She is kind but quite loyal and will fight for her Clan. She is also often nervous.
(She, her)
Name - Sunpatch. She was originally a rogue but left that life for a kittypet life, she was never comfortable, so she joined LilacClan. She always found happiness there. Even with the fighting. Her mate eventually became Gorsefur.
Golden pelt with orange and cream stripes. She has long hair, and she also has no scars (yet) but she also has no bangs.
3.tell me their name (If you have trouble making a name click here!)
4. tell me their backstory
4.give me some guidelines (Ex. Orange with lots of scars and green eyes
5. Tell me if they are fluffy or sleek (edited)
6. Tell me their markings (edited)
7. Reply to submit it
For example: Flameheart, She/her, smart, mischievous, depressed, sleek orange pelt+black stripes with green eyes. Purple collar. large scars and fluffy bangs. Former kittypet. CANNOT LOOK VIOLENT or Mean
I'll do my best to make your cat as soon as possible! (PLEASE USE NATURAL COLORS FOR THEIR PELT) if you don't like the outcome tell me what to fix!
echoing whispers. she/her, smart, flirty, mischievous, strong, fierce, snappy, grey with amber eyes and black paws. scars all on her body. (her backstory: she used to be an apprentice of thunder clan, and was neglected by her father and always an outcast bc she is also half kittypet. she is gay for a she-cat named hawk/hawk that claws the sky) {sry if that was to much}
Stormsong. Kind of anxious. Tries to blend into the background. Pronouns: she/her Backstory: Stormsong realized as a kit that she was an only kit and a bad omen, so she went on a flight from home, returning as an apprentice. Guidelines: She never smiles, but she doesn't really frown, either. Dark gray color, pick whatever color you want for her eyes. No collar, and a small scar or two but nothing big. She's anxious and often daydreams.
I made a warrior cats game jam on itch.io because we need more warrior cats games, link here: Bubblepaws' Warriors Game Jam - itch.io It starts on sunday, and ends in three weeks. The voting lasts for two weeks after.
Six cats stood together on a damp rock with a crystal clear waterfall that hid their presence."Flaming'ivy, is the right one." Meowed a brown and orange tabby tom. "Yes, she is, Sun'bark. We all agree then?" Asked a calico she-cat. "Yes, Striped'patch" agreed the four other cats. "Silent'whisper, Moon'fang and Bird'song. Go to Flaming'ivy and say the prophecy. Night'lake, go down into the Moonpool, a leader seeks our knowledge." Stripe'patch ordered. "Sun'bark! Stripe'patch! Come to hunt, you must be hungry after the meeting." Yowled Listener. She had been a former rogue but joined the Clans and joined StarClan shortly after. Sun'bark sighed, "I sense trouble coming from SkyClan." He leaped off the damp rocks and bolted for the Moonpool.....
you mean Dragonwing? Or do you mean your own oc? Dragonwing was my idea and if you want to use her go ahead! Just I want some user credit for the character. If you want to use her as a side character no credit is needed. If you mean your own oc do it for sure!
Guys when do we know that we can make Apprentices into warriors? Cuz i like clikc it and then its:All cats old enough blah blah blah and rigth after it its meeting dismissed
y'all what does daisy look like, the med cat keeps asking me for it and I have no clue what it is. I've been trying to make it spawn in the herb grounds, but since I didn't find any I started looking at other places outside the camp
It's the white flower with yellow in the middle, it doesn't always spawn. So keep going back and forth to the herbal grounds and outside the dens/to the beach to find it.
Stormsong: A dark gray, introverted, strong warrior. Sexuality: bisexual. Pronouns: she/her. Siblings: Amberkit and Skykit.
Flowerfur: A tan-colored long-furred warrior. Sexuality: lesbian. Pronouns: she/they. Siblings: Turtlesplash and Deathberry.
Deathberry: A dark brown, athletic warrior with red eyes. Sexuality: straight. Pronouns: he/him. Siblings: Turtlesplash and Flowerfur.
Turtlesplash: A kind, greenish-brown warrior. Don't try to tell me that there are no green cats, I know that! Sexuality: aromantic & asexual. Pronouns: he/him. Siblings: Deathberry and Flowerfur.
Tell me if I went overboard in equally representing all sexualities. (I think I kind of did, but I still managed to forget nonbinary T^T)
In this chapter, Flowerfur is the antagonist ("bad guy"), and she's also lesbian, but this is not supposed to mean that I think lesbians are evil, or anything like that. I don't want to inspire lesbian hate.
