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(-Awoke A Cat-) Chapter 1

Calm down

A story as old as time:

"What!?" I don't believe my eyes, I'm a cat! I try to pinch myself but I can't because I don't have thumbs "Huh, if I'm a cat and this is probably a dream but if its a dream I might as well have some fun!" I went to catch a mouse cuz I felt really hungry for some reason, I bend, I pounce, I fail. The mouse scurries away before I could catch it, I turn around to go find something else to eat when..."AHHH!!!" Another cat tackles me "Hey you mouse-brain!" He says "What is wrong with you!? The borders were scented this morning! Can you not smell it!!??" I'm too scared to speak I shiver, I wanna run but can't "S-sorry!" I blurt out quickly. I think the cat saw my fear and let me go I quickly ran behind a bush and hid hoping I lost them but then they said "Sorry bout that, I know I was a little harsh." After that, I saw him walk away I decided to follow him since I was a little bored of this 'dream'! I followed him to what looked like a clan I read about in Warrior Cats, and then it hit me I'm so stupid I thought I was having a Warrior Cats dream I ran away, and I didn't want to take a risk even tho this was a dream. I ran and ran and ran all day until I stopped, in front of me was a tree a very big tree bigger than all the rest, there were 4 cats on top of the tree and lots on the ground Ooh, it's a gathering! I thought But for them, I'm a rouge I can't join in I felt sad and walked away slowly then again another cat attacked me, she leaped on getting her claws ready...

( End hehe...I will write chapter 2 soon. :D )

aaaaaaaaaaaaa :D I love this game so freaking much

Sheesh

omg! hey bubble paws, just a request: could u add a kit named ghostkit, into your story? here's my backstory on ghostkit: ghostkit was born blind to unknown parents, and was adopted by the leader of the tribe of echoing silence, echoing whispers, and her mate, her chief guard hawk's wing, and ghostkit was born blind, and with the ability to see starclan and the dark forest cats, in the live world and in dreams, and could you maybe make her be into a prophecy, with some other kits :O just like the power of three but with diffrences!!!

One thing, my story is based in riverclan. Should Cheetahstar adopt them? And what gender?

yes, and ghostkit is a she-cat also she is polymary and bisexaual :)

Thanks!

I'll add her in chapter four, when Bubblekit becomes an apprentice.

Oooo can they become friends? Also in my lore, bc ghostkit was born blind and told her parents she's bi and poly, she's bullied and abused lol, so she's tech an outcast.

Am I the only one here? Not even birchblaze is active?

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I am lol

I'm here

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I'm active, sorry!!!

I always forget to refresh lol

I'm the dark red cat, and I named myself maple. Bramblestar chose mapleshade on his own. (btw we look exactly alike, plot twist, [i forgot the father's name] isn't your father, it's bramblestar! jkjk)

You mean Ryeheart?

Yes

Previous chapter(s): 

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Prolouge

“Born of the gentle flow and nurtured by the moon’s caress, bubbles shall rise as the river’s envoy to bridge the divided shores.”

This is the message the medicine cat, Oakriver of RiverClan, has received on the night of the full moon, also the night that Bubblekit was born to Lilacshine, and Featherfall. Her sister, Nettlekit, seems to have nothing to do with this prophecy, Bubblekit on the other paw...

"Oakriver," Cheetahstar called "Are you there?"

"Oh, sorry. I was lost in thought" Oakriver sighed, she has been thinking about that prophecy for 4 moons now.

"Right, what were you telling me about your herb store?"

As the two continued speaking, Bubblekit was splashing around in the water that flowed through camp, she always took a particular liking to the water, more than the other kits.

"Bubblekit! Stop splashing around in the water and go tell your sister to gather the cobwebs she can find around camp for Oakriver's store." her mother called, Lilacshine never treated Bubblekit like her sister. Bubblekit felt that her mother loved Nettlekit more than her. At least Finkit was nice to her, the tomcat was always kind to her, always bringing her flowers that he found around camp. She bounded over to her sister, "Lilacshine said to collect cobwebs around camp for Oakriver." she padded off, she didn't need to hear her sister's know-it-all response, she padded towards Finkit, nuzzling his nose, and they played mossball together.

"Cheetahstar, I believe there is something... special, about Bubblekit." Oakriver mewed.

