Hey Moss-shadow, if you're interested, I have a few ideas for updates and alterations:
You could make other cats do things like become mates and elders, have kits, etc.
You could make the cats go to sleep at night.
You could make other cats move around, if you like.
Perhaps you could make Crystalblaze and Sunfall agree to rejoining BrambleClan, once the player becomes leader? It would honestly be a really good change.
Even if that doesn't happen, could you still make Crystalblaze and Sunfall's kits grow up?
Also, I've experienced some difficulties in naming my kits while playing. Most of the time, my kits have different names than what I called them, or I accidentally name the wrong kit the wrong thing. If you could find a way to fix this, that would be great. :3
Similarly, I have trouble giving my kits their warrior names. Despite the fact that I typed in the new name, the kits always end up with only their prefixes.
Could you also let the player choose who their kits' mentors will be? It would be a fun modification.
That's all. I know it's a lot, and I'm not even sure if you can do this, or if you have a good reason not to do these things. Please send a reply and tell me what you think of my suggestions! =3
No they can't update anymore... they was banned from scratch for no reason and they deleted all of their work from the web site. Now of course I have never heard of them until I found their work here but from what I've been told they can no longer update the game even if it says they will in the future
They weren't banned. I think this is what happened: A scratcher named warriorcan reported them, and after scratch banned them, warriorcan shared a remix of kit to leader and didn't give any credit to mossy.
adding some ideas - leader role suggestions ; Hosting patrols to ??? . Upgrading Dens, . Warrior role suggestions : maybe the player would be able to sleep with mate if they have one like normal cats do. Also an idea for Sunfall Maybe he could sometimes bring a piece of prey to you if you're leader, trying to bring peace
Flamebounce is a large Calico tomcat known for his merciful soul and his love for sunny, hot days in Greenleaf. Flamebounce is the eldest sibling of CrystalBlaze, despite being some what biological twins, Flamebounce isn't as eager as his younger sister, instead, he is rarely ever seen within the camp walls and is usually seen near the Fair or Fireclan borders talking with patrols with a friendly demeanor, despite most of the clan believing he's unloyal, Flamebounce is incredibly honest and CrystalBlaze claims its hard for him to lie.
No she doesnt, theres a certain coding in the game where its practically manditory to see Sunfall and Crystalblaze together. Once you do, you can either tell on her or become leader later on and let her stay or exile her.
Y'know if you keep her secret and talk with her when you're leader, you can let her stay in camp. (Idk ifyou know this, and you probably do, so, my apologies, but, well, I'm just sayin')
Also, do we even know that the name of the group(s) that live theres ancestors CALLED starclan? I mean, it could be called something else, just how The Tribe of Falling Water calls their ancestors The Tribe of Endless Hunting ( *SPOILER ALERT* Which we now know is kinda incorrect thanks to The Last Hope. RIP Spottedleaf) So, yeah.
I ACTUALLY PLAYED THIS GAME BEFORE ON SCRATCH I remember only making about a quarter into it but stopped. tis is giving me flashbacks of good old
scratch. it was rlly good
Quick Tutorial on how to get a good ending in the game :).
Once your born and leave the den you can go over to Amberclaw, clicl on Alyssa the owl in the tree to activate the dialouge then click on the blue gem in the tree which will then make you the player ask Alyssa to get the blue gem, once you take it go to the stream to the right.
Slip in the stream and grab the pearl like-gem. To get the yellow stone go to the beach and grab the yellow stone in the shallow water.
Once your apprenticed, go to Nightpaw, and she will tell you that she hid something in the apprentices den; click it twice to get the green gem.
Then its just the waiting game until Liontail dies, and if you want, you can learn about the gem if you decide to interact with him after trying to snatch his precious gem.
After Liontail dies, you can get the final gem.
To get Moss-shadow back and to become leader, you must find Moss-shadow by at first talking to Moonheart (I forgot her name xd), but she's the gray she-cat with Torrentclaw before you enter the beach area. She will tell you about Mosskit, and you have to find a way to get the item. You must be a warrior to get this quest. Go into the warriors den and grab the mossball, then go onto the beach, click the red X on the sand, and place the mossball. All you have to do is wait for Mossshadow to appear the next day.