"I'm alright..." Deathberry groaned as he lay in the medicine den. Flowerfur and Stormsong gazed at him. Well, Stormsong gazed at him. Flowerfur had eyes only for Stormsong.
Flowerfur's lavender-purple eyes blazed on her tan face. Her bushy brown tail swished back and forth. Stormsong leaned slightly into her, a smile tugging at her lips even though she was watching a pained, ill Deathberry. Deathberry scanned the she-cats' faces with a slightly puzzled expression on his face. What is going on there? he wondered. Seeing this, Stormsong clenched her jaw, hiding her smile. I hope he didn't notice, she thought. Then, Why do I hope that? It's not like I have a crush on her. Well... do I?
"Hey! Apprentices!" said a deep voice behind Stormsong, jolting her out of her thoughts. Stormsong and Flowerfur spun around. Deathberry lifted his head. What apprentices? wondered Stormsong. Are Amberkit and Skykit apprentices already? But no, Stormsong didn't see her little siblings. She saw only Mudfur, staring into the medicine den. "Oh, right! You guys are warriors now," he said, but he didn't sound like it was a revelation. He knew all along. He was pretending he forgot, to annoy us, realized Stormsong, and wished she hadn't realized that.
Mudfur looked at Stormsong and Flowerfur. "Come over," he beckoned Stormsong. When she got near enough, he whispered, "I'm so disappointed in you. I thought you'd find a nice tom one day, not chase down a she-cat, you [SWEAR WORD!]" he said. Then he stopped, for someone had actually shouted, "Swear word!" He spun around angrily.
Amberkit and Skykit burst out laughing. Mudfur left the den quickly, humiliated. "We centered the deputy, Stormsong!" laughed Skykit. "Censored," corrected Stormsong. Amberkit turned to Skykit and said sternly, "You really have to stop pronouncing things wrong now that you're an apprentice, Skypaw."
"Wait, back up! You're an apprentice already?"
"Ah, it's just a game," smiled Amberkit. "I sat on top of the WillowStump and made Skykit an apprentice. I put a whole bunch of old moss on top, to really make myself as high as Yarrowstar!"
I LOVE IT! Although something funny I noticed, Leopardstar's father is also named Mudfur. The warrior Whiteclaw (reading Leopardstar's honor lol) that's uhm... if you google whiteclaw it's an alcoholic drink lol
I think finpaw should we called finflower XD, bubble kits mentor should beeeeee oakriver! bubblekit and finkit should become mates a week after they become warriors...and maybe bubblekit could get hurt from a badger attack, and finkit just gets overprotective and stays by her side none stop, and he confesses his love :D.
Great Idea Silent, but one issue is Oakriver is the medicine cat, so they can't be mates. Unless you're suggesting a forbid? (Which I am TOTALLY down for)
Finpaw = Finleaf or Finleap (FROM TWIGBRANCH X FINLEAP) :) Bubblekit's mentor should be Finpaw for chaos. Or have Cheetah star mentor her. Bubblekit and Finpaw should become mates by Bubblekit or Finpaw getting hurt and the other helping them. And when they almost have their warrior names
Hello! As you may remember. I AM MCAKLEE. I changed my username because I saw a cute picrew for it! I will continue the series. The next chapter will have "I AM MCAKLEE" At the top for clarification!
“Born of the gentle flow and nurtured by the moon’s caress, bubbles shall rise as the river’s envoy to bridge the divided shores.”
This is the message the medicine cat, Oakriver of RiverClan, has received on the night of the full moon, also the night that Bubblekit was born to Lilacshine, and Featherfall. Her sister, Nettlekit, seems to have nothing to do with this prophecy, Bubblekit on the other paw...
"Oakriver," Cheetahstar called "Are you there?"
"Oh, sorry. I was lost in thought" Oakriver sighed, she has been thinking about that prophecy for 4 moons now.
"Right, what were you telling me about your herb store?"
As the two continued speaking, Bubblekit was splashing around in the water that flowed through camp, she always took a particular liking to the water, more than the other kits.
"Bubblekit! Stop splashing around in the water and go tell your sister to gather the cobwebs she can find around camp for Oakriver's store." her mother called, Lilacshine never treated Bubblekit like her sister. Bubblekit felt that her mother loved Nettlekit more than her. At least Finkit was nice to her, the tomcat was always kind to her, always bringing her flowers that he found around camp. She bounded over to her sister, "Lilacshine said to collect cobwebs around camp for Oakriver." she padded off, she didn't need to hear her sister's know-it-all response, she padded towards Finkit, nuzzling his nose, and they played mossball together.
