“Do you want to say sorry for being a lousy mother? And never coming to even to say hello or know your own daughter?” echo mewed grimly maplestar curled her lip in disgust, “no I do not. you were weak, the runt of the litter, why would I care for weaklings?” maplestar grinned, Hawk leaped in front of the two and snarled at maplestar her ears flattened to her head and her eyes in slits. “ You harm her, and I kill you right here, right now!” hawk hissed her claws unsheathed, echo smirked softly, admiring the she-cats bravery. Maplestar snickered. “What? Your so protective, are you protecting your mate?” She snickered and sat down curling her tail around her paws, those words were said, and hawk then froze her eyes widened and her ears heated up. Echo stared at her paws not knowing what to do or say about that, the two have had a stronger bond then all the friends combined, and echo knew she had secret feelings for the white she-cat but never admitted it to herself nor any cat “I am protecting my leader! You mouse-brained snake-heart!!” hawk growled, maplestar started to bristle “Why you little-” before maplestar could do anything, sunstar pushed between them. “Enough! Fighting amongst ourselves gives no answers!” sunstar hissed. Tigerstar looked at echo her head held high. “Echo if we may we need a place to stay for now, we have had a long journey. And we are sore and hungry, our home was drowned by a magnificent flood one we had never seen for many moons, so if we may we need to take shelter in your cave.” Echo sighed, “yes, my cats will help you get settled” echo raised her chin glaring at her mother with intensity, “but first…” echo hissed, “maplestar…I do not trust you even though you are my mother and because of that you will be our prisoner, just as shadowstrike used to be” the tribe cats murmured in confusion. “But isn’t your father still our prisoner?” echo perked her ears and turned to see grey who stood up his eyes wide with bewilderment. Echo’s eyes softened. As she turned her gaze to her father. “No, he isn’t, and he has proven that he deserves a second chance” shadowstrike gave a purr as he smiled and said, “I thank you echo even though you are my daughter…I will make you proud” he chuckled a bit at the last part and echo gave an amused purr. Then her eyes became stone as she glared at her mother. “You will be our prisoner, and for him to continue to earn my trust shadowstrike shall guard you but to make sure you don’t try anything and harm him I will have two of my other cats guard you as well” echo growled curling her lip. “Snake, ice, along with shadowstrike, you three shall keep a CLOSE eye on maplestar.” The three nodded then left with maplestar in the middle, ice, and snake in the front and shadowstrike flanking the rear. “Move it!” shadowstrike pushed maplestar into the cave and the three cats kept her in a corner of the cave.
The seven cats stood their ground as they heard many paws steps thundering forward. “Who are you?” a tortoiseshell she-cat growled lashing her tail slightly with her teeth bared in a vicious grin. “Calm yourself maplestar” a golden tabby tom mewed gently, laying his tail tip on maplestar shoulder. Echo stepped in front her head held high and she sat down, her eyes narrowed as she looked at the four cats who stood in front with cation. “Who are you all?” echo mewed in a tone of a leader, all the cats stopped talking and looked at the grey she-cat echo lifted her chin and curled her lip in a snarl as she repeated “who are you?” the elder tom stepped up his eyes gleaming with pride. “I am Sunstar of pantherclan” a black she-cat elder spoke up “I am Tigerstar of wolfclan” she said with a slight glare at sunstar, the tom ignored her. “I I’m fawnstar of deerclan” a brown tabby mewed looking around anxiously. “And I am maplestar of foxclan” the tortoiseshell gave a small hiss. “Who are you?” sunstar mewed curiosity pricked at him echo sighed, “I am echo, the leader of the tribe of echoing silence.” Echo looked at the cats then licked her chest fur thinking of what to do next. “Well, well, it’s been a long time…maple” a voice mewed from in the cave. Echo looked back and saw her father shadowstrike with a vicious wicked smile on his face as he looked at the tortoiseshell, she-cat. “Its maplestar now you piece of crow-food!” maplestar spat flattening her ears. “Ah come now darling are you really going to be cold to me?” the tom grinned as he stepped closer and then sat next to his daughter. Echo looked bewildered then as she looked at the gleam in her father’s eye, she had a disturbing thought and it struck her, she hissed with violence, her hackles raised. “she’s, my mother?!” echo gave a screech of horror and rage as her claws ripped into the earth, disgust gripped her stomach, she could not believe it! She was half kittypet! Everyone gasped in confusion and bewilderment. Shadowstrike sighed, “yes, yes she is echo” he glared at maplestar with hatred “so, this sorry excuse for a leader is my daughter?” maplestar spat with a sneer on her face and a snarl of laughter. The two she-cats glared at each other with rage and hatred in their eyes, amber eyes blazing like forest fire. “You take that back! You stupid piece of fox-dung!!” shadowstrike snarled baring his sharp thorn teeth, as he stood up arching his back. Echo gave a soft gasp of surprise, he had never defended her ever in her life and this…this was a change, she was wrong to not trust him.
hellooooo I finished chapter 4 tell me how you like it and if you want me to repost the other ones.! i hope you like it :)
Chapter 4
When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.
Huh, strange I wondered. My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.
“We had an older brother” hawk began, “you mean you had another brother?” echo mewed in astonishment. “Yes, now if you will not interrupt me” hawk looked at echo sternly. Echo flattened her ears in embarrassment. “We had an older brother, and his name was Rabbitwhisker” “rabbitwhisker?” echo gave a hissing laughter. “Yup his name was rabbitwhisker” hawk sighed shaking her head with disappointment “he is the reason snake is the way he is” “what do you mean?” echo tilted her head in confusion. “When I was an apprentice of windclan, he was my mentor and one day me and my siblings were talking and just having fun, and then he walks up and I made a rude comment about him and I, I laughed at him and the others did to…” echo gasped in surprise hawk continued as her bones started to shake with fear and sadness. “and he usually took it as a joke, but I guess this time he was sick of it and so he towered over me and he told me to follow him and so I did” echo arched her eyebrow still listening as she groomed her fur “he led me to snake rocks and I knew it was wrong, I begged him for us to go back but he didn’t say a word, and then I heard a hiss behind me and I spun around but I saw nothing…” hawk’s eyes filled with fear of this memory “and when I looked back I didn’t see him, and then a heartbeat later I felt something grab my neck and I saw with horror that it was him and when I yowled for him to let me go he threw me at a tree and after that I knocked out, but when I woke up I didn’t see him and..and I felt my neck and ear bleeding, and then…” she flattened her ears as she spat with fear and her back was arched and her fur on end. “a-an adder bit my leg, and then as I was crying in pain, he came but he wasn’t trying to help instead he…he clawed my side…slowly.” Echo felt a shiver of fear down her spine as she pictured the dark tom trying to kill his own apprentice. Echo walked over and curled herself around her friend and brushed her muzzle on her cheek in comfort, “its ok, it’s all in the past now your safe, nothing and no one will harm you, I swear by starclan I will give my breath before they can put a paw on you” hawk smiled and laid down next to her purring softly.” thank you, for being my friend echo” Echo smiled then rasped, her tongue over hawks forehead then curled her tail around her and laid down. She perked up as she smelled scents, to many, she started to bristle. Hawk shot up immediately and her eyes became slits of prickling fear. The two she-cats dashed to the cave their pelts brushed together a few times. Snake, ice, moth, grey, and blaze all circled defending the cave as the kits, crow and soot all sheltered inside, shadowstrike stayed in the cave but was in a corner as he was grooming his pelt.
here is book 4! echoing silence, a star rises!!. chapter 1:
The sun had started to rise, as echo blinked her eyes open sleepily, she sat up and opened her jaw in a yawn and stretched her haunches and sat down and she started to groom her pelt until it was smooth. She gave a purr of satisfaction as the cold leaf-bare breeze blew on her fur. She glanced up and over heard hawk talking with soot, she strained her ears a bit to hear them. “Soot, do you think you might have greencough?” hawk asked as the elder started to cough “do not worry about me youngster I just need a bit of catmint, or some chickweed, or maybe honey it doesn’t matter” the elder coughed and sat down as his bones started to shake. Moth walked over, “I will take care of him hawk, you go see if we have some of the herbs” hawk walked over to echo her eyes were wide and full of worry. “he’s getting worse every day, I’ve tried to find the herbs I really have but I can’t find any I think…we might have a cat lost to greencough soon” hawk lowered her head in shame and despair, echo pressed her pelt to the snowy white she-cats fur, hawk perked her head up and they looked into each other’s eyes for a heartbeat. “It will be ok. If anything, starclan is by our side and even if soot does pass, it will be his time, ok please for once stop worrying.” Echo smiled and pressed her nose to hawk’s cheek, hawk purred and licked echo’s ear affectionately. “Thank you echo, um would you like to hunt with me? We are low on prey and moth is busy with soot, and blaze he is tussling with grey” she bared her fangs in a slight smirk and her pointed at the two with her muzzle. Echo rolled her eyes and gave a sigh. “Ok then, let’s go, you wanna race?” Echo smirked, hawk rolled her eyes and cuffed echo on the muzzle and echo jumped back with a giggle “mouse-brain” hawk hissed playfully. “Oh, I’m a mouse-brain am i?” echo growled and slithered towards hawk pounced on her, and hawk squealed in surprise. “Some snake you would make!” hawk laughed and The two scuffled in a play fight for a little bit, and then hawk stood up and shook the snow off her pelt, echo sat up and shook the snow off as well, and she started to groom her fur and cast a glance at hawk who had her eyes closed as she let the sun gleam on her white fur, echo couldn’t help up look at her scar, “hey hawk” echo started to stutter “yes echo?” Hawk looked at the grey she-cat, her blue eyes gleaming like crystals. “I um, I don’t want to make you uncomfortable or anything but…” echo was cut off as hawk placed her tail on echo’s mouth, “I know what you’re about to ask, and no it doesn’t make me uncomfortable.” She looked at her scar then looked back at echo and sat down curing her tail around her paws. “Most cats ask me about my scar and…I tell them the truth.” “And that is?” echo prompt, hawk sighed.
if you go into the fair (do you know the Sunfall & Crystalblaze trick?) you'll see Ceris outside the tent. All the way to the right you'll see Agatha with Cookie!!! crazy!
More skins. - (Or colour you self with patterns if possible)
More battles. - It gets boring after a while- A battle every so will be fun.
Gatherings. - Make it more interresting to the game!
Having more litters.- Having more litters with your mate will be great! other wise ill have to go with another.
More toms.- Of you are a she cat, there is only 2 options if you wanna mate. Duskfall and dust feather. If I stop being mates with one, I will not be able to talk to them. It is quite anoyying.
(Dont take this as hate! They are just ideas, the game is great!!)
Moss-shadow will not be adding any more skins as he wants to do genetically accurate patterns... but I like everything else. (Also there are at least four options as a she cat. Breezesong and Nightwhisper are lesbian)
Stormkit could hear Cherrytuft calling to her from behind, but she ignored it. She dodged the dens (holes in the ground, as WillowClan cats live underground) as she ran and ran.
As she dashed by the elders' den, Turtlekit's grinning head popped up. "Hey, Stormy!" he called out to her. "The elders were telling a story about- um, Stormkit? Hey, wait up?"
But Stormkit couldn't wait, even for her best friend. It ground at her heart to ignore Turtlekit, who she had leaned on for the few moons she'd been alive, but she couldn't stay close to the nursery or else Cherrytuft would find her, drag her back. That would be cursing her family, and also, though she didn't want to admit this, watching Shadowfall's inevitable death.
She got all the way up to the rogue border and sat there as the world swam in front of her eyes. Rain began to lightly fall, and although it was uncomfortable and cold as it landed on her fur, she stayed where she was. The clouds darkened. Thunder boomed, and lightning crackled the air. She stared up at it. "A storm," she said quietly, then, "A storm. It's-- it's my name."
Stormkit stared up at the sky, so intensely that she didn't notice the shadowy figure of a rogue creeping towards her, sitting beside her, staring at her. He sat there for hours, watching this strange kitten, until night fell and she fell asleep. Then he picked her up in his fangs and padded off into the night.
no one is probably reading this anyway butttt here it is I also made a few changes
Chapter 3
The return home
As it got closer I realized that the large thing was a twoleg. I took a deep breath and realized that I was holding my breath the entire time. “It's just a twoleg” said my brother with a big sigh of relief. I felt excitement all the way to my tail tip when I saw her. I knew this twoleg she was our owner! We lived in her den! I knew my brother, Tree knew too when I felt him relax. The twoleg picked us up and I knew my brother was tired when he just let her pick him up. Usually, he would put up a fight and scratch her. I personally never liked being picked up but I was okay with it. The twoleg put us in the back of her monster and got in the belly of it. It was kind of scary riding in the monsters that twolegs ride in but if they always came out okay I knew it was safe. My brother on the other paw pretty much slept in the blankets the whole ride and I was glad he did because I knew if he was awake he would have tried to escape. After about 45 minutes the monster stopped. I thought it was strange because me and my brother did not go that far but I pushed away the thought. The back of it opened and the twoleg scooped me up and picked up my brother. He was still sleeping peacefully. As we walked to the entrance I still felt excited from our adventure but little did I know we were not going home.
