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Chapter 1

A kit opened her eyes for the first time ever. Her mom, Berrybush, next to her. Her father, Robinberry, guarding the nursery. She see's another kit in the den next to her. 

"Oh would you look at that Goldentuft! Deerkit opened her eyes!" Berrybush shouted exitiedly. 

Goldentuft replies "Same with Shrewkit!" Goldentuft says proudley. 

'So my name's Deerkit, and that creme kit is Shrewkit?' She thought.

 Shrewkit padded over to her. 

"Hi! I'm Shrewkit!" She said. 

"I'm Deerkit!" Deerkit responded. 

"I just wish Lynxmoon could live to see his kit...." Goldentuft sniffled. 

"Don't worry. I bet he's watching his kit, and soon to come kits" Berrybush comforted, as she stared at Goldentuft's swollen stomach, "from Starclan.".

Robinberry pads over.

"Oh, the kit's are awake!" He says happily.

These stories are so good!

If you like it i can make a prologe, backstories, more chapters, i can also post art, and i might hold an art competition.

The descriptions for the characters will poste

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It’s so good! If it was a real book I would buy it for sure!

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I'm not posting anymore chapter to sry

im working on looking up a good book publishing app for my books :D so you may be able to read them

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hey people I decided to quit online art and just did what I’m good at this is Honeystripe I used pastels for it and if you're going to say I didn’t make it can you just leave? My hands were KILLING me when I made this







actually impressive, haven't seen if u have other art u commented

thanks I did but those were me trying online art they… failed 

saw it, switching mediums can be tough

THAT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

Thanks!

Nobody is good at online art unless you have a touchscreen and a stylus on tablet, a mouse is so hard

even still, it's not the same as real art.

wow! this is AMAZING!!!

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thank you!

I'm going to try my luck at making a story because why not

Nobody abandoned y'all (okay maybe most of them did) but not me! Although sometimes I just come to this game to read all of y'all's stories, all of you should be authors, they are amazing!

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Hey I made yet Another warrior cat drawing! This one wasn’t too rushed so it’s not that bad but i is still bad but I’m posting it anyway because it took me a while I’m really bad at online art


Awsome

Did you... trace your profile pic?

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it’s also funny that moonheart was my oc for 3 years

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it’s so cuteee

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Hi

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Hi

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I made my own story! Its called 

Deerstar's life

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deerstar?! as in my oc echoing whispers grandmother?!?!!?!

me: "um...shadowstrike...your mother is here-"

shadowstrike: "oh starclan..."

echo: "whos here father?" 

shadowstrike: "uh...your grandmother...." 

echo: "i have a-"

me: "nope i aint dealing with this fam drama!!" *dashes away*

Woah... WHAT?! Well, does his gma become Deerstar? Cause she does

Yes 😂 and shadowstrike is scared of his mother because she's so strict LOL

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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I’m sorry! I have sooooooooooooooo much homework 

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I tried to make art instead of creating it at generated and it’s… so bad just take a look



it looks pretty good, also yay proof that everyone is still alive

Ha I think Im alive maybe your hallucinating

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😭 

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thats actually really good

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I DIDN'T

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AI generated anime Deathberrypaw


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They look like duskfall

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wow he actually does. 

AI generated Cherrytuft & Stormpaw

AWSOME!!!

What app is this?

https://perchance.org/ai-character-generator. It's a free website. MAKE SURE TO CHANGE THE STYLE TO "NO STYLE" BEFORE USING, otherwise you'll get anime cats lol.

ok thank you!

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hahahaha nice

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ai generated dragonstar

Nice

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What app is this?

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I am 

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The one above? Yes. Have you red the newest addition to dragonstar? It is above the ai storm song. If you haven’t read the first few chapters it’s beneath the stormsong

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post more chapters

Sry I am not going to post any more chapter of my book

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wow everyone is making AI images since I made my Stormsong one

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haha lol, are you using the perchance one?

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yes

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this one

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What app is this?

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It’s still really good

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I like it

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I am posting all my chapters if you missed any



MoonHearts journey 




Prologue

  Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought. But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear.  After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live” The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced.  Even though he is weaker maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…

Chapter 1 

  My first memories were of my mother. I still remember snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. Her name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree.  My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes. I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.” One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!” I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.