"What do you mean?" Cheetahstar asked curiously

"Well, Cheetahstar, I believe she is part of a prophecy I received on the night of her kitting," she recited the prophecy perfectly from memory, "Born of the gentle flow, and nurtured by the moon's caress, bubbles shall rise as the river's envoy to bridge the divided shores."

Cheetahstar gasped, this is the only good explanation... "It has to be her..."

(Note: each chapter is 0.5-1 moon apart, this one is one moon. Bubblekit is now 5 moons old.)

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 1

"Finkit, want to pretend that I'm prey, and you can hunt me?" Bubblekit mewed

"Sure, flower!" he mrrowed happily, he came up with that nickname a few moons ago, because she was beautiful, like a flower.

She chuckled, Finkit was the sweetest cat alive, sweeter than her mother, the cat who was supposed to love her most.

"Oakriver, do you think we should tell Bubblekit's mother and father about the prophecy?" Cheetahstar was speaking with Oakriver in the medicine den.

"I... don't think so, they don't really care about her as much as they should, they would just doubt us, and ignore it." Oakriver replied

"You're right, Oakriver. So, what do we do?

"The only thing we can, keep it to ourselves until she's at least 12 moons old." Oakriver replied gloomily, keeping a secret this big was going to be hard, especially for this long of a time.

"If you say s- What is that rushing noise?" Cheetahstar asked warily, "Is that what I think it is? That sounds like a... FLOOD!"

"FLOOD?!? Are you sur-- OKAY THAT'S A FLOOD. GET EVERYBODY OUT OF CAMP," Oakriver ordered "ESPECIALLY BUBBLEKIT"

They ushered every cat out of camp to a higher ground, as the camp flooded, it ruined all of their hard work on the camp for moons, "GO!" Troutheart, the deputy, ushered "WE HAVE TO GO, NOW!"

"Featherfall, why aren't you coming? What's wrong?!" Troutheart asked worriedly

"M-my daughter's in there... Nettlekit.." he mumbled

"Sh-she is?" Troutheart asked "Why?"

"She went to try and save her favorite stick..." he meowed, eyes full of grief

"Her favorite stick? I'm so sorry..." He glanced around, and he noticed another cat was missing: Hollytail, the elder. She must not have made it out. This flood was horrible, Nettlekit and Hollytail died, and all the prey wouldn't be back for moons!

"Featherfall,  Lilacshine, I have bad news." Troutheart announced, "Nettlekit is... dead..." 

The parents of the dead kit just stood there in silence for a moment, Lilacshine especially, as she didn't know.

Bubblekit sat in the clearing, a half-moon after the flood. She looked around her camp, it was destroyed, there was a makeshift den for everybody, no true dens. Her sister, Nettlekit, was dead, and so was Hollytail, this clan is weak, what will the other clans think? That we can't protect ourselves? The gathering was tomorrow, and the only prey we have now is fish. Every cat is weak, hungry, tired. This flood was the worst thing to happen in all of her 5 moons, she would be an apprentice soon enough, so would Finkit, he's a half-moon older than her, so it's time for him to become an apprentice, but Cheetahstar hasn't had time.

CHAPTER TWO COMING SOON!

Stay tuned!

<3

Repost because nobody replied to the one I posted before xD

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Hi! I’m Honey-Flame! if anyone needs advice on how to complete this game I can help! Just ask! (Please don’t ask about fair life. I haven’t played that one yet.)

Farm life isn't added

sorry I meant fair life

Ok, I know how. You kick ur sis out or snitch then Sunfall be like "COME AND SAY SORRY" if you go you ask cookie where da heck ur sis is then go there, talk talk talky talk. Sunfall spoke to him then be like "Lemme join."! ur welcome

thanks

can I be a leader or deputy, or is that not coded in yet TvT

its in

you can be leader but not deputy 

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Can I be a deputy? (Not leader, I know how to be leader. Just, can I be a deputy?)

no

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I can help everybody with fair life!

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https://padlet.com/Birchblaze/moss-shadow-fans-i06vwcdl8bo1w082

Moss-Shadow Fans Chat!

so there was this glitch. I had three kits and the make apps into warrior option for being leader. I clicked it and it gave my kits randomly gene warrior names. Then after the ceremony they went back to being kits once again

That happens to me to

I drew dragonstar….. again

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I like this one the best! 

