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Bramble listened, her brown fur bristling, until Lilac's mate, Cherry, shouldered his way into the box-nest.

"Hey, Bramble, hey, Gorgeous-"

He cut off in shock, trembling in front of her dead body. Lilac's gray-and-white fur was matted with blood, her green eyes glazed. Bramble slowly made her way to Cherry's side.
"She...she died giving birth to these three."
Cherry cast a glance over the one still body and the two squirming ones. His eyes flared.Bramble felt uneasy. "Er...Cherry?" She queried quietly.
Cherry was trembling with grief. "I..loved her."
Bramble's eyes misted with tears. "I know. But these kits are reminders of your mate. Treasure them, and take care of them like you would do if Lilac were still here. She would want you to do this. Please, Cherry. Take them with you."

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NEXT CHAPTA

As soon as Bramble stopped thinking, she looked in alarm as the kit began to..glow. Starlight glimmered on her whiskers and paws, and her tightly closed eyes began to open. They showed the most brilliant shade of purple, the irises so dark they looked like the shadows of the Dark Forest. The kit slowly doubled in size, until she was the size of Raspberrystar, the leader of Fairclan. Fairclan was, by its name, made in the fair, where cats went to have shows and all that stuff. Soon, the kit calmly bounded past Bramble, then leaped onto the High-Bench, where Raspberrystar made his annoucements. The kit was glowing with Starlight, and her gaze flicked to Bramble. A faint chanting began. As Bramble turned to Lilac, she saw her gaze dulling rapidly.

Oh ColdFire, NO! Nonononononono!

Lilac's head lolled slightly, her mew a whisper as she mumbled, "Take care of my kits."

The first kit was already growing weaker. The second kit was dead, and the third kit...was well, still on the rock, starshine glowing around her body. The chanting was louder, growing louder and louder. Bramble cocked her head in questioning, her ears straining.

Berrystar!
Berrystar!
Berrystar!
Berrystar!
Berrystar!

Bramble's eyes glittered in amazement. Who is Berrystar?

CHAPTER TWO: THE DEATH OF LILAC, AND THE BIRTH OF BERRY

Bramble yowled in discomfort as the blood washed over her paws. Lilac's chest heaved for breath. The kit in front of her was pale-cream, with darker brown head fur, a thick dark brown furry tail, and a light brown chest. She had the markings of a leopard.

Bramble was puzzled. No other kit was born like that. This one is..detailed.

Hello! Hi. I just wanna write this story about a kit called Berry. (She was in Fairclan)

"Just one more push, Lilac!"

Lilac grunted as she kit heaved inside of her.  Great ColdFire! She thought, whining in pain and struggling to push the last kit out of her . I never thought this would be so hard!
There were already two kits in front of her, One squirming, and one completely stilled.
Lilac sucked in a breath. Her strength was running out.
The medicine cat, Bramble, struggled to remain calm. When will the stubborn kit come out?

What happened was horrific. Lilac screamed, the kit slid out, and blood spilled everywhere.

Wow! You're very creative! You should turn that into an episode of a warrior cat series... Or maybe create your own warrior cat series about Berry!

I can’t download it but everytime I miss click it keeps kicking me out I haven’t got to the point of the story :(

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no 😭

Shykit was hiding in the nursery as always while the other kits, Snowkit, Firekit, and Dawnkit, were playing moss ball. Shykit was always very shy and the smallest kit, and that made it very difficult to play with her littermates. Dawnkit was also her best friend. Dawnkit ran up to Shykit and mewed "Come on Shykit, come and play moss ball with us." Lilacheart, their mother told Dawnkit "If Shykit doesn't want to play with y'all she doesn't have to." Dawnkit looked disappointed "Oh, I was hoping she would want to play with us before we become apprentices." 

"ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO SWIM GATHER BENEATH HIGH ROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING!" Sunnystar yowled. Lilacheart laughed "Speaking of which, Dawnkit."   "Snowkit, Firekit, Dawnkit, Shykit come up. we are lucky Shykit is still with us from almost dying at birth."

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That was short..... :( I wanna hear MOREEEE

u will I promise

Do the kits we have when we mate actually grow up or no?

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no, hopefully they do in a future update

what is the brown kit that looks like littlebird

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starlingkit

where can I find a stone

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black cat outside fallen clan

how can I keep getting escorted out of the fallen clan?