Chapter 2

   Beyond the garden was NOTHING like I thought it would be like NOTHING! I imagined lush forests surrounded by berry bushes over a blue sky as I saw holes in the twolegs den. But now that I thought of it I remembered that I could never go through it as much as I tried. Maybe they weren't holes after all. I saw a few trees but mostly I saw more twoleg stone dens. “DID YOU EVEN HEAR ME!” my brother snapped me out of my thoughts. I realized that he had been talking to me for a while. “scardy kitty too scared to say anything!” he said mockingly. I growled, “NO ONE CALLS ME SCARDY KITTY!” I yelled and chased him! I chased him until he started coughing and I realized that something was coming out of a pipe “Move away” I said cautiously. And realized that he was on the ground. “No no no no!” I yelled. Then all of a sudden he jumped at me! “AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!” I yelled in terror. “Hey, you scared me!” I said, “Ha, I knew you were a scardy kitty!” “NO, I'M No-” I got cut off as my brother said “Sush!” I looked forward and saw a large thing approaching us.

Chapter 3 

  As it got closer I realized that the large thing was a twoleg. I took a deep breath and realized that I was holding my breath the entire time. “It's just a twoleg” said my brother with a big sigh of relief. I felt excitement all the way to my tail tip when I saw her. I knew this twoleg she was our owner! We lived in her den! I knew my brother, Tree knew too when I felt him relax. The twoleg picked us up and I knew my brother was tired when he just let her pick him up. Usually, he would put up a fight and scratch her. I personally never liked being picked up but I was okay with it. The twoleg put us in the back of her monster and got in the belly of it. It was kind of scary riding in the monsters that twolegs ride in but if they always came out okay I knew it was safe. My brother on the other paw pretty much slept in the blankets the whole ride and I was glad he did because I knew if he was awake he would have tried to escape. After about 45 minutes the monster stopped. I thought it was strange because me and my brother did not go that far but I pushed away the thought. The back of it opened and the twoleg scooped me up and picked up my brother. He was still sleeping peacefully. As we walked to the entrance I still felt excited about our adventure but little did I know we were not going home.

Chapter 4

 When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.

Huh, strange I wondered.  My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but  I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.

Chapter 5

As the badger approached us our mother told us to stay here. I glanced at my brother who whispered “Wow I have never seen anything so..BIG!” he had excitement in his voice so I whispered back “You're not scared?” “of course not! Mama will save us!” He sounded as if he was trying to convince himself as much as he was trying to convince me “ok I guess” I whispered to him. Just as I finished Mother scratched the badger and the badger whipped its paw at her. It flung her backwards, and she got up. Then she hissed loudly at it and it ran to her and started scratching her. Then my brother said “I'm Going to help her” “No don't please I don't want to lose you” I said “You won't don't worry I will be safe” he said bravely. I sighed I knew there was no way I could convince him but I decided to try anyway. “We are only about 12 moons! (The cat term for month)”  ‘NO I'm still going to help her I don't care what you say” And then he rushed off to help Mother. I looked behind me and saw a little hole and decided to take shelter in there. After about an hour I went out. When I left the hole I saw my brother and mother lying there. “No no no this can't be happening” I felt crushed but just as I was about to leave I saw a black and white spotted cat with a scar over his eye. He flicked his tail and after a bit said “Hello young kit my name is Spot. Come with me if you want to live”.

Chapter 6

I stretched my jaws into a massage yawn and padded out of Spot's house with excitement. Spot was apparently my uncle from my dad's side I never knew my dad. “Hey, Spot!” Spot was eating some twoleg scrapes. He lifted his head up to say “Yes?” he said half asleep “Well uh you said you would tell me about my uh dad on my 25 moon” I meowed. “Ah yes, your dad. Well, he looked just like you. And he was super kind and thoughtful I get why your mother liked him.” he chuckled. Then he looked sternly into my eyes “ But the thing that made him run away from you was when one of the cats from Treeclan killed our mother” I was shocked that's why our father left us! If he were still here my mother and brother would still be alive.  I looked up at Spot and saw him grinning. “why are you smiling” I growled “Do you think it's FUNNY that my father ran away!”  He looked shocked for a moment but then said “ Well I was thinking of a plan…”  “You could go to Treeclan and become their leader! Then we can rule the forest TOGETHER!” I thought for a moment but Spot clearly noticed that I looked unconvinced and said “Don't worry it will be a joint leadership” “Uhhh.. I don't really know.” I said thoughtfully. “Don't you remember what I did for YOU” Memories came flooding back as I remembered when the badger attacked my mother and brother and how grateful I was for Spot. After a while, I finally said “Ok” He looked happier than I had ever seen him “Thank you! We only want revenge for my mother and your father!” he said excitedly. “When am I going?” I meowed. “At Sunhigh” He replied.

