wrenstar couldn’t quite make out the voices below. “Her clan grieves for her.” She finished solemnly. Her eyes welled up with tears as she thought about her leader, clanmate, and best friend. Wrenstar’s hair stood on end as out of the corner of her eye, she saw Stone Star smirking softly. Did he think she was weak for caring? Stupid Mouse-brain, She thought to herself Stonestar would never intend to harm Skyclan, or any clan! Would he?... She left her thoughts there, as Stonestar stood up, announcing “Shadowclan is stronger than ever. Prey is plentiful in the marsh, and no cat in Shadowclan will go hungry.” His eyes darted to Wrenstar. Was he… challenging her?
Something that I like to do is when I write online I have both a dictionary and a research tab pulled up. You don't want to use a spastic word too much but also try finding words that fit in the right sentences. Like an example is "suddenly" it's a good word to use but it's not always the right idea to use it too much, yet some of the other words that mean the same need to feel like the fit in the sentence, like a puzzle. For the research is just a use when you want to add real or canon (canon means that it becomes a part of the topic you made about or from inspiration) facts, like how maybe you would want to add real warrior cat function in there. An example would be how Med cats arn't aloud to have mates nor kits. Now of corse its your story so the research tab isn't needed most of the time as you can make your own functions!
yours is awesome do you like mine (please give feedback)
Blackclaw
calling of the gods
Book one
Prologue
As more cats came thundering out of the trees more yowls of pain sounded out in the clearing. “Ashclaw! we need to submit to them they are too powerful” a black tabby heaved himself on to graystipe “do you yield, your leopard clan just a bunch of softies i could demolish your clan blinded we will claim sunning rocks as ours then we will–” “whitepaw get out of here! Graystripe you think you can last forever, but tonight under the moon you will die!” ashclaw closed jaws over graystripes throat until the only sound was the gurgling of his blood
Chapter one
One hot morning shadow was leaping out to the pond to lap up some cool water when she noticed a pair of green eyes staring at her.She called out softly but it sounded like it was chanting something . Then she heard it saying ‘‘save the clan! save the clan!’’ Then she saw a leopard print grey cat fighting a grey spotted tabby. She instinctively leaped to stop the fight but she moved in slow motion. The black cat took a swipe at the tabby and then the chanting stopped instead it was replaced with the forest wind. It was night so shadow crept out to drink some water but it was hard with the forest right there staring at her.She crept over and leaped onto the fence post and stared back at the forest.Then she saw something moving, another cat.It was moving fast then it stopped pounced and landed on shadow and threw shadow into the forest. It ran into her, and as it did so he knocked the air out of her. Then there was a cry and the other cat leaped off of her. She took her chance to escape and sprang up a tree.It wasn't the best idea but she can see almost everything.She was watching as another two cats came running.There were the cats from her dream.are you ok greypaw? the spotted one said running over.watch out! They are watching you leopardstar! ‘Who?Graypaw let’s get you back to camp leafpool can make sure you're ok’ “leopardstar and graypaw what names are those’’shadow muttered to herself. She waited for them to walk away then scrambled down the tree. She leaped for shelter in a bush as the other cats turned wearily. They must know I'm here thought shadow. Light streamed through the forest and the calling of shadows owners rang through the night. The other cats pelted through the forest and shadow pelted after them. The other cats yelled in alert as they realized shadow was following them. They made a sharp turn to the left and ran down a wavy hill. There was a bush wall they disappeared into so shadow raced in too. She halted in awe as she saw groups of cats, some talking, one coming out of a hole, one carrying a bird. Intruder!! One of them yowled in terror and another ducked under a bush,one other was herding an older cat into a small den. Another cat burst through the brambles followed by two others. The first cat had white fur and a scar on his eye still bleeding. The cat beside him had black fur and a stubbed tail. The other cat was leaning on the black cat's shoulder wincing in pain. The white cat turned around and spread his eyes so wide that shadow could see the whites of his eyes. INTRUDER!!!! He yelled unsheathing his claws he sprang on to shadow nipping at her ears she clawed at his belly sending him yowling in pain. He fled to the corner and Shadow could finally take a good look at the place. Only five or six cats were here then just then seven more cats burst through the bramble screen, one's eyes full of fear “it’s greystripe he's dead!”the one behind him was dangling a limp body from his jaws we'll deal with it later for now who are you the spotted one one said thrusting herself through the commotion
This is really good, but I do have a few bits of feedback.