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talk to the black cat (the one with the stone I told you about) a lot until you "teleport" to outside fallenclan

where is the cat's den's medicinal healing nest?

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Cave, the one to the right of grumpy old white cat 

look at all my pictures and tell me which is going to be leader

Who wants to hear my oc Shybreeze (Shystar) story

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I do

I tried ;(

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here is moss shadow >:D 

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The pelt color is a little different...

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the creator of this game is a boy and the character in the games is more orange.

True I couldn't. are the exact colour

it’s not hard to change the colour. Hit the orange button to start with. It might just work.

guys how do you get tigerheart off patrol for the ghosty whosty when ur in sunclan

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You cant

damn

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ikr!!!

When I radomized my name it gave me Pantherstrike and thats perfect for a black cat!

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Wow!

go on the padlet if you can

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"a prophecy from you-know-who himself?"

HARRY POTTER REFERENCE??

Yasss

am i the only person who hears psycho killer by Talking heads when you do the sparing?

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when the game starts look in the credits. yup it’s psycho killer!

hang on a second.. we can spar?

I have choosen the path of a murderer >:)

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Hey Mossy, my friend Glaceondragon999 wants to know how to upload a Scratch game onto Itch.io. (I tried to ask you in Scratch but then I got muted for an hour because I said the website name)

You have to convert the game to Javascript before uploading

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Hmm ok thanks

how to do that?

guys where's hollybreeze..

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backstage in SunClan, click the opening above Sleetshine

:thumbs up: thanks!!

Birchblaze:3 I have a message for you. WHERE IS THE PICREW WHERE U GOT UR PROFILE?????

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https://picrew.me/en/image_maker/254030
Also, you can call me Birch or Birchy if you want :)

I’ll stick to birchblaze

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ok nice

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hey:3 Yuki here:3 I JUST NOTICED I LUV FPE AND MOSS-SHADOW SO- I KINDA MADE MYSELF.... AHEM

niceee

so um, i got all the K-lling badges >:3

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With the c+m trick?

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Yuki are you Glaceon? Just wondering cause you two keep finishing each others' sentences and stuff

no we are not the same person sorry for the confusion. I meant to put a ? At the end of that and forgot to

I SEARCHED 'Breezestar west woods' AND SCROLLED AND IT SHOWED A COMMENT I POSTED-

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AAA

How do you learn the truth about Tansystar and Briarripple's father?

my random name was ryeheart

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WAIT. WUT???

i love this game lo

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Yes yes, randomized name: Flowerflower

LoL

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WHAT?

lol

where is the wilted flower

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hit c and m keys at the same time type in "divorce" that's one way to get it

the gathering was 2 nights long lol

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lol

I posted a panel of storm song check it out 

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I don't see it

Does anyone know where i can find ace? Iv'e looked all around and outside of sunclan at night, but i can't seem to find him.

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You can't see Ace. He hasn't been added to the game yet.

no he has he's in the show

where is the cold stone?

Go to brambleclan and keep going until you see a diamond arrow and press it. There will be two caves. The coldstone is in the left one. But the only way i know how to get in is to kill all the cats guarding it.

you can ask lunarclaw to be her apprentice, then follow her instructions and heal cats untill she says 'youre an exp medicine cat' when you go into her den, usually it'll take like 10 cats healed, you can also used the comand magic (i belive, if not, try wizard) to automatically get the herbs needed to heal a cat

Can anyone tell me, what is doing Random True is creating a character, pls? TwT (btw did Nightwhisper and choose FireClan where her mother is, who understand that understand *skeleton emoticon*

Hehe
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lol

she's been reborn!

yos

pfffttt they hate each other- and nightwhisper's dead she never went to fireclan ILLEGAL LORE!

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It's True Random. If you turn it on you'll get entirely random colors for your cat, usually not realistic (green tail, purple ear, etc)

Thx, I was really wonder<3

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true random turns you into a rainbow barf

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I guess that's one way to put it lol

Nightwhisper umm... lets just say she sent herself to the place of cold waters. You can go to the west woods wiki for more.

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Yeah. (Warning: Do not do the following if you are easily moved by sad things.) Go to Wattpad website and search for "Sliverstone's Destiny". It takes a while, but you get to the part where Nightwhisper sends herself to Cold Waters. It's.......... :'(

Yeah, i know about it... that's why i said ,,Who understands, that understands" because she was depressed because of her mother...

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what does Who understands that understands mean?

