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help I’m stuck! I dusk whisper or whatever his name was was asking me if I wanted to hang out but it glitched and I can’t do anything

guys i wanna know if i should make a story about an oc that everyone else is doing,please tell me if i should!!

you mean Dragonwing? Or do you mean your own oc? Dragonwing was my idea and if you want to use her go ahead! Just I want some user credit for the character. If you want to use her as a side character no credit is needed. If you mean your own oc do it for sure!

I’m gonna use my oc,if you have any ideas for the story let me know!

I think you should make your own story. I can’t control how you write

Guys when do we know that we can make Apprentices into warriors? Cuz i like clikc it and then its:All cats old enough blah blah blah and rigth after it its meeting dismissed

If you have kits that are apprentices, then you can make them warriors.

  BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA NO WAY WEEDKIT

Nah, 420kit

y'all what does daisy look like, the med cat keeps asking me for it and I have no clue what it is. I've been trying to make it spawn in the herb grounds, but since I didn't find any I started looking at other places outside the camp

It's the white flower with yellow in the middle, it doesn't always spawn. So keep going back and forth to the herbal grounds and outside the dens/to the beach to find it.

(probs I’m not sure) like the flower a simple white pearled flower with yellow pollen 

Quick question,how can you send your characters from that picrew thing?

You have to download them, then you can post them. Where you post a comment, click the image thing 

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Hey!

I also invited you to me game jam, link at the top.

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I don't do Scratch, sorry, so I can't join it. I have no other way of making games.

Hey, I invited you to be a moderator for my game jam, link is at the top.

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ok thx I will try lol I’m bad at making games

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Info on the main characters from Stormsong:

Stormsong: A dark gray, introverted, strong warrior. Sexuality: bisexual. Pronouns: she/her. Siblings: Amberkit and Skykit.

Flowerfur: A tan-colored long-furred warrior. Sexuality: lesbian. Pronouns: she/they. Siblings: Turtlesplash and Deathberry.

Deathberry: A dark brown, athletic warrior with red eyes. Sexuality: straight. Pronouns: he/him. Siblings: Turtlesplash and Flowerfur.

Turtlesplash: A kind, greenish-brown warrior. Don't try to tell me that there are no green cats, I know that! Sexuality: aromantic & asexual. Pronouns: he/him. Siblings: Deathberry and Flowerfur.

Tell me if I went overboard in equally representing all sexualities. (I think I kind of did, but I still managed to forget nonbinary T^T)

Nah your good lol. It's better to have too much representation than none at all

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Thanks lol :)

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Stormsong: Chapter 15

In this chapter, Flowerfur is the antagonist ("bad guy"), and she's also lesbian, but this is not supposed to mean that I think lesbians are evil, or anything like that. I don't want to inspire lesbian hate.

"I'm alright..." Deathberry groaned as he lay in the medicine den. Flowerfur and Stormsong gazed at him. Well, Stormsong gazed at him. Flowerfur had eyes only for Stormsong.

Flowerfur's lavender-purple eyes blazed on her tan face. Her bushy brown tail swished back and forth. Stormsong leaned slightly into her, a smile tugging at her lips even though she was watching a pained, ill Deathberry. Deathberry scanned the she-cats' faces with a slightly puzzled expression on his face. What is going on there? he wondered. Seeing this, Stormsong clenched her jaw, hiding her smile. I hope he didn't notice, she thought. Then, Why do I hope that? It's not like I have a crush on her. Well... do I?

"Hey! Apprentices!" said a deep voice behind Stormsong, jolting her out of her thoughts. Stormsong and Flowerfur spun around. Deathberry lifted his head. What apprentices? wondered Stormsong. Are Amberkit and Skykit apprentices already? But no, Stormsong didn't see her little siblings. She saw only Mudfur, staring into the medicine den. "Oh, right! You guys are warriors now," he said, but he didn't sound like it was a revelation. He knew all along. He was pretending he forgot, to annoy us, realized Stormsong, and wished she hadn't realized that.

Mudfur looked at Stormsong and Flowerfur. "Come over," he beckoned Stormsong. When she got near enough, he whispered, "I'm so disappointed in you. I thought you'd find a nice tom one day, not chase down a she-cat, you [SWEAR WORD!]" he said. Then he stopped, for someone had actually shouted, "Swear word!" He spun around angrily.

Amberkit and Skykit burst out laughing. Mudfur left the den quickly, humiliated. "We centered the deputy, Stormsong!" laughed Skykit. "Censored," corrected Stormsong. Amberkit turned to Skykit and said sternly, "You really have to stop pronouncing things wrong now that you're an apprentice, Skypaw."

"Wait, back up! You're an apprentice already?"

"Ah, it's just a game," smiled Amberkit. "I sat on top of the WillowStump and made Skykit an apprentice. I put a whole bunch of old moss on top, to really make myself as high as Yarrowstar!"

"YOU PUT OLD MOSS ALL OVER THE WILLOWSTUMP?!"

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the story is amazing wow

I LOVE IT! Although something funny I noticed, Leopardstar's father is also named Mudfur. The warrior Whiteclaw (reading Leopardstar's honor lol) that's uhm... if you google whiteclaw it's an alcoholic drink lol

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NO. WAY! I just googled it. :O

🤣🤣🤣

AWESOME!

Birchy when are you going to make another Stormsong chapter? I'm calling you birchy now whether you like it or not >:3

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Bubbly I just wrote it! If you're gonna call me Birchy I'm gonna call you Bubbly LOL. (I don't really mind the name actually.)

