The yowling of Turtlepaw could be heard from very far away. He was in the utmost pain. Stormpaw and Deathberrypaw, though never before on good terms, went off running side by side to save him. The RiverClan cat took a swipe at Turtlepaw's leg, which he dodged with a yelp. Turtlepaw's mentor, Birchblaze, was also being attacked. She was trying valiantly to save both herself and Turtlepaw at the same time.
Another RiverClan cat came running up. "Please," he begged, "stop torturing the apprentice, Thunderstorm. Stop! Can't you see he's barely out of kithood?"
"Can't you see he was trespassing on our territory? By the instruction of his mentor, too!"
"I didn't- I didn't tell him to!" insisted Birchblaze. "I told him to chase a mouse! He wasn't paying attention, and followed it into your territory! That- that's it!"
Thunderstorm laughed, clearly not believing her. He exaggerated it, throwing back his head and cackling towards the sky. While he was doing that, Stormpaw threw a well-aimed bite at his front leg. He stopped laughing and began to shriek and stumble backwards. He fell into the river, and in a way unlike most RiverClan cats, sunk deep into the depths of the river. Stormpaw stared at his shadowy figure, trying hard to suppress a sob. Oh, gosh, I'm going to make a horrible apprentice. If I'm crying at killing a mean cat from another Clan, what will happen during fighting practice with Moonheart? When I hurt her, will it be painful to me?
As if hearing her name in Stormpaw's thoughts, Moonheart came out of the shrubbery, where she had apparently been all along. "Good job, there, Stormpaw. I'd let you rest, but... Flowerpaw's..." Moonheart swallowed. "She's deep in FireClan!"
I SAID DON'T GUESS FLOWERPAW!!!!! now I have to give you a story hint. Flowerpaw will be her mate, but her second mate. I'M NOT GIVING HINTS FOR THE FIRST.
After a long walk, we finally arrived at camp. The patrol leader told me to go to the apprentice den and talk to Stonepaw. Stonepaw was a kittypet that joined the clan recently he was a bit younger than me. He explained some things to me about clan life. Some of the things were if you joined the clan you need to start as an apprentice. He also explained that the she-cat leading the patrol was Sweetfur the clan deputy and Redstar was her father. He said that they have a way to talk with the place of fallen warriors (Basically Starclan). When he said that I almost felt like bouncing up and down like a kit, but I knew if I did they would probably not let me join the clan. “Do you think I can see my mother there?” I said excitedly. he sighed “No it's only for clan cats” I felt all the excitement drain from me after he said that but before I could say anything Redstar yowled “ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY GATHER HERE AROUND THE TALLROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING!” Stonepaw said that “We need to go follow me”. When we got there Redstar said “This cat wanted to join this clan. I know that we just had an outsider join the clan but we need more warriors so Moon step up” I stepped up.” From now until you receive your warrior name you shall now be known as Moonpaw.” I heard whispers of other and felt all eyes on me“He can't! We will soon be more rouge than clan!” said a she-cat “back in my days we chased out rouges and kitty pets!” said an old tom “Redstar needs to think before he invites more cats in!” said a young she-cat. But before they could say anything to Redstar he yelled “THIS CLAN MEETING IS DISMISED”. "WAIT!" I yelled "Who's my mentor?" "OH! I'm Sorry I forgot your mentor is Sweetfur." "ME? I'm just about as old as him! " Sweetfur said. "NO, I have made my decision your Moonpaws mentor you're the deputy and you need an apprentice if you want to become leader! when I made you deputy I thought you would have an apprentice soon but we might not have a lot of new apprentices before I lose my last life." Sweetfur looked stunned at her father's harsh tone. "OK father you know a can't argue with you so I will be his mentor." "even though it may be weird" she muttered.
Hey there! Seeing as there’s a bunch of AMAZING stories up on here, I thought I’d post mine? The main characters are wolves though instead of cats but it’s the same kind of idea, hope you enjoy!! ^^
Hey, Sloth-brain, we have a meeting. Grab Constellation’Claw and let’s go,” Amber’Glow, Dust Pack’s Zeta, a striking golden she-wolf with a surprisingly sharp tongue, nudged Barken’Feather, disrupting his peaceful dream. His thoughts collided. ‘Firstly, I’m not a sloth-brain. Secondly, why is the esteemed Zeta making this announcement? Unless… perhaps Dart’Flame, Rain’Heart, and Silent’Shade have died! No, everyone would be far more upset. It must be a pack meeting.’ He pondered, grinning at Amber’Glow, silently mocking her title as he limped towards the apprentices’ den, where the lively Constellation’Claw was sleeping. The previous day, she had caught Barken’Feather off guard during training, leaving him with a painful limp.
As Barken’Feather trailed behind the nine pack members chosen to attend this month’s gathering, which included Dart’Flame, Rain’Heart, and Silent’Shade, the three highest-ranking Dusk pack members, Melody’Flower slowed her pace, allowing the forest-brown dog to catch up. They conversed as they continued to pad at the back, with Constellation’Claw occasionally circling back to eavesdrop for a moment before bounding back to the front.
As Melody’Flower and Barken’Feather chatted, the Dusk pack group cautiously padded through Quake Pack territory to ascend the hill, ensuring they maintained a safe distance from the Dawn pack members. The tension was palpable, especially with the Dawn pack suspecting Rain’Heart of murdering their alpha.
Upon reaching the hilltop, the group settled down, positioning themselves as far away from the Dawn pack members as possible. Graphite’Cry, notorious for her rudeness and mixed signals in matters of love, approached Barken’Feather.
“I’m sure you already know who I am?” She muttered briskly, her tone subtly revealing the rude side most wolves spoke of. The grey-patterned she-wolf spoke quietly, letting a soft growl seep through her fangs each time a set of Dusk pack eyes locked onto her. “And before you get too uncomfortable talking to someone like me, just know I’m merely here to talk about Rain’Heart.”
Preparing to meet Graphite’Cry, the Zeta of the rival Dawn pack, Barken’Feather decided it was best to venture alone. He understood the delicate nature of the situation and believed that having his apprentice, Constellation’Claw, accompany him could complicate matters and potentially escalate tensions between the packs.
“Constellation’Claw, I appreciate your eagerness, but this is a mission I must undertake alone,” Barken’Feather stated firmly, his gaze filled with a mix of concern and determination. “It’s crucial that I converse with Graphite’Cry without distractions or potential misunderstandings.”
Constellation’Claw’s expression fell, disappointment flickering across her features. However, her resolve remained unshaken. “I understand your intentions, but I can’t let you face this alone. I’m coming with you,” she insisted, her tail wagging in determination.
Barken’Feather sighed, realizing that he wouldn’t be able to dissuade his determined apprentice. “Fine, but promise me that you will remain quiet and let me handle the conversation,” he requested, hoping to minimize any possible complications.
With a grateful smile, Constellation’Claw nodded in agreement, her eyes reflecting her unwavering support for her mentor. As they set off towards their own pack, Dusk pack, they knew they had to make preparations before their clandestine meeting with Graphite’Cry at Moonlit Hill in three days’ time. Moonlit Hill, bathed in the light of the five stars that had represented the packs and their territories since time immemorial, was a significant meeting place for all the packs.
“Constellation’Claw, we mustn’t draw attention to our departure. Act as if we’re just going out for training,” Barken’Feather instructed, his brow furrowing as he questioned his apprentice’s ability to maintain secrecy. “You can’t tell anyone, not your brothers, not your parents. If a word of this slips, you won’t see me anymore, and the situation between Dusk pack and Dawn pack may worsen.” His tone was stern, the thought of what might happen to the joyful apprentice if she were ever drawn into this turmoil that had been brewing long before her or her brothers were born. Barken’Feather’s eyes searched Constellation’Claw’s for any sign of her understanding.
Thanks! I LOVED all of you chapters that you’ve been posting!! Keep them up bc they’re awesome!!! :) Also, let me know if you have any ideas on how to fix up any of my work, thanks again ^^
"HELP!" cried Deathberrypaw as he squirmed from under a mound of furious rogues. "LET ME GO!"
"Oh, we'll let you go, all right! If you tell us where Stormpaw is!"
Stormpaw's jaw dropped. Deathberrypaw did know where Stormpaw was, and he would definitely tell. Would she stay in the tree and be found by the rogues, or battle them and give herself-- and Deathberrypaw-- a chance?
The most obvious decision! Just as Deathberrypaw raised a shaky paw to point at the tree, Stormpaw leapt down. "Leave him alone!" she cried. "LEAVE HIM ALONE!"
"Ahh, the little apprentice has a girlfriend!" taunted Hunter. Stormpaw ignored his mean comment, instead flooring a different rogue. Sure, the rogue was young, and weak-- in fact likely a kit in Clan terms-- but the speed at which she did it was enough to shock Hunter and the others. All the rogues retreated besides Hunter. Hunter stood rigid, staring, and Stormpaw took the opportunity to leap at him, biting down on his neck.
He fought and scratched and gasped for air. His raspy breathing and furious writhing brought an image into Stormpaw's mind. Shadowfall, dying because of her. Now she had a choice: did she want Hunter, also, to die because of her?
Her fangs loosened. Not by much, but enough for Hunter to escape. He whirled around to face her, choking, gasping, tending his wounds. She did nothing to help, but nothing to hurt him, either. He ran away, and she turned to Deathberrypaw. "So," she said, "tell me, are Turtlepaw and Flowerpaw dead?"
He said they weren't. But their current situation was even worse.
Hey moonstar, want a little challenge? use the west woods over borders character maker to make the cats from Stormsong (Cherrytuft or Deathberrypaw for example). you can post your cat as a reply to this, or in the west woods comments!
(As long as it wasn't specified in the book, you can make them look however you like!)
SInce everyone is makeing really cool chapter storys.. (THYE AMAZING)..
Ima make my own..
Honey ices Life. Chap 1.
Honey kit was sitting at the nursery entrance. watching the warriors chatter. She'd watch her father - Grey'star - talk with the clan deputy. - Lilac'tail- '' Honey'kit! Please play with us! We only need one more kit for the game!'' Mew'ed her sister, Fur'kit. '' I dont want too.. I just wanna stay here.'' Fur'kit mocked her. ''Alright.. I guess you are to scared.'' She ran away with teh rest of the kits. Her ears flattend. '' Ice'tree, arent you gonna say anything..?'' Asked one of the queens. '' .. Lilac'trail.. I have nothing to say. Its alright if she can stay.'' lilac tail rolled her eyes and put her nose under her tail agian.