Chapter 7

“WHAT” I was shocked How could I go today? I'm so nervous! But I already agreed to do it! Think of how much Spot did for you!  I started to remember what Spot did for me. When he found my mother and brother dead he took me to his house which was really a dumpster though but it was better than what most street cats had. Other street cats had to sleep inside boxes at least ours kept out the rain. It was already too small for him but he shared it with me.  I finally said “I will do it at sunhigh” but he had already walked away. I sighed. I REALLY need to keep track of time more when I'm thinking I said to myself. The time went by SO fast and I couldn't believe it when Spot said “It's time to go now” He led me to the border and said “Stay safe out there” “Don't worry I will” I replied. I waited at the border just as Spot instructed. Then I saw a patrol coming towards me. In the patrol, there were about 4 cats. I saw the patrol leader spot me and walked up to me. “Oh no not another rouge” she whispered.” WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE! ” she said in a harsh tone. “I..er...uh…wanted to uhh… join the uh... Clan.” I said nervously. The she-cat went back to the patrol. I overheard them say “We just had another rouge join 2 moons ago!” said a young tom “Are they planning an invasion?!” said another high-pitched voice. After a few minutes of talking, the she-cat finally said, “Yes ugh fine.” She flicked her tail. “you can join the clan but ONLY if Redstar approves.”

Chapter 8

After a long walk, we finally arrived at camp. The patrol leader told me to go to the apprentice den and talk to Stonepaw. Stonepaw was a kitty pet that joined the clan recently he was a bit younger than me. He explained some things to me about clan life. Some of the things were if you joined the clan you need to start as an apprentice.  He also explained that the she-cat leading the patrol was Sweetfur the clan deputy and Redstar was her father. He said that they have a way to talk with the place of fallen warriors (Basically Starclan). When he said that I almost felt like bouncing up and down like a kit, but I knew if I did they would probably not let me join the clan. “Do you think I can see my mother there?” I said excitedly. he sighed “No it's only for clan cats” I felt all the excitement drain from me after he said that but before I could say anything Redstar yowled “ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY GATHER HERE AROUND THE HIGHROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING!” Stonepaw said that “We need to go follow me”. When we got there Redstar said “This cat wanted to join this clan. I know that we just had an outsider join the clan but we need more warriors so Moon step up” I stepped up.” From now until you receive your warrior name you shall now be known as Moonpaw.” I heard whispers of other and felt all eyes on me“He can't! We will soon be more rouge than clan!” said a she-cat “back in my days we chased out rouges and kitty pets!” said an old tom “Redstar needs to think before he invites more cats in!” said a young she-cat. But before they could say anything to Redstar he yelled “THIS CLAN MEETING IS DISMISED”. "WAIT!" I yelled "Who's my mentor?" "OH! I'm Sorry I forgot your mentor is Sweetfur." "ME? I'm just about as old as him! I'm even younger!" Sweetfur said. "NO, I have made my decision your Moonpaws mentor you're the deputy and you need an apprentice if you want to become leader! when I made you deputy I thought you would have an apprentice soon but we might not have a lot of new apprentices before I lose my last life." Sweetfur looked stunned at her father's harsh tone. "OK father you know a can't argue with you so I will be his mentor." "even though it may be weird" she muttered.

