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my digitally drawn dragonstar

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nice shading

thanks

I am glaceondragon999 and I confirm this other account is me

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I WROTE STORMSONG 13

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For people who like Deerfall's tale, i make a new chapter after the challenges are finished, and a winner is picked. The theme for this chapter's art challenge is Best looking AI, or drawn images For the current characters i have down below descripted. Their will be 3 winners. 1st place, 2nd place, and 3rd place. The winners will be picked on may 20th.

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NICE, I'M TOTALLY GONNA DO AIs

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Lynxmoon: A mix of Twigstar, Lilacpath, and Moonheart, who died to a fox, who ripped open his throat. He has Moonheart's eyes. and Yes, thats a lizard tail on his ear.

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Goldentuft: Looks like Milkywillow and Liontail combined, but with Breezestar's eyes. She wears poppy on her ear.

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Robinberry: Male, adult version of Deerstar but with Fallenfeather's eyes, a mangled front leg, and a stick cast on his back leg

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Berrybush: Female version of Ryeheart, with Deerkit's eyes, a vine around her neck, and bindweed on her ear. She was made in West Woods: Over borders.

btw, you know redclaw? ryeheart brother? >:D echo: he is dead.... *the tribe of echoing silence yowls with victory*

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HEY I WROTE STORMSONG 13, ECHO

Lemme read it Birch!!!!!

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I WROTE STORMSONG 13

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Shrewkit: Creme, with Magenta eyes, and a mossball in her mouth. She wears Yarrow on her ear. The mossball, and Yarrow ain't mine either. She was Made in West Woods: Over Borders

dragonstar chapter 3 plus the rest of the book if you missed any


Prologue

Redfur was worried. Goldenlight said it would be fine, that it’s completely normal to have pains the day before having kits but she was still worried. “What if they get sick!” Redfur said “what if I get hurt and can’t take care of them!” She bombarded goldenlight with her concerns. “They will be fine,you will be fine evryone will be fine” goldenlight said though redfur didint believe her. Redfur tried to lay down for the night, maybe sleep before her kits came. “You will be fine” said diamondreaper a she cat that had given birth to one kit, bluekit just that morning “I’m just worried if something happed to me, like something happened to my mom” diamondreaper continued. It was common knowledge in the clan that diamondreapers mom was killed by a bagger shortly after kitting and she probably wanted to be there for her kits. Redfur fell asleep and found herself in the same forest she allways dreamed of. “Deap breaths you are going to be fine” a mysterious voice said. “Is that a prophecy?” Redfur asked. “Opp you weren’t supposed to hear that” the voice said “but I am here to give you a prophecy” redfur paused for a moment. She knew that voice “nightpaw! She yelled out loud, I’m sorry I wasn’t there, that I was looking the other way, you were my apprentice I was supposed to watch you, especially during your warrior assessment!” Redfur exclaimed. “No one could have seen the fox coming” said nightpaw. “Anyways, with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power, under the wing of Dragonstar” “thank you nightpaw” redfur said as she began to wake up. There were two beautiful kits laying there at her waist. “You slept through the birth” goldenlight said “you have two healthy kits, a she kit and a Tom”. Redfur instantly knew witch was witch. “The Tom will be phoenixkit and the she cat, she will be called Dragonkit”

Chapter 1

“Dragonkit, Dragonkit come on!” Two different voices were shouting. Though she couldn’t see she mustered all her strength to open her eyes. The world was so big and beautiful. The two voices were cats,just like her that looked about her age. “Hi I’m bluekit” one of them said. This one was a colour Dragonkit assumed was blue. “I’m your brother phoenixkit” phoenixkit looked like her and had the same smile as Dragonkit assumed was on her face. “I want to show you how to play mossball!” Bluekit exclaimed. “All you do is one kit throws the ball and the other has to not get hit!” She threw a ball at Dragonkit and Dragonkit dogged without trouble. “Come on I want to explore camp!” That was phoenixkits mew. “Ok, come on bluekit” Dragonkit responded to her brother. The camp was busy. A cat that Dragonkit assumed was the deputy, sneakyclaw based on her moms story’s, assigning patrols, and Goldenlight the medicine cat was putting dressing on a leg wound of another cat. “Isn’t what she does beautiful” phoenixkit said “I want to be just like her” “a medicine cat?” Bluekit asked “I will be a warrior, no time for medicine cat stuff” “bluekit come in!” That was diamondreapers voice. Bluekit left without hesitation. Then a cat seemingly appeared out of nowhere. “Hi I’m nightpaw” she said “wait” phoenixkit said “you are in starclan aren’t you” “yes I am” nightpaw said “and I’m hear to tell you something.” “What?” Dragonkit asked “with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power under the wing of Dragonstar” nightpaw said sounding more wise then when she introduced herself “now don’t tell anyone about this” “we won’t!” Yelled phoenixkit as he ran back to the clearing, probably to watch Goldenlight.

