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would be nice if he was orange

i was going to add it on the fur but it looked weird so it just the eyes

Chapter 5

As the days passed, the tribe settled into their new home, thriving in the lush valley. The cats worked together to build their dens, hunt for food, and explore their surroundings. 

Echo watched with pride as her tribe flourished, their bonds growing stronger with each passing day. 

She knew that they had found a place where they could truly belong, a place where they could live in peace and harmony. 

One day, as Echo was patrolling the perimeter of the valley with Hawk, they noticed a group of unfamiliar cats approaching. The cats were from a neighboring tribe, led by the fierce warrior Redclaw. 

Echo and Hawk exchanged a wary glance, knowing that the arrival of these cats could bring trouble to their peaceful home. 

Redclaw and his cats stopped at the edge of the valley, their eyes scanning the tribe with a mixture of curiosity and hostility. 

Echo stepped forward, her spine straight and her gaze unwavering. "Greetings, Redclaw. What brings you to our valley?" Echo asked, her voice calm and steady. Redclaw sneered, his eyes narrowing as he looked at Echo and Hawk. 

"We have heard of your new home and wanted to see it for ourselves," Redclaw replied, his tone cold and menacing. "We have no intention of causing trouble, but we will not hesitate to defend our territory if necessary." 

Echo nodded; her expression neutral. She knew that Redclaw and his cats were a formidable force, and she had to tread carefully to avoid conflict. 

Hawk stood by her side, her muscles tense and ready for action. "We welcome you to our valley, Redclaw. We have no desire for conflict, but we will defend our home if threatened," Echo said firmly, her voice filled with determination. Redclaw's eyes narrowed, but he nodded in acknowledgment. 

"Very well. We will respect your territory and not cause trouble," Redclaw replied, his tone begrudging. With a flick of his tail, he signaled for his cats to follow him as they turned to leave the valley. 

Echo and Hawk watched as the cats disappeared into the distance, their hearts pounding with relief. They knew that the peace of their new home had been preserved, at least for now. Echo turned to Hawk, a small smile tugging at her lips. "We handled that well, Hawk. 

I'm proud of how we stood our ground," Echo said, her voice filled with pride. Hawk nodded, a glint of admiration in her eyes. "We make a good team, Echo. Together, we can face any challenge that comes our way," Hawk replied, her voice strong and unwavering. 

Echo felt a surge of gratitude for her friend and chief guard, knowing that with Hawk by her side, they could overcome anything. As they made their way back to the tribe, Echo felt a sense of peace settle over her. 

She knew that their new home was a place of safety and security, a place where they could thrive and grow together as a tribe. 

And with Hawk by her side, Echo felt confident that they could face whatever challenges came their way, their bond unbreakable and their spirits strong. And as they settled down for the night, Echo and Hawk slept peacefully, knowing that they were truly home in their beautiful valley. 

The stars twinkled brightly in the sky, casting a warm glow over the peaceful scene. And as the night enveloped them, Echo and Hawk drifted off to sleep, their hearts full of gratitude and their minds at ease. Together, they would face the future with courage and strength, knowing that they had found a place where they belonged, a place where they could be truly happy. 

And as the moon rose high in the sky, Echo and Hawk slept soundly, their dreams filled with visions of a bright and prosperous future for their tribe in their new home. The next morning Echo woke up in her den to see hawk wasn’t beside her, then Echo pricked her ears hearing someone running, she peeked her head out her den to see hawk, the white she-cats icy blue eyes were gleaming with worry. 

“Echo come quick!!! Redclaw and his clan are back again and they’ve….they’ve declared war on us if we don’t give up the valley!!!!!” hawk yowled, her voice screaming with worry and fear. 

“I’ve gathered all the guards to guard camp and the outside, and the warriors are defending the mountain so Redclaw and his cats can’t get in but…we’re out numbered…echo we need you!” hawk was on the verge of tears, then echo nuzzled hawk comfortingly then looked her in the eyes with defiant amber eyes. 

“Let’s go defend our territory….” Echo growled with a grin as she narrowed her eyes dangerously and was stalking towards the camp exit, she squeezed through the crack then walked to where snake, ice, and the other warriors were defending the mountain, keeping Redclaw and his cats away so they couldn’t get in. 

Echo narrowed her eyes as she stalked in front and stood between her warriors and Redclaw’s warriors, and Redclaw stood in front of echo with an evil grin plastered on his face. 

“We are taking this valley…” echo snarled at Redclaw’s words then yowled, her voice ringing with defiance “never!!! You’ll have to kill us before you can take our home, we found this valley, and we will NOT hesitate to defend it!!” Redclaw smirked, almost mockingly. “Aww that’s cute…” he then unsheathed his claws and smiled sinisterly “I accept your little challenge…” echo arched her back and yowled a battle cry as she unsheathed her claws and leaped at Redclaw, her tribemates and Redclaw’s clan-mates leaped into battle. 

The sound of claws clashing, yowls of pain, and battle cries filled the air as the two clans fought fiercely for control of the valley. Echo fought with all her strength, her claws, and teeth flashing as she took down enemy after enemy. Hawk fought fiercely beside her, her speed and agility unmatched as she darted in and out of the fray.

But Redclaw was a formidable opponent, his strength and cunning making him a dangerous foe. Echo squared off against him, their eyes locked in a fierce struggle of wills. As they fought, Echo could see the determination and cruelty in Redclaw's eyes, knowing that he would not stop until he had what he wanted.