Chapter 9

“No no no no!” “Keep your tail ABOVE the ground when you're hunting!”  Sweetfur sighed “I really don't know how you're better at fighting than some warriors but you're THIS bad at hunting! “I…er..uh “ “You have caught almost no prey” “I still can't believe Redstar picked ME to be your mentor. He is really losing his mind!” she sighed again. “Well..uh..u..ur.uh a great..mentor..s…so...o..farr..uhh” “Thanks” she meowed in relief. “Well let's try some more battle moves you never know when a fox might come” “Okay” I meowed. When we arrived back at camp Redstar called a clan meeting “LET ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY” he yelled. “The warrior's den is getting full!” “We need a few warriors to sleep in the apprentice's den” “We have lots of space in there” “I will” Said Sweetfur “I can too!” said a tom named Snowfur “I will!” meowed Dustfur “I CAN T-” Smalltail got cut off “It's ok I think we have enough cats,” said Redstar with a hint of amusement “THIS MEETING IS DISMISED!” he flicked his tail and padded down the rock to his den. After the clan meeting, I told Sweetfur that i needed to get some fresh air. I decided to go to Spots house. He had been asking for a weekly report on my week in the clan he said he wanted to know if everything was going well. “Ah hello, Moonpaw” He meowed “Or is it something else now? Like Moonclaw you were always a natural fighter!” he smirked “No spot! I have only been training for a bit over a moon!” I exclaimed. “Well, your mentor seems…nice” spot meowed. “Yeah… she is deputy so she is pretty cool,” I replied. “It's still strange that Your leader…uh what's his name…? OH, Redstar yeah picked her to be your mentor he could have picked an older warrior but whatever I don't care. He hissed “Have you earned their trust yet? They need to trust you so you can take over the clan.” “You should try to find a way to make them turn against each other…” I started to get really uncomfortable so I blurted out “I really need to go now! They will get suspicious!”  “ok keep thinking about it and try to earn their trust. Spot narowed his eyes “Remember we are doing this for your father” “y..ea now I REALLY need to go” “Bye” he meowed. I rushed out of there as fast as I could. I don't know why but I have a really weird feeling about Spot.

Chapter 9

Today was the day that more warriors would sleep in the apprentice's den. After Stonefur had been made a warrior I was the only one in the apprentice's den and I was looking forward to not sleeping alone. The three warriors arrived in the apprentice's den. “Wow it is SO much smaller than when I was an apprentice!” said Dustfur “That's because YOU were smaller silly” meowed Snowfur “Well we have a long day of training tomorrow Moonpaw so let's get some sleep” I curled up in my nest and wated. “Ugh, why can't I sleep” I heard Sweetfur growl. “I can't either,” I said and went to sit beside her. “Hey,” she meowed “Hi,” I said. ‘OH MOUSE DUNG I FORGOT THAT I'M ON NIGHT WATCH!” she yelled “SUSHHH! You will wake them up! They are so cute sleeping together” I said “Yeah” she replied. “ Can I come on night watch?” “Shure even though you are only an APPRENTICE” she meowed “Ha I'm just as..old as… as...YOU!” We settled down on night watch. “Wow” I exclaimed, “it's beautiful out here at night!” “Yeah I thought the same…” she replied. Then suddenly I fell onto Sweetfur “Uh SORRY for falling for you,” I said quickly “WHAT!!” I realized what I said. “AAA I….mm so sorry FOR falling you ON!” “HUH?” she said confusingly AGH IM S…..ORR... I'M SORRY FOR FALLING ON YOU!” I finally said. “ Wow, you're so ridiculous it's FUNNY!” she meowed “y..eahh” I meowed back and we sat in the moonlight for the rest of the night.

I got elderkit. I can’t stop laughing 

I also got halfkit

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which half?

the right half

LOL

i got OTHERKIT what

I got heavenkit

well I got sneezekit

So did I

the newest chapter of Dragonstar!!!