Hello again! I'm writing a Warrior Cats story so here it is! I'm just posting everything I have done so far so you don't have to look for the other ones I hope you like it :D
Prologue
Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought. But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear. After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live” The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced. Even though he is weaker maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…
Chapter 1
Hole in the fence
My first memories were of my mother. I still remember snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. Her name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree. My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes. I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.” One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!” I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.
Chapter 2
Beyond the garden
Beyond the garden was NOTHING like I thought it would be like NOTHING! I imagined lush forests surrounded by berry bushes over a blue sky as I saw holes in the twolegs den. But now that I thought of it I remembered that I could never go through it as much as I tried. Maybe they weren't holes after all. I saw a few trees but mostly I saw more twoleg stone dens. “DID YOU EVEN HEAR ME!” my brother snapped me out of my thoughts. I realized that he had been talking to me for a while. “scardy kitty too scared to say anything!” he said mockingly. I growled, “NO ONE CALLS ME SCARDY KITTY!” I yelled and chased him! I chased him until he started coughing and I realized that something was coming out of a pipe “Move away” I said cautiously. And realized that he was on the ground. “No no no no!” I yelled. Then all of a sudden he jumped at me! “AAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!” I yelled in terror. “Hey, you scared me!” I said, “Ha! I knew you were a scardy kitty!” “NO, I'M No-” I got cut off as my brother said “Sush!” I looked forward and saw a large thing approaching us.
“You look tired I can take second watch if you’d like” echo smiled sweetly looking at hawk who looked exhausted. hawk cleared her throat sitting up straight but failed to hide the sleepiness in her eyes, “no need I am the guard you go in and rest I’ll keep watch” echo sighed rolling her eyes and grabbed hawk by the scruff of her neck and started to drag her into the den. “You are getting sleep and that’s final” echo hissed quietly not to wake anyone, but hawk saw the mischief in her amber eyes as they glowed in the darkness of the cave. “Ok fine” hawk sighed and laid her head on her paws letting sleep taking over. Echo walked out of the cave and watched the night sky, and she could not help but glance at hawk, the white she-cat looked so beautiful like snow, as moonlight shined through the cave and on her pelt, echo felt her ears heat up and a red dust crossed her muzzle, she instantly looked away shaking her head. She sighed shaking her head and twitching her muzzle, she gazed at the sky once more then she laid on her paws and fell asleep, and as she dazed into sleep she listened to the soothing sounds of the night, it was like a silent song of midnight. (lemme know when yall wanna read book 3 XD)
in west woods: over borders. does ANYBODY AT ALL know where i can find a stone or rock, to mark littlebirds grave memorial (please PLEASE tell me!!!!1 im begging you!!!!!!)
“as I was saying” echo continued “until we continue on our journey to our real home, we need to assign ranks, I have been watching you all and I have determined your ranks, step up once I call your name” the cats all looked at each other their eyes full of excitement then looked at echo waiting patiently, as soon as echo had time to think once more she raised her voice against the wind as it started to blow hard. “Ice, snake, greyvine” the three cats padded up and then sat down looking up at her. “you three have shown your strength and bravery, you shall be named as warriors” the cats bowed their heads in acceptance to their new ranks then went to sit back to their places. “Fireblaze, moth, you two have shown your speed and skill, you two shall be prey-hunters” the two cats looked at each other then back at echo bowing their heads and sat at their spots. “Hawk,”- echo paused as she rested her gazed on the beautiful white furred, she-cat. “You have shown your kindness, but also your fierceness and courage, so if you accept you shall be a guard” the she-cats blue eyes were blazing with pride as she mewed “I do” she bowed her head and sat at her spot. “And now I shall welcome our new additions and give them their new names” the cats looked at each other with confused expressions “fireblaze, greyvine, crowsong, sootwhisker, flamekit, wolfkit, and ravenkit, step up please” all the cats stepped up sitting down, the kits sat by their mother. “If you are to be in our tribe you need to be named as us, greyvine, fireblaze, and sootwhisker, I now name you, blaze, grey, and soot.” A wave of purring approval erupted from the cats and the three toms sat back at their spots. “Crowsong, flamekit, wolfkit, and ravenkit, I now name you crow, flame, wolf, and raven.” The cats nodded and the kits trotted back to their father blaze, followed by crow. Echo lifted her chin then a growl started in her throat, “shadowstrike, step forth” the tom padded over and sat down his eyes filled with anger and pain. “as you have said shadowstrike you will be leaving until you get back on your paws, but I have decided you will leave as soon as the wind as died down” shadowstrike couldn’t help but show fear, his eyes became wide with uncertainty, the cats started to murmur to one another, “what do you mean echo?, you said that he could leave once he gets his strength up” it was grey who had spoken. Echo stifled a snap of retort and sighed. “Fine, and he can come with us to gather cats from the clans and rouges and loners” echo glared at him and unsheathed her claws “one bad move and I will have my cats throw you aside, or I will turn you into crow-food myself. Do you understand me?” shadowstrike let out a low growl, hawk started to unsheathe her claws ready to leap at the tom. But then shadowstrike nodded looking away from his daughter, and so hawk sheathed her claws as relief flooded over her. “We move out at sunrise!” Echo yowled then leaped gracefully off the rock and walked to her nest, hawk watched after echo and felt her ears start to heat up. She shook her head roughly and then walked to the entrance of the cave to keep watch. Hawk looked at the sky as drops of rain started to dampen her pelt, she gave a soft groan and shook the raindrops off her fur, she then looked into the cave and saw everyone was asleep and then her eyes quickly snapped to where echo slept and with alarm she saw echo was not in her nest she looked around wildly for the grey she-cat. Then with a prickle of fear hawk felt something across her spine…she whipped her head around to see echo, the she-cats amber eyes were staring into her own, she then relaxed “don’t be so tense on your first night ok” echo chuckled sitting down tucking her paws underneath her. Hawk gave a shy smile and flicked her tail with embarrassment, “yes well I didn’t know where you were, so I had to become tense, I am a guard of course” she mewed, echo rolled her eyes and muttered “well I AM the leader so aren’t I allowed to wander? Besides, I could not sleep” hawk giggled knowing it was pointless to argue with the cat who was her friend, and her leader. “Your right” echo stood up shaking the rain off her grey pelt, and started to groom it smooth, hawk shook the sleep from her eyes and sat up, she looked up at the sky and the rain, it started to clear.
here is my book I put the first part in case you missed it. I hope you like it :)
Moon
Prologue
Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought.
But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear. After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live”
The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced. Maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…
Chapter 1
My first memories were of my mother. I was snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. My mother's name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree.
My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes.
I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.”
One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!”
I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.
chapter 3!! As she came to the cave, she saw moth was talking to the kits, and ice was sharing tongues with the elder. And the two warriors were still prickling with worry, and hawk was sharing tongues with the queen. “how’s everything going?” she mewed to the cats. “Everything is going well”- hawk started then when she looked at echo her eyes widened in fear “dear starclan what happened?!!” snake yowled and snake, ice, and hawk rushed to her. “My father happened” she grumbled as she bent to lick her wounds. Echo shot her head up immediately as she saw shadowstrike limping towards them, she purred softly with a soft smile. “So, you have finally decided to come to your senses?” echo meowed as shadowstrike came forward. “I will stay for a few days, for until I get back on my paws” he lifted his chin with a glare at echo “but I am not staying, and so…that makes us enemies.” echo sighed shaking her head in mock despair. “Fine, you are very lucky I am merciful, and I do not have my cats kill you instantly.” Moth looked up and walked towards echo with a gentle smile. “The kits names are wolfkit, flamekit, and ravenkit.” Flamekit was a ginger tabby like her father fireblaze, wolfkit was a light grey tom, and ravenkit was a jet-black tom with a white muzzle. “Are they willing to join the tribe?” echo mewed “oh yes, they are! Flamekit is very eager, and ravenkit and wolfkit are very intrigued about the ranks about the tribe” echo purred, and her tail flicked away a bit of snow. “that’s great, could you tell me about the ranks as well?” Echo questioned her friend, moth smiled “of course, come and join the kits” she chuckled. “And so, the guards will be responsible for guarding the camp and the hunters are in charge of hunting prey and providing food for the tribe” moth continued, flamekit listened to moth her eyes wide as the full moon. “But wont the guards be allowed to eat and sleep and hunt for themselves?” ravenkit asked twitching his white muzzle, moth giggled “of course they will silly, you think the guards will just stay there forever? The guards with change…shifts every time the prey-hunters go to hunt” wolfkit looked puzzled “but why?” he asked. Moth continued “because the guards that had been there they will be able rest, and the same will be for the prey-hunters” echo sat on a rock in the cave and gazed at the cats, and then she lifted her head slightly, her fur blew in the cold breeze and snowflakes started to fall onto her grey pelt. As hawk gazed into echo’s eyes she saw hope and pride in the she-cats eyes, hawk’s white fur started to shine like snow as moonlight shined on it, then echo mewed the words of a clan meeting, or in this case…a tribe gathering “every cat old enough to hunt in the cave gather around me for our very first meeting of the tribe” the cats stopped chattering like magpies and turned to echo who sat confidently on the rock. “THIS is your tribe? your nothing but a bunch of mice waiting to be hunted and you barley have a camp to shelter yourselves, you call this a tribe? this is pathetic” shadowstrike yowled with laughter, echo’s blood boiled like a flaming fire and her amber eyes glazed with rage, her hackles raised. “You have one chance to shut your muzzle! And if not, I will rip you to shreds so SHUT UP YOU PIECE OF RAT-DUNG” she yowled, her voice drowned with rage. mews of laughter and growls of approval erupted from the cats, shadowstrike pinned his ears and narrowed his eyes at her and then stared at his paws.
the cats walked up from the grass to face the warriors. “Who are you?!” greyvine snarled, shadowstrike scrunched his nose up in disgust “so, you lived huh?” he hissed at echo “yes I did father, why are you here?” she lifted her head in defiance. She bared her fangs in a snarl lashing her tail viscously. “What, is this your new home? Or are you living with twolegs?” he snickered pawing closer “I chose my path father! I clawed my way up to survive for moons!!” she yowled with pure rage, hawk stared in amazement, echo had a temper but this…this was a whole new level of anger. “Let me at him, I’ll make him wish he never lived!!” ice growled digging his claws in the earth “no” echo mewed coldly lifting her chin and glared at shadowstrike her eyes blazing like a forest fire. “Ice, hawk. Take these cats back to our cave, make sure they get enough food, and make the elder, queen and her kits a soft enough nest” echo meowed not taking her eyes off her father, with eyes of stone. “But…” ice started then trailed off looking at the trembling and hungry cats “now ice!!!” echo snarled whipping her head at him. the tom nodded and looked at the cats, their eyes full of worry but they all nodded and followed hawk and ice to the cave. Echo watched them and then when they were gone into the distance, she snarled glaring at shadowstrike who just grinned, “let’s see what you got echo” shadowstrike laughed getting into an attack position, echo snarled lashing her tail and bared her fangs, and her eyes became slits, she leaped at him with a battle cry, taken by surprise shadowstrike leaped back splattering snow from behind him, he then leaped at her, claws unsheathed, and they battled young and old, grey and black, amber eyes blazing with the hunger of battle. Echo gave a grin seeing shadowstrike getting worn out. “Had enough you old bone bag?!” she spat proudly with a sneer on her face “never!!!” He yowled leaping at her and clawed her back, she yowled with pain then she snarled and then she bared her teeth and he yowled with pain as her fangs met his shoulder and claws raked his stomach, she kicked him off her with her hind paws. Shadowstrike leaped off her blood dripped from his wounds that echo had inflicted, and the blood dripped onto the snow turning it a scarlet red. “I am not a monster, so I will give you once chance, you may join my tribe, and live healthy, or be our enemy and be killed on sight when seen. I am sure you will make the right choice” she mewed blood was dripping from her sides, and her back slightly, her ear had been torn as well, she turned around and walked towards the cave, she cast a glance at shadowstrike who looked weak, and starving. She sighed. Has she made the right choice? Even though he was her blood he had put her through a lot of pain when she was in the clan.