Random true makes your cat random but usually with unrealistic colors.

(TW: Mentions of sU1c1d3) She did not join fireclan, instead she joined the place of cold waters. In kit to leader, if you keep talking to her she will eventually say "Do you think you will you miss me when I'm gone?" The next time you visit her, she isnt there, instead, there is just flowers. If you click/tap on the flowers the text "I wonder where Night'Whisper went." (Hint: she jumped into the river to end everything, here is a website to go into her story: https://westwoods.fandom.com/wiki/Nightwhisper)

random true makes the cat have neon colors

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Thunderstorm's Life

This is how my OC, Thunderstorm looks. He's a half-Clan cat; half ThunderClan, half RiverClan. He lives in ThunderClan. His mother is Amberflower from ThunderClan and his father is Stormcloud from RiverClan. He's serious, strict, good organizer and loyal. His past was really difficult, being a half-Clan cat. Thunderstorm has a crush on Snowfur, but he doesn't want to show it. He wants his own kits so they could also carry his legacy and strength to generation to generation. He's the strongest ThunderClan warrior. Thunderstorm is destined to save the Clans. The prophecy is: 

When the moon gets covered by dark clouds, a shadow shall fall upon the Clans, but have hope, for Thunder will rise to dispel the darkness that never ends.

This prophecy was interpreted by Goosefeather and had been told to Amberflower when she was expecting kits. Thunderstorm was her first and only kit. His destiny has not yet been started yet, but when the time comes, he alone, will be the saviour. He is 45 moons old. Moreover, when he was born, his size was twice the size of a newborn kit. He looked 2 moons old.

When he was a kit, he received a prophecy from Goosefeather, the previous medicine cat, to become a medicine cat apprentice, thus becoming one. On the day before he was going to become a true medicine cat, he again received a prophecy from Goosefeather to become a warrior.  The next day, Thunderpaw had declared at sun-high that he would become a warrior instead. Sunstar, the leader of ThunderClan, happily agreed this and it came as a shock when this was announced in the Clan meet. Even his mother fainted at this, for she so wanted her son to become a loyal, dedicated warrior. Sunstar appointed his mentor as Longtail. Longtail was strict and made Thunderpaw work really hard.

Many times he was insulted by a particular cat called Robinwing. She loathed half-Clan cats, and before Thunderstorm was born, she was told by Goosefeather that he alone was destined to save the Clans. At this, Robinwing spat at Amberflower and despised Amberflower's kit and said that Thunderkit would just be a traitor and a useless kit. Amberflower retorts back and says that every kit in a Clan is useful, and her kit is even more than useful. Despite this, he was supported by some cats in his Clan. His most trusted friend as an apprentice was Thrushpelt, who also later on, as a warrior remained a loyal friend throughout Thunderstorm's life. Thrushpelt always had given him advice and had always been at his side. 

You may now think that I made him TOO much special, but you're wrong. He has some flaws too. Every warrior does. No warrior can ever be perfect. Every time he goes past ThunderClan's nursery, he always tell them to stop making so much commotion and try to lower their voices. Seeing kits makes him remember of his own difficult past, and so he tries to make the kits life like his. Thunderstorm wants every apprentice, every kit, to understand what his life was when he was in their age. His past makes him shout at also the queens, because his other personality is that he can't control his anger.

See? Even the best of warriors have some dark personalities and some dark thoughts. Unlike other warriors, he hardly ever laughs. Hardly jokes or hardly ever socializes like his apprentice, Lightningtail, or like the other warriors. Instead, he just stays in the corner of the warriors' den, looking at the other warriors and pondering how their past life was so good... and... happy...

Thunderstorm always tries to get into every hunting patrol or border patrol. Why? It's because he wants to push those dark thoughts away and think about the future. I mean, obviously, what's the use of mourning your past when you can't even change it?

And you want to know why I made my character so unsociable, serious and strict? Because I am like that too! I honestly don't know where I belong to, what my destiny is! You can't put two paws in two different worlds! You have to choose one only! I am unsociable too. Like Thunderstorm, I think how others are so happy, while I am so... well, sad and not jolly like others. Like Thunderstorm, I can't control my anger. I just burst it out in a big argument. 

In conclusion, that's why I made Thunderstorm special, because I myself is like him. This is Thunderstorm's life.

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WOW! This writing is 100% AMAZING! I totally relate, please write more!

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