1. Check your capital letters are in the right place, and you need to make sure your puntulization is accurate as well. For example, one of the sentances that stood out to me most for needing more capitalization is this one:
“It’s Greystripe he's dead!” The one behind him was dangling a limp body from his jaws. "We'll deal with it later for now!" "Who are you?" The spotted one one said, thrusting herself through the commotion.
The letters and puntuation in bold and italics are the ones I have added in/fixed. Please double check your writing!
2. I know I didn't use them, but I reckon that this piece of writing would be much more fluent if you added paragaphs.
3. You have written a character's name two different ways; Graystripe Greystripe
I reckon you should choose one spelling of it, as neither are incorrect, but it would be easu\ier to follow if they were the same.
That's all of my feedback. This is a really cool piece of writing, but it can be improved. Continue working on it, and maybe you could make it into a book!
how come when you click "make apprentices into warriors" as leader it calls a meeting, and an unknown cat is there and everyone in the clan says "!" then the meeting ends. what is that about? anyone experienced this or knows why?
Creekfoot and Nightwhisper have special diologe. For Nightwhisper if you make her dep before she drowns herself she'll stay alive. For Creekfoot her sister will come on out. Also for Moss-shadow she doesn't say anything special but her father will be asleep in the elder's den. That's all the ones that I know of but I'll look for more if you want!
1. Between the nursery and Ashtail (aka at the dip) If you slip in the little water thing a white pearl gem will appear
2.Click Alyssa (The owl in thw tree) after Amberclaw tells you who Alyssa is click the blue gem in the tree and Alyssa will give you the gem
3.Go to the beach and click the yellow gem in the water
4.Two ways to do this one. If you are an apprentice go to the herbal Grounds and talk to Nightpaw, she will tell you about a gem she found and left in the apprentice den for u. If you are a warrior go up to the overview and talk to Nightwhisper, she will tell u about the gem ect go get it at the apprentice den.
5. U have to be leader for this. After u become leader talk with Liontail, he will give u his gem,
(I can tell u how to become leader : Once a warrior talk with Moonheart, she will tell u about mosskit, go to the warrior den and get the moss on one of the beds, go to the beach and place the moss on the X and then wait until Mosskit comes to the beach. Go with her to Bramblestar.
He will make u leader if u helped the clan like helping the medicine cat get a new den.
(How to help the medicine cat: Talk to her as a warrior, she will tell you about her wanting a new den. Go fight off the badger and then go tell her about the new empty place)
Or you can first be mates with Dustfeather then Duckfall willl ask you to the beach and Dustfeather if it is just a friend thing and if you say yes you can stay with both or if you say no he will say you broke his trust
If I were you, I would make him deputy after I become leader as an apology (it’s all right if you don’t want to do that though). The good thing about this is that you’ll always see him happy.
I think you can't, if you wanna be mates with both, make dustfeather your mate first then make Duskfall your mate. I'm not 100% sure though, it's been months since I played, it could have updated by then.
First, you have to talk to Moonheart as a warrior. She will tell you the story about Moss-shadow and you would have to find her (I’m not going to spoil the fun of that part) Once you have done so, earn 80 reputation points. Find Milkywillow a new den if you haven’t done so yet. Bramblestar would eventually call the clan-meeting :)
I heared if you name yourself "silver kit" but one of the letters are uppercased in silver you would get a lot of reputation right as you be an apprentice
talk to moonheart when you becomes a warrior and when she ends talking go to the warrior`s den and pick up the moss-ball and go to the beach and you will find a X. click it and put moss-ball there and wait for 1day and you will find her (sry if this is confusing)
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I wrote a Warriors lake-side story. It's unfinished, so this is just the prologue. I'm also new to this community, but I'm a huge Warriors fan! I would love any feedback about my story!