and i just realized, echo's father....echo told her father he was gonna leave but...in the next two books HE JOINS THE TRIBE XD i cant belive i did that....
alright heres the second book!!!!!! echoing silence, book 2: silent song. chapter 1:
It had been many moons since echo and her friends had begun there journey past the clans, “we should stop and rest” hawkpaw now hawk, muttered as she sat down. “We need to keep going!” snake growled “I can smell a fox” ice nodded to his brother, and moth looked at echo expectingly. Echo sighed “I agree with hawk, we need rest, but I also agree with you snake, I smell the fox as well” she mewed looking at the tom as he started to bristle but then his fur laid flat. “I suggest we find a cave or an old fox or badger den” moth meowed suggesting, echo perked up with a purr. “Yes, and we’ll need prey for each of us then tomorrow we will start moving again” echo looked up at the sky, the sun begun turning the sky a scarlet blood red, as the sun started to set. “Look! Over there!” hawk yowled with pride as she came dashing to an old badger set. The five cats all purred with joy, echo rushed over to hawk and pressed her muzzle to hers. Hawk looked at echo with eyes full of pride, ice gave a gentle purr. “Finally, she’s opening up to somebody.” Moth murmured to her brothers, and they nodded. The stars glowed in the night sky as snake, hawk, and ice came back from hunting. Moth and echo were talking about plans for the tribe, echo was grooming her fur sleek smooth listening to moth’s ideas. “So, I’m thinking that for the ranks, every cat as old as 6 moons and older should be called trainee’s and the cats older than that, we should have warrior’s, guards, and hunters.” Echo looked at moth her eyes full of thought. “I like it” ice padded up with a vole in his jaws, and he dropped it at his sister’s paws. “For you moth” he smiled then walked over and grabbed a rabbit eating it. Echo perked up her ears as she heard a rustling in the grass. Snake unsheathed his claws, his hackles starting to rise. Echo looked at snake with calm eyes. Ice leaped onto the rock of the cave, and he gave a yowl as he saw cats coming “it looks like it 4 toms, a she-cat and 3 kits” he told echo, “Kits?! Out here?!” echo yowled her voice edged with worry, as she looked at the snow under her paws. “they’ll freeze without food!!” hawk yowled as she raced towards the strange cats. “Wait!” snake snarled stopping his sister, “move snake!” hawk hissed aiming a paw at her brother. Snake dodged her paw and growled. “We don’t know if these cats are a threat or not hawk!” echo dashed in front of them and growled. “Enough! Snake, think we need cats, yes? I think we should be kind and help these cats, and offer them shelter, they will think of joining us” snake hesitated then nodded.
Echo looked at hawk and ice, “you two come with me to greet the cats” she then looked at moth and snake “you two guard the cave” they all nodded. echo, hawk, and ice all stalked through the grass towards the cats. Echo saw that one tom was a ginger tabby, and another was a long-haired grey tom, she then saw a black and white one with a scarred muzzle that gave away his age. And then she looked at a black tom her eyes widen with horror as the tom looked hauntingly familiar, she was desperately searching her mind then she remembered those toms
were firepaw, greypaw, and her father…shadowstrike, ice looked at the she-cat she was a deep brown tabby with white paws. Echo took a deep shaky breath and padded through the grass getting closer to listen to them. “Greyvine, I need to rest” the elder tom croaked. the ginger tom looked back to the elder “we need to keep going sootwhisker.” Sootwhisker glared at the tom, “I said I need rest fireblaze! My paws are aching!” sootwhisker hissed his hackles starting to rise. “My kits need rest as well, shadowstrike could we hunt? We all need food” the she-cat looked at shadowstrike. “of course, crowsong” the tom mewed with a soothing silky tone; echo hissed with disgust “he’s faking the kindness” she growled through gritted teeth. Hawk pressed her pelt to echo’s to calm her. “We should stay as calm as possible; we don’t know what their capable of” hawk whispered soothingly “I know what shadowstrike is capable of” echo snarled “I’ll take care of him”
heres chapter four! the final chapter of book 1!!! hope you all like it!!
Chapter 4: embracing the future.
“what’s wrong echo?” moth’paw laid her tail on echo’s shoulder. “I um…my name isn’t really echo” ice’paw bristled and his eyes filled with fear he stepped a paw closer to her starting to unsheathe his claws “who are you then?” he asked softly, echo did not answer. “I SAID WHO ARE YOU FOX-HEART?!” He snapped and losing patience he clawed her muzzle reopening her wound shadowstrike gave her. “m-my name is e-echo’paw o-of th-thunderclan!” she whimpered, fear in her eyes, and trembling. Snake’paw snarled “I knew she smelled different!” moth’paw and hawk’paw stopped the toms from doing anything farther. “Boys stop!!!” moth’paw hissed “she lied to us! TO ME!!!!” ice’paw yowled with pure rage “she might have had a reason for it ice’paw!” hawkpaw growled her tail lashing from side to side and she looked at echo’paw blushing faintly and then she sat down averting echopaw’s gaze “well? Explain yourself you fur-ball!” snake’paw hissed, echo’paw sighed and explained her story. “and when I didn’t answer him again he scarred me and dragged me out a-and said that..thunderclan has no need for weaklings…l-like me” echo’paw trembled and collapsed but before she fell hawkpaw dashed to catch her, the siblings all looked at each other sympathy in their eyes snakepaw sighed “we know what its feel like to be disowned by your parents” hawkpaw whimpered and looked at her paws clearly hurt, ice’paw snarled “our mother told us that she wishes that a badger would kill us and she wished we we’re never born.” Ice’paw flattened his ears in anger “she said that we are disappointments to her” moth’paw muttered as she hugged her sister “I’m so sorry, I never knew it was that hard for you all” Echopaw mewed her eyes filled with sadness. “But what about your father? Doesn’t he calm her down?” snakepaw yowled with fury clearly offended by the she-cats question. “Our father is dead! And when he was alive, he never cared two mouse tails about us!!, if he did, he sure as badgers stripes didn’t show it.” echo’paw gasped taken back by his anger but in all she did understand his anger. “What about your mother? Does she help your father?” ice’paw meowed, daring to ask the same question, he jumped back, startled as echo’paws eyes became slits of rage and she unsheathes her claws and dug them into the ground, they were all taken back by her sudden rage “I never knew my mother, shadowstrike stole me from her when I was born and I’m sure since she never stopped him she never cared a fox’s fangs about me!!!” she yowled. Ice’paw grinned a devilish smile playing on his lips, knowing this was a daring sentence, because he and his siblings were from windclan and echo’paw formally from thunderclan so they would be breaking the code being friends, he spoke up, his voice laced with determination, “I say we join together, and we all run away, we won’t have to worry about anything or anyone else” echo’paw smirked “I like that idea but we should actually create a clan, no wait…not a clan, but a tribe and, we should have our own rules and ranks and ways of doing things” she scanned around the four cats, they all were grinning and smirking with tails lashing. “But who will be the leader? And we need a tribe name.” snake’paw meowed echo’paw smirked “I will be leader but first we will need to find a home, and cats to join us before I take the title” she purred, the cats all meowed in agreement. “And last of all we need a tribe name” echo’paw mewed “I think I know what we should be called” hawkpaw muttered shyly shuffling her paws against the soft grass. Mothpaw gave a smirk to her sister snakepaw let a purr rumble in his throat. Ice’paw smiled “say your idea sis” ice’paw meowed laying his tail on hawk’paws shoulder, hawk’paw smiled her eyes beaming with pride. “I think we should be named the tribe of echoing silence” all the cats perked at the name knowing that name suited them perfectly, they all yowled in agreement and echo’paw knew it was the start of a new story, a new life, a new journey. As they walked toward the sunset, echo’paw looked back past the hills to thunderclan camp she realized, she will never go back to her old life, and so she turned and walked off with her friends, and after that. She never looked back.
Avery climbed into the back of her mom’s blue car and closed the door.
“How was school?” her mom asked as she always did. It didn’t annoy Avery the way a repeated question like that may annoy other teenagers. She liked that her mom cared, and it didn’t feel like she was just saying it because it was routine. Her mom began to drive.
“Actually, it was kinda weird,” Avery confessed.
“How so?” Mrs. Clay asked, looking at Avery in the rearview mirror.
“I think I’ll wait until the whole family is together to explain it all. That way I’ll only have to tell the story once,” she said.
“Ok,” her mom replied after a moment. Then she asked, “Today was Finals for this first semester, right?”
“It was!” Avery said. She told her mom about how everything went fairly smoothly, besides students not staying calm while the teacher reviewed their grades. After she was finished she asked, “Ryan home from Wings Academy, right? For winter break?”
“Mhm, he is. We’re going to make his favorite for dinner, too. Tuna and mac,” Mrs. Clay said.
Avery smiled. Tuna mixed with Kraft mac’n’cheese was definitely her older brother’s favorite. Avery remembered this one time when Ryan was probably about seven and he ate three bowls of mac’n’cheese. He would’ve eaten a fourth if there had been more, but there wasn’t and six-year-old Avery didn’t want to give her’s up. Apparently he had skipped snack between lunch and dinner on purpose so he could be extra hungry.
Avery also loved mac’n’cheese, though she couldn’t understand why Ryan liked mixing tuna into it. It ruined the texture! On its own, mac’n’cheese was creamy and warm. But when you added room-temperature tuna, it just was not right.
“I feel like I haven’t seen Ryan in forever,” Avery remarked. “When was the last time he came home? Thanksgiving?”
“Yep,” Avery’s mom said. “Which, if I recall correctly, was only three weeks ago.”
“Mom,” Avery said.
“What?” Mrs. Clay said.
“Did you hear yourself?” she asked.
“What do you mean?” her mom asked, twisting back to look at Avery for a moment before turning back to the road.
“You said ‘only’. Like as if three weeks isn’t a long time to not see your son,” Avery said teasingly.
Her mom rolled her eyes. “You know what I mean.”
“Do I?” Avery said challengingly.
Mrs. Clay laughed and shook her head. By now they had turned onto their street. After a few seconds, they came to their house.
The Clays’ house was average in size; single-story, three bedrooms, three bathrooms, a small yard. The pillars on each side of the garage and by the porch were inlaid with rectangle blue stones in an irregular pattern that gave the house a sort of natural feel. The front yard was small and had a single willow set off on the left side. The beautiful tree was surrounded by tall grass that had purple and blue wildflowers scattered throughout it. The walkway was made of large, round gray stones with bright green moss filling in the gaps.
Mrs. Clay pulled into the driveway and turned the car off. They both climbed out and each grabbed their bags; Mrs. Clay her red purse, and Avery her dark green backpack. Avery watched as her mother’s purse moved to her hand without her touching it. Mrs. Clay was a Moonblazer, meaning she could manipulate energy relating to moonlight. This ability also gave her telekinesis.
As the two of them walked up towards the front door the sweet scent of the wildflowers filled their lungs. Avery took a deep breath, and as she let it out she realized that soon she wouldn’t be coming home every day after school. She would be at Wings Academy, the most prestigious high school in the land. The school that everyone wanted to get into. In the principal's office, she hadn’t thought about what it would be like to not come home every day. Of course, they had talked about packing, but now it was all starting to truly sink in.
Mrs. Clay pulled her keys out and unlocked the front door. She pushed the door open and stepped inside, Avery close behind. Avery closed the front door, and when she turned she saw Ryan standing a few feet away.
“Ryan!” she exclaimed, and embraced him. “I’ve missed you so much!”
“I’ve missed you too,” he said shyly, his hands in his pockets. Ryan was the type of boy who was reserved and didn’t talk much, so Avery wasn’t surprised by his demeanor.
“You’ve grown so much since summer!” Avery commented.
Ryan shrugged, but it was true. When Ryan had first left for Wings Academy, Avery and he had been nearly the same height. Ryan had only been half an inch taller. But now he was a clear inch taller than Avery, if not an inch and a half. Of course, Avery had seen Ryan on multiple occasions since last summer, but for some reason the change felt especially noticeable this time.
Besides his height, not much had changed about him. He still had the same wavy red hair, which was combed back neatly, and the same shy smile he had worn since he was little.
“So how’s school been?” Ryan asked.