Once she appears, take her to Bramblestar, which is where he thanks you. The next task is pretty simple: gain 80 reputation, and then Bramblestar will announce you as leader. Then, since you got all the gems, go down to the cave in the hunting grounds, the one on the left, click the boulder, and it will open the cave where you get the 9 leaders ceremony scene, which you can skip by clicking the star on the crystal.
Next you have to fight Firestar; I would heavily advise that you grind by beating up Duskfall and Dustfeather like your life depends on it until you have 500 or 600 health, as it makes it much easier to kill him. Once you kill Firestar and the Fireclan cats arrive, go to find Breezesong in the medicine den and appoint him the new leader of Fireclan.
From that point on, if you left Crystalblaze alone (aka not telling on her when she was with Sunfall), you have the option to either exile her or let her stay. If you want a nice happy ending, you can let her stay; if your salty and genuinely forgot about her, you can exile her. That's all you gotta do.
(Btw, if you want to stay alive for eternity, just keep talking to the black rogue on the hill to either change your gender, reset your kit timer, or keep you young for eternity. just give em some herbs.)
And you cant go to the circus because Sunfall wont let you, he practically dipped on Crystalblaze and her kits, and if you want, you can appoint Crystalblaze a deputy.)
There are three special text for three diffrent cats in this game!
1. Nightwhisper
2. Creekfoot
3. Sparrowtail
(Buns one! 4. Moss-Shadow won't say anything special but her father will sleep in the elder's den)
I won't tell you what the texts are so you can find out on your own but if you want me to just ask! Also if theres anymore cats with special text let me know!
for Creekfoot she will say " *yawn* " along with the normal text that most deputys say in the game. But her sister will come out and the two of you can talk
Backstory: Was apart of Fireclan but was banished by Breezestar after she was blamed for a murder. She tried her best to prove her innocence but failed. Now she is a wanted cat who is hunted by other clans as she tries to escape the land of the four clans
Really? you should check out the official Warriors website then. People submit some AWESOME fanart - not saying this drawing isn't cool. It's frikin awesome!
Or if you go to the beach with Duckfall, he will ask if it's just a friend trip. if you choose to leave him you break up, if you choose to stay with him you get to mate with both
I'll give you a quick description but you can use my profile picture if you need a reference!
Name: Blossomshine
Appearance: Right eye is a pale blue, left is pale yellow. Mink brown and fiery orange calico. Completely white neck, chest, and underbelly, with mostly white legs. Thin, swirling black stripes on her face and back. Fur is longish, elegant, and more or less poofy.
Extra: Try to give her a smug "Cross me and you'll pay" sort of look. She's thin, but has sort of shortish legs and a normal sized(but fluffy) tail.
Well what they mean is that they created her in that game... they're not trying to say they made her themselves and they're the origanal creator of her...
Guys i think FireClan attacked while i was eating lunch WHWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE no one but my my mantore ,Breezepaw ,Nightpaw ,Bramblestar and Fallenfeather are therte
I wrote a Warriors lake-side story. It's unfinished, so this is just the prologue. I'm also new to this community, but I'm a huge Warriors fan! I would love any feedback about my story!