Chapter 2

“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!” That was moonstars voice calling. Dragonkit was excited. This was her and bluekits apprentice ceremony. Phenoixkit disided to be a medicine cat almost as soon as he opened his eyes, before hearing the prophecy but dragonkit was sportive of him anyways. The cats gathered beneath highrock and moonstar said “it’s time for three kits to become apprentices. Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit please step forward” Dragonkit and the others stepped up eagerly. “Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit you have reached the age of six moons and are ready to become  apprentices. from this day forward until you earn your warrior or medicine cat name, you shal be known as dragonpaw, phenoxpaw and Bluepaw. Dragonpaw I will be your mentor. Bluepaw your mentor will be birchblaze.” Dragonpaw liked birchblaze for Bluepaw. Birchblaze was a she who wasn’t that strong, but the kind of patient teacher Bluepaw needed. She was also surprised that the leader herself wanted to mentor her. But moonstar wasn’t done yet. “Phoenixpaw your mentor will be Goldenlight” no surprise there. Phoenixpaw wanted to be the medicine cat, of course his mentor needed to be Goldenlight. “Dragonpaw! Phoenixpaw! Bluepaw!” The crowd of cats voices echoed in the clearing. Dragonpaw thought she saw something else. Suddenly she found herself in a forest she didn’t recognize. It had a huge star with a cat on top. “You shal be known as nightsong. We honor your courage as we welcome you as a full warrior of starclan. Suddenly dragonpaw was back in the clearing. Nightsong. The name echoed in dragonpaws mind. Could that be the same nightsong that gave her the prophecy, all those moons ago?

Chapter 3

“Come on dragonpaw. Training won’t wait” that was moonstar. I stumbled out of my nest and went to follow. Bluepaw and birchblaze were also there. “Today we are going to learn the territory and how iceclan is patrolled differently in leaf bare” that was birchblaze. She made a gesture with her tail and trotted off with moonstar. Dragonpaw and bluepaw followed eagerly, ready to learn. “So first we have the ice cavern witch marks one of our rouge borders.” Said birchblaze. Iceclan was the only clan in the forest though the rouges were strong so they needed borders anyway. “The ice cavern always has ice, even in the middle of Greenleaf and has a rock on the bottom so the ice won’t crack so it’s were we will practice ice-hunting and play prey-stone but right now back to borders” moonstar said. After patrolling for a while they headed back to camp. “I am going to relax in the nest” bluepaw said. Dragonpaw had a different activity in mind. “Phoenixpaw?” Dragonpaw said as she poked her head into the medicine den. “Please come in. Goldenlights resting so it’s just us” phoenixpaw said then a starclan cat appeared. “Nightsong!” Both the apprentices said at the same time. “How did you know that!” They said to each other again, at the same time. “I let you both attend my warrior ceremony ok.” That was Nightsong. “But you were busy with your own so you only got to see the end” “so thats why” phoenixpaw said. “That makes total sense” “dragonpaw we are going to teach you how to do ice-hunting” moonstars voice echoed through the den. “See you phenoixpaw,nightsong!” dragonpaw exclaimed as she went after moonstar. 

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Hi

Moonstar???

moonheart is also my friends oc lol

also nice story

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STORMSONG 13 IS OUT

yay

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For all who have read chapter 1 to Deerstar's Life, i'm holding an art competition for each chapter. all art must be posted for the story and characters by may 20th. Here is the description for the characters of this chapter.

Deerkit: the green eyed brown fured OC in the game, with a blanket flower on her ear, and sunflower petals on her back, plus bands on her front legs made out of vines, petunia's, poppy's, Bright eye's, Bindweed, Pink Tulips, White Tulpis, Yarrow, Moss, and Deathberries. The flower and Vines images don't belong 2me. also, she'll look different from the other's because, i made her in kit to leader, and the others in West Woods: Over Borders

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wrong img for blanket flower.. but pretty close

Its the best i could do

I'm booooooooooored, lets go hang

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ok!

hey u on? I'm baaaaaack I had to shower lol

btw, do u like zombie apocalypses?