The ground shook as a large group of cats raced past, sending a mouse scuttling into its hole. Starlight shone from above, making the gold and amber leaf-covered ground light enough to see easily. A group of cats all sizes and colours burst out of a bush. At the head of the group was a tall calico she-cat. The group of cats raced through the forest, narrowly avoiding trees, rocks and bushes. The group of cats slowed to a stop once they were about a tail length from a big, glistening lake with a little island in the middle, with a tree that had fallen over, making a bridge to the island. The she-cat angled her ears towards the island. She could hear the chattering of many cats. Mixed cat scents wafted towards her as she parted her mouth. The she turned to the fallen tree and started sprinting across the tree. It was slippery, but the she-cat managed to race across it with the large group of cats right behind her. The she-cat leapt off the bridge, barely touching the ground with her paws, then springing over the bushes that surrounded the island. She landed on the ground with a thump, making dust fly up around her. There were more cats on the island. They turned to look at her as her warriors started appearing from the bushes. “Show-off.” Purred a muscular Tom as he strode towards her. By now the rest of the cats had gone back to talking to each other. “Hardly the best I can do in Owlflight.” She replied as she strutted towards an old, moss-covered tree, sitting in the middle of the clearing. The leaves were swirling down, caught on a frosty leaf-fall breeze. Four cats were sitting on it. “You’re late Wrenstar,” grumbled a grey tom with yellow eyes. “As always.” He finished. “You’re late too sometimes, Stonestar,” Wrenstar replied, staring at him with her crystal blue eyes. Stonestar muttered something under his breath that Wrenstar couldn’t catch. Wrenstar nodded greetings to the three other cats on the tree, Birchstar, leader of Windclan, a slender tortie tom, Fallingstar, leader of Riverclan, a sleek grey she-cat, and Eaglestar, leader of Thunderclan, a muscular Brown and white tom, as she leapt onto a branch, slightly lower than the rest. The full moon shone down on the clearing, their warrior ancestors watching them. “Shall we begin?” Stonestar impatiently asked. “Very well,” Birchstar replied. Wrenstar let out a loud caterwaul, gathering the cat's attention. Wrenstar stood up, digging her claws into the branch she had been sitting on to balance herself. “Cats of the clans,” She began, “I am sad to inform you that Mistystar is dead, and as her deputy, I have taken her place as clan leader. My deputy is Owlflight. I have been to the Moonpool and received my nine lives and name from Starclan.” There were a few gasps of shock and murmurs as cats talked to each other in the clearing below. Wrenstar couldn’t quite make out the voices below. “Her clan grieves for her.” She finished solemnly. Her eyes welled up with tears as she thought about her leader, clanmate, and best friend. Wrenstar’s hair stood on end as out of the corner of her eye, she saw Stone Star smirking softly. Did he think she was weak for caring? Stupid Mouse-brain, She thought to herself Stonestar would never intend to harm Skyclan, or any clan! Would he?... She left her thoughts there, as Stonestar stood up, announcing “Shadowclan is stronger than ever. Prey is plentiful in the marsh, and no cat in Shadowclan will go hungry.” His eyes darted to Wrenstar. Was he… challenging her?
- I also need to add paragraphs
I also have a plan for Skyclan.
Leader: Wrenstar - Calico she-cat with blue eyes
Personality: Wise, Observant, Responsible, Feisty.
Deputy: Owlflight - Tabby tom with amber eyes. Long chest scar.
Personality: Kind, Loyal, Brave, Battle-worn and Intelligent.
Med Cat: Moonsight - Brown + white + freckles. She-cat with blue eyes.
Personality: Wise, Loyal, Caring. Connected strongly with starclan.
Med App: None
Warriors
Leopardspirit - She-cat - Bengal - Green eyes.
-Kind
-Smart
-Honest
Brokenclaw - Tom - Black pelt White paws - Amber eyes.
-Evil
-Envious
-Hateful
Cloudwhisper - She-cat - White - Blue eyes
-Kind
-Cheerful
-Jolly
Mistfeather - She-cat - White - Grey - Green eyes - Moonsight’s sister
-Proud
-Boastful
Blackice - Tom - Tabby- Amber eyes
-Brave
-Honest
-Annoying
Silentwing - Tom - White with grey swirls - Green eyes
-Brave
-Proud
-Hard working
Fernstorm - She-cat - White + Brown - Blue eyes - Mistfeather’s sister
-Jealous
-Cunning
-Secretive
Nightcall - She-cat - Black with white spots on paws + face - Blue eyes
-Honest
-Smart
-Loyal
Queens
Sunflower - Orange + white - Blue eyes - Mate: Silentwing
Kits: Maplekit, Foxkit and Ghostkit - 4 moons
Jayleaf - Grey - Orange eyes - Mate: Blackice
Kits: Expecting - 0 moons
Fallentree - Brown with multi coloured spots that look like the sun coming through a tree canopy - Green eyes - Mate: Lostwhisper
Kits: Deerkit and Treekit - 5.5 moons
Apprentices
Pinepaw - She-cat - Brown - Green eyes
-Snobby
-Oldest
-Mean
Ferretpaw - Tom - Slim - Tabby- Blue eyes
-Mean
-Pinepaw’s sister
-Bullies Blizzardpaw with Pinepaw
-Bullied into being mean ~But shh, that's a secret~
Blizzardpaw - She-cat - White + Blueish-Grey markings - Light blue eyes
-Bullied
-Brave
-Smart
-Main character
Flintpaw - Tom - Gray + Black - Blue eyes
-Likes Blizzardpaw
-Kind
-Smart
-Stands up for Blizzardpaw
Elders
Lostwhisper- Tom - Smoky Grey - Blind
-Hardworking
-Doubtful
-Resilient
-Had to retire early due to being blinded by a defending his mate from a fox
Callingsong - She-cat - Tabby - Half blind - Blue eyes
-Snappy
-Demanding
-Funny
Cinderspeckle - She-cat - White with grey speckles - Broken leg
-Tells stories the most
-Wise
-Gentle
noice u gonna make a game wid a storyline or a book series?