The ground shook as a large group of cats raced past, sending a mouse scuttling into its hole. Starlight shone from above, making the gold and amber leaf-covered ground light enough to see easily. A group of cats all sizes and colours burst out of a bush. At the head of the group was a tall calico she-cat. The group of cats raced through the forest, narrowly avoiding trees, rocks and bushes. The group of cats slowed to a stop once they were about a tail length from a big, glistening lake with a little island in the middle, with a tree that had fallen over, making a bridge to the island. The she-cat angled her ears towards the island. She could hear the chattering of many cats. Mixed cat scents wafted towards her as she parted her mouth. The she turned to the fallen tree and started sprinting across the tree. It was slippery, but the she-cat managed to race across it with the large group of cats right behind her. The she-cat leapt off the bridge, barely touching the ground with her paws, then springing over the bushes that surrounded the island. She landed on the ground with a thump, making dust fly up around her. There were more cats on the island. They turned to look at her as her warriors started appearing from the bushes. “Show-off.” Purred a muscular Tom as he strode towards her. By now the rest of the cats had gone back to talking to each other. “Hardly the best I can do in Owlflight.” She replied as she strutted towards an old, moss-covered tree, sitting in the middle of the clearing. The leaves were swirling down, caught on a frosty leaf-fall breeze. Four cats were sitting on it. “You’re late Wrenstar,” grumbled a grey tom with yellow eyes. “As always.” He finished. “You’re late too sometimes, Stonestar,” Wrenstar replied, staring at him with her crystal blue eyes. Stonestar muttered something under his breath that Wrenstar couldn’t catch. Wrenstar nodded greetings to the three other cats on the tree, Birchstar, leader of Windclan, a slender tortie tom, Fallingstar, leader of Riverclan, a sleek grey she-cat, and Eaglestar, leader of Thunderclan, a muscular Brown and white tom, as she leapt onto a branch, slightly lower than the rest. The full moon shone down on the clearing, their warrior ancestors watching them. “Shall we begin?” Stonestar impatiently asked. “Very well,” Birchstar replied. Wrenstar let out a loud caterwaul, gathering the cat's attention. Wrenstar stood up, digging her claws into the branch she had been sitting on to balance herself. “Cats of the clans,” She began, “I am sad to inform you that Mistystar is dead, and as her deputy, I have taken her place as clan leader. My deputy is Owlflight. I have been to the Moonpool and received my nine lives and name from Starclan.” There were a few gasps of shock and murmurs as cats talked to each other in the clearing below. Wrenstar couldn’t quite make out the voices below. “Her clan grieves for her.” She finished solemnly. Her eyes welled up with tears as she thought about her leader, clanmate, and best friend. Wrenstar’s hair stood on end as out of the corner of her eye, she saw Stone Star smirking softly. Did he think she was weak for caring? Stupid Mouse-brain, She thought to herself Stonestar would never intend to harm Skyclan, or any clan! Would he?... She left her thoughts there, as Stonestar stood up, announcing “Shadowclan is stronger than ever. Prey is plentiful in the marsh, and no cat in Shadowclan will go hungry.” His eyes darted to Wrenstar. Was he… challenging her?
Something that I like to do is when I write online I have both a dictionary and a research tab pulled up. You don't want to use a spastic word too much but also try finding words that fit in the right sentences. Like an example is "suddenly" it's a good word to use but it's not always the right idea to use it too much, yet some of the other words that mean the same need to feel like the fit in the sentence, like a puzzle. For the research is just a use when you want to add real or canon (canon means that it becomes a part of the topic you made about or from inspiration) facts, like how maybe you would want to add real warrior cat function in there. An example would be how Med cats arn't aloud to have mates nor kits. Now of corse its your story so the research tab isn't needed most of the time as you can make your own functions!
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moss shadow you should join charictor hub
I wish there was an update cuz I've already played it a lot and done most of the things possible :(
sadly there wont be one scratch banned her
i play on itch.io
that does not change it
Hey Moss-shadow, if you're interested, I have a few ideas for updates and alterations:
You could make other cats do things like become mates and elders, have kits, etc.
You could make the cats go to sleep at night.
You could make other cats move around, if you like.
Perhaps you could make Crystalblaze and Sunfall agree to rejoining BrambleClan, once the player becomes leader? It would honestly be a really good change.
Even if that doesn't happen, could you still make Crystalblaze and Sunfall's kits grow up?
Also, I've experienced some difficulties in naming my kits while playing. Most of the time, my kits have different names than what I called them, or I accidentally name the wrong kit the wrong thing. If you could find a way to fix this, that would be great. :3
Similarly, I have trouble giving my kits their warrior names. Despite the fact that I typed in the new name, the kits always end up with only their prefixes.
Could you also let the player choose who their kits' mentors will be? It would be a fun modification.