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um.... well I wouldn't want to be in one XD

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I think this chat is deserted...Or is no one online...I'm confused

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This chat isn't deserted. We are just busy :)

im done the next chapter i will post it when i get home

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Slidee plsss

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This is my favourite chapter so far 


Moonhearts journey



Chapter 10

Today was the day that more warriors would sleep in the apprentice's den. After Stonefur had been made a warrior I was the only one in the apprentice's den and I was looking forward to not sleeping alone. The three warriors arrived in the apprentice's den. “Wow it is SO much smaller than when I was an apprentice!” said Dustfur “That's because YOU were smaller silly” meowed Snowfur “Well we have a long day of training tomorrow Moonpaw so let's get some sleep” I curled up in my nest and wated. “Ugh, why can't I sleep” I heard Sweetfur growl. “I can't either,” I said and went to sit beside her. “Hey,” she meowed “Hi,” I said. ‘OH MOUSE DUNG I FORGOT THAT I'M ON NIGHT WATCH!” she yelled “SUSHHH! You will wake them up! They are so cute sleeping together” I said “Yeah” she replied. “ Can I come on night watch?” “Sure even though you are only an APPRENTICE” she meowed “Ha I'm just as..old as… as...YOU!” We settled down on night watch. “Wow” I exclaimed, “it's beautiful out here at night!” “Yeah I thought the same…” she replied. Then suddenly I fell onto Sweetfur “Uh SORRY for falling for you,” I said quickly “WHAT!!” I realized what I said. “AAA I….mm so sorry FOR falling you ON!” “HUH?” she said confusingly AGH IM S…..ORR... I'M SORRY FOR FALLING ON YOU!” I finally said. “ Wow, you're so ridiculous it's FUNNY!” she meowed “y..eahh” I meowed back and we sat in the moonlight for the rest of the night.

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LOOK AT THIS WEBSITE I FOUND! you can officially name real colours its so cool I'm trying to name as many as I can before they are all named!

https://colornames.org/

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hi anyone online?...

yes

does anyone read my book echoing silence. book 4: a haven is found.

if you do, click on this link!! https://chewes.itch.io/typerrunner/comments BUT do NOT click that padlet link, that one is off limits, it is only for me and birhblaze, sry if thats rude.

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I DO! I read it! Wait. I'm Birchblaze. Never mind.

haha

I am going to Speedrun this for a school project lol

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hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii can you go on the slide when u can

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Nightmare is only on the Scratch version when you become an elder cat.

I got rookkit, like the chess pice. It was even white

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lol, rook is a kind of bird too :)

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you can. dragonstar is a cat. I'm glaceondragon999 on my school account

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Stormsong: Chapter 12

"Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey, come to the WillowStump for a clan meeting!" shouted Yarrowstar. What's happening? Are Amberkit and Skykit becoming apprentices already? thought Stormpaw as she walked towards the WillowStump, which was the stump of a willow tree. She tried to think about this for a while, but then Deathberrypaw joined her, and all she could think of was him.

"It is time for apprentices to become warriors," said Yarrowstar. Stormpaw's heart leapt. Did he mean...? "Stormpaw," he said, "you are now Stormsong." His gaze swept to Turtlepaw.

Turtlepaw became Turtlesplash. Then Flowerpaw became Flowerfur. Then Deathberrypaw became Deathberryfall-- until...

Deathberrypaw stepped boldly up to the WillowStump. "I understand that my name is long. Taking that into consideration, I would like to drop my suffix, and continue on as a warrior under the name Deathberry."

There was a collective gasp. "Like a rogue?" whispered a new apprentice, but Stormsong ignored her. Yarrowstar raised an eyebrow. "This is a rather... irregular request, Deathberrypaw. Are you sure?"

Deathberrypaw nodded.

Yarrowstar turned to Mudfur, the deputy, who gave a quick shake of his head. "I don't want him stooping down to that level!" he hissed. Yarrowstar turned back to Deathberrypaw. Yarrowstar opened his mouth, then closed it. "Please," said Deathberrypaw quietly. "No," muttered Mudfur. "Don't let him."

"Deathberrypaw," said Yarrowstar finally, "you will continue as...

Deathberryfall."

I like it

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It's a sad story...

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it’s really good 

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thanks!

I saw previous comments people just have busy schedules I will try from now on to say when I will be gone and will be back but no garentes.

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Bubblepaws' destiny: Prologue

“Born of the gentle flow and nurtured by the moon’s caress, bubbles shall rise as the river’s envoy to bridge the divided shores.”

This is the message the medicine cat, Oakriver of RiverClan, has received on the night of the full moon, also the night that Bubblekit was born to Lilacshine, and Featherfall. Her sister, Nettlekit, seems to have nothing to do with this prophecy, Bubblekit on the other paw...


"Oakriver," Cheetahstar called "Are you there?"

"Oh, sorry. I was lost in thought" Oakriver sighed, she has been thinking about that prophecy for 4 moons now.

"Right, what were you telling me about your herb store?"

As the two continued speaking, Bubblekit was splashing around in the water that flowed through camp, she always took a particular liking to the water, more than the other kits.

"Bubblekit! Stop splashing around in the water and go tell your sister to gather the cobwebs she can find around camp for Oakriver's store." her mother called, Lilacpath never treated Bubblekit like her sister. Bubblekit felt that her mother loved Nettlekit more than her. At least Finkit was nice to her, the tomcat was always kind to her, always bringing her flowers that he found around camp. She bounded over to her sister, "Lilacpath said to collect cobwebs around camp for Oakriver." she padded off, she didn't need to hear her sister's know-it-all response, she padded towards Finkit, nuzzling his nose, and they played mossball together.