Moons went by. Honey'kit was now an apprientce. Training.. Dont mess it up.. She thought. Following her mentor to the hunting grounds. From acros the moor, they saw an river clan patrol hunting on their territory. '' Maple' Heart.. Is that a river clan patrol over there?'' The patrol gasped. One pushed me back towords one. Lucky I saw them before they got anything. She thought proudly. Before she knew it- they were fighting. '' Honey'paw.. Please, go back to camp and yell FIGHT! and show them the way to the river clan patrol, dont mess it up.'' Said maple'heart tierdly. She swiftly ran back to camp. '' FIGHT!'' Warriors followed honey'paw to the fight, she turned away. Moons after the fight, warriors called her a hero. Some thought she had been gifted. But no. She was normal.
Finally.. They let us do whatever today! No warriors telling us what to do! She thought happily, she saw dusk'paw. She liked him. Not in a friend way, they knew they both loved each other. Dusk'paw signed. '' I need to talk to you..''
Stormpaw stared down from the tree. Oh my god, I hope they don't get Cherrytuft. Or the leader, Yarrowstar, because... I don't like the deputy one bit. Mudfur was one of the most obnoxious cats she'd ever encountered. Whenever she asked him for help as a kit, he had sniffed, "I think your mother should be helping you, not the deputy, don't you think?" She guessed that, as an apprentice, he would say the same thing-- just replacing "mother" with "mentor".
Mentor! Right. She had to get a mentor. Who was she hoping for? Definitely not Mudfur, but that was all she knew. A tap on the shoulder jolted her out of her thoughts, and she whipped around to see who it was.
"Deathberrykit, I mean Deathberrypaw," she whispered, "you're alive! You made it!" She threw her arms around him. He wriggled out of her grasp and scowled at her. "How's Turtlek-- uh, paw? And Flower... paw? Are they both all right?"
"Why should I tell you, Stormpaw? You and I aren't friends, you know, never will be." Deathberrypaw sniffed and turned away from her. Wordlessly, Stormpaw sat there next to him and stared down at the rogues murdering, even massacring, her clanmates. After a few minutes, Stormpaw looked up at Deathberrypaw, about to ask him, again, if Turtlepaw and Flowerpaw were okay. But she was met with a startling sight. Deathberrypaw, was... he was crying?
Why was this surprising to her? Of course Deathberrypaw had feelings! But sometimes... it didn't feel like it. All she could think of to do was lick him. But this turned out to be the wrong idea.
It wasn't that he didn't like it. He probably did. But he was so startled that he fell from the tree. Stormpaw gasped but stifled a scream, so she wouldn't be discovered. All she could do was stare in terror as the rogues dashed towards Deathberrypaw. And the question was: Would she-- or could she-- save him?
OH MY LORD THIS IS AMAZING! Such great storytelling, I just read every chapter so far. I can't wait for you to make another one! I've seen so many of your comments on this game, and you have great ideas. I would love to see more stories like this once Stormsong(paw) is finished!
I love some more storyline with Crystalblaze’s kits. I would love something like her giving up her kits to the clan, and making the clan believe the kits are whoever your playing as mates. If you play as a male you and her mate could visit together and say the kits are yours mates. (This may not make sense, but i just love Crystalblaze and I think she needs more storyline)
i try to click on the arrow to take me to fireclan but then it says " breezestars got fire clan" why wont it let me?? also maybe if your leader could maybe your kits get born in the leader den i just think it would be cool!
you have to keep taking to her at night, it'll only let you do that if you tell breezestar that ya'll can meet up at the border, and when you do, you just talk to her a few times and then she will tell you a therapy she has, which! is true, that ryeheart is your father, you have to say yes when she asks if you wanna see what she's talking about! hope this helps :)
“WHAT” I was shocked How could I go today? I'm so nervous! But I already agreed to do it! Think of how much Spot did for you! I started to remember what Spot did for me. When he found my mother and brother dead he took me to his house which was really a dumpster though but it was better than what most street cats had. Other street cats had to sleep inside boxes at least ours kept out the rain. It was already too small for him but he shared it with me. I finally said “I will do it at sunhigh” but he had already walked away. I sighed. I REALLY need to keep track of time more when I'm thinking I said to myself. The time went by SO fast and I couldn't believe it when Spot said “It's time to go now” He led me to the border and said “Stay safe out there” “Don't worry I will” I replied. I waited at the border just as Spot instructed. Then I saw a patrol coming towards me. In the patrol, there were about 4 cats. I saw the patrol leader spot me and walked up to me. “Oh no not another rouge” she whispered.” WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE! ” she said in a harsh tone. “I..er...uh…wanted to uhh… join the uh... Clan.” I said nervously. The she-cat went back to the patrol. I overheard them say “We just had another rouge join 2 moons ago!” said a young tom “Are they planning an invasion?!” said another high-pitched voice. After a few minutes of talking, the she-cat finally said, “Yes ugh fine.” She flicked her tail. “you can join the clan but ONLY if Redstar approves.”
WARRIORS QUESTION OF THE WEEK #3. if you could send a prophecy, would you, send a terrifying prophecy to a kit in your clan, saying that THEY will save the clans? OR would you send a deathening prophecy, to a leader in your clan, telling them of their death?
That night at dinner, Avery took a deep breath. This was the moment. She was going to tell her whole family about Wings Academy. The mac’n’cheese in her stomach churned with nervousness.
“Mom, Dad, Ryan,” she hesitated. “I have something I need to tell you.”
“What’s up?” Avery’s dad asked, taking another bite of mac’n’cheese.
“Today after finals, a few other kids and I got called to the principal's office to talk to us about our scores,” she glanced at Ryan. “I got into Wings Academy.”
Mr. Clay choked on his food, and Avery nudged his cup of water closer to him. Mrs. Clay was in shocked silence, her fork poised halfway to her mouth. When Avery looked at her brother sitting on her left, she was surprised by his expression.
He didn’t seem surprised, just slightly amused. The corners of his mouth twitched like he was trying not to smile at his parents’ reactions.
After everyone had recovered from the astonishing news, Avery’s dad asked, “How? How have you already been accepted? It’s only the end of the first semester!”
All eyes stared curiously at Avery. “It’s kind of weird … but basically they tested us early. Well, not all of us. Just Fiona Brinson, Camilla Billingsley, and me.”
“And all three of you passed?” Mrs. Clay asked.
“Yes,” Avery responded.
There was silence for a minute before Ryan asked, “When do you transfer?”
“Next semester,” Avery said, her nervosity increasing. “I should be getting my packing list and stuff soon.”
The room was silent while everyone digested the news. Had a pin dropped at that moment, it would have sounded like a thunderclap. It was Mr. Clay that broke the dead silence.
He cleared his throat. “Well, this is surprising,” he paused. Then a proud smile spread across his lips. “But it’s also amazing news!”
“I’m so proud of you, honey!” Mrs. Clay said, her eyes twinkling with love.
“Me too,” Ryan chimed in.
Avery was grinning. “Thank you guys so much!”
“This is going to be an exciting year,” Ryan said, looking at his sister with a knowing smile.
Stormkit ran and ran, but the rogues were gaining on her. Hunter took a swipe at her tail, which she barely dodged. Venus snapped at her leg, but she took a sharp turn and got the bite in her thick tail fur instead, his fangs barely grazing her skin.
She was getting tired, but she couldn't stop. She stumbled ahead on her fatigued, wobbly legs. Hunter leapt at her tail again, and bit off a chunk. Aaagh! Suddenly, something came into view. A hole in the ground, a ditch! She could make use of that. She tucked herself into a ball and let herself roll at top speed into it.
Oof. It hurt to fall in, but it was fairly shallow, and she was only a little bruised. She spun around and snarled at the rogues. What she hadn't anticipated was that the rogues were fearless in jumping in after her. She was trapped!
Unless...
She began to scrape at the ground and was surprised to find it soft and crumbly. She could definitely dig a tunnel! She began to take ferocious swipes at the ground. Surprised by this, the rogues froze. Then they realized her plot. By this time, she'd already dug a fairly large tunnel, heading in the direction of WillowClan. But the rogues were hot on her tail.
Half an hour later, she finally hobbled out of the ground on unsteady legs, gasping and panting for air. "My dear Stormkit!" Cherrytuft shouted, running towards her, but Stormkit dodged her. "Just because I'm here doesn't mean I'm coming back officially, okay?"
"Oh, my darling, but listen! You missed it, but you've passed your apprentice ceremony already! You have so much to catch up on, baby, and-" Cherrytuft gasped and stopped talking when she noticed the rogues furiously spilling out of the underground tunnel.
Stormkit (or, rather, Stormpaw now) ran to the nearest tree and climbed it, hoping to hide. The rogues didn't find her. She watched as they battled the entirety of WillowClan, hoping to get someone to confess that they knew where Stormpaw was- but no one knew. The dead bodies piled up.
Oh my goodness. I come back to WillowClan for five seconds, and already, I've brought more bad luck.
Hello! :) here is my story so far I hope you like it. I know it's kinda long. I know I'm reposting the other chapters along with the new one but I'm doing this so you won't have to look for the other ones.
Prologue
Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought. But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear. After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live” The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced. Even though he is weaker maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…
Chapter 1
My first memories were of my mother. I still remember snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. Her name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree. My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes. I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.” One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!” I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.
Chapter 2
Beyond the garden was NOTHING like I thought it would be like NOTHING! I imagined lush forests surrounded by berry bushes over a blue sky as I saw holes in the twolegs den. But now that I thought of it I remembered that I could never go through it as much as I tried. Maybe they weren't holes after all. I saw a few trees but mostly I saw more twoleg stone dens. “DID YOU EVEN HEAR ME!” my brother snapped me out of my thoughts. I realized that he had been talking to me for a while. “scardy kitty too scared to say anything!” he said mockingly. I growled, “NO ONE CALLS ME SCARDY KITTY!” I yelled and chased him! I chased him until he started coughing and I realized that something was coming out of a pipe “Move away” I said cautiously. And realized that he was on the ground. “No no no no!” I yelled. Then all of a sudden he jumped at me! “AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!” I yelled in terror. “Hey, you scared me!” I said, “Ha, I knew you were a scardy kitty!” “NO, I'M No-” I got cut off as my brother said “Sush!” I looked forward and saw a large thing approaching us.