“Fine. Today was finals for the first semester, which ended a bit differently than I’d anticipated,” she finished. When Ryan looked at her confusedly she said, “I’ll explain at dinner.”
“Finally, you woke up!” I heard Rori say as I lifted my head from my desk. “Yeah, yeah.” I mumbled under my breath. As I reached into my bag to grab a piece of gum, I had found an old note from my mom saying “Hey dear! I hope you’re having a good day so far. I forgot to pack your lunch though… so sorry! – Mom.” I smiled as I remember when I had first read it in 4th grade. “Mrs. Crow, is your bag more interesting than my lesson?” I darted my head up to see my teacher, Mrs. Yarrow, looking at me with a serious stare. I glanced around to see everyone staring at me. My face turned red as tomato. “Sorry Mrs.” I answer quickly. I swept my hair back behind my ear, as I tried not to look at everyone looking at me. As the bell rang, I quickly packed my bag and ran out the class room to my locker. I shoved my bag into the locker then wiped the sweat off my face. I walked to lunch while trying to find my friends.
I spotted River walking out of the library; she always has her face in a book. “River!” I shouted. She quickly turned her head to look at me, dropping her book in the process. “Oh, hey Imara!” River exclaimed. “Do you know where Rori and Amber are?” I asked. “I saw Amber just a bit ago… but I can’t seem to remember when I saw Rori last.” River said. “Huh...” I said concerned. We both walked to lunch, keeping our eyes peeled for Amber and Rori. I walked over to a table and sat down waiting for River to get her lunch. Before River could come sit by me, Laura Hopkin sat by me. “Hey!” Laura greeted me. “Uhm, hi.” I said slowly. “Hey Laura, have you seen Rori at all?” I asked. She looked at me confuesed, “Who…?” “Rori Hanns? Your cousin?” I said. “I don’t have any cousin named Rori.” She said as she raised her eyebrow. Laura walked away from me, worried. River and Amber came over a bit after Laura left. “Guys guess what!” I announced to the two. “Chicken butt?” They both guessed synchronized. “No what?” I looked at them with a concerned look on my face. “Anyway,” I said, “Laura didn’t know who Rori was! She acted like she didn’t exist!” There was a huge akward silence. “Who?” Amber asked.
I looked at them and said, “Is this a joke…?” Amber scoffed, “No? Who is Rori?” I heard Amber ask. I gasped under my breath. “You’re kidding.” I stuttered. “Imara are you okay?” River asked. I started to stutter my words, just saying gibberish at that point. The bell rang and Amber quickly left, River swiftly followed behind. Hours later, I headed towards the bus pickup. I spotted Amber and River talking to each other. They glanced over at me and quickly went onto the bus. I sighed. I entered the bus and headed to the back. I sat down and pulled my sketch book out of my bag and started doodling. As I watched everyone talk to their friends, happy, but I couldn’t feel that in that moment. I was more worried about what happened to Rori. I looked out my window when the bus passed by Rori’s house, and it was just trees. I could’ve sworn I saw one of the trees glitch. I closed my eyes in attempt to try to relax, but the bus hit a bump and I jumped awake. “Last stop is coming up!” I heard the bus driver say. I put my sketchbook back into my bag, and got ready to leave. As the bus pulled to a stop, I walked up to the door slowly, but I didn’t realize some one was sticking out their leg to trip me. “Hey!” I screeched as I fell. I heard two girls laugh, “Sorry!” I heard one say. I got up and walked to the front of the bus ready to leave. The doors seemed to refuse to open. I gently pushed the door to open but nothing worked. “Uhm, could I get some help?” I asked politely. I watched as the bus driver pressed the open-door button multiple times but to no prevail. I pushed against the door and the door busted open causing me to fall out. All I could hear was the laughter from everyone on the bus. I quickly got up and fast walked to the front door of my house. Not realizing I left my bag on the bus; I turned around in a panic just to see the bus had left. I sighed in anger sitting down by a tree. I waited hours for my mother to return to unlock the front door.
Finally, after hours I watched her car pull into the driveway. I watched her walk up to the front door unlocking it. I snuck up behind her. “AH!” I heard my mother scream. “Sorry mom!” I said apologetically, rubbing the back of my neck. “What were you doing?! You should be asleep by now.” She scolded me. “Sorry I left my bag on the bus so I couldn’t unlock the door.” I said bashfully. My mother rolled her eyes and walked into the house. I walked to my room and closed the door. I laid down onto my bed, waiting for pure relation to come over my body. Right as I drifted off to sleep, I remembered how my friends didn’t know who Rori was. (END OF CHAPTER ONE)
this is really good. I want chapter 2! Also... I can't find you in my story's comments, are you an over borders fan nowadays? (dont feel bad, i kinda am too)
Sorry lol. Dw chapter two is in works as I haven't finished this book yet (just started last month lol). And kinda? I cant figure out how to change the tail color- (On over borders)
on top of the settings, there are some green leaves pointing up. click on each green leaf to switch to a different set of settings. one of them will be tails.
"What's... what's wrong with Dadda?" asked Stormkit, eyes tearing up. Cherrytuft purred gently into Stormkit's ear. "Don't you worry, Stormy-Storm."
"Daddy's not supposed to be on the floor like that!"
Shadowfall lay on the ground, twitching and writhing in pain. Occasionally he coughed, then bent over sharply, as if the small sound had caused his chest to catch on fire. "Daddy!" cried Stormkit. She began to wail. Then she abruptly stopped. "Is this... the bad luck?"
"The what?! Who told you about that?" said Cherrytuft.
"I heard you talking about it yesterday," said Stormkit.
"You know you were a bad omen? Oh, baby-"
"I was a... what?! I..." Stormkit stopped, standing rigid, silent. "Stormkit, I'm sorry, I didn't mean- " started Cherrytuft, scooping the kit in for a hug, but she wriggled away. "I made Daddy sick! I can't be around anymore! I'm going to- I'm going to leave!"
"No, Stormy, I-"
"I won't leave camp. Not yet, anyway. Don't worry about me. I'm doing you a favor, letting you never see me again." Stormkit leapt out of the nursery in one single bound, running with all her might. She didn't know where she'd go, but she'd go somewhere far, far away. She knew there was no saving Shadowfall.
“what’s a rouge like you doing around here? Don’t you know this is windclan territory? And by the looks of your scars, you are in no mood to fight” he gave a smirk sitting down with his tail curled neatly next to his paws. Echo bristled “are you calling me weak?” she hissed curling her lip revealing thorn sharp teeth, the tom chuckled “of course not…kitty” he circled her with a grin across his muzzle and his eyes gleaming “I just think you need rest because whoever you fought, they gave you a tough time.” The tom licked his paw drawing it over his ear and his eyes softened the threat faded from his eyes and his eyes were filled with friendliness, “my name is ice’paw, I am an apprentice of windclan a strong one at that! I will be a warrior soon I just need three more moons”- the tom grumbled -“of dumb apprentice duties.” “I’m on a border patrol right now and my clan has already had their share of prey so luckily I’m able to eat.” Ice’paw purred “wanna share a mouse or two? You look like you haven’t eaten in days” he meowed as he gave his chest fur a few licks “yes please, but won’t your clanmates punish you if they find you allowing a rouge like me onto your borders and eating your prey?” echo mewed questioning the tom tilting her head to the side, ice’paw chuckled “don’t worry tallstar is pretty understanding so no he won’t, but ya my clanmates might not agree with it” he meowed as he munched on a mouse he had caught and passed a rabbit to her. Echo munched on the rabbit, her ears pricked as she heard cats coming and by the sound of it there were three of them, she started to bristle, ice’paw gave a soft smirk with a glance at her. “Do not worry it is just my siblings if you are thinking they are gonna hurt you your wrong, they will not ok, your safe. Well snake’paw may attempt to pounce on you, but I won’t allow him to I promise you” echo nodded her fur laid flat and the 3 apprentices came closer “WHAT IN STARCLAN is a flea-bitten rouge doing on our territory ice’paw?!” a white and grey tom identified as snake’paw snarled and glared at echo “calm down snake’paw by the looks of it, she’s not a threat to us” a tortoiseshell she-cat purred echo smiled and sat down, another she-cat who was a white tabby with a scar along her eye down to her side shuffled her paws shyly “I’m echo, what are your names?” echo looked at the she-cats and the tom with a sweet smile. “I’m Moth’paw” the tortoiseshell she-cat purred “I’m hawkpaw” the tabby mewed shyly. “I’m snake’paw” the tom growled his fur still a bit bristling, Moth’paw cuffed her brother’s ear with a sheathed paw snake’paw gave a hiss and growled forcing his fur to lie flat and sheathed his claws, “and you already know me, my names ice’paw” the calico tom said with a bright smile. echo smiled at them all her heart filling with happiness, and the four all chatted until sunset, they shared prey and, then her heart sank, knowing that if these cats were gonna be her friends, she can’t hide the truth from them, and she flattened her ears in sadness the siblings all looked at echo in confusion.
← Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
erm, why is my name Sootkitt
That has happened to me before, and it fixed when I became an apprentice
chapter 4:
“Do you want to say sorry for being a lousy mother? And never coming to even to say hello or know your own daughter?” echo mewed grimly maplestar curled her lip in disgust, “no I do not. you were weak, the runt of the litter, why would I care for weaklings?” maplestar grinned, Hawk leaped in front of the two and snarled at maplestar her ears flattened to her head and her eyes in slits. “ You harm her, and I kill you right here, right now!” hawk hissed her claws unsheathed, echo smirked softly, admiring the she-cats bravery. Maplestar snickered. “What? Your so protective, are you protecting your mate?” She snickered and sat down curling her tail around her paws, those words were said, and hawk then froze her eyes widened and her ears heated up. Echo stared at her paws not knowing what to do or say about that, the two have had a stronger bond then all the friends combined, and echo knew she had secret feelings for the white she-cat but never admitted it to herself nor any cat “I am protecting my leader! You mouse-brained snake-heart!!” hawk growled, maplestar started to bristle “Why you little-” before maplestar could do anything, sunstar pushed between them. “Enough! Fighting amongst ourselves gives no answers!” sunstar hissed. Tigerstar looked at echo her head held high. “Echo if we may we need a place to stay for now, we have had a long journey. And we are sore and hungry, our home was drowned by a magnificent flood one we had never seen for many moons, so if we may we need to take shelter in your cave.” Echo sighed, “yes, my cats will help you get settled” echo raised her chin glaring at her mother with intensity, “but first…” echo hissed, “maplestar…I do not trust you even though you are my mother and because of that you will be our prisoner, just as shadowstrike used to be” the tribe cats murmured in confusion. “But isn’t your father still our prisoner?” echo perked her ears and turned to see grey who stood up his eyes wide with bewilderment. Echo’s eyes softened. As she turned her gaze to her father. “No, he isn’t, and he has proven that he deserves a second chance” shadowstrike gave a purr as he smiled and said, “I thank you echo even though you are my daughter…I will make you proud” he chuckled a bit at the last part and echo gave an amused purr. Then her eyes became stone as she glared at her mother. “You will be our prisoner, and for him to continue to earn my trust shadowstrike shall guard you but to make sure you don’t try anything and harm him I will have two of my other cats guard you as well” echo growled curling her lip. “Snake, ice, along with shadowstrike, you three shall keep a CLOSE eye on maplestar.” The three nodded then left with maplestar in the middle, ice, and snake in the front and shadowstrike flanking the rear. “Move it!” shadowstrike pushed maplestar into the cave and the three cats kept her in a corner of the cave.
chapter 3:
The seven cats stood their ground as they heard many paws steps thundering forward. “Who are you?” a tortoiseshell she-cat growled lashing her tail slightly with her teeth bared in a vicious grin. “Calm yourself maplestar” a golden tabby tom mewed gently, laying his tail tip on maplestar shoulder. Echo stepped in front her head held high and she sat down, her eyes narrowed as she looked at the four cats who stood in front with cation. “Who are you all?” echo mewed in a tone of a leader, all the cats stopped talking and looked at the grey she-cat echo lifted her chin and curled her lip in a snarl as she repeated “who are you?” the elder tom stepped up his eyes gleaming with pride. “I am Sunstar of pantherclan” a black she-cat elder spoke up “I am Tigerstar of wolfclan” she said with a slight glare at sunstar, the tom ignored her. “I I’m fawnstar of deerclan” a brown tabby mewed looking around anxiously. “And I am maplestar of foxclan” the tortoiseshell gave a small hiss. “Who are you?” sunstar mewed curiosity pricked at him echo sighed, “I am echo, the leader of the tribe of echoing silence.” Echo looked at the cats then licked her chest fur thinking of what to do next. “Well, well, it’s been a long time…maple” a voice mewed from in the cave. Echo looked back and saw her father shadowstrike with a vicious wicked smile on his face as he looked at the tortoiseshell, she-cat. “Its maplestar now you piece of crow-food!” maplestar spat flattening her ears. “Ah come now darling are you really going to be cold to me?” the tom grinned as he stepped closer and then sat next to his daughter. Echo looked bewildered then as she looked at the gleam in her father’s eye, she had a disturbing thought and it struck her, she hissed with violence, her hackles raised. “she’s, my mother?!” echo gave a screech of horror and rage as her claws ripped into the earth, disgust gripped her stomach, she could not believe it! She was half kittypet! Everyone gasped in confusion and bewilderment. Shadowstrike sighed, “yes, yes she is echo” he glared at maplestar with hatred “so, this sorry excuse for a leader is my daughter?” maplestar spat with a sneer on her face and a snarl of laughter. The two she-cats glared at each other with rage and hatred in their eyes, amber eyes blazing like forest fire. “You take that back! You stupid piece of fox-dung!!” shadowstrike snarled baring his sharp thorn teeth, as he stood up arching his back. Echo gave a soft gasp of surprise, he had never defended her ever in her life and this…this was a change, she was wrong to not trust him.