But Echo was not about to give up without a fight. She dug deep, finding strength and courage she never knew she had. With a fierce battle cry, she lunged at Redclaw, her claws tearing into his fur. Redclaw snarled in pain, but he fought back with equal ferocity.

The battle raged on, both sides determined to win at all costs. But in the end, it was Echo and her tribe who emerged victorious. Redclaw lay defeated at her paws, his forces scattered and broken, she smirked and raised her head as she heard one of Redclaw’s cats yowl out. 

“Redclaw’s dead!!!!!!!!” but instead of running, the tribe of echoing silence saw that Redclaw’s cats were overjoyed? And they were yowling with victory; ice spoke to one of Redclaw’s cats with curiousness laced in his voice. 

“Why are you not running or retreating?” snake then spoke up, “ya, why are you…joyful that your leader is dead?” There were ten cats in Redclaw's group, and their names were Striker, Shadow, Blaze, Frost, Claw, Storm, Luna, Midnight, Thorn, and Raven. 

The cats looked at each other with a mixture of confusion and relief before midnight stepped forward, their eyes filled with gratitude. "Redclaw was a tyrant, a cruel leader who cared only for power and control. 

We were forced to follow him, but we never truly respected him. With him gone, we are free to choose our own path, to live in peace and harmony with your tribe. We have no desire to fight you any longer. We wish to join your tribe, to become a part of your family." Echo and her tribe exchanged surprised glances, not expecting this turn of events. But after a moment of consideration, Echo nodded with a smile. "You are welcome to join us, to become a part of our tribe. 

We are stronger together, and we welcome you with open hearts." The former members of Redclaw's group nodded in gratitude, their eyes filled with relief and hope. And as they joined Echo's tribe, the valley echoed with the sound of joyful yowls and purrs, signaling the beginning of a new era of peace and unity for all who called it home. The tribe celebrated their victory and newfound allies, knowing that together, they could face any challenge that came their way. 

And as they settled down for the night, under the light of the moon and stars, Echo and her tribe slept peacefully, their hearts full of gratitude and their minds at ease. They knew that they were truly home in their beautiful valley, surrounded by friends and allies who would stand by them no matter what. 

And as they dreamed of a bright and prosperous future, Echo knew that they had found a place where they belonged, a place where they could be truly happy. And with Hawk by her side, Echo felt confident that they could face whatever challenges came their way, their bond unbreakable and their spirits strong. 

And as the night enveloped them, Echo and Hawk drifted off to sleep, their dreams filled with visions of a bright and prosperous future for their tribe in their new home. 

 

The end 

Chapter 4

The tribe moved tirelessly among valleys, forests, mountains, rivers, and even twoleg roads. After days and days of searching….they have found their home….echo narrowed her eyes to see in the shimmering blinding sun light as she tried looking for something to hunt. As she sniffed around. She pricked her ears as she heard someone call out. “Over here!! Look!” echo shifted her eyes to see blaze, the golden tabby tom, he seemed to be looking at a…mountain? Echo padded over to where blaze was.

“What is it blaze?” echo asked with a slightly cold tone, lately echo has been on edge but…no one knows what about. “I um, found this…” blaze pointed his paw to a huge crack hidden behind the bush, echo arched an eyebrow as she looked at the crack, it seemed to be a passage…echo squeezed into the crack then once she bounced out, she was amazed by the sight.

It was a huge valley, surrounded by the mountain, there was just enough tree’s to give shade and there was many cracks in the mountain that could make dens, and to top it off there was a huge rock near a beautiful waterfall that shimmered like crystals, The territory was vast and rich with resources. There were plenty of prey animals such as rabbits, birds, and fish in the nearby river.

The trees provided shelter and the mountain cracks made perfect dens for the tribe. The waterfall provided a source of fresh water, sparkling like diamonds in the sunlight.

Echo felt a sense of relief wash over her as she looked out at the stunning landscape. This would be their new home, a place where they could thrive and grow as a tribe. Blaze purred in satisfaction as he looked around, his tail flicking with excitement.

"We've hit the jackpot, Echo," Blaze exclaimed, his eyes shining with joy. "This place has everything we could ever need."

Echo nodded in agreement, feeling a sense of hope and optimism for the first time in a long while. She turned to Blaze and smiled, a genuine smile that reached her eyes.

"We'll make this place our own," Echo said, determination in her voice. "We'll build our tribe here and ensure that we thrive in this beautiful valley."

 As the tribe started coming in through the crack they were amazed by the sight of the new valley. “This is amazing!!” flame squealed as she ran around, some of the older cats chuckled at her antics, echo cracked a small smile then walked towards that big rock then sat down as she looked at her tribe of cats, she then yowled a meeting call. “All cats young and old, gather under the high rock of echoing stars as I speak!” At that every cat in the tribe walked over and sat down, listening to their leader, as usual hawk sat on the side of the rock with a soft smile as she listened to echo speak as well.

“We have traveled tirelessly and after moons of searching…we have found our safe haven!” echo yowled, her voice echoing with triumph. The cats mewed with excitement and relief, eager to hear more about their new home. Echo continued, her voice calm and authoritative, "It is a place of lush green meadows, abundant prey, and fresh flowing streams.