That's all. I know it's a lot, and I'm not even sure if you can do this, or if you have a good reason not to do these things. Please send a reply and tell me what you think of my suggestions! =3
Mossy isn't updating West Woods games anymore, I'm pretty sure.
pretty sure? or entirely certain?
because i'm pretty sure it says moss-shadow will update it
No they can't update anymore... they was banned from scratch for no reason and they deleted all of their work from the web site. Now of course I have never heard of them until I found their work here but from what I've been told they can no longer update the game even if it says they will in the future
actually they are updating or un-scratching over borders using i think a program named turbowarp?
Well this is Icho not scratch
They weren't banned. I think this is what happened: A scratcher named warriorcan reported them, and after scratch banned them, warriorcan shared a remix of kit to leader and didn't give any credit to mossy.
I said pretty sure because I didn't want to say I was 100% certain and then be completely wrong.
adding some ideas - leader role suggestions ; Hosting patrols to ??? . Upgrading Dens, . Warrior role suggestions : maybe the player would be able to sleep with mate if they have one like normal cats do. Also an idea for Sunfall Maybe he could sometimes bring a piece of prey to you if you're leader, trying to bring peace
Another WC Oc.
Flamebounce/Flamestar.
Flamebounce is a large Calico tomcat known for his merciful soul and his love for sunny, hot days in Greenleaf. Flamebounce is the eldest sibling of CrystalBlaze, despite being some what biological twins, Flamebounce isn't as eager as his younger sister, instead, he is rarely ever seen within the camp walls and is usually seen near the Fair or Fireclan borders talking with patrols with a friendly demeanor, despite most of the clan believing he's unloyal, Flamebounce is incredibly honest and CrystalBlaze claims its hard for him to lie.
Kin: Crystalblaze.
Mate: None.
Kits: None.
Role: Leader
Gender: Male
Moons: 32 moons.
What happens if you never catch CrystalBlaze with SUnfall? Does she still get kits?
I don't think so... I'm pretty sure you have to catch her for her to have her kits later... i wouldn't know tho
your rightie!
No she doesnt, theres a certain coding in the game where its practically manditory to see Sunfall and Crystalblaze together. Once you do, you can either tell on her or become leader later on and let her stay or exile her.
What happens if you let her stay? I am still trying to get enough XP to become lead so IDK what I should do and if telling on her is worth it
i think it is, but if you dont then she still falls in love with sunfall and you have the choice to banish her.
She will have kits if you are leader
Y'know if you keep her secret and talk with her when you're leader, you can let her stay in camp. (Idk ifyou know this, and you probably do, so, my apologies, but, well, I'm just sayin')
why does bramblestar say "by the powers of me"? what happened to Starclan?
I think because the cold stone was blocked off, maybe Bramblestar thought the connection was cut off? Just a theory though.
hmmm
perhaps
Also, do we even know that the name of the group(s) that live theres ancestors CALLED starclan? I mean, it could be called something else, just how The Tribe of Falling Water calls their ancestors The Tribe of Endless Hunting ( *SPOILER ALERT* Which we now know is kinda incorrect thanks to The Last Hope. RIP Spottedleaf) So, yeah.
not a spoiler alert for me! and their starclan is called the place of cold waters. and isnt it called the tribe of RUSHING water?
It is called the Tribe of Rushing Water, the Tribe of Endless Hunting is the Tribes version of StarClan.
Wdym not an alert for you and no its just called place of cold waters
maybe he was narcissistic
i wish i were made an appendix sooner :P
I ACTUALLY PLAYED THIS GAME BEFORE ON SCRATCH I remember only making about a quarter into it but stopped. tis is giving me flashbacks of good old scratch. it was rlly good
i played this game on scratch too! before i checked their channel and saw they got banned ;-;
Me 2! I haven’t played this game since I found other stuff interesting.
I FORGOT NOT TO SPAM WHEN TRAINING I HAD TO RESTART!!!!
NIGHTWHISPER DISAPPEARED!!!!!!
Well, she didn't really disappear...
Yeah she DID!
She died...
I WASNT THERE FOR IT!!!!!
HOW DOES SHE DIE?!?!?!
You can't see it but she drowned herself because of how depressed she was...
how do i find moss-shadow when im reborn?