I LOVE BUBBLY

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Oh no, you weren't supposed to like it that much!!! LOL

Too bad! C:<

currently waiting on my water to boil for my ramen while reading ur story lol

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lol

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Bubblepaws' Destiny Questions!

Who should Bubblekit's mentor be?

What suffix should Finpaw receive?

When should Bubblekit and Finpaw become mates? How?

This is for reader feedback on my book

(totally not too lazy to think for myself, no no)

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Finpaw should recieve Finblade!!!

Ooo, Finblade. So far that is the winner

I think finpaw should we called finflower XD, bubble kits mentor should beeeeee oakriver! bubblekit and finkit should become mates a week after they become warriors...and maybe bubblekit could get hurt from a badger attack, and finkit just gets overprotective and stays by her side none stop, and he confesses his love :D.

Great Idea Silent, but one issue is Oakriver is the medicine cat, so they can't be mates. Unless you're suggesting a forbid? (Which I am TOTALLY down for)

forbid!!!!!!!! >:D

:0

btw did u see my comment about ghostkit? and also do u think I could maybe help with the story? :D do u make it on word?

Finpaw = Finleaf or Finleap (FROM TWIGBRANCH X FINLEAP) :) Bubblekit's mentor should be Finpaw for chaos. Or have Cheetah star mentor her. Bubblekit and Finpaw should become mates by Bubblekit or Finpaw getting hurt and the other helping them. And when they almost have their warrior names

All of you have great ideas, but Finblade is still the winner, it makes me laugh because I always imagine a shark's fin with a katana on it lol

Hello! As you may remember. I AM MCAKLEE. I changed my username because I saw a cute picrew for it! I will continue the series. The next chapter will have "I AM MCAKLEE" At the top for clarification!

sorry on the next chapter would you mind putting credit for the character(dragonstar) at the top of the post?

Yup!

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Wait, yup you would mind, or yup you'll put credit? (to be clear I am not Glaceon, just kind of standing up for him)

I meant i will put credit:3

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good lol

Previous chapter(s): 

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Prolouge

“Born of the gentle flow and nurtured by the moon’s caress, bubbles shall rise as the river’s envoy to bridge the divided shores.”

This is the message the medicine cat, Oakriver of RiverClan, has received on the night of the full moon, also the night that Bubblekit was born to Lilacshine, and Featherfall. Her sister, Nettlekit, seems to have nothing to do with this prophecy, Bubblekit on the other paw...

"Oakriver," Cheetahstar called "Are you there?"

"Oh, sorry. I was lost in thought" Oakriver sighed, she has been thinking about that prophecy for 4 moons now.

"Right, what were you telling me about your herb store?"

As the two continued speaking, Bubblekit was splashing around in the water that flowed through camp, she always took a particular liking to the water, more than the other kits.

"Bubblekit! Stop splashing around in the water and go tell your sister to gather the cobwebs she can find around camp for Oakriver's store." her mother called, Lilacshine never treated Bubblekit like her sister. Bubblekit felt that her mother loved Nettlekit more than her. At least Finkit was nice to her, the tomcat was always kind to her, always bringing her flowers that he found around camp. She bounded over to her sister, "Lilacshine said to collect cobwebs around camp for Oakriver." she padded off, she didn't need to hear her sister's know-it-all response, she padded towards Finkit, nuzzling his nose, and they played mossball together.

"Cheetahstar, I believe there is something... special, about Bubblekit." Oakriver mewed.

"What do you mean?" Cheetahstar asked curiously

"Well, Cheetahstar, I believe she is part of a prophecy I received on the night of her kitting," she recited the prophecy perfectly from memory, "Born of the gentle flow, and nurtured by the moon's caress, bubbles shall rise as the river's envoy to bridge the divided shores."

Cheetahstar gasped, realizing the only plausible explanation. "It has to be her," she concluded

(Note: each chapter is 0.5-1 moon apart, this one is one moon. Bubblekit is now 5 moons old.)

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 1

"Finkit, want to pretend that I'm prey, and you can hunt me?" Bubblekit mewed

"Sure, flower!" he mrrowed happily, he came up with that nickname a few moons ago, because she was beautiful, like a flower.

She chuckled, Finkit was the sweetest cat alive, sweeter than her mother, the cat who was supposed to love her most.

"Oakriver, do you think we should tell Bubblekit's mother and father about the prophecy?" Cheetahstar was speaking with Oakriver in the medicine den.

"I... don't think so, they don't really care about her as much as they should, they would just doubt us, and ignore it." Oakriver replied

"You're right, Oakriver. So, what do we do?

"The only thing we can, keep it to ourselves until she's at least 12 moons old." Oakriver replied gloomily, keeping a secret this big was going to be hard, especially for this long of a time.

"If you say s- What is that rushing noise?" Cheetahstar asked warily, "Is that what I think it is? That sounds like a... FLOOD!"

"FLOOD?!? Are you sur-- OKAY THAT'S A FLOOD. GET EVERYBODY OUT OF CAMP," Oakriver ordered "ESPECIALLY BUBBLEKIT"

They ushered every cat out of camp to a higher ground, as the camp flooded, it ruined all of their hard work on the camp for moons, "GO!" Troutheart, the deputy, ushered "WE HAVE TO GO, NOW!"

"Featherfall, why aren't you coming? What's wrong?!" Troutheart asked worriedly

"M-my daughter's in there... Nettlekit.." he mumbled

"Sh-she is?" Troutheart asked "Why?"