A place where we can finally settle down and build a new life for ourselves." The tribe began to purr with delight, imagining a future filled with peace and security. Hawk's eyes gleamed with pride, knowing that their long journey had finally come to an end. "Tomorrow at dawn, we will have a big feast in this new territory to commence our settlement" Echo announced.

The cats cheered in unison, their hearts filled with hope and anticipation. As the stars twinkled overhead, casting a soft light on their furry faces, “We have many caves here in the cracks of the mountain, which will act as dens for all of us. Hawk, you and the guards find a den for you all, moth you do the same with the prey hunters, snake, you as well with the warriors, and crow, you with the queens. And finally, the elders you will do the same.”

Everyone nodded then despaired into their groups and started setting up their dens, echo walked around pride swelling in her chest as she watched everyone make their dens.

She had found a perfect spot to make for her den and so she went to go gather moss from outside of the valley, she walked towards the entrance of camp and squeezed out through the crack, she then walked for a few hours before she found the lake, she smiled as she immediately saw some moss laying still on a rock, she walked over and rolled the moss into a ball with her paw, and grabbed it in her jaws then she walked off, walking back to the new camp, she squeezed in through the crack entrance of camp then walked towards her den to make herself a nest, Echo settled into her new den, the moss soft and comfortable beneath her. She let out a contented sigh as she looked around at her new home.

Her tribe was bustling with activity, cats working together to build their new life in the valley. Echo felt a sense of pride and accomplishment as she watched them, knowing that they had finally found a place where they could truly belong.

As the sun began to set, Echo gathered the tribe under the high rock of echoing stars once again. She looked out at her cats, their faces illuminated by the fading light. She felt a deep sense of gratitude for each and every one of them, knowing that they had come together to make this new home possible.

"We have faced many challenges and hardships on our journey," Echo began, her voice strong and steady. "But now, we have found a place where we can thrive and grow. This valley will be our home, a place where we can live in harmony and peace."

The tribe let out a cheer of agreement, their voices echoing through the valley. Echo looked out at her tribe, her heart full of love and gratitude.

"We are a tribe, bound together by our strength and our loyalty to one another," Echo continued. "And together, we will build a future for ourselves here in this beautiful valley. Let us never forget the journey that brought us here and let us always remember the bond that unites us."

The tribe nodded in agreement, their eyes shining with determination. Echo knew that they were ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead, knowing that they had each other to rely on.

As the stars began to twinkle in the night sky, Echo felt a sense of peace settle over her. This valley was their new home, a place where they could finally belong. And she knew that together, they would conquer whatever obstacles came their way. As she leaped delicately off the rock, she was accompanied by her trusted chief guard and loyal friend, hawk that claws the sky, echo smiled softly as she looked at the snowy white, she-cat and her shimmering icy blue eyes.

“Hello hawk.” Echo smiled. “Good evening echo…off to your den?” hawk asked with bright blue eyes. Echo smiled as she brushed her tail under hawks chin leaving her in a slight daze.

“I was actually going to see how you were doing…darling” echo smirked slightly, hawk blushed at echo’s words and looked away bashfully. "I-I'm doing well, thank you," she stammered, her cheeks turning a deeper shade of pink. Echo chuckled softly and bumped her shoulder playfully.

"You're adorable when you blush, hawk," she teased, causing hawk to playfully swat at her. The two friends laughed and made their way to Echo's den, chatting and enjoying each other's company.

As they reached Echo's den, they settled down on the moss bedding, comfortable and content in each other's presence. Hawk looked at Echo with a soft smile, admiration shining in her eyes. "You're an amazing leader, Echo. I'm proud to serve by your side," she said sincerely, her voice filled with respect.

Echo felt a warmth in her chest at Hawk's words, grateful for her support and friendship. "And I'm grateful to have you by my side, hawk. You're not just my chief guard, you're my friend," Echo replied, her voice gentle and full of emotion.

The two friends sat in comfortable silence for a moment, enjoying the peace and tranquility of their new home. As the night settled around them, Echo felt a sense of contentment and calm wash over her. She knew that with her tribe by her side, she could face whatever challenges came their way.

And as she drifted off to sleep, she felt a sense of peace and belonging, knowing that she was finally home. The valley was their sanctuary, a place where they could thrive and grow together as a tribe. And with Hawk by her side, Echo knew that they would face the future with strength, unity, and unwavering loyalty.

Together, they would conquer whatever challenges came their way, their bond unbreakable and their spirits strong. And as the stars shone brightly in the night sky, illuminating the valley with their gentle light, Echo and Hawk slept peacefully, knowing that they were truly home.

Chapter 3


Moth gave a sigh of pride as she was watching her apprentice, wolf has been progressing miraculously. His hunting skills were amazing, moth gazed into the open as she was watching wolf playing with his siblings. Raven was dashing and dodging flames claws and wolf was chasing flame practicing his speed it seemed, she got to her paws and went over to the fresh kill pile it seemed to be low, maybe I should gather a hunting patrol. She thought to herself, she grabbed a squirrel then walked over where the siblings were and sat down and used her claw to rip off the fur of it then sunk her teeth taking a bite. She then looked over to see her brothers snake and ice chattering, she shrugged then looked around the crowd of cats for her sister, hawk. Then she spotted her, the chief guard was talking with the leader of the tribe, echoing whispers. Moth had always thought those two she-cats seemed to have a strange but strong bond. She pushed away the intrusive thoughts and focused on wolf, he was showing great promise, and she was determined to help him become the best hunter he could be.