Show post...
hellooooo I finished chapter 4 tell me how you like it and if you want me to repost the other ones.! i hope you like it :)
Chapter 4
When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.
Huh, strange I wondered. My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.
ALSOOOOOOOOOOOOOO tell me what ya'll think about these cats! and what should the medicine cats name be! and how should the tribe meet the cat?
Allegiances
The tribe of echoing silence
Leader: echoing whispers\echo: a beautiful grey she-cat with amber eyes
guards. (Cats who guard the territory and camp)
Chief guard: hawk that claws the sky\hawk: a white she-cat with blue icy eyes and a scar from her eye to her stomach.
shadow that strikes in darkness\shadow: a jet-black tom with amber eyes.
Fang of fox\fang: a grey tom with black stripes and amber eyes.
Mouse that sleeps in winter\mouse: a dusty brown she-cat
Prey-hunters. (Cats who provide food for the tribe)
Chief prey-hunter: moth that hovers near fire\moth: a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.
Black tooth of bear\tooth: a black tom with hazel eyes.
Rain of storm\rain: a light ginger she-cat.
Blaze of speeding rivers\blaze: a golden tabby tom.
Queens. (She-cats nursing or caring for kits)
fern of falling heather\fern: a dark ginger she-cat.
song of singing crow\crow: a brown she-cat with white paws.
storm of flooded rivers\storm: a black she-cat with a white tail and white stripes.
Cold of frozen frost\frost: a white she-cat with grey paws and hazel brown eyes.
Trainee’s. (Toms and she-cats six moons and older in training)
Raven that flies with wings of black\raven: a black tom with green eyes and a white muzzle as well as white paws.
Wolf of wind\wolf: a light grey tom.
Flame of sun\flame: a ginger she-cat with emerald eyes.
Snow that blankets the ground/snow: a white she-cat with grey leopard spots, and violet eyes
Warriors. (Toms and she-cats in charge of fighting and protecting the tribe)
Snake inside a rock\snake: a grey and white tom.
Ice of frozen water\ice: a dark calico tom with blue eyes.
Grey vine on rock\grey: a long-haired grey tom.
Boulder in water\boulder: a chestnut brown tom
Elders. (Toms and she-cats retired or to injured to continue their duties)
Eye of fox\fox: a pale she-cat who is blind in one eye.
Whisker of soot\soot: a black and white tom with a scarred muzzle. The oldest tom in the tribe.
Grey claw of sky\claw: a grey tom. With a muzzle black from age
Meadow of flowers\meadow: a ginger she-cat who is blind from battle.
Cats outside of the tribe
Pip: an orange and black tom with unusual eyes.
Flash: an orange ginger tom
Spark: a white she-cat with grey splotches.
Twig: a light grey she-cat.
dawn of setting sky\dawn: a light ginger tom
Flicker of light\flicker: a pale tom with grey stripes and a torn ear.
snap of crying eagle\snap: a white she-cat with brown stripes
chapter 2:
“We had an older brother” hawk began, “you mean you had another brother?” echo mewed in astonishment. “Yes, now if you will not interrupt me” hawk looked at echo sternly. Echo flattened her ears in embarrassment. “We had an older brother, and his name was Rabbitwhisker” “rabbitwhisker?” echo gave a hissing laughter. “Yup his name was rabbitwhisker” hawk sighed shaking her head with disappointment “he is the reason snake is the way he is” “what do you mean?” echo tilted her head in confusion. “When I was an apprentice of windclan, he was my mentor and one day me and my siblings were talking and just having fun, and then he walks up and I made a rude comment about him and I, I laughed at him and the others did to…” echo gasped in surprise hawk continued as her bones started to shake with fear and sadness. “and he usually took it as a joke, but I guess this time he was sick of it and so he towered over me and he told me to follow him and so I did” echo arched her eyebrow still listening as she groomed her fur “he led me to snake rocks and I knew it was wrong, I begged him for us to go back but he didn’t say a word, and then I heard a hiss behind me and I spun around but I saw nothing…” hawk’s eyes filled with fear of this memory “and when I looked back I didn’t see him, and then a heartbeat later I felt something grab my neck and I saw with horror that it was him and when I yowled for him to let me go he threw me at a tree and after that I knocked out, but when I woke up I didn’t see him and..and I felt my neck and ear bleeding, and then…” she flattened her ears as she spat with fear and her back was arched and her fur on end. “a-an adder bit my leg, and then as I was crying in pain, he came but he wasn’t trying to help instead he…he clawed my side…slowly.” Echo felt a shiver of fear down her spine as she pictured the dark tom trying to kill his own apprentice. Echo walked over and curled herself around her friend and brushed her muzzle on her cheek in comfort, “its ok, it’s all in the past now your safe, nothing and no one will harm you, I swear by starclan I will give my breath before they can put a paw on you” hawk smiled and laid down next to her purring softly.” thank you, for being my friend echo” Echo smiled then rasped, her tongue over hawks forehead then curled her tail around her and laid down. She perked up as she smelled scents, to many, she started to bristle. Hawk shot up immediately and her eyes became slits of prickling fear. The two she-cats dashed to the cave their pelts brushed together a few times. Snake, ice, moth, grey, and blaze all circled defending the cave as the kits, crow and soot all sheltered inside, shadowstrike stayed in the cave but was in a corner as he was grooming his pelt.
Show post...
it's super good so far! :D
here is book 4! echoing silence, a star rises!!. chapter 1:
The sun had started to rise, as echo blinked her eyes open sleepily, she sat up and opened her jaw in a yawn and stretched her haunches and sat down and she started to groom her pelt until it was smooth. She gave a purr of satisfaction as the cold leaf-bare breeze blew on her fur. She glanced up and over heard hawk talking with soot, she strained her ears a bit to hear them. “Soot, do you think you might have greencough?” hawk asked as the elder started to cough “do not worry about me youngster I just need a bit of catmint, or some chickweed, or maybe honey it doesn’t matter” the elder coughed and sat down as his bones started to shake. Moth walked over, “I will take care of him hawk, you go see if we have some of the herbs” hawk walked over to echo her eyes were wide and full of worry. “he’s getting worse every day, I’ve tried to find the herbs I really have but I can’t find any I think…we might have a cat lost to greencough soon” hawk lowered her head in shame and despair, echo pressed her pelt to the snowy white she-cats fur, hawk perked her head up and they looked into each other’s eyes for a heartbeat. “It will be ok. If anything, starclan is by our side and even if soot does pass, it will be his time, ok please for once stop worrying.” Echo smiled and pressed her nose to hawk’s cheek, hawk purred and licked echo’s ear affectionately. “Thank you echo, um would you like to hunt with me? We are low on prey and moth is busy with soot, and blaze he is tussling with grey” she bared her fangs in a slight smirk and her pointed at the two with her muzzle. Echo rolled her eyes and gave a sigh. “Ok then, let’s go, you wanna race?” Echo smirked, hawk rolled her eyes and cuffed echo on the muzzle and echo jumped back with a giggle “mouse-brain” hawk hissed playfully. “Oh, I’m a mouse-brain am i?” echo growled and slithered towards hawk pounced on her, and hawk squealed in surprise. “Some snake you would make!” hawk laughed and The two scuffled in a play fight for a little bit, and then hawk stood up and shook the snow off her pelt, echo sat up and shook the snow off as well, and she started to groom her fur and cast a glance at hawk who had her eyes closed as she let the sun gleam on her white fur, echo couldn’t help up look at her scar, “hey hawk” echo started to stutter “yes echo?” Hawk looked at the grey she-cat, her blue eyes gleaming like crystals. “I um, I don’t want to make you uncomfortable or anything but…” echo was cut off as hawk placed her tail on echo’s mouth, “I know what you’re about to ask, and no it doesn’t make me uncomfortable.” She looked at her scar then looked back at echo and sat down curing her tail around her paws. “Most cats ask me about my scar and…I tell them the truth.” “And that is?” echo prompt, hawk sighed.
Show post...
thanks :)
ITS ACE!!!!!!!!!
Show post...
yes the rogue by the border is the one & only ace
if you go into the fair (do you know the Sunfall & Crystalblaze trick?) you'll see Ceris outside the tent. All the way to the right you'll see Agatha with Cookie!!! crazy!
It's great!!! How to create the same game :3 and yes, how to save
oop I typed yes when the game asked I want to stop being mates with dust feather D: help
Show post...
welll thats sad, but luckily it wasn't the other way around
if you stop being mates with dusk fall he CRIES when you click him
oh :0
I almost became mates with duskfall in front of dust feather XD
Here are some ideas.
More skins. - (Or colour you self with patterns if possible)
More battles. - It gets boring after a while- A battle every so will be fun.
Gatherings. - Make it more interresting to the game!
Having more litters.- Having more litters with your mate will be great! other wise ill have to go with another.
More toms.- Of you are a she cat, there is only 2 options if you wanna mate. Duskfall and dust feather. If I stop being mates with one, I will not be able to talk to them. It is quite anoyying.
(Dont take this as hate! They are just ideas, the game is great!!)
omg i love all of these! I hope they are added!
i would like all of these
Show post...
Moss-shadow will not be adding any more skins as he wants to do genetically accurate patterns... but I like everything else. (Also there are at least four options as a she cat. Breezesong and Nightwhisper are lesbian)
omg i just found out you can get a pet butterfly by clicking one and release it by clicking it again and I'm obsessed!
question, does anyone want book 3 of my echoing silence series? or...no?
Show post...
yessssssss I love the books :D
Show post...
Stormsong: Chapter 4
Stormkit could hear Cherrytuft calling to her from behind, but she ignored it. She dodged the dens (holes in the ground, as WillowClan cats live underground) as she ran and ran.
As she dashed by the elders' den, Turtlekit's grinning head popped up. "Hey, Stormy!" he called out to her. "The elders were telling a story about- um, Stormkit? Hey, wait up?"
But Stormkit couldn't wait, even for her best friend. It ground at her heart to ignore Turtlekit, who she had leaned on for the few moons she'd been alive, but she couldn't stay close to the nursery or else Cherrytuft would find her, drag her back. That would be cursing her family, and also, though she didn't want to admit this, watching Shadowfall's inevitable death.
She got all the way up to the rogue border and sat there as the world swam in front of her eyes. Rain began to lightly fall, and although it was uncomfortable and cold as it landed on her fur, she stayed where she was. The clouds darkened. Thunder boomed, and lightning crackled the air. She stared up at it. "A storm," she said quietly, then, "A storm. It's-- it's my name."