Chapter 3
As it got closer I realized that the large thing was a twoleg. I took a deep breath and realized that I was holding my breath the entire time. “It's just a twoleg” said my brother with a big sigh of relief. I felt excitement all the way to my tail tip when I saw her. I knew this twoleg she was our owner! We lived in her den! I knew my brother, Tree knew too when I felt him relax. The twoleg picked us up and I knew my brother was tired when he just let her pick him up. Usually, he would put up a fight and scratch her. I personally never liked being picked up but I was okay with it. The twoleg put us in the back of her monster and got in the belly of it. It was kind of scary riding in the monsters that twolegs ride in but if they always came out okay I knew it was safe. My brother on the other paw pretty much slept in the blankets the whole ride and I was glad he did because I knew if he was awake he would have tried to escape. After about 45 minutes the monster stopped. I thought it was strange because me and my brother did not go that far but I pushed away the thought. The back of it opened and the twoleg scooped me up and picked up my brother. He was still sleeping peacefully. As we walked to the entrance I still felt excited about our adventure but little did I know we were not going home.
Chapter 4
When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.
Huh, strange I wondered. My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.
Chapter 5
As the badger approached us our mother told us to stay here. I glanced at my brother who whispered “Wow I have never seen anything so..BIG!” he had excitement in his voice so I whispered back “You're not scared?” “of course not! Mama will save us!” He sounded as if he was trying to convince himself as much as he was trying to convince me “ok I guess” I whispered to him. Just as I finished Mother scratched the badger and the badger whipped its paw at her. It flung her backwards, and she got up. Then she hissed loudly at it and it ran to her and started scratching her. Then my brother said “I'm Going to help her” “No don't please I don't want to lose you” I said “You won't don't worry I will be safe” he said bravely. I sighed I knew there was no way I could convince him but I decided to try anyway. “We are only about 12 moons! (The cat term for month)” ‘NO I'm still going to help her I don't care what you say” And then he rushed off to help Mother. I looked behind me and saw a little hole and decided to take shelter in there. After about an hour I went out. When I left the hole I saw my brother and mother lying there. “No no no this can't be happening” I felt crushed but just as I was about to leave I saw a black and white spotted cat with a scar over his eye. He flicked his tail and after a bit said “Hello young kit my name is Spot. Come with me if you want to live”.
I stretched my jaws into a massage yawn and padded out of Spot's house with excitement. Spot was apparently my uncle from my dad's side I never knew my dad. “Hey, Spot!” Spot was eating some twoleg scrapes. He lifted his head up to say “Yes?” he said half asleep “Well uh you said you would tell me about my uh dad on my 25 moon” I meowed. “Ah yes, your dad. Well, he looked just like you. And he was super kind and thoughtful I get why your mother liked him.” he chuckled. Then he looked sternly into my eyes “ But the thing that made him run away from you was when one of the cats from Treeclan killed our mother” I was shocked that's why our father left us! If he were still here my mother and brother would still be alive. I looked up at Spot and saw him grinning. “why are you smiling” I growled “Do you think it's FUNNY that my father ran away!” He looked shocked for a moment but then said “ Well I was thinking of a plan…” “You could go to Treeclan and become their leader! "They are too stupid even to know you're not with them!" "Then we can rule the forest TOGETHER!” I thought for a moment but Spot clearly noticed that I looked unconvinced and said “Don't worry it will be a joint leadership” “Uhhh.. I don't really know.” I said thoughtfully. “Don't you remember what I did for YOU” Memories came flooding back as I remembered when the badger attacked my mother and brother and how grateful I was for Spot. After a while, I finally said “OK” He looked happier than I had ever seen him “Thank you! We only want revenge for my mother and your father!” he said excitedly. “When am I going?” I meowed. “At Sunhigh” He replied.
Uhm, theres like a glitch where when i try to make my kits warriors, only one shows up and everyone has a ! and then the meeting dismisses without the apps getting names, then it won't let me make them warriors
The black rogue padded away from the border with the kit in his jaws. "Hey! Hunter!" shouted a different rogue, and the black rogue-- Hunter-- turned around with a sigh. "Yes, Venus?"
"That your kitten?" said Venus, using the rogue term for kit.
"Uh, no." Hunter paused. Venus is my best friend, but how much should I tell him? He eventually decided on a compromise. "I found it by the WillowClan border. Looked lost. I brought it here to raise for a bit, just for fun." There, that had been all facts. The kit had definitely looked lost, staring strangely up at the sky, but at the same time, it was certainly not lost, as it had stayed in one place calmly, even falling asleep. "Huh. Well, we could see what a Clan cat can do that we can't do. Have some fun." Venus poked at the kit invitingly. "C'mon, show those fangs, show those fangs!"
Hunter dropped the kit on the ground, pushed it with a paw towards Venus, so Venus could play and experiment with it. As Venus poked and prodded the kit, it seemed entirely immobile. After a while, Venus gave up. "Well, it looks like--"
Stormkit sprang up and began sprinting away, two rogues on her tail. That number steadily increased as more cats noticed the chase. I'll be fine, she thought. The warriors will fight them off.
But she realized, too late, that she was running in the wrong direction.
p.s. if you go to queen's mystery game on this website and scroll down, moss-shadow left a comment (something like "i didn't think i'd make a big horror game for april fools"). Maybe if you reply he'll write you back!!! (I did)
p.p.s. not wanting to sound like a crazed fan tho.... (which I am)
“Do you want to say sorry for being a lousy mother? And never coming to even to say hello or know your own daughter?” echo mewed grimly maplestar curled her lip in disgust, “no I do not. you were weak, the runt of the litter, why would I care for weaklings?” maplestar grinned, Hawk leaped in front of the two and snarled at maplestar her ears flattened to her head and her eyes in slits. “ You harm her, and I kill you right here, right now!” hawk hissed her claws unsheathed, echo smirked softly, admiring the she-cats bravery. Maplestar snickered. “What? Your so protective, are you protecting your mate?” She snickered and sat down curling her tail around her paws, those words were said, and hawk then froze her eyes widened and her ears heated up. Echo stared at her paws not knowing what to do or say about that, the two have had a stronger bond then all the friends combined, and echo knew she had secret feelings for the white she-cat but never admitted it to herself nor any cat “I am protecting my leader! You mouse-brained snake-heart!!” hawk growled, maplestar started to bristle “Why you little-” before maplestar could do anything, sunstar pushed between them. “Enough! Fighting amongst ourselves gives no answers!” sunstar hissed. Tigerstar looked at echo her head held high. “Echo if we may we need a place to stay for now, we have had a long journey. And we are sore and hungry, our home was drowned by a magnificent flood one we had never seen for many moons, so if we may we need to take shelter in your cave.” Echo sighed, “yes, my cats will help you get settled” echo raised her chin glaring at her mother with intensity, “but first…” echo hissed, “maplestar…I do not trust you even though you are my mother and because of that you will be our prisoner, just as shadowstrike used to be” the tribe cats murmured in confusion. “But isn’t your father still our prisoner?” echo perked her ears and turned to see grey who stood up his eyes wide with bewilderment. Echo’s eyes softened. As she turned her gaze to her father. “No, he isn’t, and he has proven that he deserves a second chance” shadowstrike gave a purr as he smiled and said, “I thank you echo even though you are my daughter…I will make you proud” he chuckled a bit at the last part and echo gave an amused purr. Then her eyes became stone as she glared at her mother. “You will be our prisoner, and for him to continue to earn my trust shadowstrike shall guard you but to make sure you don’t try anything and harm him I will have two of my other cats guard you as well” echo growled curling her lip. “Snake, ice, along with shadowstrike, you three shall keep a CLOSE eye on maplestar.” The three nodded then left with maplestar in the middle, ice, and snake in the front and shadowstrike flanking the rear. “Move it!” shadowstrike pushed maplestar into the cave and the three cats kept her in a corner of the cave.
The seven cats stood their ground as they heard many paws steps thundering forward. “Who are you?” a tortoiseshell she-cat growled lashing her tail slightly with her teeth bared in a vicious grin. “Calm yourself maplestar” a golden tabby tom mewed gently, laying his tail tip on maplestar shoulder. Echo stepped in front her head held high and she sat down, her eyes narrowed as she looked at the four cats who stood in front with cation. “Who are you all?” echo mewed in a tone of a leader, all the cats stopped talking and looked at the grey she-cat echo lifted her chin and curled her lip in a snarl as she repeated “who are you?” the elder tom stepped up his eyes gleaming with pride. “I am Sunstar of pantherclan” a black she-cat elder spoke up “I am Tigerstar of wolfclan” she said with a slight glare at sunstar, the tom ignored her. “I I’m fawnstar of deerclan” a brown tabby mewed looking around anxiously. “And I am maplestar of foxclan” the tortoiseshell gave a small hiss. “Who are you?” sunstar mewed curiosity pricked at him echo sighed, “I am echo, the leader of the tribe of echoing silence.” Echo looked at the cats then licked her chest fur thinking of what to do next. “Well, well, it’s been a long time…maple” a voice mewed from in the cave. Echo looked back and saw her father shadowstrike with a vicious wicked smile on his face as he looked at the tortoiseshell, she-cat. “Its maplestar now you piece of crow-food!” maplestar spat flattening her ears. “Ah come now darling are you really going to be cold to me?” the tom grinned as he stepped closer and then sat next to his daughter. Echo looked bewildered then as she looked at the gleam in her father’s eye, she had a disturbing thought and it struck her, she hissed with violence, her hackles raised. “she’s, my mother?!” echo gave a screech of horror and rage as her claws ripped into the earth, disgust gripped her stomach, she could not believe it! She was half kittypet! Everyone gasped in confusion and bewilderment. Shadowstrike sighed, “yes, yes she is echo” he glared at maplestar with hatred “so, this sorry excuse for a leader is my daughter?” maplestar spat with a sneer on her face and a snarl of laughter. The two she-cats glared at each other with rage and hatred in their eyes, amber eyes blazing like forest fire. “You take that back! You stupid piece of fox-dung!!” shadowstrike snarled baring his sharp thorn teeth, as he stood up arching his back. Echo gave a soft gasp of surprise, he had never defended her ever in her life and this…this was a change, she was wrong to not trust him.
hellooooo I finished chapter 4 tell me how you like it and if you want me to repost the other ones.! i hope you like it :)
Chapter 4
When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.
Huh, strange I wondered. My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.