I get better every time

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Haha :)

hi birch, check the padlet

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all right!

two Breezepaws!!!. Also I named myself Sliverkit just to be funny

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HOW DID YOU GET TWO BREEZEPAWS???

I made her follow me then became a warrior

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Ohhh I should try that!

how do you get her to follow you?

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at the hunting grounds, get 20 reputation by hunting, she'll tell you you're so good at hunting and blush. She'll talk for a while. Don't hunt while she's talking. Then keep clicking her and she'll say a lot of mushy stuff, then keep clicking, and she'll ask you to go to the shore with her. She'll start following you. (If you go to the shore and jump in the water a lot, she'll kiss you!)

Thanks!

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Omg he is so nice he even came with me to the dead lol

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LOL!

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He can seeeeee yoooour ghooooost

that also happed to me once lol

I think he might like you a lot XD

That's how you know he's a keeper

Is it true that if you put Sliver for prefix u get a bunch of exp? 

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yep it is

But what gender? 

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Female

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Female, and, you have to have the correct pelt, I think? (Blue eyes, brown ear)

Ty!

the first comment on this game

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GO ON SLIDEEEEE I CAN TALK UNTIL 12:55!

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Can someone tell me what "go on slide" means? Is it a secret chatroom? :)

(If you don't want to tell me where it is that's perfectly ok, I have a secret chat room with Wattlesplash and Silent_Echos that I AM NOT TELLING ANYONE lol)

me and #1 warrior cats fan are irl friends so we have a slideshow were we talk during school so we don’t need to reload to see it on here and so we can talk about things that we can’t say on here

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oh ok

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 it's a Google slide that we talk on mostly because we don't go to the same school and we don't have any other way of communicating.  I also don't want to say things on a sketchy website because who knows who can go on that on the slide only me and her can access it.

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sorry i didn't see that glace replied I forgot to refresh

-.- u just told everyone XD

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lol, i meant i won't tell anyone where it is

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XD

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???????????????

LOL

Hey... I'm going to try asking Breezesong out to the shore too, then, while she's following me, ask Duskfall out to the shore, then see what happens >:)

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i tried that lol it just puts dusk fall over her

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oh

How do you ask breezesong to the shore

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when your an apprentice get 20 rep by hunting the press her a couple of times you also have to be female

Try asking Cottonwillow,  and Duskfall out to the shore, then yoink mossy

can ANYONNE tell me what the Easter egg is after I make breezesong deputy? what can happen?

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I looked into the Scratch code on the Scratch website. Whoever said there was an Easter egg was wrong, there isn't.

aw man :<

Sorry, I saw your post, but I was on my phone with no account. Basically, once it rains, because you can't make breezesong a leader, it does "The first rain of the season was unexpected" or something, and fireclan invades because nobody killed firestar, so all your clan scatters and that's basically the end of the game. Not sure if you can flee to the fair with crystalblaze though.

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Thanks! I've been wondering how to lose to Firestar, LOL!

I have learned you don't even have to make her deputy; you can just completely ignore the prophecy and not kill Firestar. It happens on the first rain of the season. I suggest telling on Crystalblaze first so you can live at the fair.

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I’m kinda confused or I’m just dumb but what is this name? Does it mean something? I googled it and found nothing 


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Cypress is a kind of tree

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ohhh thx

Cypress is also a country in the Mediterranean, close to Greece and Turkey.

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I'm pretty sure that cats only know about the tree LOL. (Also, thanks for being one of the most devoted Stormsong fans!)

the only reason I know is because I am greek lol

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Little easter egg:D If you use the Sliver glitch lointail gives u hid gem before he die:3

That doesnt happen-

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it's not a glitch, it's a special Easter Egg

but you also get it by talking to him after becoming leader. do you not have to be leader when doing the sliver easter egg? bc its not anything special if thats not the case


CHAPTER 3: FAR AWAY FROM MOONHEART

WARNING! THIS CHAPTER INCLUDES DEATH!