"She went to try and save her favorite stick..." he meowed, eyes full of grief

"Her favorite stick? I'm so sorry..." He glanced around, and he noticed another cat was missing: Hollytail, the elder. She must not have made it out. This flood was horrible, Nettlekit and Hollytail died, and all the prey wouldn't be back for moons!

"Featherfall,  Lilacshine, I have bad news." Troutheart announced, "Nettlekit is... dead..." 

The parents of the dead kit just stood there in silence for a moment, Lilacshine especially, as she didn't know.

Bubblekit sat in the clearing, a half-moon after the flood. She looked around her camp, it was destroyed, there was a makeshift den for everybody, no true dens. Her sister, Nettlekit, was dead, and so was Hollytail, this clan is weak, what will the other clans think? That we can't protect ourselves? The gathering was tomorrow, and the only prey we have now is fish. Every cat is weak, hungry, tired. This flood was the worst thing to happen in all of her 5 moons, she would be an apprentice soon enough, so would Finkit, he's a half-moon older than her, so it's time for him to become an apprentice, but Cheetahstar hasn't had time.

(1 day after the last chapter, full moon, right before the gathering.)

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 2

The cats traveled across to the gather, Cheetahstar, Troutheart, and Oakriver in the lead. RiverClan was the closest, so they arrived first. Oakriver leaped up onto the great oak, the branch that the medicine cats sat on, Cheetahstar hopped up onto the oak as well. Because Finkit was apprentice aged, he brought Finkit along.

"I know this an unconventional place for a meeting, but I believe it is time for Finkit to become an apprentice. I have brought his mentor with me. Finkit, step forward."

As Finkit padded forward, he trembled in excitement, who would his mentor be?

"Finkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Finpaw. Your mentor will be Birchblaze. I hope Birchblaze will pass down all they know to you. Birchblaze, come forward. You have received excellent training from Sliverstone, and you have shown yourself to be brave, and courageous. You will mentor Finpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to Finpaw."

As Finpaw touched noses with Birchblaze, he was proud, he knew Birchblaze was patient, yet stern.

"Finpaw! Finpaw! Finpaw! the cats chanted, just as WindClan arrived.

Onestar leaped up to the rock, followed by Kestrelflight, while his deputy Ashfoot stayed near the bottom of the Great Oak.

A little while later, the clans were gathered, Cheetahstar announced "Let the gathering begin." Cheetahstar is going first "I have great news to announce, Finkit is now Finpaw, mentor is Birchblaze. I also have devastating news, there has been a flood in our camp. All prey has disappeared, and there are fish left, but not as many as before. Two cats have also died: Hollytail, and Nettlekit." He dipped his head to Onestar, signaling his turn

"All is well in WindClan, we chased a dog off our territory, and we have two new warriors: Dandeliontail, and Nettlefur." Onestar finished, dipping his head to Firestar

"Nothing special happened in ThunderClan this moon, only a rogue near the border, but we chased it off quickly. Blackstar, your turn."

Right as Firestar said that Blackstar yowled "ATTACK!" Every warrior there pounced on the RiverClan warriors. RiverClan tried to fight back, but they were weak from the lack of prey. Troutheart attacked Tigerheart, raking his tired claws down Tigerheart's flank, but Tigerheart pinned him easily, delivering hard blows to his soft underbelly, blood spilling out, he moved on, Troutheart was dead.

StarClan covered the moon and stars, it was complete darkness. RiverClan fled to their camp, Oakriver treated them, but she couldn't treat Troutheart's wounds. The clan deputy was dead. This has been a terrible moon. Finpaw went to sleep in his nest in the nursery, he still wanted to sleep there until Bubblekit became an apprentice.

Chapter 3 coming Thursday!

its really cool!!! 

Thanks!

this is what echo and hawk look like. hawk is the white she-cat, and echo is the grey she-cat.

Oooo

question, for my fifth book should the two she-cats become mates? and if so, who should propose to who and how should I do it? and if they become mates, and should they adopt a group of kits or...should one of the she-cats be trans into a tom and they could be expecting kits? what should I doooooooooo

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Yes, they should be mates! Hawk should propose to Echo, I think, but I don't know how... maybe Echo gets hurt and Hawk is trying to watch over her? They should adopt kits definitely. :)

ok ok but how?! I'm still doing 3 books but I have NO motivation T^T I need heeeeeeeeeeeelp

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That happened to me too. That's why I'm not really posting Stormsong right now... I think you just might need to start a new book, and just leave the current ones unfinished. I'm considering a new one too. Maybe "Rogue Destiny"? Or "Alliances"? What do you think? :)

This is my character, her name is Shallow waters. So if you have questions call me Shallow or Shallow Waters. 

Ya'll I love Moss-shadow, just look at my username!

And great art Bubble paws!

Thanks! But I didn't make it, I used a website called Picrew, link here: felidaze's warrior cat creator|Picrew

Sweet, and I still like it!!

Btw, this is a rough idea of what Bubblekit (Bubblepaws) would look like: generated image

She is one of my oc's on Warrior Cats Ultimate Edition on Roblox, so I tried my best to make her look like the way she looks in the game

Can you friend me? If not its okay. My user is HollyleafxPusheen (LunatheFlamesilk)

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OOOOOOH

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SHE IS SO SO BEAUTIFUL

what app did you use to create that????I keep searching but I cant find it

Picrew, here's the link:  felidaze's warrior cat creator|Picrew

you have to sit on the high rock when your leader and then you can see on the right is says name deputy click that and then you can pick someone to be deputy but you have to know the name first

How do you name a deputy?