When your reborn it just repeats the game so yeah it just takes you back in time. the only thing that changed is how you stay powerful when you reborn
shoooooot
OH AND MOSS-SHADOW CAN YOU PLEASE MAKE A CAITER LIKE THIS
Wow! Your art is amazing
Oh my gosh bruh made a pokemon version of warrior cats!!!!!!!
Didn't Mossy get banned though?
that is crazy :O
when no new games release so you just think of smth and go along with it
wth
can you make my warrior cat OC please?
name: Robintail
gender: she-cat
mate: Dustfall
rank: warrior
kits: Amberkit(ear), Marigoldkit(face)
fur: calico
eyes: green with amber
fur type: fluffy
clan: Fireclan/ Brambleclan
can you make her for me?
WOW Crystalkit is op at mossball
Tell me about it.
Quick Tutorial on how to get a good ending in the game :).
Once your born and leave the den you can go over to Amberclaw, clicl on Alyssa the owl in the tree to activate the dialouge then click on the blue gem in the tree which will then make you the player ask Alyssa to get the blue gem, once you take it go to the stream to the right.
Slip in the stream and grab the pearl like-gem. To get the yellow stone go to the beach and grab the yellow stone in the shallow water.
Once your apprenticed, go to Nightpaw, and she will tell you that she hid something in the apprentices den; click it twice to get the green gem.
Then its just the waiting game until Liontail dies, and if you want, you can learn about the gem if you decide to interact with him after trying to snatch his precious gem.
After Liontail dies, you can get the final gem.
To get Moss-shadow back and to become leader, you must find Moss-shadow by at first talking to Moonheart (I forgot her name xd), but she's the gray she-cat with Torrentclaw before you enter the beach area. She will tell you about Mosskit, and you have to find a way to get the item. You must be a warrior to get this quest. Go into the warriors den and grab the mossball, then go onto the beach, click the red X on the sand, and place the mossball. All you have to do is wait for Mossshadow to appear the next day.
Once she appears, take her to Bramblestar, which is where he thanks you. The next task is pretty simple: gain 80 reputation, and then Bramblestar will announce you as leader. Then, since you got all the gems, go down to the cave in the hunting grounds, the one on the left, click the boulder, and it will open the cave where you get the 9 leaders ceremony scene, which you can skip by clicking the star on the crystal.
Next you have to fight Firestar; I would heavily advise that you grind by beating up Duskfall and Dustfeather like your life depends on it until you have 500 or 600 health, as it makes it much easier to kill him. Once you kill Firestar and the Fireclan cats arrive, go to find Breezesong in the medicine den and appoint him the new leader of Fireclan.
From that point on, if you left Crystalblaze alone (aka not telling on her when she was with Sunfall), you have the option to either exile her or let her stay. If you want a nice happy ending, you can let her stay; if your salty and genuinely forgot about her, you can exile her. That's all you gotta do.
(Btw, if you want to stay alive for eternity, just keep talking to the black rogue on the hill to either change your gender, reset your kit timer, or keep you young for eternity. just give em some herbs.)
And you cant go to the circus because Sunfall wont let you, he practically dipped on Crystalblaze and her kits, and if you want, you can appoint Crystalblaze a deputy.)
You can actully jump under the guard at the fair to enter inside without telling on her
I'VE GOT THE HAPPY ENDING BC OF YOU TY!
but... you also have to fight the badger by the hunting grounds then talk to milkywillow.
Not exactly, I didn't do those 2 steps but still 'won' the game either way :3
Heres my WC oc if anyones interested :3.
NIMBLESWIPE
A tortoise-shell she -cat with sharp green eyes and is known for her nimble and agile attacks.
Mate: Dustfeather
Kits: Sootfly
Kin: Crystalblaze, Lionkit, Qualikit, Thunderkit and Wisteriakit.
Friends: Cottonwillow, Duskfall, Sparrowtail, Moss-shadow.
Woah! That looks cool!
Aww thank you!
The base isn't mine btw, I'm still looking to credit the owner :3
wow but... how is sparrowtail your friend???