This is just a piece of fan-fic writing, but I'm hoping to write my own book series.
cool
Kool hope it does well!
Thank you!
Hey, actully I'm an author myself! I don't have any books published yet but if you want some advise I can give you some!
Also you're really good at writing paragrahs! Even better than I can write!
Thank you! I would love some advice for my story, I will consider any advice you give me.
Something that I like to do is when I write online I have both a dictionary and a research tab pulled up. You don't want to use a spastic word too much but also try finding words that fit in the right sentences. Like an example is "suddenly" it's a good word to use but it's not always the right idea to use it too much, yet some of the other words that mean the same need to feel like the fit in the sentence, like a puzzle. For the research is just a use when you want to add real or canon (canon means that it becomes a part of the topic you made about or from inspiration) facts, like how maybe you would want to add real warrior cat function in there. An example would be how Med cats arn't aloud to have mates nor kits. Now of corse its your story so the research tab isn't needed most of the time as you can make your own functions!
Ok, thank you for this amazing information. I will keep this in mind while writing my fan-fic, or maybe even my own stories one day!
No problem! I'm always happy to help! If you have any questions or need some advice go ahead and ask me!
Even though you wrote it two months ago, I still wanna say it’s super good! must’ve took you a lot of time and effort!
Thank you for that! I did, and I'm working on making it better and longer. I'll see if I cna post a updated version soon!
yours is awesome do you like mine (please give feedback)
Blackclaw
calling of the gods
Book one
Prologue
As more cats came thundering out of the trees more yowls of pain sounded out in the clearing. “Ashclaw! we need to submit to them they are too powerful” a black tabby heaved himself on to graystipe “do you yield, your leopard clan just a bunch of softies i could demolish your clan blinded we will claim sunning rocks as ours then we will–” “whitepaw get out of here! Graystripe you think you can last forever, but tonight under the moon you will die!” ashclaw closed jaws over graystripes throat until the only sound was the gurgling of his blood
Chapter one
One hot morning shadow was leaping out to the pond to lap up some cool water when she noticed a pair of green eyes staring at her.She called out softly but it sounded like it was chanting something . Then she heard it saying ‘‘save the clan! save the clan!’’ Then she saw a leopard print grey cat fighting a grey spotted tabby. She instinctively leaped to stop the fight but she moved in slow motion. The black cat took a swipe at the tabby and then the chanting stopped instead it was replaced with the forest wind. It was night so shadow crept out to drink some water but it was hard with the forest right there staring at her.She crept over and leaped onto the fence post and stared back at the forest.Then she saw something moving, another cat.It was moving fast then it stopped pounced and landed on shadow and threw shadow into the forest. It ran into her, and as it did so he knocked the air out of her. Then there was a cry and the other cat leaped off of her. She took her chance to escape and sprang up a tree.It wasn't the best idea but she can see almost everything.She was watching as another two cats came running.There were the cats from her dream.are you ok greypaw? the spotted one said running over.watch out! They are watching you leopardstar! ‘Who?Graypaw let’s get you back to camp leafpool can make sure you're ok’ “leopardstar and graypaw what names are those’’shadow muttered to herself. She waited for them to walk away then scrambled down the tree. She leaped for shelter in a bush as the other cats turned wearily. They must know I'm here thought shadow. Light streamed through the forest and the calling of shadows owners rang through the night. The other cats pelted through the forest and shadow pelted after them. The other cats yelled in alert as they realized shadow was following them. They made a sharp turn to the left and ran down a wavy hill. There was a bush wall they disappeared into so shadow raced in too. She halted in awe as she saw groups of cats, some talking, one coming out of a hole, one carrying a bird. Intruder!! One of them yowled in terror and another ducked under a bush,one other was herding an older cat into a small den. Another cat burst through the brambles followed by two others. The first cat had white fur and a scar on his eye still bleeding. The cat beside him had black fur and a stubbed tail. The other cat was leaning on the black cat's shoulder wincing in pain. The white cat turned around and spread his eyes so wide that shadow could see the whites of his eyes. INTRUDER!!!! He yelled unsheathing his claws he sprang on to shadow nipping at her ears she clawed at his belly sending him yowling in pain. He fled to the corner and Shadow could finally take a good look at the place. Only five or six cats were here then just then seven more cats burst through the bramble screen, one's eyes full of fear “it’s greystripe he's dead!”the one behind him was dangling a limp body from his jaws we'll deal with it later for now who are you the spotted one one said thrusting herself through the commotion
This is really good, but I do have a few bits of feedback.