 PROLOUGEA group of rogues walked into the camp, They were strong and dragged Crabstar to kill her! Crabstar lost her last life, as her daughter stared, more horrified than ever. “M-mom!” Smokecurrent screamed. “...” Sunlight.. Didn’t know what to do.  “Hello!” Ivyclimb exclaimed. “Who are you? Where am I?” The mysterious black cat asked (the one sunlight and dragonwing brought in chapter 1) “You’re in Iceclan! Our leader just died.. But now we have Dragonwing as our leader!” Ivyclimb tried to stay happy, looking at moonheart who had been sick for moons. “Who brought me here?!” “Dragonwing and Sunlight! Sunlight is the yellow one, and Dragonwing is the white and red one!” Ivyclimb added. “When does this “Dragonwing” Become leader?” The cat asked. “Today! By the way. What’s your name?” Ivyclimb questioned. “It’s Aspen.” “Nice!” Ivyclimb looked at moonheart. “You should go Aspen.” She said. “Ok.” Aspen left. “Moonheart.. I’m sure we can fix you up.” Ivyclimb turned her head to the gray elder. “And you, Sunlight. The snake bite should be cured by now.” Ivyclimb added. “Okay!” Sunlight left the medicine den. “Moonheart? Moonheart talk to me!” Ivyclimb screamed. “.....” the elder didnt speak. “Moonheart! Moonheart!” Moonheart closed her eyes. “Say goodbye to your old friend, Ivyclimb, My time has gone.” “MOONHEART!” Moonhearts eyes shut, as she woke up seeing nothing but stars, and.. A familiar cat? “Silverwing? Is that you?” Moonheart wondered. “Nice to see you again, Moonheart.” Silverwing smiled. From below the stars, Moonheart could hear a quiet scream of Ivyclimb. “Would you like to watch over them?” Silverwing asked, smiling. “Yes, please.” Moonheart watched over as cats gathered around on the ground. She missed Ivyheart already. “Don’t worry Moonheart, You can visit her anytime.” Silverwing added, making Moonheart feel better. “Can I watch the leader ceremony? For Dragonwing?” Moonheart asked. “Oh silly Moonheart. Once he comes, we can see him and give him  lifes.” Silverwing pointed out. “Really?” A few days passed, Moonheart could see Dragonwing show up. Dragonwing saw moonheart approach her. “Hello, Dragonwing.” Before she could say hello back. Moonheart stretched her neck and gave Dragonwing a life for forgiveness. “There will be times you do something wrong, times you battle, in these times we gift you forgiveness.” Moonheart spoke. Silverwing walked up and gave her the second life. “With this life we give you freedom. There will be times you need chose between your clan, and your destiny. We give you freedom to choose.” The starclan cats gave lives for 7 more things. Love,Strength,Courage,Loyalty,Protection, and faith.

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you aded moonheart! :D Thx

It's Prologue, not Prolouge.

Misspell sorry!

btw can someone tell me what the Easter egg is and how to do it? or what to do?

CHAPTER 1: LOSS

Silver smiled down at her kit. "She's so adorable," she whispered, admiring the soft fluff and fur behind her ears.

"You better not start showing affection for her," hissed Moon, her eyes gleaming with what almost seemed like jealousy. "You know the rules. A few weeks, and our housefolk take her-"

"SHUSH!" snarled Silver. "You don't want to scare her." She wrapped her tail protectively around her flank and gave a meaningful stare at Moon. Moon had been a kit when housefolk found her, shivering and bruised but alive, under a tree near the house. Now that they were pampering her so much, she almost seemed to have changed, and was rude to every cat she saw.

Moon licked herself roughly, washing off the dust on her clean, white fur. "Whatever. What are you naming her?"

"I haven't decided yet..." Silver stared out the window. The trees waved in the distance. "You better not be thinking about joining those wild cats," Moon added, sneering at her dreamy look. "That would be stupid of you. They let their kits die."

"That's not true," mewed Silver. "I-"

"So now you're defending those Clan cats, aren't you?" Moon said. Her spine fuzzed up and she lifted her tail in rage. "Get out of this house."

"You can't kick me out," purred Silver. "Only the housefolk can."

"Twolegs," corrected her sister. "You're not one of us anymore. Now get out." Silver didn't move. Moon gave her a glare and pounced, her claws unsheathed. She raked them painfully across Silver's pelt, and she let out a startled yelp. "MOON, I didn't mean to-"

"Out." Moon said. There was no hesitation in her eyes. "I'm so done with you being so annoying. This isn't the place for you. And if you come back, I'll take your ears off and hang them on the wall as a trophy." Then she turned and began washing.