Ooh DaffodilSky,interesting :0

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Go on slide if you can!

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hi

yes

is this Ace?

Yes.

GASP

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Yeah.

kinda looks like ace is squishing the butterfly

I thought it was a snail xD

lol!🤣

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Yes. THE THING IS: if you talk to him and don't force him to leave, he doesn't go back to collecting herbs. He just stares at you like he's waiting for you to leave him alone.

its kinda werid

(-Awoken A Cat-) Chapter 4

It was cold, very cold indeed, the wind was very strong and it made the leaves rub together which made a very annoying sound, I couldn't take anymore I went outside where it was even colder. I wanted to run away far from the clan where I could do whatever, here I couldn't even have a good rest so I bared the wind and the coldness and ran out of the clan I ran until I saw a little cave in the mountains I ran up the whole mountain and couldn't wait to get a good sleep, I finally arrived and slept on the hard rock floor which kinda made it harder to sleep but when I finally did I regretted nothing, until morning. I woke up and...I was in a hole, a really deep hole, I couldn't see anything above me cuz the hole was really deep, I shouted "Is anyone there!?" And there was someone but not the someone I expected "Hello Dimondfox, or should I say........Starwing" they said with a crack in their voice, tho I didn't care they had a crack in their voice I just wanted to get out of this stupid hole, but when they said "Starwing" I got confused "Uhm, who Starwing?" I asked I was really confused and wanted to know who this 'Starwing' was "Oh...so they didn't tell you? Your Starwing and you-" She was going to explain but I cut her off for a very important question "WHAT!!???" I shouted shocked "I'M STARWING??? DO I HAVE COOL POWERS OR LIKE STARCLAN SENT ME IS THERE GONNA BE A WAR GOTTA STOP!!!???" "Shhhhh..." The cat shushed me, I was kinda of glad she did I was rambling about Starwing who is me "Oh little kit. You know nothing and I'll keep it that way BUT!!!" She said "I need to train you." 

( End! I try to stop the chapter at the TENCE senses so you wanna read the next one :D )

I'm just gonna continue to play as Crimstonepaw :P

Btw this is how she looks like

Actually now they're StoneWillow-

for anyone who read my story below here's what Dimondfox would look like:

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AAH! He looks scary and totally cool

thx!! :)

Its Diamondfox not Dimondfox

I know!! I have bad spelling :(

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I really wish people were on here when it’s day here

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it’s like 10:00 for me rn

This is what I think Finpaw would look like:

If people haven't figured out already, this is the website I used: Picrew

The scars are from the recent battle in chapter 3, as he didn't know how to fight yet.

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Hey, Bubbly. Want to hang out? 

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He looks so strong, but he doesn't look tough, he looks nice, and his sparkly blue eyes look just like the night sky behind him... Wait, do I have a crush on Finpaw or something?! lol

Previous chapter(s): 

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Prolouge

“Born of the gentle flow and nurtured by the moon’s caress, bubbles shall rise as the river’s envoy to bridge the divided shores.”

This is the message the medicine cat, Oakriver of RiverClan, has received on the night of the full moon, also the night that Bubblekit was born to Lilacshine, and Featherfall. Her sister, Nettlekit, seems to have nothing to do with this prophecy, Bubblekit on the other paw...

"Oakriver," Cheetahstar called "Are you there?"

"Oh, sorry. I was lost in thought" Oakriver sighed, she has been thinking about that prophecy for 4 moons now.

"Right, what were you telling me about your herb store?"

As the two continued speaking, Bubblekit was splashing around in the water that flowed through camp, she always took a particular liking to the water, more than the other kits.

"Bubblekit! Stop splashing around in the water and go tell your sister to gather the cobwebs she can find around camp for Oakriver's store." her mother called, Lilacshine never treated Bubblekit like her sister. Bubblekit felt that her mother loved Nettlekit more than her. At least Finkit was nice to her, the tomcat was always kind to her, always bringing her flowers that he found around camp. She bounded over to her sister, "Lilacshine said to collect cobwebs around camp for Oakriver." she padded off, she didn't need to hear her sister's know-it-all response, she padded towards Finkit, nuzzling his nose, and they played mossball together.

"Cheetahstar, I believe there is something... special, about Bubblekit." Oakriver mewed.

"What do you mean?" Cheetahstar asked curiously

"Well, Cheetahstar, I believe she is part of a prophecy I received on the night of her kitting," she recited the prophecy perfectly from memory, "Born of the gentle flow, and nurtured by the moon's caress, bubbles shall rise as the river's envoy to bridge the divided shores."

Cheetahstar gasped, realizing the only plausible explanation. "It has to be her," she concluded

(Note: each chapter is 0.5-1 moon apart, this one is one moon. Bubblekit is now 5 moons old.)

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 1

"Finkit, want to pretend that I'm prey, and you can hunt me?" Bubblekit mewed

"Sure, flower!" he mrrowed happily, he came up with that nickname a few moons ago, because she was beautiful, like a flower.

She chuckled, Finkit was the sweetest cat alive, sweeter than her mother, the cat who was supposed to love her most.

"Oakriver, do you think we should tell Bubblekit's mother and father about the prophecy?" Cheetahstar was speaking with Oakriver in the medicine den.

"I... don't think so, they don't really care about her as much as they should, they would just doubt us, and ignore it." Oakriver replied

"You're right, Oakriver. So, what do we do?