1. Check your capital letters are in the right place, and you need to make sure your puntulization is accurate as well. For example, one of the sentances that stood out to me most for needing more capitalization is this one:
“It’s Greystripe he's dead!” The one behind him was dangling a limp body from his jaws. "We'll deal with it later for now!"
"Who are you?" The spotted one one said, thrusting herself through the commotion.
The letters and puntuation in bold and italics are the ones I have added in/fixed. Please double check your writing!
2. I know I didn't use them, but I reckon that this piece of writing would be much more fluent if you added paragaphs.
3. You have written a character's name two different ways;
Graystripe
Greystripe
I reckon you should choose one spelling of it, as neither are incorrect, but it would be easu\ier to follow if they were the same.
That's all of my feedback. This is a really cool piece of writing, but it can be improved. Continue working on it, and maybe you could make it into a book!
Keep Writing!
-Pik4corn
How long have you stayed in the nursery?
where did u make dis
Did you did that?!
It looks amazing!!!
I think it was made on Picrew.
it's by felidaze
Maybe we're dreaming about our dead sister?
cant you save in this game? because i keep crashing and i was so far
You can't save the game
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who should be my deputy? Hollypelt or Crystalblaze? Say H for holly and C for crystal
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dustfeather is so cute. in his dialogue when your a tom and you let him, he's so uncertain.
i just love him <3
Does anyone know how to find max and nightmare
I don't think they're in the game
Hi can someone tell me how to be a barn cat?
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you can't do that anymore. moss-shadow didn't add that yet.
its in v5
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Name: Redstar light brown tom with green eyes
Mate(s): Fallenfeather white she cat with light grey spots and bangs and blue eyes, Cottonwillow fluffy white she-cat with blue eyes
kits: ?
Former mate: Nightwhisper dark grey she-cat with black bangs and blue eyes, dead by suicide :(
Deputy: Hollypelt black she-cat with green eyes, former mentor
Did you guys know that Nightwhisper's cause of death was su!c!de?
Its super sad
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yeah...
it won’t let me go to the beach with breesepaw
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are you a tom or she-cat cause you have to be she-cat to be mates with Breeze
Tom
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yeah you have to be she-cat
how come when you click "make apprentices into warriors" as leader it calls a meeting, and an unknown cat is there and everyone in the clan says "!" then the meeting ends. what is that about? anyone experienced this or knows why?
if you had kits who arn't ready to be apps or you don't have kits at all it will do that
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it happened to me lol
it keeps kicking me of its really annoying
@Fluffy_F0x_x yeah i got stuck in my KTL game where i was talking to one of the characters and i had to re-load and loose my progress as a leader TwT
Are there any cats who have unique dialogues if you make them deputy?
Ye
which ones and what do they say
Creekfoot has cool dialogue and her sister comes out of her den
When :O
If you want to know i can tell you
yes, please! I am too lazy to check every cat 😅
Creekfoot and Nightwhisper have special diologe. For Nightwhisper if you make her dep before she drowns herself she'll stay alive. For Creekfoot her sister will come on out. Also for Moss-shadow she doesn't say anything special but her father will be asleep in the elder's den. That's all the ones that I know of but I'll look for more if you want!
From what I know of there are two at least that's what I found out... If you want I can tell you
Yeah, I think Sparrowtail says something like "So what? You made me deputy? I won't respect you."
this game s Nostalgic-
GO BACK TO SCRATCH AND REPORT THEM!
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ye!
Moss-shadow I think I know who reported you
>:o i reported it but st did not respond
Why would they
idk
I think their account got deleted because of the terrible moderation team in Scratch
Are you 100% they did this? They could be innocent, don't report them unless you have evidence.