Silver made her way to the window, thoughts rushing in her head. Why was her sister so toxic all of a sudden? Suddenly, as she reached toward her kit, Moon pushed her away. "That's mine," she snarled.

"I WAS THE ONE WHO-"

Moon raised her paw in defense, and Silver knew not to argue. She made her way out of the window. As she watched her sister eying the kit, her heart was set in determination. I'll get what belongs to me back... but will I?

can someone show me what the silver skin looks like?

It’s this one

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it's S-L-I-VER skin not S-I-L-VER skin, and it's the one with the really blue eyes, one brown ear, and a brown spot.

HELP MY SCREEN ZOOMED IN IDK HOW I HAPPENED, I CANT ZOOM OUT AND EVRY TIME I OPEN A NEW TAB ON ITCH ITS STILL ZOOMED IN

Oop nvm I figured it out =)

I got dandylionkit. I’m not joking I did.

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I get Dandelionkit sometimes too

I’m speedruning this game for a graph at school. Here are my times(I discovered the sliver cat at attempt 4)

What do you count as completed though? Just as a leader? Or do you die?

just as leader

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?. I think I just won mossball

does anyone want me to put my wolf story link in here? I have 5 chapters so far, i'd LOVE some more feedback

ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ME!!!!!!!

here's the link https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WDNf0-9Hne_g1fWxaCIAmloTwryIGQtW4E4ytsBLn1A/...

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HELP

bring moss shadow to bramblestar and Duskfall to the water

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Hahahahaha

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Don't worry. Drop Moss-shadow off to Bramblestar and let Duskfall kiss you at the river, and then they'll leave you alone XD


CHAPTER 2:  SUNLIGHTS JOURNEY HOME

PROLOUGE  Dragonwing woke up with a horrified face, quietly she ran outside of the warrior den and by the trees on Iceclan territory. She heard footprints… she couldn’t identify whos they were. She snuck closer to the smell. A familiar cat appeared. “J-jade?” Dragonwing was surprised to see her old kittypet friend. “Hello Claudia! Nice to see you again!” Jade had a kind tone in her voice. “Uh.. It’s dragonwing now..” “Dragonwing? What type of name is that?” Jade complained. “I moved in with them.. Jade.” “What?!” Jade ran away and Dragonwing went back to camp.

END OF PROLOUGE

(note dragonwing is sunlights mate) The morning started, nobody knew where sunlight was, Dragonwing was the most worried. (SWITCHING TO SUNLIGHTS POV) Sun;ight ran through the forest, lost. A tan she-cat with a black collar and blue spikes on the collar. She was wearing arm warmers the color of the sky. “Hello?” Sunlight stared at the cat. “Hello!” Jade exclaimed. “I’m sunlight. Have you met Dragonwing?” “Oh.. her. She was my littermate. Her name was Claudia. But one day she left me.. Our mother was devastated. So much so she left me in the house alone, trying to find her. Ever since I’ve been living the smae people. Nothing changed..” Jade mumbled. “Okay. Do you know where Iceclan is?” “Nope, I was there yesterday, but then Dragonwing came and I ran away and forgot.” Jade said sadly. “Oh.. well then.. Bye.” Sunlight ran away. “What do I do?” Sunlight thought. A moon passes. Crabstar has 1 life left, and Sunlight is still lost. He made it closer to camp and he could smell his clanmates.. He was so close! When an entrance  opened, Sunlight ran into it. When all of a sudden “YOW!” a snake had bit him! A scar on his shoulder appeared and he jumped on a rock. An apprentice nearby heard the scream, as her mentor tried to stop her, but Ebonypaw jumped up to see Sunlight being bitten by a snake. “Ebonypaw?” sunlight said excited. “Sunlight! You’ve been gone for so long! And you were bitten!” Ebonypaw cried. “Oh little one.. Could just tell me where camp is?” Sunlight asked. “Yea. Right by those trees.” She pointed left. “Thanks!” Sunlight ran as fast as he could, he made it back.. Home! “SUNLIGHT!” Dragonwing screamed. “I missed you too Dragonwing.” Sunlight smiled. “I became deputy and- Is that a snake bite?!” Dragonwing added. “Yes.. Wheres the medicine den?” Sunlight asked. “Come on.” Dragonwing picked up Sunlight and brought him to the medicine den. “Hello, Sunlight! Welcome back! A snake bite I see.. ‘l’ll cure this.” Sunlight was home..!