"Cheetahstar, I believe there is something... special, about Bubblekit." Oakriver mewed.

"What do you mean?" Cheetahstar asked curiously

"Well, Cheetahstar, I believe she is part of a prophecy I received on the night of her kitting," she recited the prophecy perfectly from memory, "Born of the gentle flow, and nurtured by the moon's caress, bubbles shall rise as the river's envoy to bridge the divided shores."

Cheetahstar gasped, this is the only good explanation... "It has to be her..."

CHAPTER 1 COMING SOON! (it's a busy week, so it may be on Monday)

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Its so good! you need to add more

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I like it

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Hi, Bubblepaws! Thanks for following me.

You're welcome, I see a lot of your posts, and stormsong  just awesome.

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Chapter 1

A kit opened her eyes for the first time ever. Her mom, Berrybush, next to her. Her father, Robinberry, guarding the nursery. She see's another kit in the den next to her. 

"Oh would you look at that Goldentuft! Deerkit opened her eyes!" Berrybush shouted exitiedly. 

Goldentuft replies "Same with Shrewkit!" Goldentuft says proudley. 

'So my name's Deerkit, and that creme kit is Shrewkit?' She thought.

 Shrewkit padded over to her. 

"Hi! I'm Shrewkit!" She said. 

"I'm Deerkit!" Deerkit responded. 

"I just wish Lynxmoon could live to see his kit...." Goldentuft sniffled. 

"Don't worry. I bet he's watching his kit, and soon to come kits" Berrybush comforted, as she stared at Goldentuft's swollen stomach, "from Starclan.".

Robinberry pads over.

"Oh, the kit's are awake!" He says happily.

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These stories are so good!

If you like it i can make a prologe, backstories, more chapters, i can also post art, and i might hold an art competition.

The descriptions for the characters will poste

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It’s so good! If it was a real book I would buy it for sure!

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I'm not posting anymore chapter to sry

im working on looking up a good book publishing app for my books :D so you may be able to read them

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hey people I decided to quit online art and just did what I’m good at this is Honeystripe I used pastels for it and if you're going to say I didn’t make it can you just leave? My hands were KILLING me when I made this







actually impressive, haven't seen if u have other art u commented

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thanks I did but those were me trying online art they… failed 

saw it, switching mediums can be tough

THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

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Thanks!

Nobody is good at online art unless you have a touchscreen and a stylus on tablet, a mouse is so hard

even still, it's not the same as real art.

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wow! this is AMAZING!!!

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thank you!

I'm going to try my luck at making a story because why not

Nobody abandoned y'all (okay maybe most of them did) but not me! Although sometimes I just come to this game to read all of y'all's stories, all of you should be authors, they are amazing!

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Hey I made yet Another warrior cat drawing! This one wasn’t too rushed so it’s not that bad but i is still bad but I’m posting it anyway because it took me a while I’m really bad at online art


Awsome

Did you... trace your profile pic?

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it’s also funny that moonheart was my oc for 3 years

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it’s so cuteee

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Hi

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Hi

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I made my own story! Its called 

Deerstar's life

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deerstar?! as in my oc echoing whispers grandmother?!?!!?!

me: "um...shadowstrike...your mother is here-"

shadowstrike: "oh starclan..."

echo: "whos here father?" 

shadowstrike: "uh...your grandmother...." 

echo: "i have a-"

me: "nope i aint dealing with this fam drama!!" *dashes away*

Woah... WHAT?! Well, does his gma become Deerstar? Cause she does

Yes 😂 and shadowstrike is scared of his mother because she's so strict LOL

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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I’m sorry! I have sooooooooooooooo much homework 

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I tried to make art instead of creating it at generated and it’s… so bad just take a look



it looks pretty good, also yay proof that everyone is still alive

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Ha I think Im alive maybe your hallucinating

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😭 

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thats actually really good

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I DIDN'T

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AI generated anime Deathberrypaw


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They look like duskfall

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wow he actually does. 

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AI generated Cherrytuft & Stormpaw

AWSOME!!!

What app is this?

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https://perchance.org/ai-character-generator. It's a free website. MAKE SURE TO CHANGE THE STYLE TO "NO STYLE" BEFORE USING, otherwise you'll get anime cats lol.

ok thank you!

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hahahaha nice

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ai generated dragonstar

Nice

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What app is this?

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I am 

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The one above? Yes. Have you red the newest addition to dragonstar? It is above the ai storm song. If you haven’t read the first few chapters it’s beneath the stormsong

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post more chapters

Sry I am not going to post any more chapter of my book

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