"Cheetahstar, I believe there is something... special, about Bubblekit." Oakriver mewed.
"What do you mean?" Cheetahstar asked curiously
"Well, Cheetahstar, I believe she is part of a prophecy I received on the night of her kitting," she recited the prophecy perfectly from memory, "Born of the gentle flow, and nurtured by the moon's caress, bubbles shall rise as the river's envoy to bridge the divided shores."
Cheetahstar gasped, realizing the only plausible explanation. "It has to be her," she concluded
(Note: each chapter is 0.5-1 moon apart, this one is one moon. Bubblekit is now 5 moons old.)
Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 1
"Finkit, want to pretend that I'm prey, and you can hunt me?" Bubblekit mewed
"Sure, flower!" he mrrowed happily, he came up with that nickname a few moons ago, because she was beautiful, like a flower.
She chuckled, Finkit was the sweetest cat alive, sweeter than her mother, the cat who was supposed to love her most.
"Oakriver, do you think we should tell Bubblekit's mother and father about the prophecy?" Cheetahstar was speaking with Oakriver in the medicine den.
"I... don't think so, they don't really care about her as much as they should, they would just doubt us, and ignore it." Oakriver replied
"You're right, Oakriver. So, what do we do?
"The only thing we can, keep it to ourselves until she's at least 12 moons old." Oakriver replied gloomily, keeping a secret this big was going to be hard, especially for this long of a time.
"If you say s- What is that rushing noise?" Cheetahstar asked warily, "Is that what I think it is? That sounds like a... FLOOD!"
"FLOOD?!? Are you sur-- OKAY THAT'S A FLOOD. GET EVERYBODY OUT OF CAMP," Oakriver ordered "ESPECIALLY BUBBLEKIT"
They ushered every cat out of camp to a higher ground, as the camp flooded, it ruined all of their hard work on the camp for moons, "GO!" Troutheart, the deputy, ushered "WE HAVE TO GO, NOW!"
"Featherfall, why aren't you coming? What's wrong?!" Troutheart asked worriedly
"M-my daughter's in there... Nettlekit.." he mumbled
"Sh-she is?" Troutheart asked "Why?"
"She went to try and save her favorite stick..." he meowed, eyes full of grief
"Her favorite stick? I'm so sorry..." He glanced around, and he noticed another cat was missing: Hollytail, the elder. She must not have made it out. This flood was horrible, Nettlekit and Hollytail died, and all the prey wouldn't be back for moons!
"Featherfall, Lilacshine, I have bad news." Troutheart announced, "Nettlekit is... dead..."
The parents of the dead kit just stood there in silence for a moment, Lilacshine especially, as she didn't know.
Bubblekit sat in the clearing, a half-moon after the flood. She looked around her camp, it was destroyed, there was a makeshift den for everybody, no true dens. Her sister, Nettlekit, was dead, and so was Hollytail, this clan is weak, what will the other clans think? That we can't protect ourselves? The gathering was tomorrow, and the only prey we have now is fish. Every cat is weak, hungry, tired. This flood was the worst thing to happen in all of her 5 moons, she would be an apprentice soon enough, so would Finkit, he's a half-moon older than her, so it's time for him to become an apprentice, but Cheetahstar hasn't had time.
(1 day after the last chapter, full moon, right before the gathering.)
Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 2
The cats traveled across to the gather, Cheetahstar, Troutheart, and Oakriver in the lead. RiverClan was the closest, so they arrived first. Oakriver leaped up onto the great oak, the branch that the medicine cats sat on, Cheetahstar hopped up onto the oak as well. Because Finkit was apprentice aged, he brought Finkit along.
"I know this an unconventional place for a meeting, but I believe it is time for Finkit to become an apprentice. I have brought his mentor with me. Finkit, step forward."
As Finkit padded forward, he trembled in excitement, who would his mentor be?
"Finkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Finpaw. Your mentor will be Birchblaze. I hope Birchblaze will pass down all they know to you. Birchblaze, come forward. You have received excellent training from Sliverstone, and you have shown yourself to be brave, and courageous. You will mentor Finpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to Finpaw."
As Finpaw touched noses with Birchblaze, he was proud, he knew Birchblaze was patient, yet stern.
"Finpaw! Finpaw! Finpaw! the cats chanted, just as WindClan arrived.
Onestar leaped up to the rock, followed by Kestrelflight, while his deputy Ashfoot stayed near the bottom of the Great Oak.