"The only thing we can, keep it to ourselves until she's at least 12 moons old." Oakriver replied gloomily, keeping a secret this big was going to be hard, especially for this long of a time.

"If you say s- What is that rushing noise?" Cheetahstar asked warily, "Is that what I think it is? That sounds like a... FLOOD!"

"FLOOD?!? Are you sur-- OKAY THAT'S A FLOOD. GET EVERYBODY OUT OF CAMP," Oakriver ordered "ESPECIALLY BUBBLEKIT"

They ushered every cat out of camp to a higher ground, as the camp flooded, it ruined all of their hard work on the camp for moons, "GO!" Troutheart, the deputy, ushered "WE HAVE TO GO, NOW!"

"Featherfall, why aren't you coming? What's wrong?!" Troutheart asked worriedly

"M-my daughter's in there... Nettlekit.." he mumbled

"Sh-she is?" Troutheart asked "Why?"

"She went to try and save her favorite stick..." he meowed, eyes full of grief

"Her favorite stick? I'm so sorry..." He glanced around, and he noticed another cat was missing: Hollytail, the elder. She must not have made it out. This flood was horrible, Nettlekit and Hollytail died, and all the prey wouldn't be back for moons!

"Featherfall,  Lilacshine, I have bad news." Troutheart announced, "Nettlekit is... dead..." 

The parents of the dead kit just stood there in silence for a moment, Lilacshine especially, as she didn't know.

Bubblekit sat in the clearing, a half-moon after the flood. She looked around her camp, it was destroyed, there was a makeshift den for everybody, no true dens. Her sister, Nettlekit, was dead, and so was Hollytail, this clan is weak, what will the other clans think? That we can't protect ourselves? The gathering was tomorrow, and the only prey we have now is fish. Every cat is weak, hungry, tired. This flood was the worst thing to happen in all of her 5 moons, she would be an apprentice soon enough, so would Finkit, he's a half-moon older than her, so it's time for him to become an apprentice, but Cheetahstar hasn't had time.

(1 day after the last chapter, full moon, right before the gathering.)

Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 2

The cats traveled across to the gather, Cheetahstar, Troutheart, and Oakriver in the lead. RiverClan was the closest, so they arrived first. Oakriver leaped up onto the great oak, the branch that the medicine cats sat on, Cheetahstar hopped up onto the oak as well. Because Finkit was apprentice aged, he brought Finkit along.

"I know this an unconventional place for a meeting, but I believe it is time for Finkit to become an apprentice. I have brought his mentor with me. Finkit, step forward."

As Finkit padded forward, he trembled in excitement, who would his mentor be?

"Finkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Finpaw. Your mentor will be Birchblaze. I hope Birchblaze will pass down all they know to you. Birchblaze, come forward. You have received excellent training from Sliverstone, and you have shown yourself to be brave, and courageous. You will mentor Finpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to Finpaw."

As Finpaw touched noses with Birchblaze, he was proud, he knew Birchblaze was patient, yet stern.

"Finpaw! Finpaw! Finpaw! the cats chanted, just as WindClan arrived.

Onestar leaped up to the rock, followed by Kestrelflight, while his deputy Ashfoot stayed near the bottom of the Great Oak.

A little while later, the clans were gathered, Cheetahstar announced "Let the gathering begin." Cheetahstar is going first "I have great news to announce, Finkit is now Finpaw, mentor is Birchblaze. I also have devastating news, there has been a flood in our camp. All prey has disappeared, and there are fish left, but not as many as before. Two cats have also died: Hollytail, and Nettlekit." He dipped his head to Onestar, signaling his turn

"All is well in WindClan, we chased a dog off our territory, and we have two new warriors: Dandeliontail, and Nettlefur." Onestar finished, dipping his head to Firestar

"Nothing special happened in ThunderClan this moon, only a rogue near the border, but we chased it off quickly. Blackstar, your turn."

Right as Firestar said that Blackstar yowled "ATTACK!" Every warrior there pounced on the RiverClan warriors. RiverClan tried to fight back, but they were weak from the lack of prey. Troutheart attacked Tigerheart, raking his tired claws down Tigerheart's flank, but Tigerheart pinned him easily, delivering hard blows to his soft underbelly, blood spilling out, he moved on, Troutheart was dead.

StarClan covered the moon and stars, it was complete darkness. RiverClan fled to their camp, Oakriver treated them, but she couldn't treat Troutheart's wounds. The clan deputy was dead. This has been a terrible moon. Finpaw went to sleep in his nest in the nursery, he still wanted to sleep there until Bubblekit became an apprentice.

Chapter 3 coming Thursday!

It's Bubblepaw's Destiny, not Bubblepaws' Destiny.

No. It is Bubblepaws', because her warrior name is Bubblepaws, and if you have say Bubblepaws's, is incorrect, so we use Bubblepaws', saying it as Bubblepaws

Oh, I thought she was an apprentice. I just got confused.

lol you're fine

hey for all who have read dragonstar so far I am doing a west woods over borders creator challenge. Scince I am bad at giving discriptions you get pictures for the main four and i will do my best to give discriptions for the rest

Dragonwing 


phoenixfeather


Blueberry 



nightsong


Goldenlight:creamy yellow tabby with yellow stripes

Moonstar:white and grey cat

Diamondreaper:solid colour blue cat basically a lighter blueberry 

Birchblaze:brown and dark brown fur

Redfur:solid colour red cat.