As the sun began to set, Moth called for a hunting patrol to restock the fresh kill pile. Wolf eagerly volunteered to join, along with Flame and Snow. Another young she-cat, formally from pantherclan They set off into the area for hunting patrol,

Moth watched them go, a sense of pride swelling in her chest. Her apprentice was on his way to becoming a skilled hunter, and she knew that she had played a part in helping him achieve that goal. She settled down to eat the rest of her squirrel, content with the knowledge that she was doing her part to ensure the survival of the tribe.

As they came back moth was amazed by their catch, wolf had a hawk on his back and two mice dangling from his jaws, while flame had a big vole clamped in her jaw, while snow was carrying a rabbit. “Well done you all!” moth purred happily “now let’s place that all in that into the prey pile and you all can rest ok?” she looked at the three apprentices “ok!” They all said in unison then padded away. Moth searched the clearing and she saw her brothers snake and ice eating together, so she happily scampered over to them. “Hi boys!” she smirked slapping snake on the back of her head with her tail “hey watch it!!” snake hissed baring his teeth “jeez what’s under your fur lately snake?” ice muttered with a scoff, moth arched an eyebrow as she saw her brother tense up. “Er, nothing just leave me alone!” snake growled smoothing his fur to hide the tension he felt. Moth sighed as she sat up and walked away, she knew snake was hiding something, she just didn’t know what…but she WILL find out…soon. As she drifted off to sleep, Moth couldn't shake the feeling of unease that had settled in her chest. She knew that something was not right within the tribe, and she was determined to uncover the truth, no matter what it may be. But for now, she would rest and prepare for the challenges that tomorrow may bring. The next morning, Moth woke up determined to get to the bottom of her brother's strange behavior. She approached Snake and Ice, who were now sitting together by the waterhole, their usual playful banter replaced by a tense silence. "Snake, what's going on with you?" Moth asked, her eyes narrowing as she studied her brother's face. Snake looked away, avoiding her gaze.

"It's nothing, Moth. Just drop it," he mumbled, clearly uncomfortable with the conversation. Ice shot Moth a knowing look, his expression somber.

"Snake, you know you can tell us anything. We're your siblings, we're here for you," Moth persisted, reaching out to place a comforting paw on Snake's shoulder.

Snake hesitated for a moment before finally speaking, his voice barely above a whisper. "I...I made a mistake. A big mistake. And now...now I don't know how to fix it." 

Moth's heart sank as she realized the seriousness of the situation. She exchanged a worried glance with Ice before turning back to Snake, determination blazing in her eyes.

"We'll figure this out together, Snake. Whatever it is, we'll face it as a family," Moth reassured him, her voice firm and unwavering. 

 