I appointed her deputy once I became Leader, she stays permanetly if you do that ;)
am I well known?
There are three special text for three diffrent cats in this game!
1. Nightwhisper
2. Creekfoot
3. Sparrowtail
(Buns one! 4. Moss-Shadow won't say anything special but her father will sleep in the elder's den)
I won't tell you what the texts are so you can find out on your own but if you want me to just ask! Also if theres anymore cats with special text let me know!
Can you tell me about the text for creekfoot please? I always hated seeing her so sad.
for Creekfoot she will say " *yawn* " along with the normal text that most deputys say in the game. But her sister will come out and the two of you can talk
https://perchance.org/143e09y66k yall want to meet smoe of you
oh an guys! I'm having you decide my characterthis time!
Name: Raggedjaw
Role: Rouge
gender: Female
Fur: Brownish-red with a white star on her chest
Fur type: Short hair
eye color: Green and Purple
Scar: burnt hin-leg
Backstory: Was apart of Fireclan but was banished by Breezestar after she was blamed for a murder. She tried her best to prove her innocence but failed. Now she is a wanted cat who is hunted by other clans as she tries to escape the land of the four clans
Can someone make her for me?
for you:
omg thank you! I love her!
Haiiii! I hope you like it!! :) she’s a bit rushed but I hope it’s oki!
Ty! I love her!
the heck... That is the best drawing i have ever seen!!!!!!!!!!!!
Really? you should check out the official Warriors website then. People submit some AWESOME fanart - not saying this drawing isn't cool. It's frikin awesome!
Role: Rogue (you accidentally input the name of a sonic character XD)
Also burnt hinD leg.
ah! ty for telling me!
How do you get the round gem?
Try falling in the creek
ok thanks!
then what?
Click it
If you cheat on Dustfeather while he's looking after your kits, then he will never know. XD
Or if you go to the beach with Duckfall, he will ask if it's just a friend trip. if you choose to leave him you break up, if you choose to stay with him you get to mate with both
ohhhhhh cool!
hehe
HOW DO YOU BECOME LEADER???????????????
You have to find mosskit and have 80 reputation.
yeah i found it out later but thanks
GUYYS, MY KITS ARE ALL GROWN UP!!!
Nice name. I had one like that named Gemeye
Birchfur
the fact heatherfur is the 2nd name of silverstar :sob:
I named that one Mossfur (when it was a baby it was Mosskit)
If you guys want I can make your oc
OOOOOHHhhHh yes please!
I'll give you a quick description but you can use my profile picture if you need a reference!
Name: Blossomshine
Appearance: Right eye is a pale blue, left is pale yellow. Mink brown and fiery orange calico. Completely white neck, chest, and underbelly, with mostly white legs. Thin, swirling black stripes on her face and back. Fur is longish, elegant, and more or less poofy.
Extra: Try to give her a smug "Cross me and you'll pay" sort of look. She's thin, but has sort of shortish legs and a normal sized(but fluffy) tail.
Sorry if this is too much... Lol
And don't forget Breezestar
Nice
Thanks
Look qho I made
this isn't yours, I've played this generator b4. Please credit the creator
um hey I'm new here
hi!
hey please be kind here https://perchance.org/143e09y66k
Did you make it? Your really talented!
Well what they mean is that they created her in that game... they're not trying to say they made her themselves and they're the origanal creator of her...
CRYSTALBLAZE LOOKS NOTHING LIKE THAT!!!!!!
BUT HE TRIED AT LEAST
how in StarClan did you get this to show? Ive tried a milion times and it wont let meh
there is a glitch that when nightwhisper dies and I make her deputy she comes back from the dead
That’s good! It means you saved Nightwhisper!
Noice
Oh ok thanks
Guys i think FireClan attacked while i was eating lunch WHWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE no one but my my mantore ,Breezepaw ,Nightpaw ,Bramblestar and Fallenfeather are therte
your lucky anyone was there XD I was unfortunately not so lucky
I was a kit when it happened dats why
does mossy use medibang paint to draw?
hey um are u _galaxy_star_cat_ from scratch?