nice. Dragonwing is like the one from my story reborn 

Bro I got my other 1 on scratch, and I got a code saying this: You look like a big watermelon. LOOK

Dens|0|-2|1|1|0|15|16|Your kits to apps|Your kits are apps|0|6|0|22|0|Badger Attack|3|22|1|0|1|1|All|none|198|0|4|0|0|1|1|1|0|-96.34019174590992|0|0|Marshmallow Melt|0|0|0|4|Cockatiel||Marshmallow|2.0|Warrior|28|0|0|0|15|-18|0|0|1|nvm|You look like a big water melon|BrambleClan|0|0|Night|Dusk|0|0|0|107|Cotton|Half Sun|0|White|2|Dusk|Night|0|1|Ceris|0|6|0|0|0|0|0|0|5|1|1|1|1|1|0|0|0|6|1|Fawn|0|0|0|Apprentice|0|0|6|4|0|0|0|0|Kit|4|Duskpaw|Dustpaw|Breezepaw|Nightpaw|20|Creamfrost|Lilacpath|Ashtail|Sparrowtail|Torrentclaw|Moonheart|Goldenstrike|Darkclaw|Hollypelt|Fallenfeather|Creekfoot|Owltuft|Duskfall|Amberclaw|Nightwhisper|Breezesong|Dustfeather|Crystalblaze|Moss-shadow|Cottonwillow|

When does bramblestar select a deputy? I've never seen that before

Neither

But in that  code, Bramblestar was on the rock with Cottonwillow (I think) on the rock?

DRAGONWINGS PROPHECY

A quiet patrol entered the camp, holding a knocked out black she-cat “We found this.” Dragonwing dropped a rabbit into the fresh-kill pile. “But we also have her.” Sunlight said quietly. The whole camp was staring at them, Moonheart was sleeping in the elders' den, she was woken up by the small voices of the patrol “Welcome back.” Moonheart said politely, after turning back into her den. Crabstar walked off the highrock and trotted toward Sunlight and Dragonwing. “Do you know her name?” The tan she looked at the two. “No.. she was knocked out when we found her.” Dragonwing mumbled nervously. “Very well,” Crabstar spoke calmly. “I’ll take her to Ivyclimb.” Dragonflight didn’t feel well, she walked to the medicine quietly. “Hello dragonwing! I heard you found this cat.” Ivyclimb pointed down at the black cat. Dragonwing didn’t speak, she was too tired. “Are you okay?” Ivyclimb questioned. “Yea..” Dragonwing passed out and woke up in a dream. “Silverwing?” Dragonwing looked up at her sister “Hello dragonwing.” Another cat stepped out of starry clouds. “Why am I here?” Dragonwing was worried. “Your not dead. Somethings coming to you. We wanted you to know.” Silverwing said calmly “Wha-” Dragonwing didn’t get to finish. “Bye Dragonwing.” The cats disappeared as he woke up. “Dragonwing?” Ivyclimb looked at her. “Wh-what happened?” She questioned. “You passed out, I thought you might have died!” “Whatever.” Dragonwing left. A moon passed, Dragonwing was asleep in her den. She was in a dream once again. “Dragonwing. You need to help your clan. A threat is coming towards it and your the strongest.” Silverwing appeared from the starry clouds. “But.. What about Crabstar?” She asked. “She isn’t strong enough for what's happening.” “O-okay..”

CHAPTER 2 COMING SOON!

nice. I did not expect my oc to be the main character. Now we have two story’s about her.