Chapter 2

Snake groaned as he stretched waking from his slumber. He yawned and got up. He shook his pelt and he saw his brother, ice with the white she-cat frost. What is he doing with her? he thought. He shrugged it off and grabbed a sparrow from the prey pile. “Hello snake.” a voice mewed; snake looked up from his prey to see the amber eyes of the she-cat, storm. “h-hello storm” he stuttered a bit. “Mind if I share with you?” storm asked as she dropped down a fish. Snake sighed; how do these cats eat fish? Snake shook the thought away and just smiled. “of course.” He mewed as he ripped the feathers off his sparrow. Snake and storm talked about the past days in the clans while they ate. “It’s time we move!” snake lifted his head hearing his leader speak. Snake groaned as he lifted himself up to his paws, “c’mon then storm, let’s not make echo angry.” Snake muttered as he nosed the queen to her paws. “I wonder what has her fur ruffled up.” Storm scoffed; snake shrugged. “I don’t know.” Snake huffed, “I hope we get to our new home soon; my paws are killing me.” Storm stifled a laugh. “We are all in pain snake, just have faith we’ll be their sooner than you can hunt a mouse.” She smirked; snake chuckled. “I doubt it.” Snake lifted his head and opened his mouth to taste the air, he heard the rocks rumbling and the breeze was calm, then as he searched, he tasted the scent of fresh river water, a smile crept onto his face. “I smell water!” a voice called from the back. Snakes smile faded, he smelled other cats, and they did not smell friendly, he growled lowering his ears. “Stay here.” He looked at storm then pushed himself through the crowd. “Who are you?!” he snapped unsheathing his claws at the strange cats. “Hey! Chill out.” A light ginger tom said laughing. “My name is dawn of setting sky, and these are my companions, snap of crying eagle, and flicker of light.” Echo scoffed, her claws scraping the rocky hard floor. “We are the tribe of roaring thunder.” The tom smirked, moth rolled her eyes in disbelief, storm snarled lashing her tail, hawk stood watching this, her blue eyes like stone, she twitched her tail signaling to the guards and all the guards shouldered their way through the crowd of cats. And sat at the front looking at the strangers with caution. “We are just passing through.” Dawn grinned, snake hissed at dawn, his eyes switched over to his leader echo, who whispered something in hawks ear, which he did not catch. “This? this is the great tribe of roaring thunder?” shadow laughed lashing his tail at the three cats. “For once I agree with shadow, you are massively outnumbered you can’t possibly be a tribe.” Ice muttered, as he stepped to the left, to sit beside snake. Echo flicked her tail to silence her cats. “But ma’am we can’t possibly-“ hawk cut herself off looking into echo’s soft amber gaze, hawk nodded and stepped back. “You may stay for a little but once you fill your bellies, you will leave, and we must press on to our home.” Dawn nodded to the grey she-cat and gently pushed his way passed. Snake gave a side eye at dawn seeing the ginger tom grin. Snake pushed himself forward as he crouched low to the ground stealthy following dawn. He pricked up his ears as he heard voices coming from the side of the cave. “Dawn you cannot be serious. We should just grab prey, steal the kits, and run.” A voice hissed. “Calm down flicker, we will just grab the prey and eat, but once they aren’t looking, we grab the kits and run.” Dawn smirked; his cats gave silent purrs of agreement. A growl rumbled in snakes throat as he slipped away to his tribe. “Look who we have here.” Dawn smirked, flicker pushed snake down, snap pinned him keeping him still, snake struggled and spat at the cats harshly. Snap leaned to his ear, and she whispered, “if you fight, you’ll only make this harder for yourself.” Snake let out a silent gasp, then stopped struggling and looked up at dawn waiting for the tom to speak. “It seems you were spying on us, yes?” snake nodded narrowing his eyes, dawn unsheathed his claws and brought one paw to snakes neck, “we need someone like you.” Dawn grinned; snake was puzzled. Why did this tom need him? Was he needing a spy? a warrior? What was it? “What do you want from me you fox-heart?” snake snarled through a choked tongue, as snap still had her paw on his neck. Dawn looked at snake with an Icey grin, “we need a spy, and you are the perfect tom for it.” Snake curled his lip with rage. “Shove a mouse down your throat! Theres NO WAY I’m betraying my tribe.” he hissed. Dawn’s eyes narrowed and he flicked his ear, snap let go of snake and grinned, snake arched an eyebrow then turn his head to dawn, the ginger tom unsheathed his claws, snake’s eyes widened with surprise dawn swung his claws at the grey and white tom constantly. Snake tried to dodge, and did but only nearly, dawn snarled and bit down on snakes leg and clawed his torso, snake yowled in pain, after 20 heartbeats of the two toms fighting…snake gave in, “now, are you willing to listen to my demands you piece of fox-dung?” Dawn hissed his eyes narrowed menacingly almost as if he was challenging snake to fight again. Snake gave a nod and winced in pain. “What is it you want?” snake growled. Dawn smirked, “I need you to spy on those mangy flea-pelts, I want to find out their weak spots, where are they most vulnerable?” snake snarled, he can’t possibly go through with this!! snake kept in a hiss of rage and just nodded, dawn sheathed his claws and let snake go. Snake pushed himself to his paws and ran off. But just before he left, he heard dawn speak, “looks like we have a new follower.” Rage inflamed inside of snake; he couldn’t believe he was going to do this! He was going to betray his family, his friends, his leader. 

Snake ran back to his tribe, his heart pounding with guilt and shame. He couldn't believe what he had agreed to do. How could he betray his own tribe like this? He found Echo and Hawk talking quietly at the edge of the cave. He approached them with his head held low, unable to meet their gaze.

"Snake, what's wrong?" Hawk asked, concern evident in her voice. Snake took a deep breath, steeling himself for what he was about to do. He told them everything, about meeting Dawn, about the deal he had made to spy on their tribe. Echo's eyes widened in shock, her fur bristling in anger. "How could you do this, Snake? How could you betray us like this?" she hissed; her voice filled with disappointment. Snake hung his head in shame, unable to produce a good enough excuse for his actions. "I'm sorry, Echo. I don't know what came over me. I was afraid, I didn't know what else to do," he mumbled, feeling the weight of his betrayal heavy on his shoulders.

Hawk looked at him with a mix of pity and understanding. "We will deal with this, Snake. But you need to make things right. You need to find out what information Dawn is after and report back to us. We need to know what we're up against."

Snake nodded his heart heavy with guilt. He knew he had made a mistake, but he was determined to make amends and redeem himself in the eyes of his tribe. He would do whatever it took to protect his family and ensure their safety.

As he slipped away from the group, Snake knew that his loyalty would be tested like never before. He had a choice to make - to follow through with his deal and betray his tribe, or to find a way to turn the tables and protect his own. The decision weighed heavily on his mind as he disappeared into the shadows, ready to face the consequences of his actions.

 