I wrote a Warriors lake-side story. It's unfinished, so this is just the prologue. I'm also new to this community, but I'm a huge Warriors fan! I would love any feedback about my story!
The ground shook as a large group of cats raced past, sending a mouse scuttling into its hole. Starlight shone from above, making the gold and amber leaf-covered ground light enough to see easily. A group of cats all sizes and colours burst out of a bush. At the head of the group was a tall calico she-cat. The group of cats raced through the forest, narrowly avoiding trees, rocks and bushes. The group of cats slowed to a stop once they were about a tail length from a big, glistening lake with a little island in the middle, with a tree that had fallen over, making a bridge to the island. The she-cat angled her ears towards the island. She could hear the chattering of many cats. Mixed cat scents wafted towards her as she parted her mouth. The she turned to the fallen tree and started sprinting across the tree. It was slippery, but the she-cat managed to race across it with the large group of cats right behind her. The she-cat leapt off the bridge, barely touching the ground with her paws, then springing over the bushes that surrounded the island. She landed on the ground with a thump, making dust fly up around her. There were more cats on the island. They turned to look at her as her warriors started appearing from the bushes. “Show-off.” Purred a muscular Tom as he strode towards her. By now the rest of the cats had gone back to talking to each other. “Hardly the best I can do in Owlflight.” She replied as she strutted towards an old, moss-covered tree, sitting in the middle of the clearing. The leaves were swirling down, caught on a frosty leaf-fall breeze. Four cats were sitting on it. “You’re late Wrenstar,” grumbled a grey tom with yellow eyes. “As always.” He finished. “You’re late too sometimes, Stonestar,” Wrenstar replied, staring at him with her crystal blue eyes. Stonestar muttered something under his breath that Wrenstar couldn’t catch. Wrenstar nodded greetings to the three other cats on the tree, Birchstar, leader of Windclan, a slender tortie tom, Fallingstar, leader of Riverclan, a sleek grey she-cat, and Eaglestar, leader of Thunderclan, a muscular Brown and white tom, as she leapt onto a branch, slightly lower than the rest. The full moon shone down on the clearing, their warrior ancestors watching them. “Shall we begin?” Stonestar impatiently asked. “Very well,” Birchstar replied. Wrenstar let out a loud caterwaul, gathering the cat's attention. Wrenstar stood up, digging her claws into the branch she had been sitting on to balance herself. “Cats of the clans,” She began, “I am sad to inform you that Mistystar is dead, and as her deputy, I have taken her place as clan leader. My deputy is Owlflight. I have been to the Moonpool and received my nine lives and name from Starclan.” There were a few gasps of shock and murmurs as cats talked to each other in the clearing below. Wrenstar couldn’t quite make out the voices below. “Her clan grieves for her.” She finished solemnly. Her eyes welled up with tears as she thought about her leader, clanmate, and best friend. Wrenstar’s hair stood on end as out of the corner of her eye, she saw Stone Star smirking softly. Did he think she was weak for caring? Stupid Mouse-brain, She thought to herself Stonestar would never intend to harm Skyclan, or any clan! Would he?... She left her thoughts there, as Stonestar stood up, announcing “Shadowclan is stronger than ever. Prey is plentiful in the marsh, and no cat in Shadowclan will go hungry.” His eyes darted to Wrenstar. Was he… challenging her?
- I also need to add paragraphs
I also have a plan for Skyclan.
Leader: Wrenstar - Calico she-cat with blue eyes
Personality: Wise, Observant, Responsible, Feisty.
Deputy: Owlflight - Tabby tom with amber eyes. Long chest scar.
Personality: Kind, Loyal, Brave, Battle-worn and Intelligent.
Med Cat: Moonsight - Brown + white + freckles. She-cat with blue eyes.
Personality: Wise, Loyal, Caring. Connected strongly with starclan.
Med App: None
Warriors
Leopardspirit - She-cat - Bengal - Green eyes.
-Kind
-Smart
-Honest
Brokenclaw - Tom - Black pelt White paws - Amber eyes.