Sneakyclaw(who was mentioned in one sentence of chapter 1) solid colour grey cat

Dragon:red and dark red I made this on over borders and posted over there already

How do I post photos of west woods over borders without taking one with a phone? Like you did on your alt with moss-shadow.

The moss shadow was on the computer but if you don’t want your tabs you can take a screenshot then crop it on photos before posting here

I feel like Dragonwing and Pheonixfeather are siblings (they might be, I've been meaning to read your series lol)

wait I lied, I'm dumb yes they are siblings lol

dragonstar so far plus a new chapter! 


Prologue

Redfur was worried. Goldenlight said it would be fine, that it’s completely normal to have pains the day before having kits but she was still worried. “What if they get sick!” Redfur said “what if I get hurt and can’t take care of them!” She bombarded goldenlight with her concerns.

 “They will be fine,you will be fine evryone will be fine” goldenlight said though redfur didint believe her. Redfur tried to lay down for the night, maybe sleep before her kits came.

 “You will be fine” said diamondreaper a she cat that had given birth to one kit, bluekit just that morning “I’m just worried if something happed to me, like something happened to my mom” diamondreaper continued. It was common knowledge in the clan that diamondreapers mom was killed by a bagger shortly after kitting and she probably wanted to be there for her kits. 

Redfur fell asleep and found herself in the same forest she allways dreamed of. “Deap breaths you are going to be fine” a mysterious voice said.

 “Is that a prophecy?” Redfur asked.

 “Opp you weren’t supposed to hear that” the voice said “but I am here to give you a prophecy” redfur paused for a moment. She knew that voice

 “nightpaw! She yelled out loud, I’m sorry I wasn’t there, that I was looking the other way, you were my apprentice I was supposed to watch you, especially during your warrior assessment!” Redfur exclaimed.

 “No one could have seen the fox coming” said nightpaw. “Anyways, with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power, under the wing of Dragonstar” 

“thank you nightpaw” redfur said as she began to wake up. There were two beautiful kits laying there at her waist. 

“You slept through the birth” goldenlight said “you have two healthy kits, a she kit and a Tom”. Redfur instantly knew witch was witch.

 “The Tom will be phoenixkit and the she cat, she will be called Dragonkit”

Chapter 1

“Dragonkit, Dragonkit come on!” Two different voices were shouting. Though she couldn’t see she mustered all her strength to open her eyes. The world was so big and beautiful. The two voices were cats,just like her that looked about her age.

 “Hi I’m bluekit” one of them said. This one was a colour Dragonkit assumed was blue. 

“I’m your brother phoenixkit” phoenixkit looked like her and had the same smile as Dragonkit assumed was on her face. 

“I want to show you how to play mossball!” Bluekit exclaimed. “All you do is one kit throws the ball and the other has to not get hit!”

 She threw a ball at Dragonkit and Dragonkit dogged without trouble. 

“Come on I want to explore camp!” That was phoenixkits mew. 

“Ok, come on bluekit” Dragonkit responded to her brother. The camp was busy. A cat that Dragonkit assumed was the deputy, sneakyclaw based on her moms story’s, assigning patrols, and Goldenlight the medicine cat was putting dressing on a leg wound of another cat. 

“Isn’t what she does beautiful” phoenixkit said “I want to be just like her”

 “a medicine cat?” Bluekit asked “I will be a warrior, no time for medicine cat stuff” “bluekit come in!” That was diamondreapers voice. Bluekit left without hesitation. Then a cat seemingly appeared out of nowhere.

 “Hi I’m nightpaw” she said 

“wait” phoenixkit said “you are in starclan aren’t you”

 “yes I am” nightpaw said “and I’m hear to tell you something.” “What?” Dragonkit asked “with a feather of flame phoenixfeather will heal more than can be broken, and the clans will survive great power under the wing of Dragonstar” nightpaw said sounding more wise then when she introduced herself “now don’t tell anyone about this” 

“we won’t!” Yelled phoenixkit as he ran back to the clearing, probably to watch Goldenlight.

Chapter 2

“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather beneath the highrock for a clan meeting!” That was moonstars voice calling. Dragonkit was excited. This was her and bluekits apprentice ceremony. Phenoixkit disided to be a medicine cat almost as soon as he opened his eyes, before hearing the prophecy but dragonkit was sportive of him anyways. The cats gathered beneath highrock and moonstar said “it’s time for three kits to become apprentices. Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit please step forward” Dragonkit and the others stepped up eagerly. “Dragonkit phenoxkit and bluekit you have reached the age of six moons and are ready to become  apprentices. from this day forward until you earn your warrior or medicine cat name, you shal be known as dragonpaw, phenoxpaw and Bluepaw. Dragonpaw I will be your mentor. Bluepaw your mentor will be birchblaze.” Dragonpaw liked birchblaze for Bluepaw. Birchblaze was a she who wasn’t that strong, but the kind of patient teacher Bluepaw needed. She was also surprised that the leader herself wanted to mentor her. But moonstar wasn’t done yet. “Phoenixpaw your mentor will be Goldenlight” no surprise there. Phoenixpaw wanted to be the medicine cat, of course his mentor needed to be Goldenlight. 

“Dragonpaw! Phoenixpaw! Bluepaw!” The crowd of cats voices echoed in the clearing. 

Dragonpaw thought she saw something else. Suddenly she found herself in a forest she didn’t recognize. It had a huge star with a cat on top. “You shal be known as nightsong. We honor your courage as we welcome you as a full warrior of starclan. Suddenly dragonpaw was back in the clearing. Nightsong. The name echoed in dragonpaws mind. Could that be the same nightsong that gave her the prophecy, all those moons ago?