Chapter 1

Ice, panted as he came up a cliff, his calico fur ruffled in the wind. Ice looked at frost who looked uneasy and nervous. Frost was one of the queens from maplestar’s group of cats. She used to be sweet and kind and fierce before maplestar became leader, but now she was always scared and uneasy. And her kits will be born soon and so she was very protective. “Are you ok frost?” ice asked as he helped the she-cat up the cliff. “If you think that prickling with fear and uneasy thinking, we will be pounced on any second is ok, then sure I’m fantastic” she muttered sarcastically. Ice gave an amused purr and pressed his pelt to hers to give her warmth. The she-cat was freezing. And ice could understand her fear, her mate crowsnap, was a loyal tom to maplestar. He did not care for anyone except himself, and he was overly aggressive, so she did not want to endanger her family but of course the only family she had were her kits… “it’s ok if you’re not alright frost” ice smiled with a respectful lick on her shoulder. Snake padded up to his brother with a grin. “Seems like you fancy her” he said with a slight snicker. “Shut up I’m sure you’re not different snake” ice gave a wicked smirk, his blue eyes glittering with mischief “oh stop it mouse-brain” snake hissed and flicked his brother’s head with his tail then walked back over to the queen he was protecting. Storm the black and white she-cat was part of wolfclan and named storm’trail before echo gave her, her new name. storm of flooded rivers. Ice knew that his brother had taken a liking to the fierce she-cat, but snake is too embarrassed to admit it. Ice turned to frost and started to talk with her about her kits, frost always was happy to talk about her kits. Ice yawned; his paws were aching. He trotted through the crowd of cats, past the queens and other warriors and prey-hunters but only to be stopped by two of the guards at the front. One was a dark grey tom. fang. And the second was the dusty brown she-cat, mouse. The two were looking at him, their eyes burning into his pelt. “Let me pass” he huffed, trying to push pass only for fang to swat him back. “Sorry ice no one can approach the leader right now chiefs orders” mouse mewed her brown eyes full of apology. Ice gave a sigh, “I just want to talk to the leader” he mewed, as he picked up his paws trying to wake the sleep from them. Fang shook his head. “Sorry ice we would have to ask the chief.” without a reply from the calico tom. the two cats padded back to hawk and their leader, echo. With a disappointed sigh ice walked back to frost, his tail drooping. “what’s wrong ice?” The she-cat placed her tail on his shoulder. “I was going to ask echo if we could stop and rest and hunt” he murmured. “No luck I assume?” Frost gave a sigh, ice noticed she looked tired and hungry as well. “Nope but look on the bright side we will be at our home hopefully soon.” Ice smiled his tail tip twitching. Everyone had stopped immediately, ice accidentally crashed himself into boulder, mouse’s brother. “Hey, watch it ice.” boulder gave a hiss as he snatched his tail out from ice’s paw-path. Ice scoffed at boulder’s rudeness. “what’s going on?” frost, mewed lifting her head up, perking her ears. “I don’t know.” Ice meowed, “I’ll go check it out though” he muttered as he swiveled his way around the crowd of cats. He crouched low to the cold rocky floor so the guards could not see him, and as soon as his sister hawk and echo were in sight he sprang to his paws. “what’s going on?” he asked as he padded up to them. “Ice?!” hawk spat with shock, and she shook her head. “Those mouse-brains, I told the guards to-“ “don’t, I um snuck past them.” Ice muttered as he flattened his ears knowing he had gotten fang and mouse in trouble. “So why are we stopping?” the tom twitched his ears looking at his leader, echo curiously. The grey she-cat was the leader of the tribe and the first one to become friends with ice and his siblings when they met, she was a very fierce and pretty she-cat. He knew that echo did not have a great relationship with her parents. Ice and his siblings do not even know his father and his mother said that he was a mistake and disappointment. Echo and ice and his siblings were the first cats to make the journey and create the tribe. “We need to rest.” Echo muttered as she looked at her warrior. Ice gave an exhale of relief; his paws were aching to the bone. He needed rest, and he looked at the tribe seeing that they were tired as well. It had been moon set as the tribe were beginning to rest their aching bones, the guards were chattering to each other and the queens with the elders, and the hunters with the warriors. Ice saw there was a prey-pile, and so he swiped his tongue over his lips and padded on over to it. “Hey, look its mister ice fang himself.” ice heard a snicker from behind him. He lifted his head and turned to see grey, the tom had a grin on his face. “I’m not in the mood for your bullying grey” ice muttered rolling his eyes and grabbed a rabbit from the pile then pushed past trying to walk away, grey smacked him with his paw sending him tumbling into a rock and his prey fell from his jaws. “You don’t get a say so, you rotting piece of fox-dung.” A cold icy anger shot through the calico tom and ice rounded on the large grey tom. “Watch your mouth fox-heart.” a growl rumbled in ice’s throat. “Who are you talking to?” grey flattened his ears, hovering over the calico tom. Ice unsheathed his claws and his fangs gleamed in the moonlight. “You may be my tribe mate, but I won’t show mercy on you if you-” “if I what?” Grey said laughing circling the tom. With no more patience to keep him steady ice let out a raging yowl leaping at the grey tom. The tribe had run to the two toms to see what was going on. In five heartbeats the entire tribe was in a crowded circle watching the battle. Ice had grey pinned to the ground, grey kicked ice in the stomach and snarled something loud enough for him to hear, “you selfish fox-heart” grey spat, then aimed a blow at ice’s ear. Ice has never felt this alive for moons, he felt as if he was in battle with an enemy warrior. And so, he used the techniques he had learned from being in the tribe so long, he knew he had a better advantage because even though grey was a warrior when they had met ice had been more experienced with the tribe. Ice leaped then twisted his body and before he landed, he swiped his claws at grey’s muzzle causing the grey tom to rear back. With a flash of white that dashed into the crowd ice knew that frost was watching, this was his chance, to prove himself to his tribe, himself, and her. Grey leaped at ice, the two toms clawed each other rolling around and slashing, fur flew in the air and blood splattered on the grass. Grey pinned ice on the ground slamming his head down, ice was panting heavily as blood was oozing from his scars, he knew he could not take anymore. Grey gave a shocked yowl as something barreled into him making him unbalanced. Ice blinked, he saw frost, the white she-cat had her ears flattened and she was standing over ice glaring with hatred at grey. “Stay away from him you snake-heart!” frost hissed at grey, everyone gasped. Grey gave a scoff and a grin, “and who’s gonna stop me?” “I am.” a voice meowed clear and cold from behind the grey tom. Grey stopped dead in his tracks and slowly turned his head to face his leader, and in a heartbeat, she slashed his cheek. “Is this how you treat your tribe grey?” she hissed, pinning him slamming his head down on the cold rock floor. “n-no ma’am” he stuttered unable to hide his fear. “Everyone!! We will move at sun high and no one and I mean NO ONE will fight or argue or if I hear any of it…there will be consequences.” The grey she-cats amber eyes were blazing with an unknown anger, what had gotten her fur in a bundle? Ice wondered to himself. He just shrugged it off and he walked to a place at the nearby cave the tribe had settled at, and he found himself a soft patch of grass to sleep in, and he laid his head on his front paws, he then felt soft fur brush against his pelt, he fluttered his eyes open and met the soft, hazel gaze of the beautiful white she-cat he admired, frost. “I think you fought bravely.” Frost mewed with a purr as she was licking his scars. “I wish my kits did not have a tom like crowsnap for a father. And they could grow up and be like you, strong, brave, fearless.” She turned her head away from him and sighed laying her tail on her swollen stomach, ice let a purr rumble in his throat, and he felt sympathy for the young queen. “It must be hard, being forced to something like this.” ice laid his paw on hers “once the kits are born, if you would like I could…father them.” He muttered. Frost nuzzled his cheek and ice froze, his pelt heating up. “I would love that.” A smile crept on ice’s face, he then slept next to frost, curling his tail around her.