“We had an older brother” hawk began, “you mean you had another brother?” echo mewed in astonishment. “Yes, now if you will not interrupt me” hawk looked at echo sternly. Echo flattened her ears in embarrassment. “We had an older brother, and his name was Rabbitwhisker” “rabbitwhisker?” echo gave a hissing laughter. “Yup his name was rabbitwhisker” hawk sighed shaking her head with disappointment “he is the reason snake is the way he is” “what do you mean?” echo tilted her head in confusion. “When I was an apprentice of windclan, he was my mentor and one day me and my siblings were talking and just having fun, and then he walks up and I made a rude comment about him and I, I laughed at him and the others did to…” echo gasped in surprise hawk continued as her bones started to shake with fear and sadness. “and he usually took it as a joke, but I guess this time he was sick of it and so he towered over me and he told me to follow him and so I did” echo arched her eyebrow still listening as she groomed her fur “he led me to snake rocks and I knew it was wrong, I begged him for us to go back but he didn’t say a word, and then I heard a hiss behind me and I spun around but I saw nothing…” hawk’s eyes filled with fear of this memory “and when I looked back I didn’t see him, and then a heartbeat later I felt something grab my neck and I saw with horror that it was him and when I yowled for him to let me go he threw me at a tree and after that I knocked out, but when I woke up I didn’t see him and..and I felt my neck and ear bleeding, and then…” she flattened her ears as she spat with fear and her back was arched and her fur on end. “a-an adder bit my leg, and then as I was crying in pain, he came but he wasn’t trying to help instead he…he clawed my side…slowly.” Echo felt a shiver of fear down her spine as she pictured the dark tom trying to kill his own apprentice. Echo walked over and curled herself around her friend and brushed her muzzle on her cheek in comfort, “its ok, it’s all in the past now your safe, nothing and no one will harm you, I swear by starclan I will give my breath before they can put a paw on you” hawk smiled and laid down next to her purring softly.” thank you, for being my friend echo” Echo smiled then rasped, her tongue over hawks forehead then curled her tail around her and laid down. She perked up as she smelled scents, to many, she started to bristle. Hawk shot up immediately and her eyes became slits of prickling fear. The two she-cats dashed to the cave their pelts brushed together a few times. Snake, ice, moth, grey, and blaze all circled defending the cave as the kits, crow and soot all sheltered inside, shadowstrike stayed in the cave but was in a corner as he was grooming his pelt.
here is book 4! echoing silence, a star rises!!. chapter 1:
The sun had started to rise, as echo blinked her eyes open sleepily, she sat up and opened her jaw in a yawn and stretched her haunches and sat down and she started to groom her pelt until it was smooth. She gave a purr of satisfaction as the cold leaf-bare breeze blew on her fur. She glanced up and over heard hawk talking with soot, she strained her ears a bit to hear them. “Soot, do you think you might have greencough?” hawk asked as the elder started to cough “do not worry about me youngster I just need a bit of catmint, or some chickweed, or maybe honey it doesn’t matter” the elder coughed and sat down as his bones started to shake. Moth walked over, “I will take care of him hawk, you go see if we have some of the herbs” hawk walked over to echo her eyes were wide and full of worry. “he’s getting worse every day, I’ve tried to find the herbs I really have but I can’t find any I think…we might have a cat lost to greencough soon” hawk lowered her head in shame and despair, echo pressed her pelt to the snowy white she-cats fur, hawk perked her head up and they looked into each other’s eyes for a heartbeat. “It will be ok. If anything, starclan is by our side and even if soot does pass, it will be his time, ok please for once stop worrying.” Echo smiled and pressed her nose to hawk’s cheek, hawk purred and licked echo’s ear affectionately. “Thank you echo, um would you like to hunt with me? We are low on prey and moth is busy with soot, and blaze he is tussling with grey” she bared her fangs in a slight smirk and her pointed at the two with her muzzle. Echo rolled her eyes and gave a sigh. “Ok then, let’s go, you wanna race?” Echo smirked, hawk rolled her eyes and cuffed echo on the muzzle and echo jumped back with a giggle “mouse-brain” hawk hissed playfully. “Oh, I’m a mouse-brain am i?” echo growled and slithered towards hawk pounced on her, and hawk squealed in surprise. “Some snake you would make!” hawk laughed and The two scuffled in a play fight for a little bit, and then hawk stood up and shook the snow off her pelt, echo sat up and shook the snow off as well, and she started to groom her fur and cast a glance at hawk who had her eyes closed as she let the sun gleam on her white fur, echo couldn’t help up look at her scar, “hey hawk” echo started to stutter “yes echo?” Hawk looked at the grey she-cat, her blue eyes gleaming like crystals. “I um, I don’t want to make you uncomfortable or anything but…” echo was cut off as hawk placed her tail on echo’s mouth, “I know what you’re about to ask, and no it doesn’t make me uncomfortable.” She looked at her scar then looked back at echo and sat down curing her tail around her paws. “Most cats ask me about my scar and…I tell them the truth.” “And that is?” echo prompt, hawk sighed.
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Stormsong: Chapter 9
The yowling of Turtlepaw could be heard from very far away. He was in the utmost pain. Stormpaw and Deathberrypaw, though never before on good terms, went off running side by side to save him. The RiverClan cat took a swipe at Turtlepaw's leg, which he dodged with a yelp. Turtlepaw's mentor, Birchblaze, was also being attacked. She was trying valiantly to save both herself and Turtlepaw at the same time.
Another RiverClan cat came running up. "Please," he begged, "stop torturing the apprentice, Thunderstorm. Stop! Can't you see he's barely out of kithood?"
"Can't you see he was trespassing on our territory? By the instruction of his mentor, too!"
"I didn't- I didn't tell him to!" insisted Birchblaze. "I told him to chase a mouse! He wasn't paying attention, and followed it into your territory! That- that's it!"
Thunderstorm laughed, clearly not believing her. He exaggerated it, throwing back his head and cackling towards the sky. While he was doing that, Stormpaw threw a well-aimed bite at his front leg. He stopped laughing and began to shriek and stumble backwards. He fell into the river, and in a way unlike most RiverClan cats, sunk deep into the depths of the river. Stormpaw stared at his shadowy figure, trying hard to suppress a sob. Oh, gosh, I'm going to make a horrible apprentice. If I'm crying at killing a mean cat from another Clan, what will happen during fighting practice with Moonheart? When I hurt her, will it be painful to me?
As if hearing her name in Stormpaw's thoughts, Moonheart came out of the shrubbery, where she had apparently been all along. "Good job, there, Stormpaw. I'd let you rest, but... Flowerpaw's..." Moonheart swallowed. "She's deep in FireClan!"
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hey check out west woods over borders comments! echoing silence posted a picture of Stormsong and I posted my own Flowerpaw!
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"Not to rush" lol. It's ok i get it. I feel the same way with Queen's Mystery, LOL!
Hey, moonstar, have you seen b0xalotl? She doesn't seem to be around these days... :(
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hmmm... wonder where she went
Dw Im still here reading posts :)
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I JUST WROTE #11
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haha thanks
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Guess who stormsong's mate will be.
Don't guess Flowerpaw!!!!Show post...
I SAID DON'T GUESS FLOWERPAW!!!!! now I have to give you a story hint. Flowerpaw will be her mate, but her second mate. I'M NOT GIVING HINTS FOR THE FIRST.
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I just wrote chapter 11
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hmm cool... I'd do that, but then everyone would read these comments and realize the end of the book... :(
I have NO IDEA how this'll end ;)
is there internet or does it just reload because it happens to me a lot when I play on my Chromebook and when I close it it just reloads
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Me to!
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I just wrote chapter 11 of stormsong, just alerting all my fans :)
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uh hi here is chapter 8 :)
Chapter 8
After a long walk, we finally arrived at camp. The patrol leader told me to go to the apprentice den and talk to Stonepaw. Stonepaw was a kittypet that joined the clan recently he was a bit younger than me. He explained some things to me about clan life. Some of the things were if you joined the clan you need to start as an apprentice. He also explained that the she-cat leading the patrol was Sweetfur the clan deputy and Redstar was her father. He said that they have a way to talk with the place of fallen warriors (Basically Starclan). When he said that I almost felt like bouncing up and down like a kit, but I knew if I did they would probably not let me join the clan. “Do you think I can see my mother there?” I said excitedly. he sighed “No it's only for clan cats” I felt all the excitement drain from me after he said that but before I could say anything Redstar yowled “ALL CATS OLD ENOUGH TO CATCH THEIR OWN PREY GATHER HERE AROUND THE TALLROCK FOR A CLAN MEETING!” Stonepaw said that “We need to go follow me”. When we got there Redstar said “This cat wanted to join this clan. I know that we just had an outsider join the clan but we need more warriors so Moon step up” I stepped up.” From now until you receive your warrior name you shall now be known as Moonpaw.” I heard whispers of other and felt all eyes on me“He can't! We will soon be more rouge than clan!” said a she-cat “back in my days we chased out rouges and kitty pets!” said an old tom “Redstar needs to think before he invites more cats in!” said a young she-cat. But before they could say anything to Redstar he yelled “THIS CLAN MEETING IS DISMISED”. "WAIT!" I yelled "Who's my mentor?" "OH! I'm Sorry I forgot your mentor is Sweetfur." "ME? I'm just about as old as him! " Sweetfur said. "NO, I have made my decision your Moonpaws mentor you're the deputy and you need an apprentice if you want to become leader! when I made you deputy I thought you would have an apprentice soon but we might not have a lot of new apprentices before I lose my last life." Sweetfur looked stunned at her father's harsh tone. "OK father you know a can't argue with you so I will be his mentor." "even though it may be weird" she muttered.
i love it i know i can just say this on a call but nice work
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What?! Sweetfur's YOUNGER than her app???
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sorry :) I was in a rush when I made this and posted it before triple reading it first.
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ops sorry :0 she was supposed to be older
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thanks
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whenever I am just becoming the leader the whole game RESTARTS help!!!!!! im not playing on mobile and my computer isn't old
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hm, that doesn't happen to me, are you on pc or mac?
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Chromebook
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i think it just doesn't work on chromebook
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Oh ok
I love this game to
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Hi I know this is kinda random for a kit to leader chat but this is a really fun game
WARNING THIS GAME WILL MAKE YOU QUESTION YOUR EXISTENCE!
thanks to b0xalotl for the idea of the warning :)
https://neal.fun/universe-forecast/
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I visited that website. I am currently questioning my existence. Help ;-;
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omg me too when my friend showed it to me 😭
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Everyone is looking for you.