Stormkit stared up at the sky, so intensely that she didn't notice the shadowy figure of a rogue creeping towards her, sitting beside her, staring at her. He sat there for hours, watching this strange kitten, until night fell and she fell asleep. Then he picked her up in his fangs and padded off into the night.
sry! im just focused on west woods rn...and also i dont think many pple are on rn lol also ITS REALY GOOD
Show post...
its ok i get it
i'm more of a west woods fan these days too :)
Show post...
no I wasn’t online but I still think it’s good :)
this is really good
Show post...
no one is probably reading this anyway butttt here it is I also made a few changes
Chapter 3
The return home
As it got closer I realized that the large thing was a twoleg. I took a deep breath and realized that I was holding my breath the entire time. “It's just a twoleg” said my brother with a big sigh of relief. I felt excitement all the way to my tail tip when I saw her. I knew this twoleg she was our owner! We lived in her den! I knew my brother, Tree knew too when I felt him relax. The twoleg picked us up and I knew my brother was tired when he just let her pick him up. Usually, he would put up a fight and scratch her. I personally never liked being picked up but I was okay with it. The twoleg put us in the back of her monster and got in the belly of it. It was kind of scary riding in the monsters that twolegs ride in but if they always came out okay I knew it was safe. My brother on the other paw pretty much slept in the blankets the whole ride and I was glad he did because I knew if he was awake he would have tried to escape. After about 45 minutes the monster stopped. I thought it was strange because me and my brother did not go that far but I pushed away the thought. The back of it opened and the twoleg scooped me up and picked up my brother. He was still sleeping peacefully. As we walked to the entrance I still felt excited from our adventure but little did I know we were not going home.
Show post...
I'm reading this! It's good :)
Show post...
thx :D
idk if i could make a book but i am sort of starting one for fun, its about a kittypet named Quail and her brother, Bronze. (names might change)
Show post...
Quail is just the best name! I love it :)
if you want kittypet name suggestions:
(Female) Luna, Muffin, Taffy, Kitty, Bella, Lola
(Male) Leo, Simba, Charlie, Oscar, Max, Milo
Show post...
Hello again! I'm writing a Warrior Cats story so here it is! I'm just posting everything I have done so far so you don't have to look for the other ones I hope you like it :D
Prologue
Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought. But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear. After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live” The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced. Even though he is weaker maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…
Chapter 1
Hole in the fence
My first memories were of my mother. I still remember snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. Her name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree. My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes. I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.” One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!” I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.
Chapter 2
Beyond the garden
Beyond the garden was NOTHING like I thought it would be like NOTHING! I imagined lush forests surrounded by berry bushes over a blue sky as I saw holes in the twolegs den. But now that I thought of it I remembered that I could never go through it as much as I tried. Maybe they weren't holes after all. I saw a few trees but mostly I saw more twoleg stone dens. “DID YOU EVEN HEAR ME!” my brother snapped me out of my thoughts. I realized that he had been talking to me for a while. “scardy kitty too scared to say anything!” he said mockingly. I growled, “NO ONE CALLS ME SCARDY KITTY!” I yelled and chased him! I chased him until he started coughing and I realized that something was coming out of a pipe “Move away” I said cautiously. And realized that he was on the ground. “No no no no!” I yelled. Then all of a sudden he jumped at me! “AAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!” I yelled in terror. “Hey, you scared me!” I said, “Ha! I knew you were a scardy kitty!” “NO, I'M No-” I got cut off as my brother said “Sush!” I looked forward and saw a large thing approaching us.
uh... that's it so far tell me if you want more!
Show post...
oh this is amazing actually
wow
i definitely want more
Show post...
Who wants Stormsong chapter 4? Anyone?
Show post...
me I do!
me please!!!
last chapter of the second book!!!
“You look tired I can take second watch if you’d like” echo smiled sweetly looking at hawk who looked exhausted. hawk cleared her throat sitting up straight but failed to hide the sleepiness in her eyes, “no need I am the guard you go in and rest I’ll keep watch” echo sighed rolling her eyes and grabbed hawk by the scruff of her neck and started to drag her into the den. “You are getting sleep and that’s final” echo hissed quietly not to wake anyone, but hawk saw the mischief in her amber eyes as they glowed in the darkness of the cave. “Ok fine” hawk sighed and laid her head on her paws letting sleep taking over. Echo walked out of the cave and watched the night sky, and she could not help but glance at hawk, the white she-cat looked so beautiful like snow, as moonlight shined through the cave and on her pelt, echo felt her ears heat up and a red dust crossed her muzzle, she instantly looked away shaking her head. She sighed shaking her head and twitching her muzzle, she gazed at the sky once more then she laid on her paws and fell asleep, and as she dazed into sleep she listened to the soothing sounds of the night, it was like a silent song of midnight. (lemme know when yall wanna read book 3 XD)
Show post...
omg it's super good! I really want book 3 :)
anyone want more of my book? also if you reply to this, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE reply to my question about, west woods.
in west woods: over borders. does ANYBODY AT ALL know where i can find a stone or rock, to mark littlebirds grave memorial (please PLEASE tell me!!!!1 im begging you!!!!!!)
Show post...
at fallen clan (the cave). Click on the black cat on the right.
chapter 4!!!!!!
“as I was saying” echo continued “until we continue on our journey to our real home, we need to assign ranks, I have been watching you all and I have determined your ranks, step up once I call your name” the cats all looked at each other their eyes full of excitement then looked at echo waiting patiently, as soon as echo had time to think once more she raised her voice against the wind as it started to blow hard. “Ice, snake, greyvine” the three cats padded up and then sat down looking up at her. “you three have shown your strength and bravery, you shall be named as warriors” the cats bowed their heads in acceptance to their new ranks then went to sit back to their places. “Fireblaze, moth, you two have shown your speed and skill, you two shall be prey-hunters” the two cats looked at each other then back at echo bowing their heads and sat at their spots. “Hawk,”- echo paused as she rested her gazed on the beautiful white furred, she-cat. “You have shown your kindness, but also your fierceness and courage, so if you accept you shall be a guard” the she-cats blue eyes were blazing with pride as she mewed “I do” she bowed her head and sat at her spot. “And now I shall welcome our new additions and give them their new names” the cats looked at each other with confused expressions “fireblaze, greyvine, crowsong, sootwhisker, flamekit, wolfkit, and ravenkit, step up please” all the cats stepped up sitting down, the kits sat by their mother. “If you are to be in our tribe you need to be named as us, greyvine, fireblaze, and sootwhisker, I now name you, blaze, grey, and soot.” A wave of purring approval erupted from the cats and the three toms sat back at their spots. “Crowsong, flamekit, wolfkit, and ravenkit, I now name you crow, flame, wolf, and raven.” The cats nodded and the kits trotted back to their father blaze, followed by crow. Echo lifted her chin then a growl started in her throat, “shadowstrike, step forth” the tom padded over and sat down his eyes filled with anger and pain. “as you have said shadowstrike you will be leaving until you get back on your paws, but I have decided you will leave as soon as the wind as died down” shadowstrike couldn’t help but show fear, his eyes became wide with uncertainty, the cats started to murmur to one another, “what do you mean echo?, you said that he could leave once he gets his strength up” it was grey who had spoken. Echo stifled a snap of retort and sighed. “Fine, and he can come with us to gather cats from the clans and rouges and loners” echo glared at him and unsheathed her claws “one bad move and I will have my cats throw you aside, or I will turn you into crow-food myself. Do you understand me?” shadowstrike let out a low growl, hawk started to unsheathe her claws ready to leap at the tom. But then shadowstrike nodded looking away from his daughter, and so hawk sheathed her claws as relief flooded over her. “We move out at sunrise!” Echo yowled then leaped gracefully off the rock and walked to her nest, hawk watched after echo and felt her ears start to heat up. She shook her head roughly and then walked to the entrance of the cave to keep watch. Hawk looked at the sky as drops of rain started to dampen her pelt, she gave a soft groan and shook the raindrops off her fur, she then looked into the cave and saw everyone was asleep and then her eyes quickly snapped to where echo slept and with alarm she saw echo was not in her nest she looked around wildly for the grey she-cat. Then with a prickle of fear hawk felt something across her spine…she whipped her head around to see echo, the she-cats amber eyes were staring into her own, she then relaxed “don’t be so tense on your first night ok” echo chuckled sitting down tucking her paws underneath her. Hawk gave a shy smile and flicked her tail with embarrassment, “yes well I didn’t know where you were, so I had to become tense, I am a guard of course” she mewed, echo rolled her eyes and muttered “well I AM the leader so aren’t I allowed to wander? Besides, I could not sleep” hawk giggled knowing it was pointless to argue with the cat who was her friend, and her leader. “Your right” echo stood up shaking the rain off her grey pelt, and started to groom it smooth, hawk shook the sleep from her eyes and sat up, she looked up at the sky and the rain, it started to clear.
Show post...
thanks! I was waiting for Chapter 4!
Show post...
here is my book I put the first part in case you missed it. I hope you like it :)
Moon
Prologue
Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought.
But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear. After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live”
The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced. Maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…
Chapter 1
My first memories were of my mother. I was snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. My mother's name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree.
My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes.
I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.”
One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!”
I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.
BTW does ANYONE know where i can find a stone to get for littlebirds memorial on west woods: over borders? bc im stuck...idk what to do...
chapter 3!! As she came to the cave, she saw moth was talking to the kits, and ice was sharing tongues with the elder. And the two warriors were still prickling with worry, and hawk was sharing tongues with the queen. “how’s everything going?” she mewed to the cats. “Everything is going well”- hawk started then when she looked at echo her eyes widened in fear “dear starclan what happened?!!” snake yowled and snake, ice, and hawk rushed to her. “My father happened” she grumbled as she bent to lick her wounds. Echo shot her head up immediately as she saw shadowstrike limping towards them, she purred softly with a soft smile. “So, you have finally decided to come to your senses?” echo meowed as shadowstrike came forward. “I will stay for a few days, for until I get back on my paws” he lifted his chin with a glare at echo “but I am not staying, and so…that makes us enemies.” echo sighed shaking her head in mock despair. “Fine, you are very lucky I am merciful, and I do not have my cats kill you instantly.” Moth looked up and walked towards echo with a gentle smile. “The kits names are wolfkit, flamekit, and ravenkit.” Flamekit was a ginger tabby like her father fireblaze, wolfkit was a light grey tom, and ravenkit was a jet-black tom with a white muzzle. “Are they willing to join the tribe?” echo mewed “oh yes, they are! Flamekit is very eager, and ravenkit and wolfkit are very intrigued about the ranks about the tribe” echo purred, and her tail flicked away a bit of snow. “that’s great, could you tell me about the ranks as well?” Echo questioned her friend, moth smiled “of course, come and join the kits” she chuckled. “And so, the guards will be responsible for guarding the camp and the hunters are in charge of hunting prey and providing food for the tribe” moth continued, flamekit listened to moth her eyes wide as the full moon. “But wont the guards be allowed to eat and sleep and hunt for themselves?” ravenkit asked twitching his white muzzle, moth giggled “of course they will silly, you think the guards will just stay there forever? The guards with change…shifts every time the prey-hunters go to hunt” wolfkit looked puzzled “but why?” he asked. Moth continued “because the guards that had been there they will be able rest, and the same will be for the prey-hunters” echo sat on a rock in the cave and gazed at the cats, and then she lifted her head slightly, her fur blew in the cold breeze and snowflakes started to fall onto her grey pelt. As hawk gazed into echo’s eyes she saw hope and pride in the she-cats eyes, hawk’s white fur started to shine like snow as moonlight shined on it, then echo mewed the words of a clan meeting, or in this case…a tribe gathering “every cat old enough to hunt in the cave gather around me for our very first meeting of the tribe” the cats stopped chattering like magpies and turned to echo who sat confidently on the rock. “THIS is your tribe? your nothing but a bunch of mice waiting to be hunted and you barley have a camp to shelter yourselves, you call this a tribe? this is pathetic” shadowstrike yowled with laughter, echo’s blood boiled like a flaming fire and her amber eyes glazed with rage, her hackles raised. “You have one chance to shut your muzzle! And if not, I will rip you to shreds so SHUT UP YOU PIECE OF RAT-DUNG” she yowled, her voice drowned with rage. mews of laughter and growls of approval erupted from the cats, shadowstrike pinned his ears and narrowed his eyes at her and then stared at his paws.
chapter 2!!
the cats walked up from the grass to face the warriors. “Who are you?!” greyvine snarled, shadowstrike scrunched his nose up in disgust “so, you lived huh?” he hissed at echo “yes I did father, why are you here?” she lifted her head in defiance. She bared her fangs in a snarl lashing her tail viscously. “What, is this your new home? Or are you living with twolegs?” he snickered pawing closer “I chose my path father! I clawed my way up to survive for moons!!” she yowled with pure rage, hawk stared in amazement, echo had a temper but this…this was a whole new level of anger. “Let me at him, I’ll make him wish he never lived!!” ice growled digging his claws in the earth “no” echo mewed coldly lifting her chin and glared at shadowstrike her eyes blazing like a forest fire. “Ice, hawk. Take these cats back to our cave, make sure they get enough food, and make the elder, queen and her kits a soft enough nest” echo meowed not taking her eyes off her father, with eyes of stone. “But…” ice started then trailed off looking at the trembling and hungry cats “now ice!!!” echo snarled whipping her head at him. the tom nodded and looked at the cats, their eyes full of worry but they all nodded and followed hawk and ice to the cave. Echo watched them and then when they were gone into the distance, she snarled glaring at shadowstrike who just grinned, “let’s see what you got echo” shadowstrike laughed getting into an attack position, echo snarled lashing her tail and bared her fangs, and her eyes became slits, she leaped at him with a battle cry, taken by surprise shadowstrike leaped back splattering snow from behind him, he then leaped at her, claws unsheathed, and they battled young and old, grey and black, amber eyes blazing with the hunger of battle. Echo gave a grin seeing shadowstrike getting worn out. “Had enough you old bone bag?!” she spat proudly with a sneer on her face “never!!!” He yowled leaping at her and clawed her back, she yowled with pain then she snarled and then she bared her teeth and he yowled with pain as her fangs met his shoulder and claws raked his stomach, she kicked him off her with her hind paws. Shadowstrike leaped off her blood dripped from his wounds that echo had inflicted, and the blood dripped onto the snow turning it a scarlet red. “I am not a monster, so I will give you once chance, you may join my tribe, and live healthy, or be our enemy and be killed on sight when seen. I am sure you will make the right choice” she mewed blood was dripping from her sides, and her back slightly, her ear had been torn as well, she turned around and walked towards the cave, she cast a glance at shadowstrike who looked weak, and starving. She sighed. Has she made the right choice? Even though he was her blood he had put her through a lot of pain when she was in the clan.