Btw!! Who wants to read my fourth warrior cats book? Echoing silence a haven is found!!

does no one like my wc books anymore? :< cuz I haven't had any feedback at all, NOT EVEN FROM MY SCHOOL TEACHERS :(

I want to read it...

its on kit to leader, I think. all the chapters

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Allegiances

The tribe of echoing silence

Leader: echoing whispers\echo: a beautiful grey she-cat with amber eyes

guards. (Cats who guard the territory and camp)

Chief guard: hawk that claws the sky\hawk: a white she-cat with blue icy eyes and a scar from her eye to her stomach.

shadow that strikes in darkness\shadow: a jet-black tom with amber eyes.

Fang of fox\fang: a grey tom with black stripes and amber eyes.

Mouse that sleeps in winter\mouse: a dusty brown she-cat

Prey-hunters. (Cats who provide food for the tribe)

Chief prey-hunter: moth that hovers near fire\moth: a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.

Black tooth of bear\tooth: a black tom with hazel eyes.

Rain of storm\rain: a light ginger she-cat.

Blaze of speeding rivers\blaze: a golden tabby tom.

Queens. (She-cats nursing or caring for kits)

fern of falling heather\fern: a dark ginger she-cat.

song of singing crow\crow: a brown she-cat with white paws.

storm of flooded rivers\storm: a black she-cat with a white tail and white stripes.

Cold of frozen frost\frost: a white she-cat with grey paws and hazel brown eyes.

Trainee’s. (Toms and she-cats six moons and older in training)

Raven that flies with wings of black\raven: a black tom with green eyes and a white muzzle as well as white paws.

Wolf of wind\wolf: a light grey tom.

Flame of sun\flame: a ginger she-cat with emerald eyes.

Snow that blankets the ground/snow: a white she-cat with grey leopard spots, and violet eyes

Warriors. (Toms and she-cats in charge of fighting and protecting the tribe)

Snake inside a rock\snake: a grey and white tom.

Ice of frozen water\ice: a dark calico tom with blue eyes.

Grey vine on rock\grey: a long-haired grey tom.

Boulder in water\boulder: a chestnut brown tom

Elders. (Toms and she-cats retired or to injured to continue their duties)

Eye of fox\fox: a pale she-cat who is blind in one eye.

Whisker of soot\soot: a black and white tom with a scarred muzzle. The oldest tom in the tribe.

Grey claw of sky\claw: a grey tom. With a muzzle black from age

Meadow of flowers\meadow: a ginger she-cat who is blind from battle.

Cats outside of the tribe

Pip: an orange and black tom with unusual eyes.

Flash: an orange ginger tom

Spark: a white she-cat with grey splotches.

Twig: a light grey she-cat.

dawn of setting sky\dawn: a light ginger tom

Flicker of light\flicker: a pale tom with grey stripes and a torn ear.

snap of crying eagle\snap: a white she-cat with brown stripes

Would it be weird if I did another OC for my own character challenge :(

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Do you mind if I requested a story character create challenge like you did?

go ahead

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Alright, here's my challenge: make my story cat characters based on their discription and think of their pasts, and I MAY use them in my fifth book, also I need name ideas for my fifth warrior cats echoing silence series book. the only cats who DONT need a past: are the sibling, moth, snake, ice and hawk. and hawks secret crush....echo. also btw spoiler for people who wanna compete in the challange but haven't read the books on kit to leader comments. shadow that strikes in darkness, or formally shadow strike, is echoing whispers father!!!

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check out, my book aligences, and then check what the challenge is, also I need name ideas for the fifth book. and...ideas for the fifth book o-o

Also lemme know if you want me to do more of your OCS and I would LOVE help with my stories, cuz yours are amazing birchblaze!!!

Do any OCs you want (Moonstar did like four which is crazy but awesome). You can do one she already did if you want. Also I can totally help with your stories! when do you want? :)

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it's not weird, it's great! moss-shadow has a "weird imagination" too that creates names like Crystalblaze. Like crystals can catch on fire. Or Sparrowtail, who has a tail that somehow really looks like a bird lol.

any time!! I honestly think it'd help if we knew each other and could talk online lol, u got Fortnite or PS4?