Chapter 2

“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!” That was moonstars voice calling. Dragonkit was excited. This was her and bluekits apprentice ceremony. Phenoxkit disided to be a medicine cat almost as soon as he opened his eyes, before hearing the prophecy but dragonkit was sportive of him anyways. The cats gathered beneath highrock and moonstar said “it’s time for three kits to become apprentices. Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit please step forward” Dragonkit and the others stepped up eagerly. “Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit you have reached the age of six moons and are ready to become  apprentices. from this day forward until you earn your warrior or medicine cat name, you shal be known as dragonpaw, phenoxpaw and Bluepaw. Dragonpaw I will be your mentor. Bluepaw your mentor will be birchblaze.” Dragonpaw liked birchblaze for Bluepaw. Birchblaze was a she who wasn’t that strong, but the kind of patient teacher Bluepaw needed. She was also surprised that the leader herself wanted to mentor her. But moonstar wasn’t done yet. “Phoenixpaw your mentor will be Goldenlight” no surprise there. Phoenixpaw wanted to be the medicine cat, of course his mentor needed to be Goldenlight. “Dragonpaw! Phoenixpaw! Bluepaw!” The crowd of cats voices echoed in the clearing. Dragonpaw thought she saw something else. Suddenly she found herself in a forest she didn’t recognize. It had a huge star with a cat on top. “You shal be known as nightsong. We honor your courage as we welcome you as a full warrior of starclan. Suddenly dragonpaw was back in the clearing. Nightsong. The name echoed in dragonpaws mind. Could that be the same nightsong that gave her the prophecy, all those moons ago.

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AWESOME!

Night song is a good name


Chapter 9

Today was the day that more warriors would sleep in the apprentice's den. After Stonefur had been made a warrior I was the only one in the apprentice's den and I was looking forward to not sleeping alone. The three warriors arrived in the apprentice's den. “Wow it is SO much smaller than when I was an apprentice!” said Dustfur “That's because YOU were smaller silly” meowed Snowfur “Well we have a long day of training tomorrow Moonpaw so let's get some sleep” I curled up in my nest and wated. “Ugh, why can't I sleep” I heard Sweetfur growl. “I can't either,” I said and went to sit beside her. “Hey,” she meowed “Hi,” I said. ‘OH MOUSE DUNG I FORGOT THAT I'M ON NIGHT WATCH!” she yelled “SUSHHH! You will wake them up! They are so cute sleeping together” I said “Yeah” she replied. “ Can I come on night watch?” “Shure even though you are only an APPRENTICE” she meowed “Ha I'm just as..old as… as...YOU!” We settled down on night watch. “Wow” I exclaimed, “it's beautiful out here at night!” “Yeah I thought the same…” she replied. Then suddenly I fell onto Sweetfur “Uh SORRY for falling for you,” I said quickly “WHAT!!” I realized what I said. “AAA I….mm so sorry FOR falling you ON!” “HUH?” she said confusingly AGH IM S…..ORR... I'M SORRY FOR FALLING ON YOU!” I finally said. “ Wow, you're so ridiculous it's FUNNY!” she meowed “y..eahh” I meowed back and we sat in the moonlight for the rest of the night.

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Nice!, LOL me totally not laughing at the fact that the main character's name is Moon paw. and then look at my profile

Lol "Uh SORRY for falling for you," that is funny

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This is an AI image of Stormsong (I KNOW IT'S KIND OF BLURRY)

hehe

I got hillkit random generated. I thought it was funny 

you know what's also funny? Sneezekit

I AM NOT KIDDING I ACTUALLY GOT SNEEZEKIT

hehehehe

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sneezekit has a chronic sinus issue hahaha

remember when #1 warrior cats fan got yewkit? Well so did i

AAAAH

check out my AI image of stormsong/paw too!

this is the prologue and the new chapter 1 of Dragonstars journey.


Prologue

Redfur was worried. Goldenlight said it would be fine, that it’s completely normal to have pains the day before having kits but she was still worried. “What if they get sick!” Redfur said “what if I get hurt and can’t take care of them!” She bombarded goldenlight with my concerns. “They will be fine,you will be fine evryone will be fine” goldenlight said though redfur didint believe her. Redfur tried to lay down for the night, maybe sleep before her kits came. “You will be fine” said diamondreaper a she cat that had given birth to one kit, bluekit just that morning “I’m just worried if something happed to me, like something happened to my mom” diamondreaper continued. It was common knowledge in the clan that diamondreapers mom was killed by a bagger shortly after kitting and she probably wanted to be there for her kits. Redfur fell asleep and found herself in the same forest she allways dreamed of. “Deap breaths you are going to be fine” a mysterious voice said. “Is that a prophecy?” Redfur asked. “Opp you weren’t supposed to hear that” the voice said “but I am here to give you a prophecy” redfur paused for a moment. She knew that voice “nightpaw! She yelled out loud, I’m sorry I wasn’t there, that I was looking the other way, you were my apprentice I was supposed to watch you, especially during your warrior assessment!” Redfur exclaimed. “No one could have seen the fox coming” said nightpaw. “Anyways, with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power, under the wing of Dragonstar” “thank you nightpaw” redfur said as she began to wake up. There were two beautiful kits laying there at her waist. “You slept through the birth” goldenlight said “you have two healthy kits, a she kit and a Tom”. Redfur instantly knew witch was witch. “The Tom will be phoenixkit and the she cat, she will be called Dragonkit”