Lol i have chapters planned out for didnt characters to be main characters u have 2 chapters so far:3 

(not giving u any promises but u may become leader in this story>:3)

I never told Bramblestar and now I can’t go to the fair. Unless I glitch of course 

TALK ABT ANY WARRIOR CAT REALET STUFF HERE TvT

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gZNemfVjapfogsMVjDARuJTfUIN6xaKIwj53Fbhh4FY/...

chapter 4 of dragonstar along with the rest in case you haven’t read it


Prologue

Redfur was worried. Goldenlight said it would be fine, that it’s completely normal to have pains the day before having kits but she was still worried. “What if they get sick!” Redfur said “what if I get hurt and can’t take care of them!” She bombarded goldenlight with her concerns. “They will be fine,you will be fine evryone will be fine” goldenlight said though redfur didint believe her. Redfur tried to lay down for the night, maybe sleep before her kits came. “You will be fine” said diamondreaper a she cat that had given birth to one kit, bluekit just that morning “I’m just worried if something happed to me, like something happened to my mom” diamondreaper continued. It was common knowledge in the clan that diamondreapers mom was killed by a bagger shortly after kitting and she probably wanted to be there for her kits. Redfur fell asleep and found herself in the same forest she allways dreamed of. “Deap breaths you are going to be fine” a mysterious voice said. “Is that a prophecy?” Redfur asked. “Opp you weren’t supposed to hear that” the voice said “but I am here to give you a prophecy” redfur paused for a moment. She knew that voice “nightpaw! She yelled out loud, I’m sorry I wasn’t there, that I was looking the other way, you were my apprentice I was supposed to watch you, especially during your warrior assessment!” Redfur exclaimed. “No one could have seen the fox coming” said nightpaw. “Anyways, with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power, under the wing of Dragonstar” “thank you nightpaw” redfur said as she began to wake up. There were two beautiful kits laying there at her waist. “You slept through the birth” goldenlight said “you have two healthy kits, a she kit and a Tom”. Redfur instantly knew witch was witch. “The Tom will be phoenixkit and the she cat, she will be called Dragonkit”

Chapter 1

“Dragonkit, Dragonkit come on!” Two different voices were shouting. Though she couldn’t see she mustered all her strength to open her eyes. The world was so big and beautiful. The two voices were cats,just like her that looked about her age. “Hi I’m bluekit” one of them said. This one was a colour Dragonkit assumed was blue. “I’m your brother phoenixkit” phoenixkit looked like her and had the same smile as Dragonkit assumed was on her face. “I want to show you how to play mossball!” Bluekit exclaimed. “All you do is one kit throws the ball and the other has to not get hit!” She threw a ball at Dragonkit and Dragonkit dogged without trouble. “Come on I want to explore camp!” That was phoenixkits mew. “Ok, come on bluekit” Dragonkit responded to her brother. The camp was busy. A cat that Dragonkit assumed was the deputy, sneakyclaw based on her moms story’s, assigning patrols, and Goldenlight the medicine cat was putting dressing on a leg wound of another cat. “Isn’t what she does beautiful” phoenixkit said “I want to be just like her” “a medicine cat?” Bluekit asked “I will be a warrior, no time for medicine cat stuff” “bluekit come in!” That was diamondreapers voice. Bluekit left without hesitation. Then a cat seemingly appeared out of nowhere. “Hi I’m nightpaw” she said “wait” phoenixkit said “you are in starclan aren’t you” “yes I am” nightpaw said “and I’m hear to tell you something.” “What?” Dragonkit asked “with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power under the wing of Dragonstar” nightpaw said sounding more wise then when she introduced herself “now don’t tell anyone about this” “we won’t!” Yelled phoenixkit as he ran back to the clearing, probably to watch Goldenlight.

Chapter 2

“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!” That was moonstars voice calling. Dragonkit was excited. This was her and bluekits apprentice ceremony. Phenoixkit disided to be a medicine cat almost as soon as he opened his eyes, before hearing the prophecy but dragonkit was sportive of him anyways. The cats gathered beneath highrock and moonstar said “it’s time for three kits to become apprentices. Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit please step forward” Dragonkit and the others stepped up eagerly. “Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit you have reached the age of six moons and are ready to become  apprentices. from this day forward until you earn your warrior or medicine cat name, you shal be known as dragonpaw, phenoxpaw and Bluepaw. Dragonpaw I will be your mentor. Bluepaw your mentor will be birchblaze.” Dragonpaw liked birchblaze for Bluepaw. Birchblaze was a she who wasn’t that strong, but the kind of patient teacher Bluepaw needed. She was also surprised that the leader herself wanted to mentor her. But moonstar wasn’t done yet. “Phoenixpaw your mentor will be Goldenlight” no surprise there. Phoenixpaw wanted to be the medicine cat, of course his mentor needed to be Goldenlight. “Dragonpaw! Phoenixpaw! Bluepaw!” The crowd of cats voices echoed in the clearing. Dragonpaw thought she saw something else. Suddenly she found herself in a forest she didn’t recognize. It had a huge star with a cat on top. “You shal be known as nightsong. We honor your courage as we welcome you as a full warrior of starclan. Suddenly dragonpaw was back in the clearing. Nightsong. The name echoed in dragonpaws mind. Could that be the same nightsong that gave her the prophecy, all those moons ago?