Bet we are all giving you a bunch of motivation xD
lol actaully, this book has been done for....awhile now LOL
Ah! That makes more sense lol
and i just realized, echo's father....echo told her father he was gonna leave but...in the next two books HE JOINS THE TRIBE XD i cant belive i did that....
alright heres the second book!!!!!! echoing silence, book 2: silent song. chapter 1:
It had been many moons since echo and her friends had begun there journey past the clans, “we should stop and rest” hawkpaw now hawk, muttered as she sat down. “We need to keep going!” snake growled “I can smell a fox” ice nodded to his brother, and moth looked at echo expectingly. Echo sighed “I agree with hawk, we need rest, but I also agree with you snake, I smell the fox as well” she mewed looking at the tom as he started to bristle but then his fur laid flat. “I suggest we find a cave or an old fox or badger den” moth meowed suggesting, echo perked up with a purr. “Yes, and we’ll need prey for each of us then tomorrow we will start moving again” echo looked up at the sky, the sun begun turning the sky a scarlet blood red, as the sun started to set. “Look! Over there!” hawk yowled with pride as she came dashing to an old badger set. The five cats all purred with joy, echo rushed over to hawk and pressed her muzzle to hers. Hawk looked at echo with eyes full of pride, ice gave a gentle purr. “Finally, she’s opening up to somebody.” Moth murmured to her brothers, and they nodded. The stars glowed in the night sky as snake, hawk, and ice came back from hunting. Moth and echo were talking about plans for the tribe, echo was grooming her fur sleek smooth listening to moth’s ideas. “So, I’m thinking that for the ranks, every cat as old as 6 moons and older should be called trainee’s and the cats older than that, we should have warrior’s, guards, and hunters.” Echo looked at moth her eyes full of thought. “I like it” ice padded up with a vole in his jaws, and he dropped it at his sister’s paws. “For you moth” he smiled then walked over and grabbed a rabbit eating it. Echo perked up her ears as she heard a rustling in the grass. Snake unsheathed his claws, his hackles starting to rise. Echo looked at snake with calm eyes. Ice leaped onto the rock of the cave, and he gave a yowl as he saw cats coming “it looks like it 4 toms, a she-cat and 3 kits” he told echo, “Kits?! Out here?!” echo yowled her voice edged with worry, as she looked at the snow under her paws. “they’ll freeze without food!!” hawk yowled as she raced towards the strange cats. “Wait!” snake snarled stopping his sister, “move snake!” hawk hissed aiming a paw at her brother. Snake dodged her paw and growled. “We don’t know if these cats are a threat or not hawk!” echo dashed in front of them and growled. “Enough! Snake, think we need cats, yes? I think we should be kind and help these cats, and offer them shelter, they will think of joining us” snake hesitated then nodded. Echo looked at hawk and ice, “you two come with me to greet the cats” she then looked at moth and snake “you two guard the cave” they all nodded. echo, hawk, and ice all stalked through the grass towards the cats. Echo saw that one tom was a ginger tabby, and another was a long-haired grey tom, she then saw a black and white one with a scarred muzzle that gave away his age. And then she looked at a black tom her eyes widen with horror as the tom looked hauntingly familiar, she was desperately searching her mind then she remembered those toms
were firepaw, greypaw, and her father…shadowstrike, ice looked at the she-cat she was a deep brown tabby with white paws. Echo took a deep shaky breath and padded through the grass getting closer to listen to them. “Greyvine, I need to rest” the elder tom croaked. the ginger tom looked back to the elder “we need to keep going sootwhisker.” Sootwhisker glared at the tom, “I said I need rest fireblaze! My paws are aching!” sootwhisker hissed his hackles starting to rise. “My kits need rest as well, shadowstrike could we hunt? We all need food” the she-cat looked at shadowstrike. “of course, crowsong” the tom mewed with a soothing silky tone; echo hissed with disgust “he’s faking the kindness” she growled through gritted teeth. Hawk pressed her pelt to echo’s to calm her. “We should stay as calm as possible; we don’t know what their capable of” hawk whispered soothingly “I know what shadowstrike is capable of” echo snarled “I’ll take care of him”
let me know ANYONE if yall want to read the second book!!
Show post...
i do!
heres chapter four! the final chapter of book 1!!! hope you all like it!!
Chapter 4: embracing the future.
“what’s wrong echo?” moth’paw laid her tail on echo’s shoulder. “I um…my name isn’t really echo” ice’paw bristled and his eyes filled with fear he stepped a paw closer to her starting to unsheathe his claws “who are you then?” he asked softly, echo did not answer. “I SAID WHO ARE YOU FOX-HEART?!” He snapped and losing patience he clawed her muzzle reopening her wound shadowstrike gave her. “m-my name is e-echo’paw o-of th-thunderclan!” she whimpered, fear in her eyes, and trembling. Snake’paw snarled “I knew she smelled different!” moth’paw and hawk’paw stopped the toms from doing anything farther. “Boys stop!!!” moth’paw hissed “she lied to us! TO ME!!!!” ice’paw yowled with pure rage “she might have had a reason for it ice’paw!” hawkpaw growled her tail lashing from side to side and she looked at echo’paw blushing faintly and then she sat down averting echopaw’s gaze “well? Explain yourself you fur-ball!” snake’paw hissed, echo’paw sighed and explained her story. “and when I didn’t answer him again he scarred me and dragged me out a-and said that..thunderclan has no need for weaklings…l-like me” echo’paw trembled and collapsed but before she fell hawkpaw dashed to catch her, the siblings all looked at each other sympathy in their eyes snakepaw sighed “we know what its feel like to be disowned by your parents” hawkpaw whimpered and looked at her paws clearly hurt, ice’paw snarled “our mother told us that she wishes that a badger would kill us and she wished we we’re never born.” Ice’paw flattened his ears in anger “she said that we are disappointments to her” moth’paw muttered as she hugged her sister “I’m so sorry, I never knew it was that hard for you all” Echopaw mewed her eyes filled with sadness. “But what about your father? Doesn’t he calm her down?” snakepaw yowled with fury clearly offended by the she-cats question. “Our father is dead! And when he was alive, he never cared two mouse tails about us!!, if he did, he sure as badgers stripes didn’t show it.” echo’paw gasped taken back by his anger but in all she did understand his anger. “What about your mother? Does she help your father?” ice’paw meowed, daring to ask the same question, he jumped back, startled as echo’paws eyes became slits of rage and she unsheathes her claws and dug them into the ground, they were all taken back by her sudden rage “I never knew my mother, shadowstrike stole me from her when I was born and I’m sure since she never stopped him she never cared a fox’s fangs about me!!!” she yowled. Ice’paw grinned a devilish smile playing on his lips, knowing this was a daring sentence, because he and his siblings were from windclan and echo’paw formally from thunderclan so they would be breaking the code being friends, he spoke up, his voice laced with determination, “I say we join together, and we all run away, we won’t have to worry about anything or anyone else” echo’paw smirked “I like that idea but we should actually create a clan, no wait…not a clan, but a tribe and, we should have our own rules and ranks and ways of doing things” she scanned around the four cats, they all were grinning and smirking with tails lashing. “But who will be the leader? And we need a tribe name.” snake’paw meowed echo’paw smirked “I will be leader but first we will need to find a home, and cats to join us before I take the title” she purred, the cats all meowed in agreement. “And last of all we need a tribe name” echo’paw mewed “I think I know what we should be called” hawkpaw muttered shyly shuffling her paws against the soft grass. Mothpaw gave a smirk to her sister snakepaw let a purr rumble in his throat. Ice’paw smiled “say your idea sis” ice’paw meowed laying his tail on hawk’paws shoulder, hawk’paw smiled her eyes beaming with pride. “I think we should be named the tribe of echoing silence” all the cats perked at the name knowing that name suited them perfectly, they all yowled in agreement and echo’paw knew it was the start of a new story, a new life, a new journey. As they walked toward the sunset, echo’paw looked back past the hills to thunderclan camp she realized, she will never go back to her old life, and so she turned and walked off with her friends, and after that. She never looked back.
Aww :) 1000/10 best book ever
~ Chapter Two ~
Avery climbed into the back of her mom’s blue car and closed the door.
“How was school?” her mom asked as she always did. It didn’t annoy Avery the way a repeated question like that may annoy other teenagers. She liked that her mom cared, and it didn’t feel like she was just saying it because it was routine. Her mom began to drive.
“Actually, it was kinda weird,” Avery confessed.
“How so?” Mrs. Clay asked, looking at Avery in the rearview mirror.
“I think I’ll wait until the whole family is together to explain it all. That way I’ll only have to tell the story once,” she said.
“Ok,” her mom replied after a moment. Then she asked, “Today was Finals for this first semester, right?”
“It was!” Avery said. She told her mom about how everything went fairly smoothly, besides students not staying calm while the teacher reviewed their grades. After she was finished she asked, “Ryan home from Wings Academy, right? For winter break?”
“Mhm, he is. We’re going to make his favorite for dinner, too. Tuna and mac,” Mrs. Clay said.
Avery smiled. Tuna mixed with Kraft mac’n’cheese was definitely her older brother’s favorite. Avery remembered this one time when Ryan was probably about seven and he ate three bowls of mac’n’cheese. He would’ve eaten a fourth if there had been more, but there wasn’t and six-year-old Avery didn’t want to give her’s up. Apparently he had skipped snack between lunch and dinner on purpose so he could be extra hungry.
Avery also loved mac’n’cheese, though she couldn’t understand why Ryan liked mixing tuna into it. It ruined the texture! On its own, mac’n’cheese was creamy and warm. But when you added room-temperature tuna, it just was not right.
“I feel like I haven’t seen Ryan in forever,” Avery remarked. “When was the last time he came home? Thanksgiving?”
“Yep,” Avery’s mom said. “Which, if I recall correctly, was only three weeks ago.”
“Mom,” Avery said.
“What?” Mrs. Clay said.
“Did you hear yourself?” she asked.
“What do you mean?” her mom asked, twisting back to look at Avery for a moment before turning back to the road.
“You said ‘only’. Like as if three weeks isn’t a long time to not see your son,” Avery said teasingly.
Her mom rolled her eyes. “You know what I mean.”
“Do I?” Avery said challengingly.
Mrs. Clay laughed and shook her head. By now they had turned onto their street. After a few seconds, they came to their house.
The Clays’ house was average in size; single-story, three bedrooms, three bathrooms, a small yard. The pillars on each side of the garage and by the porch were inlaid with rectangle blue stones in an irregular pattern that gave the house a sort of natural feel. The front yard was small and had a single willow set off on the left side. The beautiful tree was surrounded by tall grass that had purple and blue wildflowers scattered throughout it. The walkway was made of large, round gray stones with bright green moss filling in the gaps.