Chapter 1

“Dragonkit, Dragonkit come on!” Two different voices were shouting. Though she couldn’t see she mustered all her strength to open her eyes. The world was to big and beautiful. The two voice were cats,just like her that looked about her age. “Hi I’m bluekit” one of them said. This one was a colour Dragonkit assumed was blue. “I’m your brother phoenixkit” phoenixkit looked like her and had the same smile as Dragonkit assumed was on her face. “I want to show you how to play mossball!” Bluekit exclaimed. “All you do is one kit throws the ball and the other has to not get hit!” She threw a ball at Dragonkit and Dragonkit dogged without trouble. “Come on I want to explore camp!” That was phoenixkits mew. “Ok, come on bluekit” Dragonkit responded to her brother. The camp was busy. A cat that Dragonkit assumed was the deputy, sneakyclaw based on her moms story’s, assigning patrols, and Goldenlight the medicine cat was putting dressing on a leg wound of another cat. “Isn’t what she does beautiful” phoenixkit said “I want to be just like her” “a medicine cat?” Bluekit asked “I will be a warrior, no time for medicine cat stuff” “bluekit come in!” That was diamondreapers voice. Bluekit left without hesitation. Then a cat seemingly appeared out of nowhere. “Hi I’m nightpaw” she said “wait” phoenixkit said “you are in starclan aren’t you” “yes I am” nightpaw said “and I’m hear to tell you something.” “What?” Dragonkit asked “with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power under the wing of Dragonstar” nightpaw said sounding more wise then when she introduced herself “now don’t tell anyone about this” “we won’t!” Yelled phenoxkit as he ran back to the clearing, probably to watch Goldenlight.

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Stormsong: Chapter 11

Two white kits. One of them had orange eyes, close to Stormpaw's yellow, the other blue like Shadowfall. Stormpaw stared, amazed. "The one with yellow eyes is a she-kit, Amberkit," explained Cherrytuft, "and the one with blue eyes is a tom, named Skykit."

"Hi, Amberkit," said Stormpaw softly. "Hi, Skykit. I'm your big sister. This, here, he's Turtlepaw. And, um, this is my mentor, Moonheart, and his mentor too, Birchblaze." Then Swiftwind entered, trailed by Deathberrypaw, and Stormpaw sighed. "More introductions. This is Swiftwind, Deathberrypaw's mentor, and this is Deathberrypaw."

"Dead-bally-paws!" squealed Amberkit, stumbling over to him. Meanwhile, Skykit stared inquisitively at Stormpaw, and eventually said, "Big... sissa?"

"Um, yes! Big sister." Stormpaw grinned at Skykit, who asked, "Stump-paws?"

"Uh... close enough." Stormpaw laughed. It was obvious that Skykit didn't understand the meaning of this, but he laughed along. "Mossball?" invited Stormpaw, recalling how Cherrytuft had played this game often with her as a kit. But Cherrytuft interrupted, "No. That's too hard on them, at this young age. You and Deathberrypaw can take them for a walk, instead."

"Walk! A walk! With Deb-berry-paws and Stump-paws!" shouted Skykit. "No," corrected Amberkit, "It's Dead-bally-paws." Stormpaw sighed and laughed, ushering the kits out of the nursery. The two apprentices let the kits go ahead, sniffing and exploring. Deathberrypaw's whiskers brushed hers. Usually her whiskers were very sensitive, and even the smallest touch caused her to yelp and pull away, but this time, it felt... nice.

It felt so nice.

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I like it

sorry i haven't reposted the others yet :(

that’s fine. Have you read dragonstars jurney yet? I have the prologue and one chapter. You will be in the second once I write it

I've read it, it's good! also thanks for putting me in the second. (you mean the cat Birchblaze right?)