A little while later, the clans were gathered, Cheetahstar announced "Let the gathering begin." Cheetahstar is going first "I have great news to announce, Finkit is now Finpaw, mentor is Birchblaze. I also have devastating news, there has been a flood in our camp. All prey has disappeared, and there are fish left, but not as many as before. Two cats have also died: Hollytail, and Nettlekit." He dipped his head to Onestar, signaling his turn
"All is well in WindClan, we chased a dog off our territory, and we have two new warriors: Dandeliontail, and Nettlefur." Onestar finished, dipping his head to Firestar
"Nothing special happened in ThunderClan this moon, only a rogue near the border, but we chased it off quickly. Blackstar, your turn."
Right as Firestar said that Blackstar yowled "ATTACK!" Every warrior there pounced on the RiverClan warriors. RiverClan tried to fight back, but they were weak from the lack of prey. Troutheart attacked Tigerheart, raking his tired claws down Tigerheart's flank, but Tigerheart pinned him easily, delivering hard blows to his soft underbelly, blood spilling out, he moved on, Troutheart was dead.
StarClan covered the moon and stars, it was complete darkness. RiverClan fled to their camp, Oakriver treated them, but she couldn't treat Troutheart's wounds. The clan deputy was dead. This has been a terrible moon. Finpaw went to sleep in his nest in the nursery, he still wanted to sleep there until Bubblekit became an apprentice.
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Is anybody here? Or am I alone
Anybody?
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You are not alone. *dramatic music*
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im boooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooored
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me toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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I love him!! I feel like his name should be inkdash? yall can suggest names if ya want! (The credits is the artist, this is an picrew!)
If you want the link, Here!
Maybe stone'soul, Silver'pelt, Ash'storm, or Shadow'Stalker?
Blue ink, Blackstorm, , Yelloweye, or Flamingeye
flowers when you don't need them: Hiii :D
flowers when you DO need them: *disappears*
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I totally get it
EXACTLY
The absolute DISRESPECT for my warrior name
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THE. ONLY. DIFFERENCE. between your apprentice and warrior name is ONE. LETTER. S.
Why did you write 'THE. ONLY. DIFFERENCE.' the use no period nor capitals and swap back to periods and capitals?
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I wanted to emphasize "the only difference" and "one letter s" and not emphasize anything else.
yell at bubblepaws if ya gonna yell at the game
She is kind but quite loyal and will fight for her Clan. She is also often nervous.
(She, her)
Name - Sunpatch. She was originally a rogue but left that life for a kittypet life, she was never comfortable, so she joined LilacClan. She always found happiness there. Even with the fighting. Her mate eventually became Gorsefur.
Golden pelt with orange and cream stripes. She has long hair, and she also has no scars (yet) but she also has no bangs.
do I need to add anything?
Does you want me to make you a cat?
1. describe their personality
2. give me their pronouns
3.tell me their name (If you have trouble making a name click here!)
4. tell me their backstory
4.give me some guidelines (Ex. Orange with lots of scars and green eyes
5. Tell me if they are fluffy or sleek (edited)
6. Tell me their markings (edited)
7. Reply to submit it
For example: Flameheart, She/her, smart, mischievous, depressed, sleek orange pelt+black stripes with green eyes. Purple collar. large scars and fluffy bangs. Former kittypet. CANNOT LOOK VIOLENT or Mean
I'll do my best to make your cat as soon as possible! (PLEASE USE NATURAL COLORS FOR THEIR PELT) if you don't like the outcome tell me what to fix!
(Thanks to Bubblepaw for the website!)
echoing whispers. she/her, smart, flirty, mischievous, strong, fierce, snappy, grey with amber eyes and black paws. scars all on her body. (her backstory: she used to be an apprentice of thunder clan, and was neglected by her father and always an outcast bc she is also half kittypet. she is gay for a she-cat named hawk/hawk that claws the sky) {sry if that was to much}
it wasn't! does she need anything?
Omg!!!! I love it , she does need a heart mark on her though, it's black also she needs a rose to. Is that ok?
ok! No problem
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Stormsong. Kind of anxious. Tries to blend into the background. Pronouns: she/her Backstory: Stormsong realized as a kit that she was an only kit and a bad omen, so she went on a flight from home, returning as an apprentice. Guidelines: She never smiles, but she doesn't really frown, either. Dark gray color, pick whatever color you want for her eyes. No collar, and a small scar or two but nothing big. She's anxious and often daydreams.
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I was thinking she could be a bit darker, almost black, but her expression looks really good!
ok!
is this better?