This was very ominous when I clicked the notifications and read this, then I saw the other posts xD
Why does it make you question your existence? I'm confused- it's just things in the universe.
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THE UNIVERSE WILL EXPLODE!
The fact that thats all going to happen at some point :"D
Hey there! Seeing as there’s a bunch of AMAZING stories up on here, I thought I’d post mine? The main characters are wolves though instead of cats but it’s the same kind of idea, hope you enjoy!! ^^
Hey, Sloth-brain, we have a meeting. Grab Constellation’Claw and let’s go,” Amber’Glow, Dust Pack’s Zeta, a striking golden she-wolf with a surprisingly sharp tongue, nudged Barken’Feather, disrupting his peaceful dream. His thoughts collided. ‘Firstly, I’m not a sloth-brain. Secondly, why is the esteemed Zeta making this announcement? Unless… perhaps Dart’Flame, Rain’Heart, and Silent’Shade have died! No, everyone would be far more upset. It must be a pack meeting.’ He pondered, grinning at Amber’Glow, silently mocking her title as he limped towards the apprentices’ den, where the lively Constellation’Claw was sleeping. The previous day, she had caught Barken’Feather off guard during training, leaving him with a painful limp.
As Barken’Feather trailed behind the nine pack members chosen to attend this month’s gathering, which included Dart’Flame, Rain’Heart, and Silent’Shade, the three highest-ranking Dusk pack members, Melody’Flower slowed her pace, allowing the forest-brown dog to catch up. They conversed as they continued to pad at the back, with Constellation’Claw occasionally circling back to eavesdrop for a moment before bounding back to the front.
As Melody’Flower and Barken’Feather chatted, the Dusk pack group cautiously padded through Quake Pack territory to ascend the hill, ensuring they maintained a safe distance from the Dawn pack members. The tension was palpable, especially with the Dawn pack suspecting Rain’Heart of murdering their alpha.
Upon reaching the hilltop, the group settled down, positioning themselves as far away from the Dawn pack members as possible. Graphite’Cry, notorious for her rudeness and mixed signals in matters of love, approached Barken’Feather.
“I’m sure you already know who I am?” She muttered briskly, her tone subtly revealing the rude side most wolves spoke of. The grey-patterned she-wolf spoke quietly, letting a soft growl seep through her fangs each time a set of Dusk pack eyes locked onto her. “And before you get too uncomfortable talking to someone like me, just know I’m merely here to talk about Rain’Heart.”
Preparing to meet Graphite’Cry, the Zeta of the rival Dawn pack, Barken’Feather decided it was best to venture alone. He understood the delicate nature of the situation and believed that having his apprentice, Constellation’Claw, accompany him could complicate matters and potentially escalate tensions between the packs.
“Constellation’Claw, I appreciate your eagerness, but this is a mission I must undertake alone,” Barken’Feather stated firmly, his gaze filled with a mix of concern and determination. “It’s crucial that I converse with Graphite’Cry without distractions or potential misunderstandings.”
Constellation’Claw’s expression fell, disappointment flickering across her features. However, her resolve remained unshaken. “I understand your intentions, but I can’t let you face this alone. I’m coming with you,” she insisted, her tail wagging in determination.
Barken’Feather sighed, realizing that he wouldn’t be able to dissuade his determined apprentice. “Fine, but promise me that you will remain quiet and let me handle the conversation,” he requested, hoping to minimize any possible complications.
With a grateful smile, Constellation’Claw nodded in agreement, her eyes reflecting her unwavering support for her mentor. As they set off towards their own pack, Dusk pack, they knew they had to make preparations before their clandestine meeting with Graphite’Cry at Moonlit Hill in three days’ time. Moonlit Hill, bathed in the light of the five stars that had represented the packs and their territories since time immemorial, was a significant meeting place for all the packs.
“Constellation’Claw, we mustn’t draw attention to our departure. Act as if we’re just going out for training,” Barken’Feather instructed, his brow furrowing as he questioned his apprentice’s ability to maintain secrecy. “You can’t tell anyone, not your brothers, not your parents. If a word of this slips, you won’t see me anymore, and the situation between Dusk pack and Dawn pack may worsen.” His tone was stern, the thought of what might happen to the joyful apprentice if she were ever drawn into this turmoil that had been brewing long before her or her brothers were born. Barken’Feather’s eyes searched Constellation’Claw’s for any sign of her understanding.
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Warrior Wolves! :) this is so creative
Thanks! I LOVED all of you chapters that you’ve been posting!! Keep them up bc they’re awesome!!! :) Also, let me know if you have any ideas on how to fix up any of my work, thanks again ^^
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Stormsong: Chapter 8
"HELP!" cried Deathberrypaw as he squirmed from under a mound of furious rogues. "LET ME GO!"
"Oh, we'll let you go, all right! If you tell us where Stormpaw is!"
Stormpaw's jaw dropped. Deathberrypaw did know where Stormpaw was, and he would definitely tell. Would she stay in the tree and be found by the rogues, or battle them and give herself-- and Deathberrypaw-- a chance?
The most obvious decision! Just as Deathberrypaw raised a shaky paw to point at the tree, Stormpaw leapt down. "Leave him alone!" she cried. "LEAVE HIM ALONE!"
"Ahh, the little apprentice has a girlfriend!" taunted Hunter. Stormpaw ignored his mean comment, instead flooring a different rogue. Sure, the rogue was young, and weak-- in fact likely a kit in Clan terms-- but the speed at which she did it was enough to shock Hunter and the others. All the rogues retreated besides Hunter. Hunter stood rigid, staring, and Stormpaw took the opportunity to leap at him, biting down on his neck.
He fought and scratched and gasped for air. His raspy breathing and furious writhing brought an image into Stormpaw's mind. Shadowfall, dying because of her. Now she had a choice: did she want Hunter, also, to die because of her?
Her fangs loosened. Not by much, but enough for Hunter to escape. He whirled around to face her, choking, gasping, tending his wounds. She did nothing to help, but nothing to hurt him, either. He ran away, and she turned to Deathberrypaw. "So," she said, "tell me, are Turtlepaw and Flowerpaw dead?"
He said they weren't. But their current situation was even worse.
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This is really good! I can’t wait til chapter 9!
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Hey moonstar, want a little challenge? use the west woods over borders character maker to make the cats from Stormsong (Cherrytuft or Deathberrypaw for example). you can post your cat as a reply to this, or in the west woods comments!
(As long as it wasn't specified in the book, you can make them look however you like!)
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hmm maybe thanks! sorry i forgot to include one of your warrior cat names in this chapter... but next chapter, one of them will be Stormpaw's mentor
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haha lol you're really excited :)
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DID YOU KNOW EVERYONE, MOSS-SHADOW WRITES BOOKS!!!! find them on wattpad. I'm reading https://www.wattpad.com/story/327674706-west-woods-sliverstone%27s-destiny
but when nightwhisper... dies... it's really sad
SInce everyone is makeing really cool chapter storys.. (THYE AMAZING)..
Ima make my own..
Honey ices Life. Chap 1.
Honey kit was sitting at the nursery entrance. watching the warriors chatter. She'd watch her father - Grey'star - talk with the clan deputy. - Lilac'tail- '' Honey'kit! Please play with us! We only need one more kit for the game!'' Mew'ed her sister, Fur'kit. '' I dont want too.. I just wanna stay here.'' Fur'kit mocked her. ''Alright.. I guess you are to scared.'' She ran away with teh rest of the kits. Her ears flattend. '' Ice'tree, arent you gonna say anything..?'' Asked one of the queens. '' .. Lilac'trail.. I have nothing to say. Its alright if she can stay.'' lilac tail rolled her eyes and put her nose under her tail agian.
Moons went by. Honey'kit was now an apprientce. Training.. Dont mess it up.. She thought. Following her mentor to the hunting grounds. From acros the moor, they saw an river clan patrol hunting on their territory. '' Maple' Heart.. Is that a river clan patrol over there?'' The patrol gasped. One pushed me back towords one. Lucky I saw them before they got anything. She thought proudly. Before she knew it- they were fighting. '' Honey'paw.. Please, go back to camp and yell FIGHT! and show them the way to the river clan patrol, dont mess it up.'' Said maple'heart tierdly. She swiftly ran back to camp. '' FIGHT!'' Warriors followed honey'paw to the fight, she turned away. Moons after the fight, warriors called her a hero. Some thought she had been gifted. But no. She was normal.
Finally.. They let us do whatever today! No warriors telling us what to do! She thought happily, she saw dusk'paw. She liked him. Not in a friend way, they knew they both loved each other. Dusk'paw signed. '' I need to talk to you..''
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It’s really good!
Tysm <3
I just realized!!!! that moss-shadows, profile pic, is moose!! from west woods over borders!!!!
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Two things: One, it's not really moose, it's Iced-cafe-mocha-kit (see https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/971577668/)
Also, Moose is also in the queens mystery books by moss-shadow on scratch
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Stormsong: Chapter 7
Stormpaw stared down from the tree. Oh my god, I hope they don't get Cherrytuft. Or the leader, Yarrowstar, because... I don't like the deputy one bit. Mudfur was one of the most obnoxious cats she'd ever encountered. Whenever she asked him for help as a kit, he had sniffed, "I think your mother should be helping you, not the deputy, don't you think?" She guessed that, as an apprentice, he would say the same thing-- just replacing "mother" with "mentor".
Mentor! Right. She had to get a mentor. Who was she hoping for? Definitely not Mudfur, but that was all she knew. A tap on the shoulder jolted her out of her thoughts, and she whipped around to see who it was.
"Deathberrykit, I mean Deathberrypaw," she whispered, "you're alive! You made it!" She threw her arms around him. He wriggled out of her grasp and scowled at her. "How's Turtlek-- uh, paw? And Flower... paw? Are they both all right?"
"Why should I tell you, Stormpaw? You and I aren't friends, you know, never will be." Deathberrypaw sniffed and turned away from her. Wordlessly, Stormpaw sat there next to him and stared down at the rogues murdering, even massacring, her clanmates. After a few minutes, Stormpaw looked up at Deathberrypaw, about to ask him, again, if Turtlepaw and Flowerpaw were okay. But she was met with a startling sight. Deathberrypaw, was... he was crying?
Why was this surprising to her? Of course Deathberrypaw had feelings! But sometimes... it didn't feel like it. All she could think of to do was lick him. But this turned out to be the wrong idea.