Did you guys see that when you get your warrior name Bramblestar says "By the power of me" and ect? i find it really funny
This game is very fun kind of just wish I knew how to get all the gems though
I can tell u how to get all the gems :)
1. Between the nursery and Ashtail (aka at the dip) If you slip in the little water thing a white pearl gem will appear
2.Click Alyssa (The owl in thw tree) after Amberclaw tells you who Alyssa is click the blue gem in the tree and Alyssa will give you the gem
3.Go to the beach and click the yellow gem in the water
4.Two ways to do this one. If you are an apprentice go to the herbal Grounds and talk to Nightpaw, she will tell you about a gem she found and left in the apprentice den for u. If you are a warrior go up to the overview and talk to Nightwhisper, she will tell u about the gem ect go get it at the apprentice den.
5. U have to be leader for this. After u become leader talk with Liontail, he will give u his gem,
(I can tell u how to become leader : Once a warrior talk with Moonheart, she will tell u about mosskit, go to the warrior den and get the moss on one of the beds, go to the beach and place the moss on the X and then wait until Mosskit comes to the beach. Go with her to Bramblestar.
He will make u leader if u helped the clan like helping the medicine cat get a new den.
(How to help the medicine cat: Talk to her as a warrior, she will tell you about her wanting a new den. Go fight off the badger and then go tell her about the new empty place)
//Hoped this helped u and other players
Another fact is that you can wait until Liontail dies to get his gem then his freind will say a speical diologe
how can i make up to duskfall after i mate with dustfeather in front of him?
i dunno...
I don't think you can
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you can't sadly...but! you can become mates with dustfeather when you have kits with duskfall when he's watching over the kits!
Or you can first be mates with Dustfeather then Duckfall willl ask you to the beach and Dustfeather if it is just a friend thing and if you say yes you can stay with both or if you say no he will say you broke his trust
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oh! never knew that. btw Duckfall? xD
oops XD I meant Duskfall XD
If I were you, I would make him deputy after I become leader as an apology (it’s all right if you don’t want to do that though). The good thing about this is that you’ll always see him happy.
I think you can't, if you wanna be mates with both, make dustfeather your mate first then make Duskfall your mate. I'm not 100% sure though, it's been months since I played, it could have updated by then.
my kits are cloudkit, graykit, and sandkit. as in cloudtail, graystripe, and sandstorm
Awww. If you don’t mind me asking, who is the other parent?
Moss-shadow can you make a downloadable AND 3D version of this?
why dont you make a 3d ver?? surely it cant be that hard
im sure it is
I know
How do you become leader
😅😅
First, you have to talk to Moonheart as a warrior. She will tell you the story about Moss-shadow and you would have to find her (I’m not going to spoil the fun of that part) Once you have done so, earn 80 reputation points. Find Milkywillow a new den if you haven’t done so yet. Bramblestar would eventually call the clan-meeting :)
did anyone notice that when your becomming a warrior if you look at breezepaw and nightpaw they are having their tails toutch echother
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yep I think its cute tho
I heared if you name yourself "silver kit" but one of the letters are uppercased in silver you would get a lot of reputation right as you be an apprentice
it’s actually sliver not silver
O sorry I cant spell
how do you become a kittypet??
You can't its not added yet
not added yet
do you have to tell the leader about ur sister
You don't have to and you can let her stay
no but it does give you +3 rep
HOMEYWING TYSM
how do you lure mosskit?
talk to moonheart when you becomes a warrior and when she ends talking go to the warrior`s den and pick up the moss-ball and go to the beach and you will find a X. click it and put moss-ball there and wait for 1day and you will find her (sry if this is confusing)
When the red ‘x’ appears on the beach, use a moss ball in the warrior dens, the next day she should be there, a yellow cat.
oh and yes you need to speak with the medicine cat on the herb grounds and she’ll tell you if ur a warrior, then you do the steps above. Got it?
what day does Nightwhisper die??
after someday you becomes a warrior ig :(
Guys how did Nightwhisper die again?
su!cide
Oh my-
wait how
She unfortunately drowned herself, because nobody has ever loved her :(
wow.
Yeah :,(
saving her is possible by making her deputy or just not talking to her til her last dialogue
That’s good :) I always make her the deputy :)
O- NO IMA GO SAVE HER
I LOVE HER BRO NO!
but... she was my mate...
What?! You’ll have to save her!!!!!!!