Chapter 3

“Come on dragonpaw. Training won’t wait” that was moonstar. I stumbled out of my nest and went to follow. Bluepaw and birchblaze were also there. 

“Today we are going to learn the territory and how iceclan is patrolled differently in leaf bare” that was birchblaze. She made a gesture with her tail and trotted off with moonstar. Dragonpaw and bluepaw followed eagerly, ready to learn. 

“So first we have the ice cavern witch marks one of our rouge borders.” Said birchblaze. Iceclan was the only clan in the forest though the rouges were strong so they needed borders anyway

. “The ice cavern always has ice, even in the middle of Greenleaf and has a rock on the bottom so the ice won’t crack so it’s were we will practice ice-hunting and play prey-stone but right now back to borders” moonstar said. After patrolling for a while they headed back to camp. 

“I am going to relax in the nest” bluepaw said.

 Dragonpaw had a different activity in mind. “Phoenixpaw?” Dragonpaw said as she poked her head into the medicine den. 

“Please come in. Goldenlights resting so it’s just us” phoenixpaw said then a starclan cat appeared. 

“Nightsong!” Both the apprentices said at the same time. “How did you know that!” They said to each other again, at the same time. 

“I let you both attend my warrior ceremony ok.” That was Nightsong. “But you were busy with your own so you only got to see the end” 

“so thats why” phoenixpaw said. “That makes total sense”

 “dragonpaw we are going to teach you how to do ice-hunting” moonstars voice echoed through the den. 

“See you phenoixpaw,nightsong!” dragonpaw exclaimed as she went after moonstar. 

Chapter 4

“Want to come to the ice cave?” Phoenixpaw asked dragonpaw. “And talk with her”. Dragonpaw knew her brother was talking about Nightsong. The young starclan warrior had befriended the two apprentices in the first 2 moons,of their apprenticeships. Phoenixpaw was a fast learner and it was estimated that the two apprentices would get their names on the same night.

 “Sure let’s go!” Dragonpaw exclaimed. They came up to the cave 

“here is a tip. Unsheath you claws and grip onto the backbone of some sort of prey. Then you slide a lot easier” phoenixpaw said. 

“Sure I’ll try it” dragonpaw said. It turns out it is super slippery on the ice. “Over here!” Nightsong said.

 “I need to tell you something.” She continued. “Another prophecy?” Dragonpaw asked. “Have you ever heard of foxcatcher?” Nightsong asked. 

“You mean the fox who was raised in the clan and left shortly before we were born?” Phoenixpaw said. Dragonpaw had never heard of this fox but listened to her brother. “Well her forces are rising, foxclan will be here by the end of leaf bare.”

 “Leaf bare? It’s the height of greenleaf! We have plenty of time. I could be leader by then.” Dragonpaw said. 

“Leaf bare is closer than you think. You must be ready. Now is the part I’m supposed to disappear but I kinda want to hang out a little. You know…. Like friends” Nightsong said 

“sure. We would be welcome to slide around on the ice a little with you. Wow that needs a name. It’s not prey stone because there is no stone and we are not ice hunting because we are not hunting” dragonpaw said. 

“I will get starclans opinion and we will think of a name” Nightsong said. The three cats then spent the rest of the day sliding around on the ice together, forgetting all their worries of the prophecy or the warning from starclan about foxclan.

Chapter 5

“Your name will be blueberry. Starclan honors your courage”Moonstar said. 

“Actually we honor her swiftness but she doesn't know that '' Nightsong said though dragonpaw and phoenixpaw were the only ones who could hear.

 “As we welcome you as a full warrior of iceclan. Dragonpaw your name will be Dragonwing. Starclan honours your intelligence as we welcome you as a full warrior of iceclan.” 

Dragonwing. The name echoed in dragonwings mind just like nightsongs had done. “Tonight you will sit in silent vigil and guard the camp when we sleep. This meeting is dismissed!” Moonstar continued. The sky was already getting dark and it was time for the vigil. 

“I am going to get my full medicine cat name tonight! It’s half moon and we are going to the moontree to get my name!” Phoenixpaw was just as excited as Dragonwing is though she couldn’t sleep. “See you!” Phoenixpaw continued as he rushed after goldenlight.

The first three hours of the vigil rushed by. Dragonwing was looking at the territory because there is a great view from camp.

Then phoenixpaw got back “actually it’s phoenixfeather now” phoenixfeather said as if reading her mind. “We will talk in the morning” he continued as he went to the medicine cat den.

Then Dragonwing saw a cat in the distance. She was freaking out. He was coming towards the camp! She walked into the medicine den and taped on phoenixfeather.

“What is it” he said and Dragonwing made a tail gesture to follow. She went back to her spot and showed her brother what was going on. The rouge was in camp by now and blueberry was facing him, claws unsheathed as if she was going to attack. “Come on now if you would just tell me your name” the rouge said

“I’m phoenixfeather, that cat is blueberry and this is my sister Dragonwing. They are on their warrior vigil so they can’t talk” phoenixfeather said “also my name is phoenixfeather” 

“Dragonwing, what in interesting name, my name is dragon” the rouge said.

“What is going on here!” Moonstar came out of her den. “A rouge in camp! When on vigil you are supposed to guard the camp while we sleep, not wake the whole camp up when a rouge comes!” 