Yep

Its SOOOO GOOD!

I am confused part says that Amberkit has yellow eyes the other says orange

it's orange-ish yellow, kind of in between the colors

ohh ok

I made my main character on story /my oc. The main fur color should be more pale yellow but this is mainly it

Reedstar's Life

(Chapter 1) Reedkit's awakening

I woke up, seeing my mother and my excited sister, Crystalkit. She call out to me, "Reedkit! Want to play mossball?" I answered with a shake of my head, padding for the first time to my mother's nest. I woke up again, hearing the sound of Breezekit's mewing about how she was excited about being an apprentice. Her mother, Creamfrost told her that it was tomorrow. I was so excited when she said that, I started bounding around with joy and praise in my eyes.

this story is really good!

mmm nice

WAIT I RANDOMLY GENGERATED ONE OF MY UNUSED OC'S NAME, LOSTKIT AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

nice 

CAT JOKE    Did you hear about the cat that aced the test? It got a purr-fect score.

CAT JOKE    Where did the cat go when she lost her tail? The retail store.

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GLACEONDRAGON999 IF YOU SEE THIS GO ON! you know what I mean


Chapter 9

“No no no no!” “Keep your tail ABOVE the ground when you're hunting!”  Sweetfur sighed “I really don't know how you're better at fighting than some warriors but you're THIS bad at hunting! “I…er..uh “ “You have caught almost no prey” “I still can't believe Redstar picked ME to be your mentor. He is really losing his mind!” she sighed again. “Well..uh..u..ur.uh a great..mentor..s…so...o..farr..uhh” “Thanks” she meowed in relief. “Well let's try some more battle moves you never know when a fox might come” “Okay” I meowed. When we arrived back at camp Redstar called a clan meeting “LET ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY” he yelled. “The warrior's den is getting full!” “We need a few warriors to sleep in the apprentice's den” “We have lots of space in there” “I will” Said Sweetfur “I can too!” said a tom named Snowfur “I will!” meowed Dustfur “I CAN T-” Smalltail got cut off “Its ok I think we have enough cats” said Redstar with a hint of amusement “THIS MEETING IS DISMISED!” he flicked his tail and padded down the rock to his den. After the clan meeting, I told Sweetfur that i needed to get some fresh air. I decided to go to Spots house. He had been asking for a weekly report on my week in the clan he said he wanted to know if everything was going good. “Ah hello, Moonpaw” He meowed “Or is it something else now? Like Moonclaw you were always a natural fighter!” he smirked “No spot! I have only been training for a bit over a moon!” I exclaimed. “Well, your mentor seems…nice” spot meowed. “Yeah… she is deputy so she is pretty cool,” I replied. “It's still strange that Your leader…uh what's his name…? OH, Redstar yeah picked her to be your mentor he could have picked an older warrior but whatever I don't care. He hissed “Have you earned their trust yet? They need to trust you so you can take over the clan.” “You should try to find a way to make them turn against each other…” I started to get really uncomfortable so I blurted out “I really need to go now! They will get suspicious!”  “ok keep thinking about it and try to earn their trust. Spot narowed his eyes “Remember we are doing this for your father” “y..ea now I REALLY need to go” “Bye” he meowed. I rushed out of there as fast as I could. I don't know why but I have a really weird feeling about Spot.

NICE I LOVE IT

you have to be a warrior and get 80 rep.and then you get the moss ball from the warriors den.and then you have to go to moonheart and talk to her and when the story is done you have to wait until it is dark and then go to he left and click on her and then you have to go to bramblestar.but do not tell on crystalblaze.

and also welcome, i am new here, but I played the kit to leader since I was in 6th grade. and I am a fan of moss shadow

wait im new it would reaallyyy help if anyone told me how to get the role leader!