Impatient, Kind, Playful
She/Them
Tabbyclaw
They were born in ThunderClan, but as an apprentice her and her family moved to SkyClan
Fluffy
They are a Cream-colored Tabbyl she-cat, with white spots all over. Her face is Tortoiseshell, and she wears berries on her ear.
Does she need anything?
SO CUTE!
Thanks!
:3
Another one! Name suggestions?
shadow. bloodfang. or blood star!! or dark star.
Silent Echos did you read my post? If you did, seriously??
Wdym?? What post? Did I do something wrong?
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"Blood": Bloodblaze, Bloodstrike, Jaggedblood
"Dark": Darkstrike, Darkfang, Darkheart
Darktooth, Bloodfang, Clawfur
Hollow'heart, Torn'Ear, or dark'whisker
I think I will name her darkheart
whisperwillow. whisperwhistle, and snowsong
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Rogue/Kittypet: Misty. Aurora. Snowflake. Princess.
Clan: Mistyshine. Flowershine. Sparklepelt.
Snowleaf, Icewhisper, Frostmoon
If y'all want the link to that picrew, Click me! Also, I think the prefix could be Cloud(y)
Lavender'Eye, Spiral'Whisker, Serenity'song, Dovewing, or Cloud'Hunter
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THAT'S IT BOX! Serenitysong! Or just Serenity. :)
OOOH YES!
:3
I was at a certain thing so I couldn't respond then, sorry
And thank you, Bubblepaw
Hello
So... I did a thing
I made a warrior cats game jam on itch.io because we need more warrior cats games, link here: Bubblepaws' Warriors Game Jam - itch.io It starts on sunday, and ends in three weeks. The voting lasts for two weeks after.
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Flaming'ivy's Prophecy
Prologue
Six cats stood together on a damp rock with a crystal clear waterfall that hid their presence."Flaming'ivy, is the right one." Meowed a brown and orange tabby tom. "Yes, she is, Sun'bark. We all agree then?" Asked a calico she-cat. "Yes, Striped'patch" agreed the four other cats. "Silent'whisper, Moon'fang and Bird'song. Go to Flaming'ivy and say the prophecy. Night'lake, go down into the Moonpool, a leader seeks our knowledge." Stripe'patch ordered. "Sun'bark! Stripe'patch! Come to hunt, you must be hungry after the meeting." Yowled Listener. She had been a former rogue but joined the Clans and joined StarClan shortly after. Sun'bark sighed, "I sense trouble coming from SkyClan." He leaped off the damp rocks and bolted for the Moonpool.....
I love it!
Does anybody want me to write a story about her
I do! I love medicine cat perspectives, and I also love the stories people make!
Thank you!
Wadetheforestcat, it is actually Duskfall, not Duskwhisper.
She is a medicine cat.
If anybody wants to use my old character I created on the link Bubblepaw gives you. You can, here she is, her name is Flaming'ivy.
Pretty!
I like that idea.
this is fun (idea for update ambition takes over would be good one
Hello again.
ok I am on
go on slide!!!! quick!!!! person I'm talking to you know what I mean
did it glitch because it happens to me a lot
yes
help I’m stuck! I dusk whisper or whatever his name was was asking me if I wanted to hang out but it glitched and I can’t do anything
guys i wanna know if i should make a story about an oc that everyone else is doing,please tell me if i should!!
you mean Dragonwing? Or do you mean your own oc? Dragonwing was my idea and if you want to use her go ahead! Just I want some user credit for the character. If you want to use her as a side character no credit is needed. If you mean your own oc do it for sure!
I’m gonna use my oc,if you have any ideas for the story let me know!
I think you should make your own story. I can’t control how you write
Guys when do we know that we can make Apprentices into warriors? Cuz i like clikc it and then its:All cats old enough blah blah blah and rigth after it its meeting dismissed
If you have kits that are apprentices, then you can make them warriors.
Nah, 420kit
y'all what does daisy look like, the med cat keeps asking me for it and I have no clue what it is. I've been trying to make it spawn in the herb grounds, but since I didn't find any I started looking at other places outside the camp
It's the white flower with yellow in the middle, it doesn't always spawn. So keep going back and forth to the herbal grounds and outside the dens/to the beach to find it.
(probs I’m not sure) like the flower a simple white pearled flower with yellow pollen
Quick question,how can you send your characters from that picrew thing?
You have to download them, then you can post them. Where you post a comment, click the image thing
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Hey!
I also invited you to me game jam, link at the top.