“I want to stay here for a bit if that is ok” dragon said “the cats outside your borders are mean to me”

“Very well. You can sleep in there” moonstar pointed her tail towards the warrior den.

good moss shadow Character

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I’m glaceondragon999 i did moss shadow on my school account, thanks

Lol your name is Sandstorm and Lionblaze, my first thought was that they were a ship and that would be shipping him and his grandma lol

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by the way that is my username I love warrior cats there the best and I read a lot of them I am on the ultimate guide now and my real name is Jamira or just Mira.

 

That's cool! I LOVE warrior cats too, and I just finished omen of the stars, and I'm reading a super edition: Leopardstar's Honor at

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Oooh cool name. Mine is Mimi.

I got stemkit. I know it means the plant but I can’t help thinking of the acronym that means science,engineering,technology,math

Science, technology, engineering, math* Lol you put them in the wrong spot 

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stem kit born to do good in warrior school lol

Lol

yet again I am drawing dragonstar

Nice! :0

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go on slideeee i can talk now

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also moss shadow looks cute good job

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!!!

Moss-shadow is a boy not a girl

I was doing the version that is bramblestars daughter 

I wish this had a save icon, like the one in scratch did :^

NO IT RELOADED :(

Ikr!

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(-Awoke A Cat-) Chapter 3

WoAh a ClAn

I stepped out, woah the clan is so big! "Dimond" I heard someone say, I looked around then I heard again "Dimond, over here on high log. It's Quailstar." I walked over to Quailstar, I felt so squeezy inside since it was a leader and I didn't know how to treat him so I just said "Yes Quailstar?" "So.." Quailstar replied "You're going to get your full name at Moon Rise tonight okay?" "Sure," I said and started walking to the warrior den but then stopped "Quailstar do I go to the med cat den or the warrior cats den?" I asked "Yeah." Quailstar replied, and then I walked to the warriors' den. When I entered everybody was staring at me, but someone told me which nest to sleep in which was helpful that cat's name was Downwind, I went to sleep that night hoping that I wouldn't still be in the cat world but instead, I had a dream from StarClan "ʜᴇʟʟᴏ ᴅɪᴍᴏɴᴅ" Said the StarClan cat "𝕎𝕙𝕖𝕟 𝕤𝕠𝕞𝕖𝕠𝕟𝕖 𝕔𝕠m𝕖𝕤 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕗𝕒𝕝𝕝𝕤 𝕒𝕨𝕒𝕪 𝕥𝕙𝕖𝕪 𝕜𝕟𝕠𝕨 𝕥𝕙𝕒𝕥 𝕚𝕥𝕤 𝕟𝕠𝕥 𝕒 𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕞 𝕒𝕟𝕕 𝕖𝕧𝕖𝕟 𝕒 𝕕𝕣𝕖𝕒𝕞 𝕚𝕥 𝕞𝕒𝕪 𝕤𝕖𝕖𝕞 𝕪𝕠𝕦 𝕨𝕚𝕝𝕝 𝕣𝕚𝕤𝕖 𝕥𝕠 𝕓𝕖 𝕒 𝕤𝕜𝕪." (I'm bad at poems) I woke up to the sound of "Dimond, wake up you're getting your name tonight!" Downwind was saying that in my ear "Fine..." I groaned, I was on my best behavior as I heard Quailstar say "May StarClan approve of what I call this warrior, From this day on your name will be: DIMONDFOX. Due to your braveness." Everyone chanted "DIMONDFOX DIMONDFOX" I felt amazing but kinda sad that I'd never be able to see my family again, I made it to the leaf bed and had a very bad sleep            ( End of chapter 3 this one is pretty bad I did it kinda late so I can't think )

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if you're talking about the gem, it's Diamond, not Dimond :)

I know, I have bad spelling XD

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(-Awoke A Cat-) Chapter 2

Stop please

I quickly leap out of the way before I get my neck slashed by that manic, I run and run and run I'm surprisingly fast Oh because I'm a cat! I think but there's no time to think. "What do you want!?" I shout, she doesn't seem to hear me "WHAT DO YOU WANT!!??" I shout again, I stop running I'm mad I can't control it I wanna fight but I control my claws "I want pesky rouges off my territory." she replies, she slashes my neck I fall to the ground I think I'm going to wake up back in my comfy bed but no instead I wake up in a leaf bed in a den OH NO ITS NOT A DREAM I thought "Are you okay?" I hear a soft voice say "We found you bleeding outside" I quickly get up tho when I look around no one going to pounce or kill me, "Yeah... yeah I'm fine..." I say as I lay back down on the leaves, my eyes are full of terror, and the things I saw are repeating over and over in my head I can't stop thinking of the blood and claws "Well..." the cat says "What's your name? Mine's Applewillow" I quickly need to think of a name Bloodgold? Starwatcher? "Dimond...My name is Dimond" I say then break into coughs, I try to stop myself and thankfully I did "Well Dimond." Applewillow says "I'm a med cat and this is Quailclan, our leader is Quailstar and on patrol, we saw you and took you in." I was very relieved until Applewillow then said "I'm sorry that Snowfall tried to kill you, it must be terrifying to see that. The claws, the teeth." I break into tears I never wanted this to happen I wanna go back to my comfy bed in my house with my mum and dad not be in Warrior Cats and close the death. "Are you okay?" Applewillow asks kindly, I already know my answer "No..." I say sharply. Three days passed and I was finally allowed out of the med cat den.

( End of chapter 2 prob make chapter 3 tomorrow )

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