It wasn't that he didn't like it. He probably did. But he was so startled that he fell from the tree. Stormpaw gasped but stifled a scream, so she wouldn't be discovered. All she could do was stare in terror as the rogues dashed towards Deathberrypaw. And the question was: Would she-- or could she-- save him?
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....ADD MORE CHAPTERS AAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS IS SO GOOD!
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I just wrote Chapter 8!
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haha thanks!
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I just wrote Chapter 8!
OH MY LORD THIS IS AMAZING! Such great storytelling, I just read every chapter so far. I can't wait for you to make another one! I've seen so many of your comments on this game, and you have great ideas. I would love to see more stories like this once Stormsong(paw) is finished!
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Haha. Thanks so much!
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I just wrote Chapter 8!
I love some more storyline with Crystalblaze’s kits. I would love something like her giving up her kits to the clan, and making the clan believe the kits are whoever your playing as mates. If you play as a male you and her mate could visit together and say the kits are yours mates. (This may not make sense, but i just love Crystalblaze and I think she needs more storyline)
welp... i lived a fulfilled life.*crys*I LOVED IT AAAAAAAAAAAAH
Fulfilling life is the best
i just learned you could be mates w/ fallen featherXD
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Yeah! The kits with her are my favourite I think they are super cute :)
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my favorite kits are nightwhispers
How..?
you need to be a warrior or leader and then you talk to her fully and it will ask you if you want to and you say yes hope it helped
TYSMMM
i try to click on the arrow to take me to fireclan but then it says " breezestars got fire clan" why wont it let me?? also maybe if your leader could maybe your kits get born in the leader den i just think it would be cool!
you have to keep taking to her at night, it'll only let you do that if you tell breezestar that ya'll can meet up at the border, and when you do, you just talk to her a few times and then she will tell you a therapy she has, which! is true, that ryeheart is your father, you have to say yes when she asks if you wanna see what she's talking about! hope this helps :)
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Hi :D here is chapter 7!
Chapter 7
“WHAT” I was shocked How could I go today? I'm so nervous! But I already agreed to do it! Think of how much Spot did for you! I started to remember what Spot did for me. When he found my mother and brother dead he took me to his house which was really a dumpster though but it was better than what most street cats had. Other street cats had to sleep inside boxes at least ours kept out the rain. It was already too small for him but he shared it with me. I finally said “I will do it at sunhigh” but he had already walked away. I sighed. I REALLY need to keep track of time more when I'm thinking I said to myself. The time went by SO fast and I couldn't believe it when Spot said “It's time to go now” He led me to the border and said “Stay safe out there” “Don't worry I will” I replied. I waited at the border just as Spot instructed. Then I saw a patrol coming towards me. In the patrol, there were about 4 cats. I saw the patrol leader spot me and walked up to me. “Oh no not another rouge” she whispered.” WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE! ” she said in a harsh tone. “I..er...uh…wanted to uhh… join the uh... Clan.” I said nervously. The she-cat went back to the patrol. I overheard them say “We just had another rouge join 2 moons ago!” said a young tom “Are they planning an invasion?!” said another high-pitched voice. After a few minutes of talking, the she-cat finally said, “Yes ugh fine.” She flicked her tail. “you can join the clan but ONLY if Redstar approves.”
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SO WILL REDSTAR LET HIM IN??? SOMEONE TELL ME!!!!!!!
For anyone who is wondering (I saw a comment abt this on the game on scratch) if you want to remove a flower from your head, click on it and type yes
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thanks!
I have a ton of scatches on me (Firestar killed me like 6 times) how do I get rid of them????
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i have tons of scratches on me too from badger attack.... i've waited a long time and they aren't going away.
(i recommend light brown-red pelt so scratches don't show up XD)
WARRIORS QUESTION OF THE WEEK #3. if you could send a prophecy, would you, send a terrifying prophecy to a kit in your clan, saying that THEY will save the clans? OR would you send a deathening prophecy, to a leader in your clan, telling them of their death?
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Second one! I think it will be to much to put on the kit’s shoulders they might be depressed :( the leader can also say goodbye
The game keeps restarting randomly and it’s getting annoying, I’m sick of going over the same thing too frequently
Are you on mobile? It happens a lot for me on mobile.
Yes, I play on mobile bc I need to get a new laptop 😔
my friends
That night at dinner, Avery took a deep breath. This was the moment. She was going to tell her whole family about Wings Academy. The mac’n’cheese in her stomach churned with nervousness.
“Mom, Dad, Ryan,” she hesitated. “I have something I need to tell you.”
“What’s up?” Avery’s dad asked, taking another bite of mac’n’cheese.
“Today after finals, a few other kids and I got called to the principal's office to talk to us about our scores,” she glanced at Ryan. “I got into Wings Academy.”
Mr. Clay choked on his food, and Avery nudged his cup of water closer to him. Mrs. Clay was in shocked silence, her fork poised halfway to her mouth. When Avery looked at her brother sitting on her left, she was surprised by his expression.
He didn’t seem surprised, just slightly amused. The corners of his mouth twitched like he was trying not to smile at his parents’ reactions.
After everyone had recovered from the astonishing news, Avery’s dad asked, “How? How have you already been accepted? It’s only the end of the first semester!”
All eyes stared curiously at Avery. “It’s kind of weird … but basically they tested us early. Well, not all of us. Just Fiona Brinson, Camilla Billingsley, and me.”
“And all three of you passed?” Mrs. Clay asked.
“Yes,” Avery responded.
There was silence for a minute before Ryan asked, “When do you transfer?”
“Next semester,” Avery said, her nervosity increasing. “I should be getting my packing list and stuff soon.”
The room was silent while everyone digested the news. Had a pin dropped at that moment, it would have sounded like a thunderclap. It was Mr. Clay that broke the dead silence.
He cleared his throat. “Well, this is surprising,” he paused. Then a proud smile spread across his lips. “But it’s also amazing news!”
“I’m so proud of you, honey!” Mrs. Clay said, her eyes twinkling with love.
“Me too,” Ryan chimed in.
Avery was grinning. “Thank you guys so much!”
“This is going to be an exciting year,” Ryan said, looking at his sister with a knowing smile.
this is very random on a kit to leader project. lol
it is not
i mean this story is on a kit to leader project. About Warrior Cats and this is about humans. /nm
i just trying to poredto my friend her wirthing is good
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This is so cool! (But... I'm still waiting for Cyfrin Stardust to show up LOL)
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Stormsong: Chapter 6
Stormkit ran and ran, but the rogues were gaining on her. Hunter took a swipe at her tail, which she barely dodged. Venus snapped at her leg, but she took a sharp turn and got the bite in her thick tail fur instead, his fangs barely grazing her skin.
She was getting tired, but she couldn't stop. She stumbled ahead on her fatigued, wobbly legs. Hunter leapt at her tail again, and bit off a chunk. Aaagh! Suddenly, something came into view. A hole in the ground, a ditch! She could make use of that. She tucked herself into a ball and let herself roll at top speed into it.
Oof. It hurt to fall in, but it was fairly shallow, and she was only a little bruised. She spun around and snarled at the rogues. What she hadn't anticipated was that the rogues were fearless in jumping in after her. She was trapped!
Unless...
She began to scrape at the ground and was surprised to find it soft and crumbly. She could definitely dig a tunnel! She began to take ferocious swipes at the ground. Surprised by this, the rogues froze. Then they realized her plot. By this time, she'd already dug a fairly large tunnel, heading in the direction of WillowClan. But the rogues were hot on her tail.
Half an hour later, she finally hobbled out of the ground on unsteady legs, gasping and panting for air. "My dear Stormkit!" Cherrytuft shouted, running towards her, but Stormkit dodged her. "Just because I'm here doesn't mean I'm coming back officially, okay?"
"Oh, my darling, but listen! You missed it, but you've passed your apprentice ceremony already! You have so much to catch up on, baby, and-" Cherrytuft gasped and stopped talking when she noticed the rogues furiously spilling out of the underground tunnel.
Stormkit (or, rather, Stormpaw now) ran to the nearest tree and climbed it, hoping to hide. The rogues didn't find her. She watched as they battled the entirety of WillowClan, hoping to get someone to confess that they knew where Stormpaw was- but no one knew. The dead bodies piled up.
Oh my goodness. I come back to WillowClan for five seconds, and already, I've brought more bad luck.
oh my god!
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it’s getting so good!
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thanks! i actually thought this was one of the worst :)
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are people even on here anymore?
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yes, they are! i am! b0xalotl is! so is silent_echos, and #1WarriorCatsFan, and Marbletail, and CucumberWC :)
I am
I just realized that in the ceremonies, with breezekit and nightkit.. they entwine each others tails in every ceremony!!!!!! ITS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!
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awwwww
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wait they do! I’m going to check
CHECKING RN
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I'm...weedkit uhhh
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Hello! :) here is my story so far I hope you like it. I know it's kinda long. I know I'm reposting the other chapters along with the new one but I'm doing this so you won't have to look for the other ones.
Prologue
Spot walked up to the wailing kit. He looked at the kit for a moment then flicked his tail in disapproval. I thought the badger would have killed him, not the other one he thought. But as he looked into the weaker kit's eyes he saw fear. After a few seconds, he tried to put on his most friendly face and said: “Hello young kit my name is Spot. come with me if you want to live” The kit looked unconvinced "I'm just here to help you. I saw what happened to your mother" After he said that he saw a flash of sadness in the kit's eyes but after a few minutes, the kit said, “Oo..ok...” Huh, this kit is easily convinced. Even though he is weaker maybe this kit is good for my plans after all…
Chapter 1
My first memories were of my mother. I still remember snuggling next to my brother and mother as all kits do. A few days later I finally opened my eyes to see the world. I gasped when I finally saw the world I was amazed when I saw how colorful everything was. Her name was Brownie. She despised her name and didn't even know what it meant. So my mother decided to ignore the names the twolegs gave us and named me Moon and my brother Tree. My mother was a brown tabby she-cat with blue eyes. My brother was cream brown with a few dark grey spots and green eyes. I looked a bit different I was grey with a white stomach and blue eyes. I always wondered what my father looked like. My mother never mentioned it though. As she said it's “unimportant.” One day when me and my brother were playing outside he found a hole in the fence. He said “We need to go outside! Mother is sleeping she will never know! I'm so bored of her not letting us do anything!” I thought It was dangerous but didn't want to seem weak in front of my brother so I said “Let's go” and walked out with my brother.