I understand tho if anyone dont want to but naur i js wanna know!<3

hi so you need to become a warrior find moss shadow (by talking to Moonheart when your a warrior) and get 80 rep

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you have to talk to moonheart, as a warrior then go back to darkclaw at the beach and you'll see a big red X, put a moss-ball there and you will lure moss-shadow, to get the moss-ball tho, go to the warriors den but only when you see that darkclaw is on patrol at the beach, and after u lure moss-shadow and bring her to bramblestar, you have to get 80 reputation THEN go talk to bramblestar, and he'll make you leader. then go to the moonstone to get yr nine lives, then after you will reserve a prophecy to you, and then after that prophecy, IMDDENTLY, go back to the beach and click on that wood arrow, and if you have more then 300 health, you will be able to kill firestar IMDDENTLY, and then after you kill him, go back to the warriors den and talk to breezesong, I suggest saying yes to being able to meet at the border, so that you can go into fire clan

thanks!

hi. just wated to say hi to all in the chat

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Hi

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Go on the sideeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Hi

Did you know that we are cousins with nightwhisker on our mothers side, lilacpath and webbedfoot (night's father) are siblings, and we are cousins with milkywillow on our dads side, Ryeheart and redclaw (milky's father) are brothers, + nightwhisker and milkywillow share the same mom

so I was dating my cusion?! AND HAD KITS WITH HER!!!!?????? oh my God I'm scrambled!!!

omg no same, im depressed!<3 T-T

Yeah T-T

Tho, i think it is more normal because they are cats? Idk, its still weird to think about

Alright, here's my challenge: make my story cat characters based on their discription and think of their pasts, and I MAY use them in my fifth book, also I need name ideas for my fifth warrior cats echoing silence series book. the only cats who DONT need a past: are the sibling, moth, snake, ice and hawk. and hawks secret crush....echo. also btw spoiler for people who wanna compete in the challange but haven't read the books on kit to leader comments. shadow that strikes in darkness, or formally shadow strike, is echoing whispers father!!!

Allegiances

The tribe of echoing silence

Leader: echoing whispers\echo: a beautiful grey she-cat with amber eyes

guards. (Cats who guard the territory and camp)

Chief guard: hawk that claws the sky\hawk: a white she-cat with blue icy eyes and a scar from her eye to her stomach.

shadow that strikes in darkness\shadow: a jet-black tom with amber eyes.

Fang of fox\fang: a grey tom with black stripes and amber eyes.

Mouse that sleeps in winter\mouse: a dusty brown she-cat

Prey-hunters. (Cats who provide food for the tribe)

Chief prey-hunter: moth that hovers near fire\moth: a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.

Black tooth of bear\tooth: a black tom with hazel eyes.

Rain of storm\rain: a light ginger she-cat.

Blaze of speeding rivers\blaze: a golden tabby tom.

Queens. (She-cats nursing or caring for kits)

fern of falling heather\fern: a dark ginger she-cat.

song of singing crow\crow: a brown she-cat with white paws.

storm of flooded rivers\storm: a black she-cat with a white tail and white stripes.

Cold of frozen frost\frost: a white she-cat with grey paws and hazel brown eyes.

Trainee’s. (Toms and she-cats six moons and older in training)

Raven that flies with wings of black\raven: a black tom with green eyes and a white muzzle as well as white paws.

Wolf of wind\wolf: a light grey tom.

Flame of sun\flame: a ginger she-cat with emerald eyes.

Snow that blankets the ground/snow: a white she-cat with grey leopard spots, and violet eyes

Warriors. (Toms and she-cats in charge of fighting and protecting the tribe)

Snake inside a rock\snake: a grey and white tom.

Ice of frozen water\ice: a dark calico tom with blue eyes.

Grey vine on rock\grey: a long-haired grey tom.

Boulder in water\boulder: a chestnut brown tom

Elders. (Toms and she-cats retired or to injured to continue their duties)

Eye of fox\fox: a pale she-cat who is blind in one eye.

Whisker of soot\soot: a black and white tom with a scarred muzzle. The oldest tom in the tribe.

Grey claw of sky\claw: a grey tom. With a muzzle black from age

Meadow of flowers\meadow: a ginger she-cat who is blind from battle.

Cats outside of the tribe

Pip: an orange and black tom with unusual eyes.

Flash: an orange ginger tom

Spark: a white she-cat with grey splotches.

Twig: a light grey she-cat.

dawn of setting sky\dawn: a light ginger tom

Flicker of light\flicker: a pale tom with grey stripes and a torn ear.

snap of crying eagle\snap: a white she-cat with brown stripes

hey silent echos, I just wrote stormsong chapter 11....

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Wow! This is amazing I love it!

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def post more

I WANT MORE

omg nice!

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