Chapter 3

“Come on dragonpaw. Training won’t wait” that was moonstar. I stumbled out of my nest and went to follow. Bluepaw and birchblaze were also there. “Today we are going to learn the territory and how iceclan is patrolled differently in leaf bare” that was birchblaze. She made a gesture with her tail and trotted off with moonstar. Dragonpaw and bluepaw followed eagerly, ready to learn. “So first we have the ice cavern witch marks one of our rouge borders.” Said birchblaze. Iceclan was the only clan in the forest though the rouges were strong so they needed borders anyway. “The ice cavern always has ice, even in the middle of Greenleaf and has a rock on the bottom so the ice won’t crack so it’s were we will practice ice-hunting and play prey-stone but right now back to borders” moonstar said. After patrolling for a while they headed back to camp. “I am going to relax in the nest” bluepaw said. Dragonpaw had a different activity in mind. “Phoenixpaw?” Dragonpaw said as she poked her head into the medicine den. “Please come in. Goldenlights resting so it’s just us” phoenixpaw said then a starclan cat appeared. “Nightsong!” Both the apprentices said at the same time. “How did you know that!” They said to each other again, at the same time. “I let you both attend my warrior ceremony ok.” That was Nightsong. “But you were busy with your own so you only got to see the end” “so thats why” phoenixpaw said. “That makes total sense” “dragonpaw we are going to teach you how to do ice-hunting” moonstars voice echoed through the den. “See you phenoixpaw,nightsong!” dragonpaw exclaimed as she went after moonstar. 

Chapter 4

“Want to come to the ice cave?” Phoenixpaw asked dragonpaw. “And talk with her”. Dragonpaw knew her brother was talking about Nightsong. The young starclan warrior had befriended the two apprentices in the first 2 moons,of their apprenticeships. Phoenixpaw was a fast learner and it was estimated that the two apprentices would get their names on the same night. “Sure let’s go!” Dragonpaw exclaimed. They came up to the cave “here is a tip. Unsheath you claws and grip onto the backbone of some sort of prey. Then you slide a lot easier” phoenixpaw said. “Sure I’ll try it” dragonpaw said. It turns out it is super slippery on the ice. “Over here!” Nightsong said. “I need to tell you something.” She continued. “Another prophecy?” Dragonpaw asked. “Have you ever heard of foxcatcher?” Nightsong asked. “You mean the fox who was raised in the clan and left shortly before we were born?” Phoenixpaw said. Dragonpaw had never heard of this fox but listened to her brother. “Well her forces are rising, foxclan will be here by the end of leaf bare.” “Leaf bare? It’s the height of greenleaf! We have plenty of time. I could be leader by then.” Dragonpaw said. “Leaf bare is closer than you think. You must be ready. Now is the part I’m supposed to disappear but I kinda want to hang out a little. You know…. Like friends” Nightsong said “sure. We would be welcome to slide around on the ice a little with you. Wow that needs a name. It’s not prey stone because there is no stone and we are not ice hunting because we are not hunting” dragonpaw said. “I will get starclans opinion and we will think of a name” Nightsong said. The three cats then spent the rest of the day sliding around on the ice together, forgetting all their worries of the prophecy or the warning from starclan about foxclan.

Bravo. I am making my own here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pFUGtlAwFcFuWJlrkoqReka8q3eJgqTN8VS8XnBS1_Q/... 

Urs way better tho..

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If you are leader, and make Sparrowtail deputy, she won't run away to FireClan!

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I just wrote chapter 4 of dragonstar

Can you make forbidden love?

You can never become a leader when you are reborn, because Moonheart just says "There's got to be something lying about that you can use to lure Mosskit" So idk what to do about that one, because the X doesn't appear.

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