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I don't do Scratch, sorry, so I can't join it. I have no other way of making games.
Hey, I invited you to be a moderator for my game jam, link is at the top.
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ok thx I will try lol I’m bad at making games
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Info on the main characters from Stormsong:
Stormsong: A dark gray, introverted, strong warrior. Sexuality: bisexual. Pronouns: she/her. Siblings: Amberkit and Skykit.
Flowerfur: A tan-colored long-furred warrior. Sexuality: lesbian. Pronouns: she/they. Siblings: Turtlesplash and Deathberry.
Deathberry: A dark brown, athletic warrior with red eyes. Sexuality: straight. Pronouns: he/him. Siblings: Turtlesplash and Flowerfur.
Turtlesplash: A kind, greenish-brown warrior. Don't try to tell me that there are no green cats, I know that! Sexuality: aromantic & asexual. Pronouns: he/him. Siblings: Deathberry and Flowerfur.
Tell me if I went overboard in equally representing all sexualities. (I think I kind of did, but I still managed to forget nonbinary T^T)
Nah your good lol. It's better to have too much representation than none at all
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Stormsong: Chapter 15
In this chapter, Flowerfur is the antagonist ("bad guy"), and she's also lesbian, but this is not supposed to mean that I think lesbians are evil, or anything like that. I don't want to inspire lesbian hate.
"I'm alright..." Deathberry groaned as he lay in the medicine den. Flowerfur and Stormsong gazed at him. Well, Stormsong gazed at him. Flowerfur had eyes only for Stormsong.
Flowerfur's lavender-purple eyes blazed on her tan face. Her bushy brown tail swished back and forth. Stormsong leaned slightly into her, a smile tugging at her lips even though she was watching a pained, ill Deathberry. Deathberry scanned the she-cats' faces with a slightly puzzled expression on his face. What is going on there? he wondered. Seeing this, Stormsong clenched her jaw, hiding her smile. I hope he didn't notice, she thought. Then, Why do I hope that? It's not like I have a crush on her. Well... do I?
"Hey! Apprentices!" said a deep voice behind Stormsong, jolting her out of her thoughts. Stormsong and Flowerfur spun around. Deathberry lifted his head. What apprentices? wondered Stormsong. Are Amberkit and Skykit apprentices already? But no, Stormsong didn't see her little siblings. She saw only Mudfur, staring into the medicine den. "Oh, right! You guys are warriors now," he said, but he didn't sound like it was a revelation. He knew all along. He was pretending he forgot, to annoy us, realized Stormsong, and wished she hadn't realized that.
Mudfur looked at Stormsong and Flowerfur. "Come over," he beckoned Stormsong. When she got near enough, he whispered, "I'm so disappointed in you. I thought you'd find a nice tom one day, not chase down a she-cat, you [SWEAR WORD!]" he said. Then he stopped, for someone had actually shouted, "Swear word!" He spun around angrily.
Amberkit and Skykit burst out laughing. Mudfur left the den quickly, humiliated. "We centered the deputy, Stormsong!" laughed Skykit. "Censored," corrected Stormsong. Amberkit turned to Skykit and said sternly, "You really have to stop pronouncing things wrong now that you're an apprentice, Skypaw."
"Wait, back up! You're an apprentice already?"
"Ah, it's just a game," smiled Amberkit. "I sat on top of the WillowStump and made Skykit an apprentice. I put a whole bunch of old moss on top, to really make myself as high as Yarrowstar!"
"YOU PUT OLD MOSS ALL OVER THE WILLOWSTUMP?!"
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the story is amazing wow
I LOVE IT! Although something funny I noticed, Leopardstar's father is also named Mudfur. The warrior Whiteclaw (reading Leopardstar's honor lol) that's uhm... if you google whiteclaw it's an alcoholic drink lol
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NO. WAY! I just googled it. :O
🤣🤣🤣
AWESOME!
Birchy when are you going to make another Stormsong chapter? I'm calling you birchy now whether you like it or not >:3
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Bubbly I just wrote it! If you're gonna call me Birchy I'm gonna call you Bubbly LOL. (I don't really mind the name actually.)
I LOVE BUBBLY
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Oh no, you weren't supposed to like it that much!!! LOL
Too bad! C:<
currently waiting on my water to boil for my ramen while reading ur story lol
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lol
Bubblepaws' Destiny Questions!
Who should Bubblekit's mentor be?
What suffix should Finpaw receive?
When should Bubblekit and Finpaw become mates? How?