-Evil
-Envious
-Hateful
Cloudwhisper - She-cat - White - Blue eyes
-Kind
-Cheerful
-Jolly
Mistfeather - She-cat - White - Grey - Green eyes - Moonsight’s sister
-Proud
-Boastful
Blackice - Tom - Tabby- Amber eyes
-Brave
-Honest
-Annoying
Silentwing - Tom - White with grey swirls - Green eyes
-Brave
-Proud
-Hard working
Fernstorm - She-cat - White + Brown - Blue eyes - Mistfeather’s sister
-Jealous
-Cunning
-Secretive
Nightcall - She-cat - Black with white spots on paws + face - Blue eyes
-Honest
-Smart
-Loyal
Queens
Sunflower - Orange + white - Blue eyes - Mate: Silentwing
Kits: Maplekit, Foxkit and Ghostkit - 4 moons
Jayleaf - Grey - Orange eyes - Mate: Blackice
Kits: Expecting - 0 moons
Fallentree - Brown with multi coloured spots that look like the sun coming through a tree canopy - Green eyes - Mate: Lostwhisper
Kits: Deerkit and Treekit - 5.5 moons
Apprentices
Pinepaw - She-cat - Brown - Green eyes
-Snobby
-Oldest
-Mean
Ferretpaw - Tom - Slim - Tabby- Blue eyes
-Mean
-Pinepaw’s sister
-Bullies Frogpaw with Pinepaw
-Bullied into being mean ~But shh, that's a secret~
Blizzardpaw - She-cat - White + Blueish-Grey markings - Light blue eyes
-Bullied
-Brave
-Smart
-Main character
Flintpaw - Tom - Gray + Black - Blue eyes
-Likes Frogpaw
-Kind
-Smart
-Stands up for Frogpaw
Elders
Lostwhisper- Tom - Smoky Grey - Blind
-Hardworking
-Doubtful
-Resilient
-Had to retire early due to being blinded by a defending his mate from a fox
Callingsong - She-cat - Tabby - Half blind - Blue eyes
-Snappy
-Demanding
-Funny
Cinderspeckle - She-cat - White with grey speckles - Broken leg
-Tells stories the most
-Wise
-Gentle
noice u gonna make a game wid a storyline or a book series?
Kool hope it does well!
Thank you!
Hey, actully I'm an author myself! I don't have any books published yet but if you want some advise I can give you some!
Also you're really good at writing paragrahs! Even better than I can write!
Thank you! I would love some advice for my story, I will consider any advice you give me.
Something that I like to do is when I write online I have both a dictionary and a research tab pulled up. You don't want to use a spastic word too much but also try finding words that fit in the right sentences. Like an example is "suddenly" it's a good word to use but it's not always the right idea to use it too much, yet some of the other words that mean the same need to feel like the fit in the sentence, like a puzzle. For the research is just a use when you want to add real or canon (canon means that it becomes a part of the topic you made about or from inspiration) facts, like how maybe you would want to add real warrior cat function in there. An example would be how Med cats arn't aloud to have mates nor kits. Now of corse its your story so the research tab isn't needed most of the time as you can make your own functions!
Ok, thank you for this amazing information. I will keep this in mind while writing my fan-fic, or maybe even my own stories one day!
No problem! I'm always happy to help! If you have any questions or need some advice go ahead and ask me!
why am I the size of an apprentice??????
How long have you stayed in the nursery?
whattttt
Name: Hazelnose/kit/paw/star; redish brownish cat with brown eyes
gender: nonbinary
Mom: Lilacpath
Dad: ryeheart
sibling(s): crystalblaze; white she-cat with orange and black splotches, heatherkit; white she-cat with brown splotches (dead)
mate(s): Nightwhisper, dustfeather, duskfall, fallenfeather, breezesong, cottonwillow
kit(s): rusttail/paw/kit, birchheart/paw/kit, ashface/paw/kit, nightclaw/paw/kit, Fogswoop/paw/kit, Sprucebeam/paw/kit, whitepelt/paw/kit, brightcloud/paw/kit, palefur/paw/kit, fluffclaw/paw/kit, puffcream/paw/kit
deputy: Nightwhisper
Wow :D
where did u make dis