Chapter 2
Beyond the garden was NOTHING like I thought it would be like NOTHING! I imagined lush forests surrounded by berry bushes over a blue sky as I saw holes in the twolegs den. But now that I thought of it I remembered that I could never go through it as much as I tried. Maybe they weren't holes after all. I saw a few trees but mostly I saw more twoleg stone dens. “DID YOU EVEN HEAR ME!” my brother snapped me out of my thoughts. I realized that he had been talking to me for a while. “scardy kitty too scared to say anything!” he said mockingly. I growled, “NO ONE CALLS ME SCARDY KITTY!” I yelled and chased him! I chased him until he started coughing and I realized that something was coming out of a pipe “Move away” I said cautiously. And realized that he was on the ground. “No no no no!” I yelled. Then all of a sudden he jumped at me! “AAAAAAAAAAAAAH!” I yelled in terror. “Hey, you scared me!” I said, “Ha, I knew you were a scardy kitty!” “NO, I'M No-” I got cut off as my brother said “Sush!” I looked forward and saw a large thing approaching us.
Chapter 3
As it got closer I realized that the large thing was a twoleg. I took a deep breath and realized that I was holding my breath the entire time. “It's just a twoleg” said my brother with a big sigh of relief. I felt excitement all the way to my tail tip when I saw her. I knew this twoleg she was our owner! We lived in her den! I knew my brother, Tree knew too when I felt him relax. The twoleg picked us up and I knew my brother was tired when he just let her pick him up. Usually, he would put up a fight and scratch her. I personally never liked being picked up but I was okay with it. The twoleg put us in the back of her monster and got in the belly of it. It was kind of scary riding in the monsters that twolegs ride in but if they always came out okay I knew it was safe. My brother on the other paw pretty much slept in the blankets the whole ride and I was glad he did because I knew if he was awake he would have tried to escape. After about 45 minutes the monster stopped. I thought it was strange because me and my brother did not go that far but I pushed away the thought. The back of it opened and the twoleg scooped me up and picked up my brother. He was still sleeping peacefully. As we walked to the entrance I still felt excited about our adventure but little did I know we were not going home.
Chapter 4
When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.
Huh, strange I wondered. My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.
Chapter 5
As the badger approached us our mother told us to stay here. I glanced at my brother who whispered “Wow I have never seen anything so..BIG!” he had excitement in his voice so I whispered back “You're not scared?” “of course not! Mama will save us!” He sounded as if he was trying to convince himself as much as he was trying to convince me “ok I guess” I whispered to him. Just as I finished Mother scratched the badger and the badger whipped its paw at her. It flung her backwards, and she got up. Then she hissed loudly at it and it ran to her and started scratching her. Then my brother said “I'm Going to help her” “No don't please I don't want to lose you” I said “You won't don't worry I will be safe” he said bravely. I sighed I knew there was no way I could convince him but I decided to try anyway. “We are only about 12 moons! (The cat term for month)” ‘NO I'm still going to help her I don't care what you say” And then he rushed off to help Mother. I looked behind me and saw a little hole and decided to take shelter in there. After about an hour I went out. When I left the hole I saw my brother and mother lying there. “No no no this can't be happening” I felt crushed but just as I was about to leave I saw a black and white spotted cat with a scar over his eye. He flicked his tail and after a bit said “Hello young kit my name is Spot. Come with me if you want to live”.
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Chapter 6
I stretched my jaws into a massage yawn and padded out of Spot's house with excitement. Spot was apparently my uncle from my dad's side I never knew my dad. “Hey, Spot!” Spot was eating some twoleg scrapes. He lifted his head up to say “Yes?” he said half asleep “Well uh you said you would tell me about my uh dad on my 25 moon” I meowed. “Ah yes, your dad. Well, he looked just like you. And he was super kind and thoughtful I get why your mother liked him.” he chuckled. Then he looked sternly into my eyes “ But the thing that made him run away from you was when one of the cats from Treeclan killed our mother” I was shocked that's why our father left us! If he were still here my mother and brother would still be alive. I looked up at Spot and saw him grinning. “why are you smiling” I growled “Do you think it's FUNNY that my father ran away!” He looked shocked for a moment but then said “ Well I was thinking of a plan…” “You could go to Treeclan and become their leader! "They are too stupid even to know you're not with them!" "Then we can rule the forest TOGETHER!” I thought for a moment but Spot clearly noticed that I looked unconvinced and said “Don't worry it will be a joint leadership” “Uhhh.. I don't really know.” I said thoughtfully. “Don't you remember what I did for YOU” Memories came flooding back as I remembered when the badger attacked my mother and brother and how grateful I was for Spot. After a while, I finally said “OK” He looked happier than I had ever seen him “Thank you! We only want revenge for my mother and your father!” he said excitedly. “When am I going?” I meowed. “At Sunhigh” He replied.
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this is great!
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thanks :)
I wish there could be more queens if I am a leader/warrior. It would be more fun!
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me too
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like kits running around and you can tell them stories :)
OMG.. I never thought of that- I LOVE IT
When I train with a cat for the second time, I just can’t get into the fight and I can’t run anywhere and click on something, help, please
Sadly I dont think you can do anything abt that. You just have to restart. But my tip is wait for their dialogue to finish and then fight
Uhm, theres like a glitch where when i try to make my kits warriors, only one shows up and everyone has a ! and then the meeting dismisses without the apps getting names, then it won't let me make them warriors
I've had that before, Im not sure how to avoid it
That happened to me, but the weird thing was, I don't have any kits...?
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Stormsong: Chapter 5
The black rogue padded away from the border with the kit in his jaws. "Hey! Hunter!" shouted a different rogue, and the black rogue-- Hunter-- turned around with a sigh. "Yes, Venus?"
"That your kitten?" said Venus, using the rogue term for kit.
"Uh, no." Hunter paused. Venus is my best friend, but how much should I tell him? He eventually decided on a compromise. "I found it by the WillowClan border. Looked lost. I brought it here to raise for a bit, just for fun." There, that had been all facts. The kit had definitely looked lost, staring strangely up at the sky, but at the same time, it was certainly not lost, as it had stayed in one place calmly, even falling asleep. "Huh. Well, we could see what a Clan cat can do that we can't do. Have some fun." Venus poked at the kit invitingly. "C'mon, show those fangs, show those fangs!"
Hunter dropped the kit on the ground, pushed it with a paw towards Venus, so Venus could play and experiment with it. As Venus poked and prodded the kit, it seemed entirely immobile. After a while, Venus gave up. "Well, it looks like--"
Stormkit sprang up and began sprinting away, two rogues on her tail. That number steadily increased as more cats noticed the chase. I'll be fine, she thought. The warriors will fight them off.
But she realized, too late, that she was running in the wrong direction.
She was running away from WillowClan.
OOO I LOVE THIS SM AHHH
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thanks!!
p.s. if you go to queen's mystery game on this website and scroll down, moss-shadow left a comment (something like "i didn't think i'd make a big horror game for april fools"). Maybe if you reply he'll write you back!!! (I did)
p.p.s. not wanting to sound like a crazed fan tho.... (which I am)
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I just wrote the latest: Chapter 8!
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!
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*laughs* okay! okay! *starts writing new chapter*
erm, why is my name Sootkitt
That has happened to me before, and it fixed when I became an apprentice
chapter 4:
“Do you want to say sorry for being a lousy mother? And never coming to even to say hello or know your own daughter?” echo mewed grimly maplestar curled her lip in disgust, “no I do not. you were weak, the runt of the litter, why would I care for weaklings?” maplestar grinned, Hawk leaped in front of the two and snarled at maplestar her ears flattened to her head and her eyes in slits. “ You harm her, and I kill you right here, right now!” hawk hissed her claws unsheathed, echo smirked softly, admiring the she-cats bravery. Maplestar snickered. “What? Your so protective, are you protecting your mate?” She snickered and sat down curling her tail around her paws, those words were said, and hawk then froze her eyes widened and her ears heated up. Echo stared at her paws not knowing what to do or say about that, the two have had a stronger bond then all the friends combined, and echo knew she had secret feelings for the white she-cat but never admitted it to herself nor any cat “I am protecting my leader! You mouse-brained snake-heart!!” hawk growled, maplestar started to bristle “Why you little-” before maplestar could do anything, sunstar pushed between them. “Enough! Fighting amongst ourselves gives no answers!” sunstar hissed. Tigerstar looked at echo her head held high. “Echo if we may we need a place to stay for now, we have had a long journey. And we are sore and hungry, our home was drowned by a magnificent flood one we had never seen for many moons, so if we may we need to take shelter in your cave.” Echo sighed, “yes, my cats will help you get settled” echo raised her chin glaring at her mother with intensity, “but first…” echo hissed, “maplestar…I do not trust you even though you are my mother and because of that you will be our prisoner, just as shadowstrike used to be” the tribe cats murmured in confusion. “But isn’t your father still our prisoner?” echo perked her ears and turned to see grey who stood up his eyes wide with bewilderment. Echo’s eyes softened. As she turned her gaze to her father. “No, he isn’t, and he has proven that he deserves a second chance” shadowstrike gave a purr as he smiled and said, “I thank you echo even though you are my daughter…I will make you proud” he chuckled a bit at the last part and echo gave an amused purr. Then her eyes became stone as she glared at her mother. “You will be our prisoner, and for him to continue to earn my trust shadowstrike shall guard you but to make sure you don’t try anything and harm him I will have two of my other cats guard you as well” echo growled curling her lip. “Snake, ice, along with shadowstrike, you three shall keep a CLOSE eye on maplestar.” The three nodded then left with maplestar in the middle, ice, and snake in the front and shadowstrike flanking the rear. “Move it!” shadowstrike pushed maplestar into the cave and the three cats kept her in a corner of the cave.