This is for reader feedback on my book
(totally not too lazy to think for myself, no no)
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Finpaw should recieve Finblade!!!
Ooo, Finblade. So far that is the winner
I think finpaw should we called finflower XD, bubble kits mentor should beeeeee oakriver! bubblekit and finkit should become mates a week after they become warriors...and maybe bubblekit could get hurt from a badger attack, and finkit just gets overprotective and stays by her side none stop, and he confesses his love :D.
Great Idea Silent, but one issue is Oakriver is the medicine cat, so they can't be mates. Unless you're suggesting a forbid? (Which I am TOTALLY down for)
forbid!!!!!!!! >:D
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btw did u see my comment about ghostkit? and also do u think I could maybe help with the story? :D do u make it on word?
Finpaw = Finleaf or Finleap (FROM TWIGBRANCH X FINLEAP) :) Bubblekit's mentor should be Finpaw for chaos. Or have Cheetah star mentor her. Bubblekit and Finpaw should become mates by Bubblekit or Finpaw getting hurt and the other helping them. And when they almost have their warrior names
All of you have great ideas, but Finblade is still the winner, it makes me laugh because I always imagine a shark's fin with a katana on it lol
Hello! As you may remember. I AM MCAKLEE. I changed my username because I saw a cute picrew for it! I will continue the series. The next chapter will have "I AM MCAKLEE" At the top for clarification!
sorry on the next chapter would you mind putting credit for the character(dragonstar) at the top of the post?
Yup!
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Wait, yup you would mind, or yup you'll put credit? (to be clear I am not Glaceon, just kind of standing up for him)
I meant i will put credit:3
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good lol
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Bubblepaws' Destiny: Prolouge
“Born of the gentle flow and nurtured by the moon’s caress, bubbles shall rise as the river’s envoy to bridge the divided shores.”
This is the message the medicine cat, Oakriver of RiverClan, has received on the night of the full moon, also the night that Bubblekit was born to Lilacshine, and Featherfall. Her sister, Nettlekit, seems to have nothing to do with this prophecy, Bubblekit on the other paw...
"Oakriver," Cheetahstar called "Are you there?"
"Oh, sorry. I was lost in thought" Oakriver sighed, she has been thinking about that prophecy for 4 moons now.
"Right, what were you telling me about your herb store?"
As the two continued speaking, Bubblekit was splashing around in the water that flowed through camp, she always took a particular liking to the water, more than the other kits.
"Bubblekit! Stop splashing around in the water and go tell your sister to gather the cobwebs she can find around camp for Oakriver's store." her mother called, Lilacshine never treated Bubblekit like her sister. Bubblekit felt that her mother loved Nettlekit more than her. At least Finkit was nice to her, the tomcat was always kind to her, always bringing her flowers that he found around camp. She bounded over to her sister, "Lilacshine said to collect cobwebs around camp for Oakriver." she padded off, she didn't need to hear her sister's know-it-all response, she padded towards Finkit, nuzzling his nose, and they played mossball together.
"Cheetahstar, I believe there is something... special, about Bubblekit." Oakriver mewed.
"What do you mean?" Cheetahstar asked curiously
"Well, Cheetahstar, I believe she is part of a prophecy I received on the night of her kitting," she recited the prophecy perfectly from memory, "Born of the gentle flow, and nurtured by the moon's caress, bubbles shall rise as the river's envoy to bridge the divided shores."
Cheetahstar gasped, realizing the only plausible explanation. "It has to be her," she concluded
(Note: each chapter is 0.5-1 moon apart, this one is one moon. Bubblekit is now 5 moons old.)
Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 1
"Finkit, want to pretend that I'm prey, and you can hunt me?" Bubblekit mewed
"Sure, flower!" he mrrowed happily, he came up with that nickname a few moons ago, because she was beautiful, like a flower.
She chuckled, Finkit was the sweetest cat alive, sweeter than her mother, the cat who was supposed to love her most.
"Oakriver, do you think we should tell Bubblekit's mother and father about the prophecy?" Cheetahstar was speaking with Oakriver in the medicine den.
"I... don't think so, they don't really care about her as much as they should, they would just doubt us, and ignore it." Oakriver replied
"You're right, Oakriver. So, what do we do?
"The only thing we can, keep it to ourselves until she's at least 12 moons old." Oakriver replied gloomily, keeping a secret this big was going to be hard, especially for this long of a time.
"If you say s- What is that rushing noise?" Cheetahstar asked warily, "Is that what I think it is? That sounds like a... FLOOD!"