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padlet lets you have free accounts with an email, or you can even be anonymous. I just made one for us.

https://padlet.com/Birchblaze/silent-echos-birchblaze-jmfdejr6tw08fdc

Just put up your drafts anytime, or we can talk when we happen to be on at the same time

sadly my parents banned me from padlet, discord, google chats...

oh...

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Let's talk on this game https://chewes.itch.io/typerrunner

It's cool and cute and no comments on it

https://cdn.picrew.me/shareImg/org/202405/254030_a2K7HR9n.png

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wow this is amazing! she looks a bit like gemstone 

Lemme try a link

For some strange reason it won't let me show it!!!!

For birchblaze. Here are her face details 

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hey everyone, just a reminder, there's a challenge up to make Stormsong characters! :)

Participants: silent_echos, moonstar

1st place: Moonstar's Stormpaw

2nd place: Moonstar's Mudfur

3rd place: Silent_Echos's Stormsong

4th place: Moonstar's Moonheart

5th place: Moonstar's Amberkit

6th place: Moonstar's Skykit

7th place: Moonstar's Shadowfall

8th place: Moonstar's Deathberrykit

Sorry echo you got moved down another spot :(

aw thanks...I feel known 😭

Alsoooooo WHY Y'ALL STARTING PARTIES WITHOUT THE PARTY CAT Y'ALL HAHAHAHA!!! 🎉🥳🥳🎉🎉

Parties? I dont get it

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oh sorry, i've only been looking on west woods over borders. try commenting here instead if you do any more :)

They were these

I'm secretly crushing on him rn...

who?

Who? Shadowfall?

oh wow i really like this one

TY

New contest Entry

thanks! I'll rank that one asap

ty

And another

I agree that Deathberrykit wasn't the best

lol... he would be pretty good if he was a slightly lighter color though, so you could see his body better

true

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No, we haven't. Hi Moonstar!

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where's the cold stone?

nv got it.

i still don't get it, u mean the leaf??

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Meet Bee'Wing :D A member of sunclan. She joined sunclan as a kit as her owner had tried to dye her fur like pikachu (which is why she is yellow) but she ran away in the process of her fur being dyed. She has recently became a warrior

omg this is so funny! pikachu :)

go to where the dens are and click top right corner

how to become med cat? i just started playing and i can't find the med den...

walk around FireClan until you see a small sandy area with a cave in the top right corner. click there. you'll see a grumpy cat on a sandy area. go right. Cave. pick the left tunnel and ask to be Lunarclaw's apprentice :)

anyone know where the stone is for the fireclan memorial thing

Fallen clan, talk to the black cat outside

thanks

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I'm doing an OC from my own series! Flowerpaw, Turtlepaw's lesbian sister who has a crush on Stormpaw.

For birchblaze, oc: stormsong.

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OMG this one looks amazing! thanks!

i could go further and make face details with picrew if you'd like.

i like it as it is, but you can do that if you want to. thanks again for making her, no one else has made a character! (except me)

Here is echoing whispers\echo, leader of the tribe of echoing silence. Gender: she-cat, sexuality: lesbian, crush: her Chief guard of the tribe, hawk that claws the sky\hawk. Siblings: unknown. Past: abused and neglected for her whole life, and looked down upon as an a kit and apprentice. 

wow. i love her eyes!

How do you kill cats? (Im stuck on the part where the ghost says, "A valid idea. It may work." and idk how to poison the fish)

if u war, u go to med cave when the cat there gone, and take red berries. then click on the river and ta da u poisoned a feesh

Im a medicine cat app how do I go to cold stone?

you have to be an experienced medicine cat to be able to go to cold stone. you need to heal lots of cats. the faster way is just to murder the guards, go in. for a prophecy, click on cold stone

For all the Stormsong fans (read in kit to leader comments) here are a few challenges! Make them look whatever you imagine them to look like and post them in the comments!

Make Stormsong/paw/kit

Make Turtlepaw/kit, Deathberrypaw/kit, or Flowerpaw/kit

Make Cherrytuft or Shadowfall

Make anyone else in the series!

how do I reunite sparrowtail with her family?

omg i like his eyes

thx

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these are the cats of my wc book series, echoing silence. first I have... hawk that claws the sky, or hawk for short. gender: she-cat, sexuality: lesbian. crush: her leader, echoing whispers. siblings: brothers: snake under rock\snake. and ice of frozen waters\ice, sister: moth that hovers near fire. 

is there any way you could screenshot the oc on your device so we can see it better

I'm on a Samsung PC on that game and I'm new to Samsung items so idk how to screenshot or anything like that 

i think my pc is different but try pressing print screen on your keyboard if the buttons there

question, who wants to see my ocs?

i totally do! show me echo!

ok, but she may look strange like hawk, sry 

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Also after the ghost says "A valid idea. It may work" HOW DO YOU MAKE THEM LET YOU KILL PEOPLE

I remember doing it before, but I forgot how. The dude who is like "If you don't have anything for me, leave me alone" Is like "Okay fine, you want to help me?" and then you do something that I forgot.

How do you go to the Cold Stone? I'm a med cat, but it wont let me in

heal I think like...6 or more cats when they need help, then go back to lunarclaw everytime

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