chapter 3:
The seven cats stood their ground as they heard many paws steps thundering forward. “Who are you?” a tortoiseshell she-cat growled lashing her tail slightly with her teeth bared in a vicious grin. “Calm yourself maplestar” a golden tabby tom mewed gently, laying his tail tip on maplestar shoulder. Echo stepped in front her head held high and she sat down, her eyes narrowed as she looked at the four cats who stood in front with cation. “Who are you all?” echo mewed in a tone of a leader, all the cats stopped talking and looked at the grey she-cat echo lifted her chin and curled her lip in a snarl as she repeated “who are you?” the elder tom stepped up his eyes gleaming with pride. “I am Sunstar of pantherclan” a black she-cat elder spoke up “I am Tigerstar of wolfclan” she said with a slight glare at sunstar, the tom ignored her. “I I’m fawnstar of deerclan” a brown tabby mewed looking around anxiously. “And I am maplestar of foxclan” the tortoiseshell gave a small hiss. “Who are you?” sunstar mewed curiosity pricked at him echo sighed, “I am echo, the leader of the tribe of echoing silence.” Echo looked at the cats then licked her chest fur thinking of what to do next. “Well, well, it’s been a long time…maple” a voice mewed from in the cave. Echo looked back and saw her father shadowstrike with a vicious wicked smile on his face as he looked at the tortoiseshell, she-cat. “Its maplestar now you piece of crow-food!” maplestar spat flattening her ears. “Ah come now darling are you really going to be cold to me?” the tom grinned as he stepped closer and then sat next to his daughter. Echo looked bewildered then as she looked at the gleam in her father’s eye, she had a disturbing thought and it struck her, she hissed with violence, her hackles raised. “she’s, my mother?!” echo gave a screech of horror and rage as her claws ripped into the earth, disgust gripped her stomach, she could not believe it! She was half kittypet! Everyone gasped in confusion and bewilderment. Shadowstrike sighed, “yes, yes she is echo” he glared at maplestar with hatred “so, this sorry excuse for a leader is my daughter?” maplestar spat with a sneer on her face and a snarl of laughter. The two she-cats glared at each other with rage and hatred in their eyes, amber eyes blazing like forest fire. “You take that back! You stupid piece of fox-dung!!” shadowstrike snarled baring his sharp thorn teeth, as he stood up arching his back. Echo gave a soft gasp of surprise, he had never defended her ever in her life and this…this was a change, she was wrong to not trust him.
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hellooooo I finished chapter 4 tell me how you like it and if you want me to repost the other ones.! i hope you like it :)
Chapter 4
When we arrived at the steps of the twoleg den I realized that it was a different den.
Huh, strange I wondered. My brother woke up and was gazing tiredly at me. Another twoleg stood there holding Mother. It looked as if she was sleeping but I was so shocked when she suddenly said “RUN!” and jumped down the twolegs arm and scratched her. Then she scoped me and put me on her back and carried my brother and we just RAN we ran til we couldn't see twoleg dens anymore. We were in a small forest! I was so amazed at the forest that I couldn't even feel the scratch that I got when Mother picked me up roughly. But before I could say anything my brother growled “ Why did we run away” Our mother looked sad for a second and said, “The twoleg dropped her off at another den.” She was so worried for us that she felt sick. “But the twolegs were talking to each other. In the den, there was a cat named Max that could understand the language. He said they were going to take us away to something called a shelter. He said that a shelter is terrible and we never get to see daylight again” My mother finished with a breath. She was still painting from the long run. Then all of a sudden I smelled something strange. Before I could say anything my mother yelled “BADGER!!!”.
ALSOOOOOOOOOOOOOO tell me what ya'll think about these cats! and what should the medicine cats name be! and how should the tribe meet the cat?
Allegiances
The tribe of echoing silence
Leader: echoing whispers\echo: a beautiful grey she-cat with amber eyes
guards. (Cats who guard the territory and camp)
Chief guard: hawk that claws the sky\hawk: a white she-cat with blue icy eyes and a scar from her eye to her stomach.
shadow that strikes in darkness\shadow: a jet-black tom with amber eyes.
Fang of fox\fang: a grey tom with black stripes and amber eyes.
Mouse that sleeps in winter\mouse: a dusty brown she-cat
Prey-hunters. (Cats who provide food for the tribe)
Chief prey-hunter: moth that hovers near fire\moth: a tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes.
Black tooth of bear\tooth: a black tom with hazel eyes.
Rain of storm\rain: a light ginger she-cat.
Blaze of speeding rivers\blaze: a golden tabby tom.
Queens. (She-cats nursing or caring for kits)
fern of falling heather\fern: a dark ginger she-cat.
song of singing crow\crow: a brown she-cat with white paws.
storm of flooded rivers\storm: a black she-cat with a white tail and white stripes.
Cold of frozen frost\frost: a white she-cat with grey paws and hazel brown eyes.
Trainee’s. (Toms and she-cats six moons and older in training)
Raven that flies with wings of black\raven: a black tom with green eyes and a white muzzle as well as white paws.
Wolf of wind\wolf: a light grey tom.
Flame of sun\flame: a ginger she-cat with emerald eyes.
Snow that blankets the ground/snow: a white she-cat with grey leopard spots, and violet eyes
Warriors. (Toms and she-cats in charge of fighting and protecting the tribe)
Snake inside a rock\snake: a grey and white tom.
Ice of frozen water\ice: a dark calico tom with blue eyes.
Grey vine on rock\grey: a long-haired grey tom.
Boulder in water\boulder: a chestnut brown tom
Elders. (Toms and she-cats retired or to injured to continue their duties)
Eye of fox\fox: a pale she-cat who is blind in one eye.
Whisker of soot\soot: a black and white tom with a scarred muzzle. The oldest tom in the tribe.
Grey claw of sky\claw: a grey tom. With a muzzle black from age
Meadow of flowers\meadow: a ginger she-cat who is blind from battle.
Cats outside of the tribe
Pip: an orange and black tom with unusual eyes.
Flash: an orange ginger tom
Spark: a white she-cat with grey splotches.
Twig: a light grey she-cat.
dawn of setting sky\dawn: a light ginger tom
Flicker of light\flicker: a pale tom with grey stripes and a torn ear.
snap of crying eagle\snap: a white she-cat with brown stripes
chapter 2:
“We had an older brother” hawk began, “you mean you had another brother?” echo mewed in astonishment. “Yes, now if you will not interrupt me” hawk looked at echo sternly. Echo flattened her ears in embarrassment. “We had an older brother, and his name was Rabbitwhisker” “rabbitwhisker?” echo gave a hissing laughter. “Yup his name was rabbitwhisker” hawk sighed shaking her head with disappointment “he is the reason snake is the way he is” “what do you mean?” echo tilted her head in confusion. “When I was an apprentice of windclan, he was my mentor and one day me and my siblings were talking and just having fun, and then he walks up and I made a rude comment about him and I, I laughed at him and the others did to…” echo gasped in surprise hawk continued as her bones started to shake with fear and sadness. “and he usually took it as a joke, but I guess this time he was sick of it and so he towered over me and he told me to follow him and so I did” echo arched her eyebrow still listening as she groomed her fur “he led me to snake rocks and I knew it was wrong, I begged him for us to go back but he didn’t say a word, and then I heard a hiss behind me and I spun around but I saw nothing…” hawk’s eyes filled with fear of this memory “and when I looked back I didn’t see him, and then a heartbeat later I felt something grab my neck and I saw with horror that it was him and when I yowled for him to let me go he threw me at a tree and after that I knocked out, but when I woke up I didn’t see him and..and I felt my neck and ear bleeding, and then…” she flattened her ears as she spat with fear and her back was arched and her fur on end. “a-an adder bit my leg, and then as I was crying in pain, he came but he wasn’t trying to help instead he…he clawed my side…slowly.” Echo felt a shiver of fear down her spine as she pictured the dark tom trying to kill his own apprentice. Echo walked over and curled herself around her friend and brushed her muzzle on her cheek in comfort, “its ok, it’s all in the past now your safe, nothing and no one will harm you, I swear by starclan I will give my breath before they can put a paw on you” hawk smiled and laid down next to her purring softly.” thank you, for being my friend echo” Echo smiled then rasped, her tongue over hawks forehead then curled her tail around her and laid down. She perked up as she smelled scents, to many, she started to bristle. Hawk shot up immediately and her eyes became slits of prickling fear. The two she-cats dashed to the cave their pelts brushed together a few times. Snake, ice, moth, grey, and blaze all circled defending the cave as the kits, crow and soot all sheltered inside, shadowstrike stayed in the cave but was in a corner as he was grooming his pelt.
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it's super good so far! :D
here is book 4! echoing silence, a star rises!!. chapter 1:
The sun had started to rise, as echo blinked her eyes open sleepily, she sat up and opened her jaw in a yawn and stretched her haunches and sat down and she started to groom her pelt until it was smooth. She gave a purr of satisfaction as the cold leaf-bare breeze blew on her fur. She glanced up and over heard hawk talking with soot, she strained her ears a bit to hear them. “Soot, do you think you might have greencough?” hawk asked as the elder started to cough “do not worry about me youngster I just need a bit of catmint, or some chickweed, or maybe honey it doesn’t matter” the elder coughed and sat down as his bones started to shake. Moth walked over, “I will take care of him hawk, you go see if we have some of the herbs” hawk walked over to echo her eyes were wide and full of worry. “he’s getting worse every day, I’ve tried to find the herbs I really have but I can’t find any I think…we might have a cat lost to greencough soon” hawk lowered her head in shame and despair, echo pressed her pelt to the snowy white she-cats fur, hawk perked her head up and they looked into each other’s eyes for a heartbeat. “It will be ok. If anything, starclan is by our side and even if soot does pass, it will be his time, ok please for once stop worrying.” Echo smiled and pressed her nose to hawk’s cheek, hawk purred and licked echo’s ear affectionately. “Thank you echo, um would you like to hunt with me? We are low on prey and moth is busy with soot, and blaze he is tussling with grey” she bared her fangs in a slight smirk and her pointed at the two with her muzzle. Echo rolled her eyes and gave a sigh. “Ok then, let’s go, you wanna race?” Echo smirked, hawk rolled her eyes and cuffed echo on the muzzle and echo jumped back with a giggle “mouse-brain” hawk hissed playfully. “Oh, I’m a mouse-brain am i?” echo growled and slithered towards hawk pounced on her, and hawk squealed in surprise. “Some snake you would make!” hawk laughed and The two scuffled in a play fight for a little bit, and then hawk stood up and shook the snow off her pelt, echo sat up and shook the snow off as well, and she started to groom her fur and cast a glance at hawk who had her eyes closed as she let the sun gleam on her white fur, echo couldn’t help up look at her scar, “hey hawk” echo started to stutter “yes echo?” Hawk looked at the grey she-cat, her blue eyes gleaming like crystals. “I um, I don’t want to make you uncomfortable or anything but…” echo was cut off as hawk placed her tail on echo’s mouth, “I know what you’re about to ask, and no it doesn’t make me uncomfortable.” She looked at her scar then looked back at echo and sat down curing her tail around her paws. “Most cats ask me about my scar and…I tell them the truth.” “And that is?” echo prompt, hawk sighed.
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thanks :)