"FLOOD?!? Are you sur-- OKAY THAT'S A FLOOD. GET EVERYBODY OUT OF CAMP," Oakriver ordered "ESPECIALLY BUBBLEKIT"
They ushered every cat out of camp to a higher ground, as the camp flooded, it ruined all of their hard work on the camp for moons, "GO!" Troutheart, the deputy, ushered "WE HAVE TO GO, NOW!"
"Featherfall, why aren't you coming? What's wrong?!" Troutheart asked worriedly
"M-my daughter's in there... Nettlekit.." he mumbled
"Sh-she is?" Troutheart asked "Why?"
"She went to try and save her favorite stick..." he meowed, eyes full of grief
"Her favorite stick? I'm so sorry..." He glanced around, and he noticed another cat was missing: Hollytail, the elder. She must not have made it out. This flood was horrible, Nettlekit and Hollytail died, and all the prey wouldn't be back for moons!
"Featherfall, Lilacshine, I have bad news." Troutheart announced, "Nettlekit is... dead..."
The parents of the dead kit just stood there in silence for a moment, Lilacshine especially, as she didn't know.
Bubblekit sat in the clearing, a half-moon after the flood. She looked around her camp, it was destroyed, there was a makeshift den for everybody, no true dens. Her sister, Nettlekit, was dead, and so was Hollytail, this clan is weak, what will the other clans think? That we can't protect ourselves? The gathering was tomorrow, and the only prey we have now is fish. Every cat is weak, hungry, tired. This flood was the worst thing to happen in all of her 5 moons, she would be an apprentice soon enough, so would Finkit, he's a half-moon older than her, so it's time for him to become an apprentice, but Cheetahstar hasn't had time.
(1 day after the last chapter, full moon, right before the gathering.)
Bubblepaws' Destiny: Chapter 2
The cats traveled across to the gather, Cheetahstar, Troutheart, and Oakriver in the lead. RiverClan was the closest, so they arrived first. Oakriver leaped up onto the great oak, the branch that the medicine cats sat on, Cheetahstar hopped up onto the oak as well. Because Finkit was apprentice aged, he brought Finkit along.
"I know this an unconventional place for a meeting, but I believe it is time for Finkit to become an apprentice. I have brought his mentor with me. Finkit, step forward."
As Finkit padded forward, he trembled in excitement, who would his mentor be?
"Finkit, you have reached the age of six moons, and it is time for you to be apprenticed. From this day on, until you receive your warrior name, you shall be known as Finpaw. Your mentor will be Birchblaze. I hope Birchblaze will pass down all they know to you. Birchblaze, come forward. You have received excellent training from Sliverstone, and you have shown yourself to be brave, and courageous. You will mentor Finpaw, and I expect you to pass on all you know to Finpaw."
As Finpaw touched noses with Birchblaze, he was proud, he knew Birchblaze was patient, yet stern.
"Finpaw! Finpaw! Finpaw! the cats chanted, just as WindClan arrived.
Onestar leaped up to the rock, followed by Kestrelflight, while his deputy Ashfoot stayed near the bottom of the Great Oak.
A little while later, the clans were gathered, Cheetahstar announced "Let the gathering begin." Cheetahstar is going first "I have great news to announce, Finkit is now Finpaw, mentor is Birchblaze. I also have devastating news, there has been a flood in our camp. All prey has disappeared, and there are fish left, but not as many as before. Two cats have also died: Hollytail, and Nettlekit." He dipped his head to Onestar, signaling his turn
"All is well in WindClan, we chased a dog off our territory, and we have two new warriors: Dandeliontail, and Nettlefur." Onestar finished, dipping his head to Firestar
"Nothing special happened in ThunderClan this moon, only a rogue near the border, but we chased it off quickly. Blackstar, your turn."
Right as Firestar said that Blackstar yowled "ATTACK!" Every warrior there pounced on the RiverClan warriors. RiverClan tried to fight back, but they were weak from the lack of prey. Troutheart attacked Tigerheart, raking his tired claws down Tigerheart's flank, but Tigerheart pinned him easily, delivering hard blows to his soft underbelly, blood spilling out, he moved on, Troutheart was dead.
StarClan covered the moon and stars, it was complete darkness. RiverClan fled to their camp, Oakriver treated them, but she couldn't treat Troutheart's wounds. The clan deputy was dead. This has been a terrible moon. Finpaw went to sleep in his nest in the nursery, he still wanted to sleep there until Bubblekit became an apprentice.
Chapter 3 coming Thursday!
its really cool!!!
Thanks!