Mrs. Clay pulled into the driveway and turned the car off. They both climbed out and each grabbed their bags; Mrs. Clay her red purse, and Avery her dark green backpack. Avery watched as her mother’s purse moved to her hand without her touching it. Mrs. Clay was a Moonblazer, meaning she could manipulate energy relating to moonlight. This ability also gave her telekinesis.
As the two of them walked up towards the front door the sweet scent of the wildflowers filled their lungs. Avery took a deep breath, and as she let it out she realized that soon she wouldn’t be coming home every day after school. She would be at Wings Academy, the most prestigious high school in the land. The school that everyone wanted to get into. In the principal's office, she hadn’t thought about what it would be like to not come home every day. Of course, they had talked about packing, but now it was all starting to truly sink in.
Mrs. Clay pulled her keys out and unlocked the front door. She pushed the door open and stepped inside, Avery close behind. Avery closed the front door, and when she turned she saw Ryan standing a few feet away.
“Ryan!” she exclaimed, and embraced him. “I’ve missed you so much!”
“I’ve missed you too,” he said shyly, his hands in his pockets. Ryan was the type of boy who was reserved and didn’t talk much, so Avery wasn’t surprised by his demeanor.
“You’ve grown so much since summer!” Avery commented.
Ryan shrugged, but it was true. When Ryan had first left for Wings Academy, Avery and he had been nearly the same height. Ryan had only been half an inch taller. But now he was a clear inch taller than Avery, if not an inch and a half. Of course, Avery had seen Ryan on multiple occasions since last summer, but for some reason the change felt especially noticeable this time.
Besides his height, not much had changed about him. He still had the same wavy red hair, which was combed back neatly, and the same shy smile he had worn since he was little.
“So how’s school been?” Ryan asked.
“Fine. Today was finals for the first semester, which ended a bit differently than I’d anticipated,” she finished. When Ryan looked at her confusedly she said, “I’ll explain at dinner.”
Show post...
this is good :)
it would be cooler if there was a bit more suspense at the end, but i really like it!
does anyone want chapter 4? the final chapter of the first book?
Show post...
THE FINAL CHAPTER?! that is so sad
but yes I want it!!
dont worry lol i have three other books of the franchise that ive made XD
NOOOURR THE FINAL ONE? But yes ples
i feel like this is no longer a wc chat XD its a story chat LOL
Show post...
me too LOL
FR
HERE WE GO! Constructive criticism is wanted :D
Chapter One: Who?
“Finally, you woke up!” I heard Rori say as I lifted my head from my desk. “Yeah, yeah.” I mumbled under my breath. As I reached into my bag to grab a piece of gum, I had found an old note from my mom saying “Hey dear! I hope you’re having a good day so far. I forgot to pack your lunch though… so sorry! – Mom.” I smiled as I remember when I had first read it in 4th grade. “Mrs. Crow, is your bag more interesting than my lesson?” I darted my head up to see my teacher, Mrs. Yarrow, looking at me with a serious stare. I glanced around to see everyone staring at me. My face turned red as tomato. “Sorry Mrs.” I answer quickly. I swept my hair back behind my ear, as I tried not to look at everyone looking at me. As the bell rang, I quickly packed my bag and ran out the class room to my locker. I shoved my bag into the locker then wiped the sweat off my face. I walked to lunch while trying to find my friends.
I spotted River walking out of the library; she always has her face in a book. “River!” I shouted. She quickly turned her head to look at me, dropping her book in the process. “Oh, hey Imara!” River exclaimed. “Do you know where Rori and Amber are?” I asked. “I saw Amber just a bit ago… but I can’t seem to remember when I saw Rori last.” River said. “Huh...” I said concerned. We both walked to lunch, keeping our eyes peeled for Amber and Rori. I walked over to a table and sat down waiting for River to get her lunch. Before River could come sit by me, Laura Hopkin sat by me. “Hey!” Laura greeted me. “Uhm, hi.” I said slowly. “Hey Laura, have you seen Rori at all?” I asked. She looked at me confuesed, “Who…?” “Rori Hanns? Your cousin?” I said. “I don’t have any cousin named Rori.” She said as she raised her eyebrow. Laura walked away from me, worried. River and Amber came over a bit after Laura left. “Guys guess what!” I announced to the two. “Chicken butt?” They both guessed synchronized. “No what?” I looked at them with a concerned look on my face. “Anyway,” I said, “Laura didn’t know who Rori was! She acted like she didn’t exist!” There was a huge akward silence. “Who?” Amber asked.
I looked at them and said, “Is this a joke…?” Amber scoffed, “No? Who is Rori?” I heard Amber ask. I gasped under my breath. “You’re kidding.” I stuttered. “Imara are you okay?” River asked. I started to stutter my words, just saying gibberish at that point. The bell rang and Amber quickly left, River swiftly followed behind. Hours later, I headed towards the bus pickup. I spotted Amber and River talking to each other. They glanced over at me and quickly went onto the bus. I sighed. I entered the bus and headed to the back. I sat down and pulled my sketch book out of my bag and started doodling. As I watched everyone talk to their friends, happy, but I couldn’t feel that in that moment. I was more worried about what happened to Rori. I looked out my window when the bus passed by Rori’s house, and it was just trees. I could’ve sworn I saw one of the trees glitch. I closed my eyes in attempt to try to relax, but the bus hit a bump and I jumped awake. “Last stop is coming up!” I heard the bus driver say. I put my sketchbook back into my bag, and got ready to leave. As the bus pulled to a stop, I walked up to the door slowly, but I didn’t realize some one was sticking out their leg to trip me. “Hey!” I screeched as I fell. I heard two girls laugh, “Sorry!” I heard one say. I got up and walked to the front of the bus ready to leave. The doors seemed to refuse to open. I gently pushed the door to open but nothing worked. “Uhm, could I get some help?” I asked politely. I watched as the bus driver pressed the open-door button multiple times but to no prevail. I pushed against the door and the door busted open causing me to fall out. All I could hear was the laughter from everyone on the bus. I quickly got up and fast walked to the front door of my house. Not realizing I left my bag on the bus; I turned around in a panic just to see the bus had left. I sighed in anger sitting down by a tree. I waited hours for my mother to return to unlock the front door.
Finally, after hours I watched her car pull into the driveway. I watched her walk up to the front door unlocking it. I snuck up behind her. “AH!” I heard my mother scream. “Sorry mom!” I said apologetically, rubbing the back of my neck. “What were you doing?! You should be asleep by now.” She scolded me. “Sorry I left my bag on the bus so I couldn’t unlock the door.” I said bashfully. My mother rolled her eyes and walked into the house. I walked to my room and closed the door. I laid down onto my bed, waiting for pure relation to come over my body. Right as I drifted off to sleep, I remembered how my friends didn’t know who Rori was. (END OF CHAPTER ONE)
Show post...
The Disappearing Cousin of Imara Crow
LOL
this is great!!
Thanks lol, but Rori is just Imaras best friend, sorry that you misunderstood it lol xD
Show post...
ohhh oops :)
Show post...
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA Its so good!
ty :)
Show post...
this is really good. I want chapter 2! Also... I can't find you in my story's comments, are you an over borders fan nowadays? (dont feel bad, i kinda am too)
Sorry lol. Dw chapter two is in works as I haven't finished this book yet (just started last month lol). And kinda? I cant figure out how to change the tail color- (On over borders)
Show post...
on top of the settings, there are some green leaves pointing up. click on each green leaf to switch to a different set of settings. one of them will be tails.
OMG TYY
Show post...
I know I felt the same way when I figured that out
Show post...
Stormsong: Chapter 3
"What's... what's wrong with Dadda?" asked Stormkit, eyes tearing up. Cherrytuft purred gently into Stormkit's ear. "Don't you worry, Stormy-Storm."
"Daddy's not supposed to be on the floor like that!"
Shadowfall lay on the ground, twitching and writhing in pain. Occasionally he coughed, then bent over sharply, as if the small sound had caused his chest to catch on fire. "Daddy!" cried Stormkit. She began to wail. Then she abruptly stopped. "Is this... the bad luck?"
"The what?! Who told you about that?" said Cherrytuft.
"I heard you talking about it yesterday," said Stormkit.
"You know you were a bad omen? Oh, baby-"
"I was a... what?! I..." Stormkit stopped, standing rigid, silent. "Stormkit, I'm sorry, I didn't mean- " started Cherrytuft, scooping the kit in for a hug, but she wriggled away. "I made Daddy sick! I can't be around anymore! I'm going to- I'm going to leave!"
"No, Stormy, I-"
"I won't leave camp. Not yet, anyway. Don't worry about me. I'm doing you a favor, letting you never see me again." Stormkit leapt out of the nursery in one single bound, running with all her might. She didn't know where she'd go, but she'd go somewhere far, far away. She knew there was no saving Shadowfall.
But she could save Cherrytuft.
THAT IS SO SAD OMG
Show post...
is that a good thing or a bad thing LOL
Good dw lol
Show post...
um why am I not getting any replies besides yours? i thought i had four fans.
ARE YOU THE ONLY ONE NOW?!
or is everyone else just working on their own stories XD
everyone is probably writing their own books xD
i wonder what happens next
Show post...
chapter 4 has already come out, read that to find out! :)
AMAZING! But it's so sad :(
heres chapter 3! borders and bonds!
Chapter 3: borders and bonds
“what’s a rouge like you doing around here? Don’t you know this is windclan territory? And by the looks of your scars, you are in no mood to fight” he gave a smirk sitting down with his tail curled neatly next to his paws. Echo bristled “are you calling me weak?” she hissed curling her lip revealing thorn sharp teeth, the tom chuckled “of course not…kitty” he circled her with a grin across his muzzle and his eyes gleaming “I just think you need rest because whoever you fought, they gave you a tough time.” The tom licked his paw drawing it over his ear and his eyes softened the threat faded from his eyes and his eyes were filled with friendliness, “my name is ice’paw, I am an apprentice of windclan a strong one at that! I will be a warrior soon I just need three more moons”- the tom grumbled -“of dumb apprentice duties.” “I’m on a border patrol right now and my clan has already had their share of prey so luckily I’m able to eat.” Ice’paw purred “wanna share a mouse or two? You look like you haven’t eaten in days” he meowed as he gave his chest fur a few licks “yes please, but won’t your clanmates punish you if they find you allowing a rouge like me onto your borders and eating your prey?” echo mewed questioning the tom tilting her head to the side, ice’paw chuckled “don’t worry tallstar is pretty understanding so no he won’t, but ya my clanmates might not agree with it” he meowed as he munched on a mouse he had caught and passed a rabbit to her. Echo munched on the rabbit, her ears pricked as she heard cats coming and by the sound of it there were three of them, she started to bristle, ice’paw gave a soft smirk with a glance at her. “Do not worry it is just my siblings if you are thinking they are gonna hurt you your wrong, they will not ok, your safe. Well snake’paw may attempt to pounce on you, but I won’t allow him to I promise you” echo nodded her fur laid flat and the 3 apprentices came closer “WHAT IN STARCLAN is a flea-bitten rouge doing on our territory ice’paw?!” a white and grey tom identified as snake’paw snarled and glared at echo “calm down snake’paw by the looks of it, she’s not a threat to us” a tortoiseshell she-cat purred echo smiled and sat down, another she-cat who was a white tabby with a scar along her eye down to her side shuffled her paws shyly “I’m echo, what are your names?” echo looked at the she-cats and the tom with a sweet smile. “I’m Moth’paw” the tortoiseshell she-cat purred “I’m hawkpaw” the tabby mewed shyly. “I’m snake’paw” the tom growled his fur still a bit bristling, Moth’paw cuffed her brother’s ear with a sheathed paw snake’paw gave a hiss and growled forcing his fur to lie flat and sheathed his claws, “and you already know me, my names ice’paw” the calico tom said with a bright smile. echo smiled at them all her heart filling with happiness, and the four all chatted until sunset, they shared prey and, then her heart sank, knowing that if these cats were gonna be her friends, she can’t hide the truth from them, and she flattened her ears in sadness the siblings all looked at echo in confusion.
:O this is so good omg
Show post...
this is amazing
WHAT HAPPENS NEXT
Show post...
does anyone want chapter 3 of Stormsong?
HECK YEAH
Show post...
ok ok then i'll work on it :)
Show post...
I JUST WROTE IT!!!!
Show post...
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSS :D
does anyone want chapter 3 of my story?
Show post...
i do!
YES >:D
Show post...
meeeee
LOL beekit has become beewhistle, and riverkit has become riverbreeze